Date: 24 May 2012 5:13 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
i don't know why i didn't think of TWCS when you blocked anonimous reviwes on FF... so now i forgot almost everything i wanted to say the last 20 or so chapters, except for one thing: edward is the most fucked up individual in all the story. what the hell was that scene in last chapter??? what the hell does he want from bella?? i would have kill my husband if i was her, not ignoring him! everything it's his fault! yes, she was aware of his life when they got married but he should have tought of his family! he wanted children? well, he should have created a safe life for them!! instead just going out fof shopping is dangerous! and this chapter??? first he wants to hurt her, then he let her almost kill someone out of revenge, knowing this would have destroyed her, then he dismiss her like she's no one... fuck you!!! yes there's nothing else to say: she should pack a bag and go to fucking brazil whit her children!! nobody needs a person like him in their life! when you start to be afraid of your husband, that's the moment when you have to leave him, and we already saw what's he's capable of! and i really would like to see where "he was always there for her"... his job has always been more important, when he wasn't happy with something he shouted and gave orders until everyone was doing what he wanted, she had to drop school and avoid friends, she can't even be nice to people because he sees cheating and batrayal everywhere... that's beeing a tyrant, not a husband!!!!!! love is never be the problem? well, for the first time in my life i say: sometimes love is not enough.
P.S. i really hope carlisle and alex are going to break up because he deserves nothing, least of all someone who loves him! he's been a cheating pig all his life and alex is way too goog for him! hell. anyone is way to good for him!!!!!!
give us aro. who is the only nice guy!
serena
Date: 24 May 2012 2:09 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
where can I find the 1st chapter of quiet storm from edward point of view?
Date: 24 May 2012 1:14 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
i love this story! onto the next
Date: 24 May 2012 11:13 AM Title: In Like Flynn
And can't wait next chap :))
Hugs :))
Date: 24 May 2012 11:11 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
Lexi, this chap was just... I have no words.
I love Aro even more :)) And B & E I know they'll be all right.
I always have faith in you. And I want to see them happy, again.
Love'ya, Monika :))
Date: 24 May 2012 10:21 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
Great chapter! Bad ass Bella!
Date: 24 May 2012 6:37 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
Fuck DJ.
Date: 24 May 2012 5:13 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
Emotional chapter! I could feel Bella's pain.
Date: 24 May 2012 4:17 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
I don't like them fighting, please let them work things out. They come too far to end it now..
Date: 24 May 2012 3:25 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
I'm witout words. I'm glad Bella didn't actually kill him. I know it doesn't make much difference since he still died, but it made me happy when Bella said that wasn't who she was. I think it's good that Bella is leaving. Edward really needs to cool down.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2012 1:46 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
Lex - This was another great chapter. From previous chapters when E gets in these moods, he has to come down, so I hope he will listen to his voicemail and not send her away. I think they need to stay together. Without B, E gets lost.
Date: 24 May 2012 1:05 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
Wasn't that bad
Great chap as always
Keep the story goin!!
Date: 24 May 2012 12:58 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
Good Chapter......
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2012 11:45 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
WOW THAT IS ALL I CAN SAY!! I cannot wait until the next chapter. Will we get the part where bella is in the room from EPOV?
Date: 23 May 2012 11:31 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
Wow. This is awesome! I feel like I am just part of the family just living life with them. It's like a soap opera you know how you get hooked and you know everybody's life wow that's all I can say. It's getting so emotionally outrageous right now I can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2012 11:01 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
i hate bella and edward fighting. they will get through it ....and damn gooo bella!! im glad she sot that little prick. hope it doesnt haunt her. cant wait for more!!!!
Date: 23 May 2012 11:00 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
Oh... My heart hurts for both of em. But it's almost like E's given up on thinkin she loves him for him anymore. Threw in the towel of sorts. Poor guy... Let's hope aro keeps talkin sense into her and what not. Maybe the kids all together n Bella having time away will help her. It'll prolly only make things worse for e though. Damn the heart strings :( Least Sonny got to see huge boobs!!!
Date: 23 May 2012 10:31 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
I saw the update in my inbox and it was a good day !!! Good for Bella!! I hope they work it out soon, my heart is breaking here!
Date: 23 May 2012 9:27 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
Thanks for the chapter. Wow, heavy emotions. Interesting to see Bellas perspective. After rereading from the very first chapter of Quiet Storm I'm not really surprised we are were we are with the both of them. i honestly feel like Bella doesn't get where her husband is coming from, like at all. She is concerned about everybody else first, then comes her husband. Even from her point of view it feels like it. I really hope the both of them work it out soon and that you don't draw it out. Hopefully both of them will recognize what they did wrong. And i don't think Edward is ready to give up, he just wasn't in a state to talk it out right now. Its not that I don't understand were Bella is coming from, she just has a habit of avoiding certain problems and she never actually listens to her husband.
Sad to see them fighting, I always like how they stuck together for everything.
Can't wait to read more!
Date: 23 May 2012 9:08 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
wow, just wow, cant wait to read more.........
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2012 9:05 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
Great! Thank you!
Date: 23 May 2012 2:21 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
WHEN HE HURTS, I DO TOO.
Date: 23 May 2012 12:53 AM Title: This Woman's Work
Again! Tears definitely dropped when Sonny said "At least it wasn't dad."
Date: 23 May 2012 12:07 AM Title: Craft of the Father
God dammit. ya got me in tears. AGAIN!
Date: 22 May 2012 11:14 PM Title: End of the Day
Love this couple.
Date: 21 May 2012 3:56 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
Wow...that was quite a chapter. That shit with Sonny and the stripper was funny.
Date: 17 May 2012 8:24 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
I don't blame Edward for being mad Bella. She is blaming Edward and it is really not his fault. She acts like he doesn't love his kids. He is hurting just as much as she is but he can't walk around like a mental patient. He has to hold everything together. She should be supporting him. They should be hugging each other and showing affection. Helping each other get through this trying time. Bella should not be giving him the cold shoulder. Edward was the one who was with him when it happened. Does she not realize how guilty he feels already? It is easy to love somebody during the good times. Showing love and support during the tough times, that is real love. Bella needs to stop being selfish and turn the lights off at the pity party. She needs to be the wife she is suppose to be. She was a wife to Edward first. The children are being taken care of right now. Edward made sure of it. He needs her. She needs to remember there is not divorce, so she better get her act together and help Edward, so he can think straight. She is about to break his heart and spirit.
Date: 17 May 2012 5:35 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
Another great chapter!!! I completely adore your writing style and the life you have brought to these characters. I hope Edward and Bella can get back on the same page, because I like them working together on problems, not fighting each other. I can't wait for the next chapter and what will Bella do when she realizes her new family is involved in her son's shooting. That is an interesting family dynamic she will be facing...love it!
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2012 2:51 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
What a cliffie. LExi - great job of setting the emotional mood. wow - oh and my hand hurts just reading this!
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2012 11:45 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
Loved the part where Aro tells Edward he is going to hug him! LOL
Date: 16 May 2012 6:25 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
Holy shyt!!!! I totally have faith in you but seriously hoping part 2 comes sooner rather than later. I know they both mean well but I'm always team e, and his heart is straight breakin. She goes to aro to check on him n get ice n doesn't even give a shyt.
Damn, seriously needing that next part ;)
Date: 16 May 2012 4:08 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
Good Chapter.....
Date: 16 May 2012 3:35 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
You never leave a chapter with Bella and Edward not together. She flipped out. She took it out on him, his business got their son hurt. Well yes and when she finds out her new family is part of it. More guilt. Only this time she won't have Edward. I am afraid they have hit a bad bad place.
Date: 15 May 2012 11:46 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
No u stopped to soon. lol, great chapter, cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2012 11:40 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
Aww man this chapter is like I dont know!! I want to to be pissed at Bella because she knew what she was getting into why have the kids? But then I feel sorry for Edward because he feels the guilt of the whole situation and not get his Bella. I just dont know feel lots of emotions about this chapter but it was great very great!
Date: 15 May 2012 10:38 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
Thanks so much for the update!! Brightens my Tuesday when I see a WtS update, you never disappoint in the content either;-))
I completely trust you, but it kills me to see Bella & Edward unable to be their usual team & not have each others back right now. But reality is like that when years pass & bad stuff goes down things can get messy in a relationship. And it certainly makes this story more gritty & suspenseful.
Date: 15 May 2012 8:54 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
Wow, I finally have time to read again and I come to this last couple of chapters. Seems like there is trouble in paradise. I always suspected that at some point something like this would happen. As flawed as Edward is with his tendency to lose his temper, Bella is no better. She often just acts without considering Edwards feelings. I just reread both storys and so its all very fresh for me. Very early on I noticed Bellas tendency to call their children "HER" children. Maybe I`m interpreting too much but I feel like you set it up so that at some point this conflict would play out. After Edward lost his temper so badly and really started thinking I always felt that now its Bellas turn. She has been pushing him a lot and now they both were to high strung. In this situation both of them were wrong but Bella topped it of with acting all concerned for Aro after he and Edward fought. I don`t think she even realizes how much she is hurting his feelings sometimes.
Also I really dislike her hitting him, spousal abuse is never ok. I hope the next chapter will be ready soon! I just hope it gets better for them.
I wonder of Aro will bring Bella to O`Reillys, though I doubt it. She is definitly in for a rough awakening.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2012 7:54 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
wow!! poor edward i have faith in you i know they will get through it. i hope bella loses her shit on dj. her " brother" i hope she kills him and doesnt regret it at all...
Date: 15 May 2012 6:53 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
YIKES! They're at it again. Wondering how they can work this one out and make things better. They don't seem to ever learn they're always having the same fights. Wonder how he'd handle it if something happened to Bella, yeah, he can't stand to look at her or be around her now I bet that'd change. On a different note.. I knew her new step brother had to be involved. Feeling kind of stressed after this one, I don't know if I can wait a whole week to see what happens next.
Date: 15 May 2012 6:24 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
Oh no. I'm gonna die waiting for this update. You left me right in the middle of all that drama??? I think Bella's been somewhat selfish too. They are both running on empty. They haven't really let go their emtions about Sonny being shot especially Edward and he does need comfort. He may always feel Bella cant fully forgive him just because he can't forgive himself. That is hard to work through.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2012 5:23 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
Yea...they both need to relax some. Bells needs to realize that she is all that he needs ever. Without her, he cant truly function the way he needs to. I know shes hurting and I TOTALLY TRUST YOU!!! But she needs to have a come to god moment and chill the fuck out a little on poor E.
I still want her to kill DJ, though, not sure how that will really affect her emotionally....guess if she wants her 10 minutes, lets give it to her.
Loves you hard woman!! <3
Date: 15 May 2012 4:41 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
Oh fuck Bella's mouth I hope they are ok, can't wait for her reaction though.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2012 5:09 PM Title: This Woman's Work
very good chapter. I too am so curious as to what Derek knows. I was surprised E didn't push that more. Great job with Bella's emotions.
Date: 12 May 2012 1:24 PM Title: This Woman's Work
I LOVE THIS STORY. I LOVE THE VIOLENCE THE GORE AND THE HOT SEX. THIS IS A GREAT MAFIA STORY. IT IS EVEN BETTER THAN JOHNNYBOY THERE WILL BE FREEDOM.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2012 7:13 PM Title: This Woman's Work
Bella needs to relax and realize that Edward is trying to take care of her. She is about to loose it. Bella is no good for Sonny in the state she is in at this moment. Bella is crazy if she thinks Sonny wants her to wash him. She needs to realize her baby is too old for that now. He enjoys looking at other pretty women now. Having one wash him is almost worth getting shot. Bella thinks she is tough enough to get revenge then she freaks out when that young adult is killed at their house. Edward is right. He would just come back after them. She needs to leave this to the professionals. They will make sure that the family is safe again. She needs to wash her hair and take a bath. Then she needs to spend some time with her husband and remind each other that they love each other no matter what happens. They are a team with a solid bond.
Date: 10 May 2012 7:05 PM Title: This Woman's Work
So now I'm wondering if the guy that shot sonny is Bella's new step brother. I'm so glad Sonny is doing well and Bella and Edward seem to be doing better. Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2012 6:51 PM Title: This Woman's Work
Excellent chapter as always!
Date: 10 May 2012 6:19 PM Title: Craft of the Father
Jeez...did not see that coming...this is going to be a war.
Date: 10 May 2012 5:32 PM Title: This Woman's Work
OKAY PHWEEE i FINALLY FINALLY CAUGHT UP TO YOU!!! i FOUND QUIET STORM AND HAVE NOT STOPPED UNTIL NOW TO REVIEW, WELL CAUSE I JUST COULDN'T STOP READING :-)
fIRST NEVER NEVER LET THOSE JERKS OUT THER MAKE YOU FEEL BAD FOR WHAT YOU WRITE. THIS IS FANFICTION AND IF THEY CAN'T DEAL EVEN AFTER YOU GIVE FAIR WARNING F THEM SEND THEM TO SEE EDWARD ON ONE OF HIS BAD DAYS. ;-) I FEEL A WRITER SHOULD WRITE WHAT IS IN THEIR HEART AND NEVER CHANGE THE STORY FOR THE APPESAL OF OTHERS. I MAY NOT LIKE WHAT THEY SAY BUT IT IS SOLEY UP TO ME TO READ OR NOT READ NEVER BASH FOR WHAT I CHOOSE TO READ. YOU THE WRITER DO NOT HOLD A GUN TO OUR HEADS TO READ THERFORE WE SHOULD NEVER DISRESPECT SOMETHING YOU DO WRITE..
OKAY ENOUGH OF THAT. THE STORY AMAZING!!!!! I USUALLY READ ANYWHENRE FROM 10-20 FANFIC'S AT A TIME, BUT SINCE FINDING THIS I HAVE READ NOTHING BUT THIS STORY.
EDWARD MAN DO I WANT TO SMACK THE CRAP OUT OF HIM SOMETIMES.. AND BEBELLA SHE HAS CHANGED SHE WAS SO STRONG IN THE BEGINNING IN HER STANDING UP TO OLE EDWARD. NOW I FEEL SHE IS COWERING MORE AND MORE JUST TO APPEASE HIM. BUT WITH THE HELL THAT WOMAN GOES THROUGH WHO CAN BLAME HER. CARLILE SICK SICK MAN BUT I AM PRAYING ALEX BEATS HIS BUT INTO LINE.
THE KIDS TOO TOO CUTE (STILL I KEEP HOPING EDWARD WILL GO LEGIT FOR THEM I KNOW THAT IS NOT FEASINLE)
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WHAT YOU DO
Date: 10 May 2012 2:08 PM Title: This Woman's Work
I really love this story. I'm finally all caught up and can not wait for the next update. Gonna go start reading Quiet Storm again as I love this Bella and Edward and can't get enough of them. Thanks for the great read.
Date: 10 May 2012 10:29 AM Title: This Woman's Work
Another chapter thanks! I hope Bella gets all bad ass and gets her revenge.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2012 2:34 AM Title: This Woman's Work
Wow so much going on! I feel like I know who may be involved but I am not sure. I am thinking her step, half brother whatever DJ. I guess I wait and find out!!
Date: 09 May 2012 9:02 PM Title: This Woman's Work
I don't think that's DJ. I think it's someone less suspicious. I won't be surprised if it's Esme. That cunt beyond the grave could be dangerous. And her dead is such a mystery. Suicide but why? I can't wait next chapter. Tkanx Lexi :))
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2012 3:39 PM Title: This Woman's Work
It was DJ.....
LOVES U HARD WOMAN!!!!
Date: 09 May 2012 2:06 PM Title: This Woman's Work
So you kept us hanging on the DJ thing,eh? I'm guessing that's who it is & why Aro has such an interest. I can't wait to find out who it was. So did Carlisle take out Mauro because he suspected he was involved?
Great chapter, kinda gruesome what Edward did, my god that guy is ruthless, I don't know if that's a strong enough adjective, but Edward's right, it wasn't going to end any other way for that kid if his objective was revenge, too bad. He's definitely the lion/king of the forest.
Date: 09 May 2012 5:49 AM Title: This Woman's Work
Good Chapter.....
Date: 09 May 2012 2:07 AM Title: This Woman's Work
So sad! Couldn't help but cry for Bebella.
Date: 09 May 2012 2:04 AM Title: This Woman's Work
Nothing like a little American History X action. lol, great chapter btw cant wait to read more.
Date: 09 May 2012 12:15 AM Title: This Woman's Work
Is it Dereks son? I can't wait till the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2012 12:09 AM Title: This Woman's Work
Awesome, as always!
Date: 08 May 2012 10:01 PM Title: This Woman's Work
Dont be surprised about the nominations for awards. Your stories are:
1. Well written with a PLOT. Not some shit with lemons and not much else.
2. Updated frequently
Date: 08 May 2012 9:58 PM Title: This Woman's Work
brava girlie! onto the next one
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2012 8:58 PM Title: This Woman's Work
loved it...poor skip and bella the preassure and stress they are under. i have faith in you ans cant wait for more!!! (rpattz luvor)
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2012 3:10 AM Title: Craft of the Father
Lex - great amazing chapter. Is B going to get her 10 minutes?
Date: 05 May 2012 1:16 PM Title: Craft of the Father
love the mama bella bear! kick some ass girl and make edward look like a pussy! grrrrr thats our sonny they hit!
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2012 3:49 AM Title: Craft of the Father
AWE-FUCKING-SOME!!! As always actually. I couldn't put it down and I had to go to sleep... the only reason I stopped around halfway through is because I get up obscenely early... no seriously like 4 a.m. You see, I'm in highschool and my semester is about to end, in fact if I don't review or comment the following chapter, rest assured that I will in 2 weeks time cause I'm in the middle of finals. The Sonny thing!!!!! I was on the edge of my seat about to cry, the works. I've always said it and I will continue to say it, I'm not a big fan of Twilight, I do not like the idea of shiny vampires, but I do believe that the best that has come from it is the fanfiction. So in a nutshell, THANK YOU
Always at the edge of my seat for you
Daniella
Date: 04 May 2012 6:52 PM Title: Craft of the Father
I can't believe someone tried to take out Edward when he was with his kids. If they had something planned, they should have aborted when they saw the kids. That is the lowest to do a drive by with children present. Not that I want someone to hurt Edward, but he know how to defend himself. Edward was a sitting duck. He couldn't do anything, but take care of his babies. I hope they take that car guy apart. I think that dealership should be history also. He knew it was coming. He made a deal. When they find the guys I would not be surprized if they went after their families as well as them. I understand Bella. Don't hurt my babies. My husband mignt be a United States Marine, but he is a teddy bear in comparison to me when it comes to my babies. I think it was wrong though of her to blame and freeze Edward out. They have to stay united. Don't give the FBI or the other enemies any ammunition against you. She knows it wasn't Edward's fault. He loves his babies more than himself.
Date: 04 May 2012 2:57 PM Title: Craft of the Father
Thanks for your donations! What a great chapter, I'm glad I can trust you not to take out the innocent children;-)) having them hurt was enough angst.
Cant wait to read more & see Bella get her 10 minutes.
Date: 03 May 2012 10:22 PM Title: Craft of the Father
Poor Sonny. He was so brave to shield Kylie. Mauro has to have had some part in this. I hope that Bella gets to tear him apart and Lloyd too.
Best Part:
He patted my back. "Don't think about shit right now—worry about Sonny. I don't even know what to tell Katie . . . her little boyfriend."
He made me grin while I fought to keep myself from crying. "Sonny was going to show up with flowers . . ."
"Stop." My buddy looked seconds away from losing it as well. "I know he'll be all right . . .
Date: 03 May 2012 3:14 PM Title: Craft of the Father
I have faith, I really do... But ugh!!!! That just sucks!!!! Loving bad ass Bella though... Can't wait to see her go all mafia mom on the guys who did this!!! Edward will be soooo proud, he already is but... Someone's gonna get it for messin with the kiddos!!! Nuttin like boobies to heal a tweener thats a mini Edward. ;)
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2012 12:34 PM Title: Craft of the Father
Breaks my heart! Can't wait to see if Edward would really leave Bella alone with who did it! Great chapter as always!
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2012 3:14 AM Title: Craft of the Father
Oh mygod I couldn't stop crying when I read about Bella breaking down. Love this story
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2012 3:09 AM Title: Craft of the Father
PLease, please, please, dont kill sonny off..
Date: 03 May 2012 2:38 AM Title: Craft of the Father
omg, poor sonny, it was a good chapter thou, cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2012 2:20 AM Title: Craft of the Father
Lexi, this chapter is so moving. Floved it !!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2012 1:41 AM Title: Craft of the Father
this chappie mase me bawl!! poor sonny....i hope they get those fuckers soon. please let bella just fuck them up!!! cxant wait for more.'and i know sonny will be ok i trust you!! on fb i am known as (rpattz luvor)
Date: 03 May 2012 1:27 AM Title: Craft of the Father
This is the most intense chapter you have ever written... keep it up...
Date: 03 May 2012 12:50 AM Title: Craft of the Father
Good Chapter.....
Date: 03 May 2012 12:34 AM Title: Craft of the Father
Bloody hell.....the angst level was off the charts in this chapter! I had a feeling that one of the kids was going to get caught in the crossfire eventually. Excellent, emotionally driven chapter!
Date: 03 May 2012 12:29 AM Title: Craft of the Father
:O i can't believe Sonny got shot! Sad but great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2012 12:14 AM Title: Craft of the Father
omg i cnat wait for the next chapter. i can't wait for bella and those ten min. wit the people who shot her son. i cant wait for more. this cahpter was a tear jerker.
Date: 02 May 2012 11:49 PM Title: Craft of the Father
Sonny got shot!! Oh, I cried. I was afraid he would die. That's just nuts. I can't beleive that. I was afraid that Bella was gonna blame Edward. It's scary how fast stuff like this happens. Update soon!! I love this story!
Date: 02 May 2012 11:48 PM Title: Craft of the Father
I did not see that coming! You rock!
Date: 02 May 2012 11:29 PM Title: Craft of the Father
Great chapter!
Date: 02 May 2012 11:16 PM Title: End of the Day
Another great chapter! You really should be published. When you are please let us all know.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2012 6:17 PM Title: The Twilight Zone
Yeah.,..this is why we ALWAYS make sure the door is locked...lol
The only time our son caught us...yeah NOT happening again!!!
Thank GAWD...E got his groove back...lol
Loves <3
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 22
If ppl cant figure out by NOW that E would NEVER do that to B...then fuck them. They can flounce.
My only issue and I understand B is just so damn lovable...but this shit with Aro has got to STOP. She needs to realize what its doing to all of them and walk away from him, their friendship and anything to do with him. He only exists now for 'the thing'.
Loves <3
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2012 3:40 PM Title: Blondie
I love Esme as much as anyone else, but the bitch is gonna have to go. She is fucking nuts!!!!!
Loves <3
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2012 1:54 PM Title: Too Many Movies
I know that I havnt reviewed till now....but oh fuck yes. I knew Esme was behind that hit. I just fucking knew it.
BOTH of these stories have been AMAZING!!! I cant tell you how much I love them. I just cant stop reading. THats why I havnt had a chance to review.
I just got so carried away reading, that I passed it by. Sorry love,
Loves <3
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2012 12:42 PM Title: End of the Day
Hi, I've been a reader of your stories for the past two months. I hadn't left a review or anything on here because I thought you'd finished, and well, what's the point since you'd probably not be able to check, however I just found out it's still a work in progress and I'd like to congratulate you. Even if for the past couple of chapters, things have been kind of slow, I've adored them. I already read QS and I also loved it. So I just wanted to say that. You're an awesome writer and you've kept me hooked throughout every chapter. So, I guess the gist of what I'm trying to say is thank you (:
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2012 9:28 PM Title: End of the Day
great chapter. is it ok for Bella to see Derek Sr. "alone"? And really Derek Jr was the shooter? I so totally didn't see that - he just seemed like a punk.
Date: 28 Apr 2012 12:42 PM Title: A Tight Fit
That's right, you stop defending yourself. This story is raw, gritty and awesome. I think anyone would be okay with constructive criticism but mean or hateful comments belong to bullies, so pay them no mind. You are an excellent writer and have given multiple explicit warnings to readers about the subject matter so it's on them, the haters, to stop reading if they don't like it. 'Nuff said, Onto the next chapter!
Date: 26 Apr 2012 4:37 PM Title: End of the Day
Picture it...a woman sitting in a Starbucks in No. VA enjoying a skinny latte and perusing a story on her laptop when she reads something that caused her to let out a loud "FUCK" and spill said latte all down the front of her. That was me earlier when I read the name "Derek Meloni Jr." I couldn't review then because I had to come home to change, but I came back.
Just when I think you might be leading us toward a wrap up...you shock the shit out of me! Great chapter. Loved the lovin' at the end.
Date: 26 Apr 2012 4:34 PM Title: End of the Day
Love, love, love this story.
Date: 26 Apr 2012 5:29 AM Title: End of the Day
great chapter cant wait to read more.
Date: 26 Apr 2012 4:52 AM Title: End of the Day
Wow, I can't believe that it was Bella's new brother that shot Aro. Wonder what he'll do?
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2012 4:20 AM Title: End of the Day
That sex was hot! Please no more Alex, please.
I wish Bella returned his friendship with Alice and Rosalie, they were fun and real friends.
Poor Aro, I wonder how you feel, and feel that Bella.
Perhaps it would be better if Bella had something else to do, it just stays at home, should be so limited, I do not know, I always worked, so I do not know how to just stay at home with children, should be good to dedicate only the house but I do not know if I could.
Edward already preparing Bella for the end of dating, and Leese and Aro, or, Aro do not really like it Leese.
I had hoped that Aro join her sister Bella.
Love, as always amazing.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2012 3:33 AM Title: End of the Day
lovd it..hmm dereke jr not good!! ugh......mauro well edward should handle that. loved it and glad edward and bella had sexy time!