Date: 28 Sep 2011 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
I like that he is FINALLY doing some pursuing!
Date: 28 Sep 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
Great twist. Edward could tone down his arrogance a little. Can't wait to see what happens next
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
I like the fast pace of the story- no beating around the bush. Nice:)
Date: 27 Sep 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
OMG you are brilliant! I can't believe how this is working out... please don't keep us in suspence too long... Thanks for the update.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
i can't believe he waited nine months to have contact with her and then concocts this plan to win her back ,don't blame bella for not giving in to him just yet ,as much as i want them together a lot of time has passed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
Oh my this is good! I am feeling "warm & fuzzy" inside (usually happens when E & B get together!!) This was a very good chapter, sad but happy near the end! Is Rose going to continue to be a witch??? Is that why she was in the room pissed off??
Kinda glad to know Edward suffered as much as Bella did!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
Great chapter can't wait to read more.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
I think Edward shouldn`t stop to win Bella back and I think what you are writing is simply to good.Thank you.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
What a great way to get them back together! I love how righteously indignant they both are LOL. Love love love this!! Can't wait for more.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
Bella hasn't drank too much if she didn't blame it all on alcohol. It would sound understandable... She is about to loose her mind and I don't blame her. It turns out all of this is a scheme with everyone involved and aware of the plans. everyone but her.
Edward was depressed but apparently was able to move on, sort of. He has done plenty to keep track of her. He is determined to get her back, and is really confident he will be able to do it. The only thing standing against him is the girl he needs to sweep of her feet. Bella is stubborn and right now way pass angry. Edward has his work cut out for him.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
Hey! Love your story but this last chapter kind of bugged me. I don't like Edward's tone. He seems so cocky about it all. Bella was clear that the ball was in his court and waiting for him to make up his mind about the future. Did he really expect her to call and be angry about him dating. She was heart broken. She accepted her responsibility for what happened and everyone thinks she should just take him by after all this time. I also don't get how Alice thinks this is ok.
Waititng to see what happens next. I really want him to see how much pain she has been in. :) jpl
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
I'd be pissed if I were her too. I know they all did the same thing to her that they did to Edward basically. She deserves to let him sweat a little though. Great chapter!
Date: 27 Sep 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two
Oh, hell i love it!
Date: 27 Sep 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
Loved it.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
I love it! I'm glad they are back where it all started. Now Bella stop being so stubborn and start loving on your husband. Thanks for the update
Date: 27 Sep 2011 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
Love it!
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
Interesting twist! Can't wait for more!
Date: 27 Sep 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
Wow, I can't believe he held a grudge for 9 months, I was thinking a few weeks tops before he came running to Chicago after her. Like Bella, I have a bit of anger at Edward this chapter - he totally manipulated mulitple sitauations to bring them together which makes him as guilty as what his family and Bella did to him. I am glad Bella called him out on it. Can't wait for the next chapter and I hope she doesn't let him off the the hook too easy.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
9 months. I think I would be pissed too. Thanks for not dragging us through that, this is bad enough!!
Date: 27 Sep 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
loved it ! edward is a duche! looking foward to seeing how long it takes for them to fall in love again
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
I think Bella has a right to be pissed. Seriously, Edward should not have waited 9 months but I also hope that Bella doesn't make everyone at the wedding feel bad. Hope she will realize they belong together and forgive Edward for being stupid. Thanks for the update! :~)
Date: 27 Sep 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself
well did not see that coming, but very cute. Wonder what she does to alice.
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
aww hope they work it out in time.fantastic chapter.update soon
Date: 23 Sep 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
I would have thought hat Edward would ask her a very key question... "is there anything else I should know" then have his tantrum (not that I blame him). I hope it doesn't take long for him to come to his senses. Thanks for the update.
Date: 22 Sep 2011 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
he is so stupid
Date: 21 Sep 2011 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
Good chapter with some highs and lows. I was really hoping they could work it out in person and start really learning more about each other, but I also get the betrayal is still too fresh. I wish she would have fessed up on their vacation, but not sure it would have done any good. I hope they can work it out soon.
Date: 21 Sep 2011 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
wow, hope we don't have to wait to long for you to surface. Great story kind of. never read one with this plot. Feel bad for Edward, hate that there were lies between them and hope they can work it out !!!! added to alerts.
Date: 21 Sep 2011 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
I hope the time apart clears things up for both of them. Thanks for the update
Date: 21 Sep 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
hope he doesn't keep her waiting to long ,she's laid it all out for him it's up to him now
Date: 21 Sep 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
Oh No! MY heart is breaking! Please don't let tons of time go by - I want them back together for Christmas!!!
Date: 21 Sep 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
Ummmmmm... yeah... gotta agree on Edward with that last observation.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2011 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
Wow, I knew that she was keeping something like that from him! I do feel bad for both of them though, but I trust to and won´t complain about them being apart! Loving this to pieces! You rock hon!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 20 Sep 2011 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
Alright, let me say that I am not normally a Bella fan because I love me some Edward, but really what can she do. She didn't go out of malice, then she fell in love. So, she hated to say anything because she didn't want to ruin what might happen, but she did send back the money. What is the girl to do. She ran to him after chicago. She wanted to tell him. She is willing to do whatever he wants. God, he needs to get over it. He is acting like bella normally does. Please don't let him date Kate. I think that will just suck! Couldn't he just man up and realize that he loves her and she loves him? Gosh I hope his family stays out of it. She is so good to him. I really don't like rose in this either. She seems like trouble. Jasper I'd the one I like. He'll, if Edward can't get his shit together, then maybe Jasper should hook up with Bella. That would make him get his head out of his ass!
Date: 20 Sep 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
How sad, yet right. They are very self-aware and smart, if anyone can get through this to a spot that there is a future, it is them. Why do I get the feeling like his family is really going to have to be physically restrained from interferring again. (Rose is a real B!)
Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
Great update. I am very torn about how Edward has responded to Bella. But he has to trust her again or it will never work.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
have been enjoying the story and forgot to review....
i am also a mom of three... two out of house and one almost... it does seem as many are younger but that's ok ...
love your story and characters... do you post on fan fiction??? only ask because this site won't let me review from my phone where i do lots of my reading
Date: 20 Sep 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
I can totally understand how Edward feels. How can he trust her? What's real and what's acting? He's afraid. It's interesting that another piece of the puzzle dropped. Not only did Edward's parents hire Bella to babysit him in the Bahamas, but they hired her to investigate Edward's fiance. I'd say they have some more explaining to do. Now I imagine Edward is wondering if there are still more shoes to drop.
Date: 20 Sep 2011 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
Prediction:
It would be interesting to see him wait 6 months like in New Moon.
Bella in the meantime is pregnant and finally serves him with termanation of parental rights documents because she has given up hope.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2011 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
wow he is setting her free for now. he needs time. she loves him enough to give it to him
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
Heart wrenching! Can't wait for the next chapter. Major heart fail until then :)
Date: 20 Sep 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
I think he's really taking the anger he feels for his ex fiance and reflecting it onto Bella. In all honesty yes she should have tried harder to tell him when she said she needed to let him know something but he told her he didn't care. I understand he's angry she lied but he's being pretty awful to her but on the other hand he is being upfront with how he feels about trying to figure things out. Can't wait for the next update to see how long it takes for him to pull his head out of his rear and realize they have the real thing
Date: 20 Sep 2011 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
Fuck!! Don't wait too long, I'm dying here!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
god ur killing me !
Date: 20 Sep 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
It hurts a lot but it's the right thing to do. They need space, time, and perspective. In order to figure out if their love is strong enough to get pass this, Bella needed to go back to her home.
Neither Rose or Bella are completely responsible for what happened to Edward and Rachel. Still, the feeling is there and not moving yet. Hopefully soon...
Date: 20 Sep 2011 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
Please please please update again soon!
Date: 20 Sep 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
That's too bad.......well, maybe a little time and space will be good for them to work things out.
Date: 20 Sep 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?
Oh my gosh, I now have "bella tears" !!!! I totally understand his reasoning, but it does make me so sad!! You have definitely done a GREAT job getting us to "feel" what they are feeling, and those are the types of stories I totally LOVE!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
loved it!!!! such a great story!
Date: 14 Sep 2011 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
I kinda of figured his parents had paid her to be with him, when he overheard the conversation on the phone when they were on the island. I hope they work everything out, they obviously have a connection that even strangers could see. I can't wait for an update!
Date: 13 Sep 2011 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini
i love this so orginal keep going i need more
Date: 13 Sep 2011 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
You can head to Witness Protection but they better have online access for you cuz if you don't update I might have to hunt you down!! LOL JK ... Loving this story!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
Oh WOW!!!! Didn't see that coming :) So glad he went to her and referred to her as his wife. Swoon worthy!!!
Date: 13 Sep 2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
Wow, Esme sure keeps herself active in her boys' lives!
Date: 13 Sep 2011 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
did not see that coming!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
fab chapter.hope they work it out.update soon
Date: 13 Sep 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
It's amazing all thatbwe can do out of love. Sometimes it works out and others it can turn into a huge mess as it did now.
Bella didn't do things right, yes, but ow she is trying, really trying to prove herself to Edward. Not an easy thing when from the start she knows he is entitled to not listen or care. Still her going in such haste to Seattle proves she loves him and wants to find a way of making things work out.
Most of the family wants to give her that chance, which proves they are well aware of their mistake as well.
It seems Edward is willing to try, but with certain conditions. I'm pretty sure Bella will agree to almost everything.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
I like! Didn't expect the babysitter angle!
Date: 13 Sep 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
I actually like this story. A little sad right now. Hope things work out for them.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
oh i am up for bainbridge and i believe edward is as well. he loves her and she loves him and he knows it. your hurt edward by the way your parents went about keeping an eye on you. she was coming to you to tell you everything and she sent the money back. ohh give her a second chance. love it
Date: 13 Sep 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
You will need W.P. They are a perfect couple, what the help were they thinking not talking to Bella first. I sure as hell hope they are going to his house. And have Jasper keep the family away not even a phone call!
Date: 13 Sep 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
I'm so happy they are actually communicating at the end of the chapter, I hate when the drama simply drags on and on. Looking forward to Bainbridge and the future talk. Thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2011 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
lol, no kidding you'll be in witness protection for a while!
what did he decide?!?!
I hope you update soon, love this story, I don't know if I've reviewed before but if not, I'm reading along :)
Date: 12 Sep 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
Totally didn't see that coming! Awesome story!
Date: 12 Sep 2011 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
That was a great twist. Totally unexpected. When they first met I was a little sceptical about their matching stories but I thought that was the premise of the story, not the plot twist. Love it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 12 Sep 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story
Oh My Gosh!!! I have to say, did NOT see that one coming! I am hoping (and guessing) all things will turn out good, just might take a bit longer! Will they make the 30 day deadline??? hmmmmm...............
Date: 07 Sep 2011 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
Cant wait to read more.
Date: 06 Sep 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
Soooo fun...update soon please!!!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2011 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
Why do I get the feeling the his family, at least some part of them, knew that Bella was going to be there. On top of that, Bella was in on it too. The phone call Edward overheard and the fact that she told him she had something to tell him before she said yes. I just know you've got something waiting to jump out at us in any given moment! Love the story and can't wait until the next chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 05 Sep 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
loved it
Date: 04 Sep 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
OMG! That was a terrible place to leave us!
I can't image what they did to try and "help"! I certainly hope that they truly can't ruin his "high".
I can't wait to see what's waiting for Bella. I also have a feeling the x's will make an unwelcome appearance... eventually.
Date: 04 Sep 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
What could Jasper have meant with his comment? It left us surprised to say the least, especially since we thought Edward's family would be the one being surprised.
So Edward took a spontaneous decision which was wonderfully received by Bella. Was it the situation? That's what most people would say, although I don't think so. They have a connection that was hightened by the surrounding environment. Now that they are back, they might question it but I'm guessing they won't doubt it. But we have to wait and see what happens.
Date: 04 Sep 2011 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
oh no!!!! It was all a set up! Poor Edward!!!! Please please post the next chapter soon!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
i am afraid. i am thinking bella was sent to meet edward and make him happy. but now that i write it it sounds stupid. something doesn't seem right. i know they love each other but i am afraid the other shoe is about to drop
love it
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
Oh my!!! Can´t believe they are married! I'm so happy for them!!! now this is getting really interesting... how are they going to get their families to accept it without judging them or thinking they are crazy? Why are the Cullens so shocked?How are Bella's friends and family going to react to the news? Can't wait to read about it in the next chap! I want to hear about Alice!
Eventhough what they did it's a little crazy I think it was right, when you find "the one" you don't stand there watching and just let him/her walk away.
Hope real life is treating you well.
Kisses.R.
Date: 04 Sep 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
OH MY GOSH!!! I have a feeling this is NOT going to be good!! What have they DONE!! Does this mean that somehow, someway his marriage is not legal??? OH BOY!!!
Date: 04 Sep 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
I think Bella should have come clean with him before getting on that plane. He is going to be so hurt, much worse than the Rachel thing.
Date: 04 Sep 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Connections
I think she is on the up and up for the most part but I am also guessing that the Cullens are the reason she is actually there. She has decided not to take money from them for spending time with him but he is going to be mighty hurt when he finds out the real score.
Date: 04 Sep 2011 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two
IT makes me wonder if they would have been attracted to each other if they had gotten stuck with those bozos they were going to marry and how the honeymoons would have looked at that point!
Date: 04 Sep 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
Please tell me she was not a set up. That would so totally suck. I can't wait to find out what the heck is going on.
Date: 03 Sep 2011 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
Awesome~~!! What else can I say???
Date: 03 Sep 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
AAUUUUUUUG!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Date: 03 Sep 2011 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
omg...they sent bella didnt they.......it was a set up or something....up date soon pleaaaassseeeeeeee.....im dying to know whats really going on
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2011 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
:)
Date: 03 Sep 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
Uh oh! Was miss La La in the Bahamas a set up? I'm so happy they are married, I hope they get a chance to legalize it. I have faith everything is going to work out since you haven't been dragging out the drama in Ride of A Lifetime, I'm hoping the same will happen. Been to Señor Frogs and I loved the food. Thanks for the update, I'm hoping you send us another update soon.
Date: 03 Sep 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir
Well shit, don't end it before it begins. I liked them together.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2011 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Connections
haha! I´m so in love with these two! Don´t make it too short, please!!
krazi
xoxo
Date: 29 Aug 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Connections
Trying to make what they have into something less meaningful that what it apparently is. They are enjoying this week more than they ever dreamt they woould. Bit the week will end and they have to go back home... Can they do it and leave this week behind? Seems not.
Date: 27 Aug 2011 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Connections
What is her big secret? I am loving them, so don't let her hurt him, please.
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Connections
fantastic story glad they found one an other.its hot!update soon.
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Connections
great chapter...did bella get paid to make a move on edward? something is up, i hope the truth doesn´t destroy their relationship....can´t wait for the next chapter....
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Connections
Totally loving the 'connection' these two seem to have!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Connections
another brilliant story
Date: 27 Aug 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Connections
Floving it! What a great couple you have here!!!! Hope the storm goes easy on you!
In Florida I can relate
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Connections
Yummy!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Connections
I am glad they've decided to continue conversing with one another. The chemistry between them is wonderful, thanks for the update
Date: 27 Aug 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Connections
Um, yes please....more, more, more!!!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two
I am so loving this story. I cannot wait to read more.
Date: 24 Aug 2011 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two
Wonderful!!!! And any other word that means the same thing!!!! LOL Keep up the great work can't wait for next chapter!!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two
Hello,
yes, I really like your story. Please go on!
Tiina
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two
I feel like pulling my hair and scream :( they have such an amazing connection sadly at the worst time ever, apparenty. Both think there always has to be a re-bound person and neither want the other to think, feel or be it. So... there has to be a way to skip the re-boynd and get into the relationship they both want, need and deserve.
I agree with Bella they should do all the activities they had scheduled and enjoy them, so far they've been doing pretty well.
I hope you keep posting this story!!!!!