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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2023 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini

Loved it 

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Date: 12 Jun 2021 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Love love love it!!!!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2021 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini

Love love love it!!!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2021 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini

Love love love it!!!

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2020 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?

Loved it!  Poor Edward! 

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2020 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two

Loved it!

Reviewer: mlbf1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2019 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

Bella's misdeeds always seem to be forgiven and Edward somehow is the asshole because he doesn't forgive her in 5 minutes. Where as when he does something wrong, she holds a grudge marathon and is encouraged to be a spiteful bitch.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2016 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?

Look I know Edward has every right to be pissed but he was a dick to Bella. Rose was...typical. Can't stand her! Esme should receive the brunt because she was about to set him up with yet another gold digger. Genius! This is one time I'm in favor of Bella running. 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

atleast they have each other, great story

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

 iLOVED this AWESOME little story and the twists in the tale ;) thanks for sharing it with us ;D

Reviewer: starla Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

I gotta be honest, this last chapter felt completely out of left field. We were days away from Bella moving home and Edward went after Rachel for the ring back and now we have the mob involved, a murder, and witness protection... It feels like a completely different story. 

With Rachel calling him as many times as she did and actively trying to get him back I was expecting her to play some part in things. It felt like that was leading up to something since such a big deal was being placed on the ring or the money. Then it just fizzled and the mob stuff came out. Very odd.

If I pretend that the last two chapters didn't happen and that the story actually ended after they reconciled at Alice and Japers wedding then it feels more complete. That last add on stuff just confused the heck out of me. 

Aside from that I enjoyed the story. I think they both made mistakes and could have handled things better but it was still enjoyable. 

Reviewer: starla Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

She should have made him squirm. I can't believe he was juvenile to pretend to date someone else and then had the nerve to get upset that she didn't call him to complain. Seriously?!

I still can't figure out Rosalie's deal. I'm inclined to think she's just all around bitter. 

On one hand I'd kinda like the cheater case to be with Rachel, just because I think it would be hilarious, but in the other hand the Ex's really need to stay in the past. 

I'm glad they've reconciled, but I really think she gave in too soon. He tortured her for 9 months and she only made him stew a couple of hours. 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?

Its what is best for him right now...distance makes the heart grow fonder..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir

She should have told him first, She might have had a crush on him but never got a chance to meet him or Rachel was around....he is gonna be hurt and lose trust in her and Trust is a hard thing to regain...

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Connections

great chapter, it seems like a setup to me Is Edward's family involved with this...

Reviewer: imwithemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

I want to start by saying I am enjoying this story a lot.  My issue with this chapter isn't tha Bella folded too soon or didn't make Edward squirm enough it is that Edward did not seem to feel much remorse for how his actions made Bella feel.  When Bella knew Edward was going to be upset about her lies she hopped on the first plane to Washington to talk to him and she felt incredibly bad for hurting him  When Edward hears from Alice that Bella is depressed and doing very badly since he basicly ignored her he purposefully leads her to believe he has moved on in some attempt to make her contact him and when that doesn't work he does nothing to fix the hurt.  As much as I am happy they didn't prolong their reunion I would have liked Edward to have gained a larger understanding of how much he hurt Bella and show a lot more remorse for his actions  

Reviewer: CSG Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

That was amazing! Loved it! I hate to see it end! Thank you for sharing it! :)

Reviewer: twicrazreader Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Awesome fic!!

Marie

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Reviewer: twicrazreader Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?

I am glad you are writing this with true aspects!

He needs time to work through this.

Marie

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Reviewer: twicrazreader Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story

Well that was different and I glad they are gonna try and talk!

Marie

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Reviewer: twicrazreader Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir

Oh god they sent her there or they knew her that is what she was trying to tell him?

Marie

Twicrazreader

Reviewer: twicrazreader Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Connections

I want a non honeymoon with Edward!!!!

Marie

Twicrazreader

Reviewer: twicrazreader Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two

Oh they are so made for each other!!

Marie

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Reviewer: twicrazreader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini

 I got your fic from Ms. Swan's bookstore.

Loved the first chapter.

Marie

Twicrazreader

Reviewer: nello1418 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story

i did not see that coming. nice twist

Reviewer: neffy09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Aww sad its over but I loved it good job!!!!

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

good story

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?

ahhhh maybe his right,but he is making a wrong decision

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2013 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two

omg your story is really good  im hooked

Reviewer: BelleBiter Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Really appreciate the ending; thanks for not tying everything into a neat little suburban bow.

As always, you must know that you could continue this charming storyline, if you wish...

Reviewer: BelleBiter Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

"It’s a breath that I’ve been holding for nine months, and I didn’t even know it."  "Fuck and yes."

Purty writin', Missy :)

Reviewer: BelleBiter Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story

Deftly written, all the while dodging so many cliches. Well done, and thank you for maintaining the integrity of the characters during a perilous plot shift.

Reviewer: BelleBiter Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir

Ruh-roh. Dun dun dunnnnn...

Reviewer: BelleBiter Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Connections

"She might be Miss La La, but I’m not going to be Mr. Bye Bye." "I love a woman who can multitask."

And I love an author who can make me laugh. Thanks.

Reviewer: BelleBiter Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner for Two

That last paragraph... oh, yes.

Reviewer: BelleBiter Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini

What a good premise for a story... and, unfortunately, a timely one for me. But enough of that. There's something intriguing about being cast in a role - or doing the same activities - as an established couple (esp. when you aren't one at all) that puts electricity into the air no matter what, and I love the evil twist of the set-up, care of both exes. Am really looking forward to how this one plays out.

Reviewer: ec620 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Loved it!!! Wish there was a sequel tho!!! ;)

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

awesome story :)

Reviewer: luvstwilight14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Again another great story!! Read it in a few hours on and off.  couldn't stop!!!  Going in for another!

Hugs, Stephanie

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir

i knew it!! he was set up. but, of course, edward and bella really developed feelings for each other. and now the doubt will set in...oh, what a mess!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

an awesome story but I love all your work

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

hope she doesn't get hurt

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

yea

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?

:(

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story

ALL

IS

GOOD

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Lure of the White Bikini

GREAT START

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

oh wow, I didn't realize this was the last chapter of this tale.  Now I am feeling a bit sad too, sniff...sniff...  I love your storytelling and will pretty much read anything you post because I know it will be good, even if your characters do things that make me want to beat my head against a wall [don't worry, it's their fault, not yours].

These were 2 characters thrown into a crazy situation and I am happy they were able to stay together, even if the rest of the family couldn't be there with them.  The trial got resolved and they survived and even live in paradise, so I guess I have no complaints.  Thanks for another great story, look forward to your next one!

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Amazing!!! Gonna miss this story though... Loved it!

Reviewer: wdmmom4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Really fun!!  Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

It was an amazing end to an amazing story.Thank you for writing it.

Reviewer: JenGail01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

NNNOOOOOOO...it can't end.  I love, love, love this story, as I do all of yours.  This story was great and I hope to read many more from you.  Thank you for all of the hard work and effort involved in creating such a gem.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

intresting ending

 

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

It is one of the most unique endings I've read. Something we honestly could not have considered. Bella's work cost them both dearly, they almost loose each other. Thankfully there was a way to get them to each other and to their perfect place.

Reviewer: LadyChery Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

I was shocked to read that this is the last chapter. I wish there was more. Do you plan on wiring a second part to this wonderful adventure? Thanks for another wonderful story

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

well i so loved the story. i do have to say i was shocked and totally did not see that coming. wow giving up everything but att he same time thank god they had each other. she fought for him and he fought for her. in the end their loved won out and now wow they are expecting their own little one. too bad their families won't be part of the new addition.

well loved it, thanx

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Sniff...sniff* is right! But they are together!

Reviewer: lovesurfer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

It was amazing reading this beautiful story, thank you for sharing it with us. I had such a great time learning about this guys, your updates always made my day! I'm a little sad that it came to an end but I'm happy for what you did with it.

 

Hope to read something else from you soon, in the mean time I hope real life treats you well.

Kisses.R.

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Awww, cute.  Shame you couldn't go into more detail.  The last chapter seemed a bit rushed, but it was still good.  Thanks for sharing your talent!

Reviewer: Maggie79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

WOW didn't see that happening!  Great ending though..i hate to see it go but glad it was wrapped up instead of left hanging.

Reviewer: vhorlturi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Nice and short. Loved your story. The plot twist was interesting and not just a holiday fling fluff !

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

That was fabulous!  I'm a little surprised by the ending but enjoyed it immensely!  I hope to see more stories from you in the future.

Reviewer: lain67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

loved this story ,i really thought that when she had to pee a lot that she was pregnant ....but at least she was in the end ..yay

sad that they had to leave their families behind ,but what a place to have a holiday

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

I loved this last chapter. It's somehow the perfect ending for the two of them.

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Really enjoyed this story thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

great update

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

fantastic chapter alices wedding was so romantic.yey only a week to go and their together again.update soon

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

I hope something bad doesn't happen to Bella on her assignment, and I really hope that skanky cheating whore doesn't show up anywhere near Edward either!  I can't wait to read the next update!

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

Rachel needs to be taken out by a kick-boxing Bella!

Reviewer: reading chick Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

So sweet.

Reviewer: LadyChery Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

I hope her case doesn't cause any troubles for them. I love the fact that he proposed again. Looking forward to them making a home on Bainbridge. Thanks for the update

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

looking forward to the  nexdt chapter 

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

I sure hope nothing happens to Bella over this last case she's working. And do you believe the nerve of Edward's ex??!!!! To think she might have a chance to get back with him is beyond me. No one one wants 'sloppy seconds'. What can she be thinking?

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

So to make Edward feel happy, Rachel's life isn't going as she wanted. She has, of course, realized what she lost and wants it back. She has no chance of getting it. Lets just hope she doesn't try anything s...d. 

Bella is trying her best to wrap up everything in Chicago. It hasn't go as smoothly as she would want it, but it's going fine.

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

Excellent chapter!  I loved it.  I thought the rule of thumb with and engagement ring was... if it is given as a gift (i.e. birthday or christmas) it doesn't need to be returned; but if its given during a normal day at a proposal it can be. 

I hope her final client surveillance goes ok... I must admit I am worried.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: lain67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

thought it was awesome as usual

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

I've got a bad feeling when it comes to Bella and Aro. Great update love your story

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

Loved it but so sad it's almost over!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

I still FLOVE the story! It doesn't seem like only 1 chapter to go?

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

i am hoping her job goes well. gts her man.

i am glad rachel got what she deserved in the end. edward wants nothing to do with her. i can't believe she sent her brother to do her dirty work.

th wedding for alice went without a hitch.

everything seems to be going smoothly and i can't wait till bella is in sattle.

love it

Reviewer: flavia Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

Love it! But I`m so sad It`s almost over! I hope Rachel don`t cause trouble!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2011 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

fantastic chapter.glad their back together they are meant to be.alice is gonna be so pissed lol but happy their back together.wow that was one hot reunion.update soon

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2011 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

pmsl i bet the look on her face as priceless lol.fab chapter alice is sneaky lol.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

I think they suffered enought over the last nine months. Tell me Bella will be ok in Chicago. Can't wait for more

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

i loved it,  they both had nine months of hell, and all he did was take time to get his head on straight, absence makes teh heart grow fonder.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

Loved it but I hope this doesn't mean the end is near :)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

I'm glad that she's taking him baack! I think 9 months was long enough for both of them to suffer.  Now, inquiring minds would like to know... will we ever find out what crawled up Rosalie's ass and died?  What´s her beef with Alice, I know she wanted to date Edward before Emmett, but why begrudge Alice and Jasper happiness?  Why is she so bitter?  I´m hoping she comes around!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

it was perfect just as. they are great. fire and ice. they feed off of each other. they finally know what they want and that second chance they will not waste. their time together will be will worth it and cherised.  i am surprised he is giving her two weeks. i thought he'd say lets do this together and get back to washington faster. i so loved it all

Reviewer: LadyChery Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

I'm so happy for them moving on from the hurt. I can't wait for them to be together in Washington starting out their lives as mr and mrs Cullen. Thanks for the update

Reviewer: reading chick Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

Love it!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

Shit they both cried for 9 months! This was perfect!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

its about freakin time! looking forward to seeing what happens next 

Reviewer: flavia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

Love it! Can wait for the update!

Reviewer: lain67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

they could go round and round but the upshot is if they want to make it work then they have to try

loved this chapter can you please do a bella/alice smackdown on rose she only got briefly mentioned in this chapter yet still managed to piss me off......please...lol

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

I'm happy they she didn't make him suffer... it would make her suffer as well... so why bother.

I have a feeling something bad is going to happen on this "last job"... I'm anxious!

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Take Two

There's so many grief, pain and sadness in the world, I don't think it's necessary to add more to it. They both have suffered a good deal for the last nine months. So, if they are both ready to move pass it, we should encourage them, be happy and yes, a bit jealous. 

Who is this Riley guy? Or should I say was? What will Bella think when she finds out Edward deleted the message? As Edward said, not everything can be perfect, and he already might have got himself in trouble. The make up s... will be amazing, no doubt.

Their private morning has been amazing, but a part of me can't wait to see what will Emmett have to say to Mis La La and what she did to his brother. Also what Mis La La's father has to add. 

How many days left there? I hope a few... :)

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

oooo, I was so excited to see this new story.  I have been reading trip of a lifetime, so I know this will be great too.  thanks for sharing your talent with us!

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

Great chapter, can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: reading chick Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

He is a bastard for waiting so long, but I hope she can forgive him.

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

OMG Edward is a douche he needs to beg & kiss Bella's ass for a while, for what he put her thru. Please make him suffer even make him jealous......hehe

Thanks :)

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

wow i almost died my mouth totally fall open when i heard he was dating. omg

so thank god it was a hoax that bella didn't buy into.  i can't believe they are back in the bahamas. alice and jasper are getting married. whoa so much going on. after 9 months so much anger. i almost thought bella was pregnant with the symptoms but too mucg time has past so not. i hope it is just stress and that she isn't sick.  my goodness the whole family is on vacation. i can't believe charlie is there. i can't wait for the next chapter. love it

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