[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2011 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two
loved it!
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two
haha! I am so loving this little tale. I can´t wait to see where life leads these after the non-honeymoon, See you next time! Hey will there be anymore updates for Spidey and Rusty or are they done?
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
loved it - I always look forward to your stories :)
Date: 24 Aug 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two
Becarful it could be too soon. Then again, it could be the right one and you left the wrong ones.
Date: 24 Aug 2011 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
LOL
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2011 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two
Really great
Date: 24 Aug 2011 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two
This is fun. I hope it stays fun and doesn't get super angst. I am loving it.
Date: 24 Aug 2011 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two
I love these two. I wouldn't be surprised if they do end up Mr and Mrs Cullen for real by the end of this trip. Looking forward to some HOT loving between them. Thanks for the update
Date: 24 Aug 2011 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two
not only Edward's happy, i'm also happy forthe two of them!
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2011 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two
Loved it!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
WOOHOO! Looking forward to this new journey with you. I'm loving jilted Edward and Bella on their non honeymoon. Can't wait for the next update
Date: 23 Aug 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
Liking it very much...can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 22 Aug 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
loved this new story
elaine
Date: 21 Aug 2011 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
I absolutely loved it!!!! Please continue this story has the making of something GREAT!!!!
Date: 21 Aug 2011 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
I like it so far. Can't wait to see where it is going
Date: 20 Aug 2011 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
I already love it...I cannot wait to see what happens between these two. :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
Really great beginning
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
wow another great story. i truly love reading your stories.
i am looking forward to the fun this duo is going to have doing their couple excursions with one another since they both have dip shits that screwed them over. so far seems they have alot in common and especially where they are from. wow. at least they also seem that they are or wouldn't be after each other's money since they have there own. i am loving it so far and am dying for more. thank you for writing
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2011 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
Love it can't wait to read more.
Date: 20 Aug 2011 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
Here's to hoping that 'next time' comes very, very soon!! This is a fabulous story line! I can't wait to see where you go with it!! Please just don't make Emmett a bumbling oaf-- I have never been able to understand how anyone thinks Esme and Carlisle could have raised him that way in AH stories!! I mean, as a vamp, sure, he was raised by others, but as a human, they would have instilled better values, right??? lol
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2011 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
I sure as heck do! That was an amazing start and it looks like it´s gonna be a good one. Can´t wait to see more the non-honeymoon! Great start, I´m definitely on board for this ride!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 20 Aug 2011 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
I was excited to receive a notice that you had a new story and I have to tell you that it is another great story! I really love your characters. I can just see Edward and Bella on the beach...talking and becoming acquainted. I look forward to more and see where these two go...hopefully, friends and lovers! I used to live by Bainbridge and took the ferry from there to Seattle. Great first chapter...love the talk between E and B...maybe a stroll along the beach and more good talks. It will be fun to read more about Miss La La and builder Edward. Can't wait till next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2011 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
Really like it so far, can't wait to read more!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
Interesting plot. Looking forward to the plot developing.
Date: 20 Aug 2011 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
So tbe truth should be that Edward, and Bella too, could in fact get even more heartbroken. But where's the fun in that? In such case, doing all the s.... They had planned togeher seems not only as a smart idea, but actually a really great one. Add to it how easy it seems for them to talk with eachother and the week seems to be looking so much better. I can't wait to see how it goes!!!