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Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2017 6:28 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two

Carlisle is such a chicken shit!!! I wanted Edward to ask him to leave, if that had been Cassius, he would have freaked!! Plus, if I'm Alex, I would be super pissed, he outed her getting an STD to her father? Plus, I think Mauro would have beat his ass!! He is like that creepy guy who is basically stalking Alex. I hope he has to work VERY hard to get this girl after that stunt, and I hope Edward pops him one too. Talk about disrespect! I have actually been on his side most of the time in both stories but not this time 😐

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2017 1:15 PM Title: Members Only

Man was that a long time coming!!! It's like Emmett is still that guy who showed up at the Middleton apartment in QS. Still thinking the worst of Edward and still treating Bella like an idiot. Rose has always been the quiet presence keeping the peace but this has been brewing for a long time. Bella has every right to be upset and instead of an apology, he treats her like a child whom he did the right thing by because it was less complicated and easier on him to shield her from the truth. I was very proud of Bella, she didn't run for shelter or Edward, she stood on her own 2 feet. God, I can't believe Alice is still in the picture after all these years. Like Bella has so much class but Alice is still that white trash, filter less hood rat with 3 kids, by 3 different fathers...ugh. But, it shows a contrast between where Bella was and where she is today.

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2017 11:58 AM Title: Requiem for a Dream

Thank you for that last part...I have felt what Edward feels for a while now and I get it. She is petrified of neglect, basically becoming Rene which makes her so controlling when it comes to the kids. Her tantrums during NJ turmoil (almost like she cared and Edward didn't), the pool, the camp...all comes down to Bella acting purely on emotional crap that she needs to get a grip on. Damion is so freaking annoying half the time because anyone says boo to that kid and Bella loses it. The "clown" make up and shoes for example and the list goes on and on. He is spoiled and Edward is 100% right in his feelings. Why Bella dreams of getting a BA is beyond me, she has probably stopped herself because she is such a helicopter parent.

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2017 9:11 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One

Wow, that was a powerful chapter and WTF about people saying your dialogue is choppy? That is completely and utterly bull shit...can you imagine Edward saying "No Sonny, your mother is in no way upset with you so please turn from the doorway and walk back to your bedroom for it is the time for young men to rest"? Come on...even if he wasn't a wise guy he wouldn't speak that way and the way you write stuff brings the emotions to the surface and it feels so real!! I love your writing style! I have tried to read a few FF where it's like Bella said, and then Edward replied and then Bella gaped and said...let's just say I have never finished a story that was written like that, no matter how good the storyline was because it was so hollow. Keep being you...I LOVE it!!!

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2017 7:55 AM Title: To Be Announced

This chapter was AWESOME!!! I loved the kick ball game and (no offense) limited kid/adult chit chat 😊😊 I do think Bella should be a bit more open minded about the baby thing. Technically, they should have 4 kids, they're great parents, etc. Agree to see a specialist (second opinion). I think they're awesome parents and Bella's thing about a degree is BS. Is she still an accounting major? She can practically be a professional student taking stuff she enjoys when she feels like it. I get the desire to complete her degree but has she even got to a university yet? Anyway, I feel sorry for Edward because besides hiding the kids away, he really doesn't ask for anything and the kids make him a better person.

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2017 1:18 PM Title: Two Weeks Later

I wasn't going to comment but I read what you wrote about the hate you got for this chapter and I found it extremely intense but true to the characters. Edward has never been a good person and he loves very few. With what's going on, something was going to snap and this has been coming. I loved the raw emotions and the actions. Passion, fear, jealousy, rage, love...it was all there and it was great!!!

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2017 8:24 AM Title: Two Weeks Later

I wasn't going to comment but I read what you wrote about the hate you got for this chapter and I found it extremely intense but true to the characters. Edward has never been a good person and he loves very few. With what's going on, something was going to snap and this has been coming. I loved the raw emotions and the actions. Passion, fear, jealousy, rage, love...it was all there and it was great!!!

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2017 6:55 AM Title: Bitter Fruit Part Two

That was so heavy but necessary. Edward hasn't been thinking straight since the garbage cans caught on fire!! That was his first dumb move and the list continues to grow which isn't like him. You can't save your face and your ass at the same time. He needs to stop saving face and start saving his ass both physically and emotionally. I'm glad for the non lemon because it's time to get real. Fucking isn't going to solve anything.

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2017 6:13 AM Title: Bitter Fruit Part One

OMG, my emotions were so all over the place in this one!!! Mad at Bella, mad at Edward, BUT, all those feelings went away with Esme's bull shit (good mother my ass) and the mention of Lauren UGH...both those bitches are worse than Jersey!!! So happy Bella broke her finger. At least Lauren isn't at the hospital to blackmail Aro. She's been a dumb as from the start but Esme? Just there to "look" like she cares and get what she wants...she is the worst kind of woman!!

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2017 1:35 AM Title: Misery Loves Company

GOD I freaking hate Esme and Lauren!!! Esme because she's such a martyr and just wants everyone's pity and Lauren for being a stupid harpy. Bella hit it on the head, they're both haters who are so jealous they can't see straight. Thank God Bella never told her about Jane because it doesn't matter, she would only use it as leverage against Carlisle...I honestly feel sorry for Carlisle. I wouldn't want to be around that miserable bitch either.

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2017 3:33 AM Title: Long Day

I'm a little worried that Ronnie will try to make his new son in law the boss. Why else has Carlisle gone all cuckoo about Aro? Someone is putting ideas in his head. And why was the bridal shower held in Bella's house? Alex and her family are taking advantage of Bella way too much. I know you said Alex would never be evil, but Esme wasn't evil in the first series either. Carlisle drove her insane. 

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2017 2:54 AM Title: Now and Then

I keep getting a bad feeling from the package that a non Italian Elena left. Is it a bomb, drugs, a wiretap?

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2017 2:25 AM Title: Well Enough

Yes! Finally! Renee and Lauren got what they had coming. All that's left is Alex. That dumb bitch just rubs me the wrong way. Her and Carlisle. He is tossing Hanna out for a stupid doormat.

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2017 1:59 AM Title: Day-to-Day

So Carlisle ruins another woman's life all in the sake of finding his happiness.

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2017 1:43 AM Title: Logic

Alex and Carlisle get on my nerves.

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2017 1:20 AM Title: Days Like This

This is mostly Edward's fault. He is so needy but he has to understand that she was worried that their son might die.

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 10:33 PM Title: Thanksgiving

Edward is jealous because Alex is taking away all his playmates? That's actually quite hilarious. Though I do not like her for falling for Carlisle, and she has a way of manipulating Bella. Carlisle.....leaving his young traumatized daughter to go after Alex just makes me loathe the both of them. It really makes me wish Edward puts a hit on her. 

And for Lauren and her new sister, for them to hit on Edward, well Bella needs a bat to take to their heads. What the hell did Lauren think she was doing propositioning Edward in front of Bella?!

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 10:16 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two

Loathing Carlisle and Alex together. She and Aro would have been so much better.

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 9:11 AM Title: The Light

And yet didn't he say he loved Esme in the first series?

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 8:51 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two

Bella's father seems nice, so if Bella contacts him she won't be disappointed. But Carlisle......I have never loathed a character so much in my life. All he thinks about is young pussy.  Why won't he try being a father and raising his motherless children instead of chasing tail. If Ronnie allows his daughter to be with a known womanizer than he should have stayed out of his daughter's affairs.

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 8:14 AM Title: Members Only

I'm surprised and pleased that Bella is going to keep an eye on her brother in law.

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 7:54 AM Title: Love and Happiness

I love how Bella got the robber to strip to his undies.  Though I am sick of Carlisle and wish him death. He is always falling in "love" 

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 7:29 AM Title: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two

I hate how history is being rewritten. Since when was Lexi a doting mother? When she was alive she pawned her daughter off on nannies, and that was when she was sober. Candace was not a sweetheart. She not only went after a married man, she disrespected Esme, and she wanted to get with Aro as well. I haven't forgotten when she and her friends tried to threaten Lauren.  And now all of a sudden Esme is a bad person? She is an excellent mother. The one time she wasn't , it was due to postpartum depression. 

Bella is right. Carlisle destroys women, and it just majorly sucks that he is constantly forgiven and will no doubt get his happily ever after, meanwhile Esme will be killed. What about when Carlisle was very close to raping Bella? That seems to have left Edward's mind.

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 5:54 AM Title: Voices Carry Part Two

Carlisle sickens me. He is going to kill Esme to steal his daughters' money. And what? Give it to his bastard? I really hope Hana finds out.

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 1:56 AM Title: Aro's Daycare

Aro cannot be so stupid as to date someone who has an interest in Edward.

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 1:55 AM Title: Aro's Daycare

Aro cannot be so stupid as to date someone who has an interest in Edward.

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 1:36 AM Title: The Twilight Zone

Those young boys are little pervs! Sonny with his tittle pic, and little Dam wanting to watch live porn. 

and Bella shouldn't worry about her weight if she is a size 8. Sophia Vergara, Charlize Theron and Scarlett Johannesburg are size eight and their bodies slamming, and so much better looking than the anorexic waifs in Hollywood 

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 22

I'm glad you posted the note about Edward not wanting strippers, in this chapter it felt like he missed being with them, so I am relieved with the explanation. Though I want to smack the crap out of Carlisle. He ruined his marriage and is now encouraging Edward to let loose and have fun?! Did he forget when Bella stormed in with a gun ready to shoot Edward for cheating?

Reviewer: live ember Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 12:08 AM Title: Blondie

I love this series, but I truly loathe Carlisle. How can he say that Esme is evil?! After all the shit he did?! Or did he forget he killed another woman he claimed to "love", It pisses me off that he is putting his whore above Esme.  Candace  was no angel, she knew Carlisle was married and yet she still went after him, even after Esme was so nice to her, so I am giving her a pass. 

Esme did what she did because Carlisle drove her to the point of insanity with all his cheating.

 

Reviewer: Princeselisa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 5:03 PM Title: Part 3 Announcement

I love this story. I'm so excited that there is another one for me to read. You are such a great writer. Thank you for sharing. I truly enjoyed reading it. I couldn't stop, you really gathered my attention and kept me guessing!!

Reviewer: Princeselisa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2017 1:27 AM Title: A Tight Fit

That was hilarious! Go Bella!!!

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Date: 31 Mar 2017 11:22 PM Title: Two Weeks Later

Wow, that chapter was intense, but I loved it. You are such a great writer. I'm really enjoying these stories. Thank you so much for sharing

Reviewer: Mitzi1958 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 8:59 PM Title: Long Drive

The worst possible thing you can think of for Alice's father. I know you have already written this but I hate, hate pedophiles and I do believe in the Mafia world they would not be tolerated. Also Little Annie has to be protective at all costs and if she looks so much like Alice that bastard would no doubt go after her. 

also I heard that in futhur stories there will be a family member who turns out to be gay, isn't gay people not tolerated at all? Most mob families are Catholic raised and it is still a taboo in this faith. To me, it does not matter who you like in the bedroom but I also know ESP., with the older generation it is thought of as a sin.

Reviewer: Mitzi1958 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2017 2:12 AM Title: A Tight Fit

I am starting ti read chapter 19 and I can not believe the flax Lexi got for making Edward what and who he is! He is first and formost a mobster and he was taught that his whole life, you just can not forget that and while he may never cheat on Bella, he knows it is a way of life for them. I think Bella and the kids have changed him for the good but he has also changed Bella, gone is the door mouse begging for attention from an unloving mother and father, in her place is a gusty woman who would never cheat on her husband and would go to the ends of the earth for him and her children, can not see Rene doing that ever and Charlie all he did was belittle her. They are their own yang and yang, they complete themselves and if the other dies first from a bullet or old age, I have no doubt that the other would follow close behind.

 

please can someone assure me that Aro finds a good woman, not that heartless bitch he is married to now. He needs someone who loves him and his children. I have no doubt that while Lauren was in Jamaica with her boy toy her and Aro's children were in California with her parents.

 

now on to the drama that is sure to happen in chapter 19, I doubt they are threw with trying to kill Ship.

 

Reviewer: Mitzi1958 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2017 2:12 AM Title: A Tight Fit

I am starting ti read chapter 19 and I can not believe the flax Lexi got for making Edward what and who he is! He is first and formost a mobster and he was taught that his whole life, you just can not forget that and while he may never cheat on Bella, he knows it is a way of life for them. I think Bella and the kids have changed him for the good but he has also changed Bella, gone is the door mouse begging for attention from an unloving mother and father, in her place is a gusty woman who would never cheat on her husband and would go to the ends of the earth for him and her children, can not see Rene doing that ever and Charlie all he did was belittle her. They are their own yang and yang, they complete themselves and if the other dies first from a bullet or old age, I have no doubt that the other would follow close behind.

 

please can someone assure me that Aro finds a good woman, not that heartless bitch he is married to now. He needs someone who loves him and his children. I have no doubt that while Lauren was in Jamaica with her boy toy her and Aro's children were in California with her parents.

 

now on to the drama that is sure to happen in chapter 19, I doubt they are threw with trying to kill Ship.

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 1:11 AM Title: Craft of the Father

They just papissed off the  wrong momma!

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Date: 28 Oct 2016 4:07 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two

Love your chapter! I'm excited for Bella ! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 2:41 AM Title: A Tight Fit

Let the haters hate.

 

You are writing a mob fic..... shit's baaaaad af in mobs.Your writing is wonderful!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 12:31 AM Title: Eclipse

It's all been great! Irs a fucing.mafia story for crying out loud. Theres going ro be bad,gritty, raw shit that gets written. If people can't deal with it, then fuck 'em!  YOU ARE GREAT!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2016 2:21 AM Title: In Like Flynn

He's a good dad in all the important ways. 

Reviewer: Mitzi1958 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2016 5:09 AM Title: This Time Around

Carlisle is about to face "the coming of Jesus moment and Bella is playing God right now. It is time to get it all out in the open so he can see what damage he has done, to his wife, his children. They will never believe anything he tells them. If their oldest daughter finds out it will break her hurt and trusting you father well that is going to go down the tube. She will take sides, with her mother. 

 

What was Carlislye thinking, I guess he was not thinking, he was letting his favorite appendage do all the talking. This is only going to end up in tragedy. I will be surprised by the end of this story if Carlislye will be dead, he takes to my chance with the female race and he might meet Attila the Hun woman was and if he does HER dirty as he has done to so many women she may just put a bullet in the back of his head. 

 

As as you can probably see he is not my favorite man, he is a slimy dog and deserves everything that is going to him!

 

flirty Nanny, cute and she is flirting with Aro, poor guy! he gets shit from Lauren (24/7), has to take care of his kids and he goes to skips house and his nanny is flirting with him.i have a nasty feeling about Lauren, just a gut feeling I think she is going for a ride to get any the wealth she can from Aro. I am afraid one day she is going to leave because of another man. Just something about the way she acts with him.

 

last thoughts if I was Aro I give the twenty back to Sonny. He protected family and that is what the older generation teach the younger boys, treat your mother, sister, cousins like they are your queens and hopefully when they grow up they will be great husbands like their father,Uncle Edward. Love how he wants only Bella and never ever goes into a room,office or even closet to do the nasty wit some woman who works at the places he hangs out and most likely own. Keep the good work going. See you when I read another chapter.

 

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 9:57 PM Title: Craft of the Father

Holy Shit!!! I cant wait to read about Bella's alone time with the guys that did this to Sonny!!!

Reviewer: Mitzi1958 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 7:22 AM Title: Knee-Jerk Reaction

Ok we got ASSHAT Edward again and I can answer his question easily! He is more I rage about Roger!!!! He is Jealous, plain and simple! And why after 12 years of marriage, three kids, suffering through the loss of two miscarriages and his two year stay in prison, do they both think the other one would cheat? What is wrong with them, do they have to be reassure everyday?? Sometimes I think Edward is scared he will become like his father and brother, but he does not have that trait in him at all, he is not a cheater and with all that Bella has had to suffer and do, she is not a cheater. However it is going to take Edward showing Roger Bella is his and he needs to stop and back off. Edward is no one to mess with, you do and you may just find a bullet in your head.

 

i am more concerned with Aro and Carlisle, they have wives that to me are unstable and could be harmful to their husbands. However it is more of a risk for them to cheat, look at poor Jacob. I am sure if he could come back and talk to the ladies he would tell the ladies and the men it is not worth it. Esme is the princess of a late Mafia King and the princess part has never left her. What is really wrong with both couples is that they should not be married. One had her father almost forcing her and she married him to get away from her father, only to find out her husband has gone back on his word and become what she hates. Why stay married to him, let him go and both of them would be happy. Aro and Lauren's fault,is they got married because she was having a baby, sometimes it works but most of the time the marriage happens because it is the honorable thing to do, you can be honorable without getting married, maybe Aro is in love with his wife but somehow I do not think Lauren is in love with him. He has money and power and that is an easy thing to attach too, however she is a total idiot if she thinks he is not in the mob. Maybe she is seeing only what she wants too, slowly the rose colored glasses is going to come off and she will no longer be able to lie to herself!

 

Reviewer: wolfpack15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2016 11:38 PM Title: Love and Happiness

love it                        the first one was awesome !!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2016 1:29 AM Title: Too Many Movies

OH no!!! Esme put a hit out on Bella!!!

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Date: 26 Jul 2016 12:57 AM Title: A Tight Fit

I have thought and thought about what happened and i just want you to know i understand though it took me a while but i understand how Edward is by now and Bella has forgiven him and i think it is time we all move on!!! He is a boss in the mob for god sakes after all and she loves him!!!

Reviewer: Mitzi1958 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2016 4:27 AM Title: Conformity

I am LOVING this new installment so much more than the Quiet Storm, do not know why but I think it is the kids! They are all so sweet but not so innocent, being Bella and Edward's children they would not be. Only Kylie is sweet and only sweet but the reason is because she is a baby.

 

Edward is a wonderful father, although I think I would have to have a talk with him, telling Sonny about sex by letting him watch a prono movie, not good! Yes it shows him the basics but not the feelings, how a man can like a woman, not really love but like. I Al all for sexual experiments, if you do not experiment how will you know when the frog you are dating turns into your prince. Even Bella and Edward did not feel true love right away, although it was fast. Sonny and Dam has such a great journey ahead of them!, lots of good memories along with the bad memories, the not Miss. right forever but the Miss. right for now but I hope they do not become the man whores that their father and uncle was. I hate to think they are going to hurt young girls hearts but I guess it is just going to have to be that way, it is called learning about life! You are so right Edward and Bella will never win parents of the year.

 

i can not wait to see hoe the Sandy and Roger thing turns out! Edward understands Bella to well not to think she does not need friends, it was one thing that she missed out in school and he loves her too much to let this go on for long, he will help her, so she can Brag about her husband and her children and it will kill too birds with one stone! Gives Bella friends that knows who she really is, no more hiding the rings and it tells Roger, hands off, she is mine and has been for about twenty years now, right? I can not wait to see his reaction when big tough gangster Dom Edward Cullen tells him, hands off my woman!

 

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Date: 21 Jun 2016 11:46 PM Title: Love and Happiness


Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 22

Honestly and I know you wrote this years ago. I read it then too. But some of the readers should not need their hands held while they read a crime story. For heavens sake if you want rainbows and Bible verses this is not your story. This is real life in that world as you see it.

 

Great story and I have not read a really good one in a while. Thus rereading oldies.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 6:52 PM Title: Blondie

she is her daddy's daughter.

Reviewer: Mitzi1958 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 10:09 PM Title: Thou Mayest

Carole Long recommended this highly for me to read and while I am really reading chapter by chapter and I am at the Quiet Storm where Bella is about to kill that man on the boardwalk in AC, I had read from fans who talk about the Saga that Carlisle gets married to an Alex, so natural I was wondering what the hell happen to Esme.

 

so I have been scanning the chapters in this story to see does someone kill her because I thought that once you married into the MOB life a wife can never leave, well not unless she is in a box about to be buried six feet under. So I liked Esme, is she going to go bad or is she just caught up in this life, being born into it and can never leave it. How can Carlisle divorce her, even if he is a sleaze bag!!, she was a MOB BOSS daughter and wife, she has to know more than Lauren ever does. Aro can let her go, she can not turn on her but Esme was with Bella when she killed that man, so Edward will never let her walk away, not because he is frighten that Esme would turn on him but since she was with Bella, she could turn on her and put her in a whole lot of trouble!

 

i have to say this is a very realistic story, no romantic jesters on every page, these are real people who burp, fart, go to the bathroom, everyday things that real couples face! I mean you do not read many stories were the main characters have human bodily functions and talk about them! Also THANK YOU so much for a faithful Edward and Bella, like he thought he is the freak amount everyone else because he is satisfied with Bella, does not even want nor think of anyone else. Not that I can say the same about Carlisle! Everyone tells me I will love him but I have got to admit, I don't! As Esme said he is a horrible husband! An affair you can work on and try to forgive but to have a child with this woman, that is a NO NO!!!! And Esme and Aro secretly love each which is a HUGE NO NO! Does Esme really want Aro dead? If they start an affair that will happen because someone is going to tell, they are always ratting out each other to get higher in the Magia and be Edward's right hand man!

 

last thing I will talk about is the Easter dinner, while I can understand Nanny being upset about the boys fighting, how could she turn on Bella like she did? Bella has loved and respected that old woman she she met her! And yes there was been a breakup of the brothers since Bella has come onto the scene but it has always been Carlisle who has started it, who has never really respected his brother's marriage to Bella and I am sorry but he has deserved every beaten up fight he has had! The man is a mess and it is time for him to grow the hell up and be a man! He hate's the Magia life than talk to Edward and get Edward to understand to let him be just a lawyer for the family. And Esme's telling him that she (Hannah) will never get over it but she will learn to live with it. What a sad, sad statement! Because you know she is not only talking about their daughter but her self. That should be enough for Carlisle to wake up and fix his marriage, it is one thing to hurt your wife over and over again but to hurt your children, to put in your daughter's head that there is probably never any man that you can really trust. That is a flawed man and a very Flawed Father, we are human and we make mistakes, but it is a very large bad mistake when you do something that you know damn good and well it will hurt the people you love! That is why Kylie when she grows up, she may cuss like a sailor, and she may fight with whoever she marries but she will be able to trust her husband not to cheat because her father has taught her that men can stay faithful to one woman, and search for him, no matter how long it may tale!!!

 

great story! 

 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2016 2:49 AM Title: Conformity

I'm re reading this story and it's so funny that next year the iphone 7 will be out. 

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Date: 29 Mar 2016 4:20 AM Title: Fork Me

I love when authors put Twilight shit in their fics. LOL. It's always so much fun. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.

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Date: 24 Feb 2016 11:39 PM Title: Misery Loves Company

Oh my Kylie's buck and bucking so funny.

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Date: 24 Feb 2016 10:39 PM Title: Come Hell or High Water Part One

Love your description of Kylie.

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 10:35 PM Title: Part 3 Announcement

I am so happy re reading thestorm series

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2016 8:27 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One

1-17-2016

I can't believe how slow I am. After reading this for the umpteenth time I just realized that Bella and Alice aren't blood related.

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2016 2:40 AM Title: This Time Around

That is true, Carlise is looking for his Bella's model

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 8:31 PM Title: Rolling in the Deep

1-13-2016

As I'm reading this series for the 30th or 50th time, I'm watching "American Gangster".

All snuggled in on a freezing winter day.

Reviewer: EffulgentEllie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapel Bells

This is still great, even after reading for a second time. On to part three. :)

Reviewer: EffulgentEllie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2015 10:57 PM Title: Part 3 Announcement

Even the second time around, this series is amazing. On to part 3. :)

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Date: 07 Oct 2015 9:55 PM Title: Fork Me

Hahaha the ending hahaha

Reviewer: starla Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2015 9:20 PM Title: Voices Carry Part Two

I'm a little concerned over Kylie's development. At 2 she definitely shouldn't be falling off changing tables. And still only speaking in single words.. Seems so much younger than her age. 

Reviewer: starla Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 9:48 PM Title: Blondie

I'm surprised that while Edward is listing Esme's sins to Carlisle and Aro he didn't also mention her threat against Bella with A.C.

Reviewer: sportygrl_05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2015 2:40 PM Title: In Like Flynn

I apologize for not reviewing every chapter, but i think this wole story is amazing. Its nice to actually read something that is and can be real. I got so mad that people were trying to ban you. Fuck them! They are jealous because you are an amazing author. I look forward to reading all of your other stories. I read "Story of us" and "iinstructions not included"  TWICE haha. Good job! 

Reviewer: bennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 12:26 AM Title: Too Many Movies

no, please Bella can not be with anyone except with Edward. Thanks

Reviewer: louisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 22

Love this chapter. Aro is such a layered character, I love all that you give him. 

Reviewer: louisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 2:27 AM Title: Two Weeks Later

whoa...that's...that's...a lot to take in. 

Reviewer: louisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 8:08 PM Title: Rolling in the Deep

You write the best action scenes ;))

Reviewer: louisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 4:34 PM Title: Misery Loves Company

I need a smoke...

Reviewer: louisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2014 1:04 AM Title: In Like Flynn

Skip as Dad...so good. His parenting style is so, so funny! Love how he bosses his kids around but laughs with and at them too. Porn??!!!!!!!!!!  OMG, really?!

Reviewer: Sue2265 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2014 1:31 AM Title: Eclipse

I'm so sorry you've had a bad time, from idiots.  I don't understand why they continue to read if they don't like a story, that's what the little cross at the top is for, just go away and leave the rest of us to enjoy reading.  They're not worth you're time stressing over the things they say.  I have been reading Quiet Storm and this story none stop for the past couple of days.  I can't tell you how much I fucking love reading about this Edward and Bella. The benefit of reading a completed story is that I know you'll finish writing it.  Please continue to write other stories you're to good a writer to give up. 

Reviewer: ifonly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 3:18 PM Title: Trick or Treat Part One

I know I've read this series at least 20 times, Butttt, I do so love this line " It may not be a medically proven fact, but I'm fucked-up"  HAH I luv that shut :)

Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 4:16 PM Title: Part 3 Announcement

Still loving the series! Can't wait to start the next one......Great writing! Thank you! :o)

Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 4:49 PM Title: Eclipse

Love your writings and love this series! Well done..... Thank you! On to the next chapters! :o)

Reviewer: ChecheCarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2014 5:18 AM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two

Lol this was just to funny. I love see the family side of Edward.

Reviewer: Wiwi88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 6:46 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One

Really love your story :) but i really don't like bella right now.... i feel sorry for Edward :(

 

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:55 PM Title: That Thing You Do

The amount of shouting I did reading this chapter: I'm so glad I work from home. Smh. 

 

This child! Lol. Lord have mercy. 

Reviewer: Lasharp15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 5:05 AM Title: NuMb

Hey Lexi, Just a quick note to let you know I've spent the last five days reading QS and WTS without a break. Second time reading and I swear it's even better the second time. The whole Storm Series is just a brilliant, beautifully written story. Thank you for all the time you spend writing ALL your wonderful stories! LisaSemmelSharp(on Facebook). Now I'm off to finish the series!

Reviewer: volturigirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:27 AM Title: NuMb

I think it's a crack up that you put warnings on the beginnings of your chapters. It's a Mafia story; it's going to be bloody and gorey. I love this story. 

Reviewer: volturigirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 22

I'm so glad for the a/n for chapter 22. I was getting real sketchy about Aro.  I love how this fic is real. Can't wait to read about what Carlisle will do about Esme...if anything. 

Reviewer: volturigirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:10 AM Title: Eclipse

Ah Lexi. Who would have thought that this story could have made me choke up?  I really did not see that coming. I am glad that you kept Aro alive and I hope he gets some sort of HEA. 

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 9:15 AM Title: Thanksgiving

I read your analogy of Alex being Bellas protégé, and I honestly liked her at the shore. But, I have not liked her since the Chazz dinner. I think she is a trouble maker and I get that Bella needs a friend but even Bella said she makes everything about herself. Plus, I was so pissed at Carlisle for abandoning his children on thanksgiving for a piece of ass. That part with Carli was sad but my God,gotta defend your "girl" that you've been dating for 3 days, fuck your motherless children. I was hoping Edward would talk some sense into him. Oh, and C comparing Alex and him to their 12 year marriage that HE has caused so many problems in because of his jealousy? What a crock of shit and I can't believe that Edward didn't call him on it. Aro can defend the game played at MS but it still made her look like a whore in front of the family and Edward needs to be the boss just like he said and tell C that Alex has to prove herself a lady. She's the one who put the vibe out there and Bella has done a lot of shit but she has never embarrassed Edward by behaving in public like a slut. This is a mans world and I don't think Edward did anything wrong. He stopped Nun from doing anything to Alex. What did C want him to do?

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 7:54 AM Title: To Be Announced

Bella confounds me with her degree bull shit...have another baby!!! I could see if she had passion about a subject but as she said in chapter 1 of QS, she has no idea what she's doing and just wants to be a professional student. I felt sorry for Edward, if he's willing to put up with her cranky, crazy, pregnant ass than give the man his dream. How many times has she whined about not being able to buy him or give him something he truly wants. ? Well...the ultimate gift has arrived! As he said,  none of the others besides Sonny were planned. Plus, awesome story...bad pregnancy, almost dies and Edward appreciates what he has once he is faced with really losing Bella.

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:18 AM Title: Breaking Dawn

That whole chapter was fucking awesome! I knew Esme being such a guinea princess,  so filled with jealousy would never let her shit go. I haven't cared for her since the wedding and you have showed perfectly her true colors or decent into madness. I personally think she is a female Marcus and could never deal with losing the power her daddy enabled. 

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2014 9:54 PM Title: Too Many Movies

Omg!! I thought it was the meth dealer in Brighton Beach. ..nice twist!!

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Date: 07 Jan 2014 11:03 AM Title: Bucked Up

I had a feeling you would kill one of Carlisle women but I was honestly hoping it would be Esmr. That bitch has bugged since Hanna was born and damn, I think Edward and Bella should raise Anthony because she is just a cold bitch. Yes. ..C has been a screw up but she has not been some victim. In many ways she drove him back to his old ways. 

Reviewer: ZoeyRedbird25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 10:58 PM Title: Bitter Fruit Part Two

I know this was written a while ago, but I just got into the Storm series. I finished reading Quiet Storm yesterday and am already on Chapter 16 of this one :)... I wanted to take a second to say that I freaking cried when Edward was talking to Aro in this chapter. I mean, how hard must it be to know your best friend doesn't remember you?? I lost it! Freaking lost it! I love this series, and I just wanted to stop and thank you for writing such a wonderful story!

Reviewer: diannita Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2013 8:57 PM Title: Eclipse

Hello, I started with your first story "Quiet Storm" from a recommendation off one of the fanfic groups I'm in and I really enjoyed it. Now I'm reading the sequel and am enjoying it even more! I love the realism in the story is no matter how graphic it may be, you don't sugar coat it and that's just how real life is and I deeply respect that.  Obviously I have a long way to go in the story but these previous chapters have been mind blowing especially these past few with Edward,  his dream was so chilling but it was so clear I thought it was beautifully done.  Also with his jealously towards Aro and him practically raping Bella,  it's those emotions you don't wanna see but at the same time know you have to see if you wanna understand how these characters work. I personally can't stop reading and don't wanna stop reading.  I haven't read any reviews because I have quite a ways to go with the story and I don't want any spoilers,  but I do read your notes and see that some people don't like the way you portray these characters...well I say there jealous dumbassess who wish they could make these characters as real as you do. I say for them to get a life, because this is a work of fiction from a fictional story,  your not perverting anything,  if anything the flamers are because they wish they had half the imagination you do. I say screw em and keep up the good work! Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2013 7:55 PM Title: Chapel Bells

Poor Sonny, didn't have his Katie with him at the wedding. It would have been so nice for them to have all afternoon and evening together. I feel sad for Carlisle and especially Alex for probably losing their baby. That is just horrible. Alex is trooper keeping it together enough to be there for her new step children and being able to be happy on her wedding day when she is losing her first child in utero. Loved this story so much; I don't know if I loved this one more, or the first one? I think I will read Riders from Fan Fiction site. Thank you very much for sharing your writing and this story with us.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2013 5:36 PM Title: Long Day

Nice and relaxing. I got to say that I really want Katie and Sonny to have time together. They are just so cute. I hope they will... and that they are allowed to visit and be kissing-friends now.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2013 5:23 AM Title: Now and Then

Enjoyed this one. Thanks. I really love when Edward and Bella are happy. I know they can't be all the time, but when they are... so am I. I really hope Sonny and Katie end up together and are just as much in love as Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2013 3:45 AM Title: Day-to-Day

Great!

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Date: 24 Oct 2013 3:28 AM Title: Well Enough

Oh boy no holds barred on the drama in this one. Bella and her mother both acted like white trailer trash there, oh and Lauren too, and Bella wasn't even drunk. Highly entertaining. Don't get me wrong, Renee deserves for her daughter to stand up to her, and she certainly deserved to get kicked out, but I don't see why Edward didn't defend his wife and send her home with Lou or someone... just get her out of there before she ruined the dinner party. Emmett really shouldn't have brought her in the first place since she was not invited and she was drunk, but anyway, that wouldn't have been nearly as lively though. I DO have to say though when Edward pulled Bella into the washroom and told her he loved her, "more than stars in the sky", it made me smile. That was a beautiful way to end the chapter. I do so love when they tell each other how much they love each other. That stuff just never gets old.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 10:21 PM Title: Logic

Kylie is so funny. I love that you include her paroting - humor - into the story. It really lightens each chapter, and some chapters really need that. I can't believe that sneaky Carlisle cheated Alex out of her birth-control. I also can't believe no one is reminding Carlisle that Esme's parents insisted on her marrying him and we all know how badly that turned out. Alex is pretty immature (doesn't know what she wants) and must have low self-esteem to stay with an abusive boyfriend before and now to allow herself to be railroaded into a marriage she doesn't know if she wants, and to quit her job just because her over-bearing parents, or is it her father who wants her to. Good story. Really enjoying it.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 4:36 AM Title: Days Like This

Love the silly drama that came up in this chapter about Lou wanting to tell the Skip about Aro and Bella. It was cute. Its funny because as light hearted as it was and the fact that Edward almost laughed at the silliness of it, it could have had a different outcome if Edward was in one of his dark moods. Thankful that you went the direction you did with him. I hope Lou doesn't get into any trouble? The one thing that hasn't come up at all these last few chapters about the drive-by is the fact that Edward was almost killed. Bella was upset about her child almost dying, but the execution was meant to be Edward's, and Bella was never fazed about that part at all. Her precious Edward, the love of her life was almost shot dead. I thought would come out of this situation, of Bella ignoring Edward and being mean to him would be the realization that Bella shut down from almost losing her Edward, and not being able to deal with that. But no she really wasn't upset by that fact at all. Now if I were Edward, that fact would have broke my heart.

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Date: 23 Oct 2013 3:10 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two

Another awesome chapter. Thanks

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Date: 22 Oct 2013 11:07 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One

I hope Edward does the right thing and takes care of the brother himself and if the Uncle has to go well maybe him too and leave the ones who actually did the drive by for Bella. That will be easier for her to handle. What is keeping Aro and Bella anyway? This chapter was really good... well they all are... even when I have a hard time with some of the things these charactors do.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2013 9:08 PM Title: This Woman's Work

I really can't believe Edward killed that teenager, that innocent kid who was just trying to avenge his mother's death in a "History of X" fashion, and right in front of Bella too. Seriously?

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2013 5:02 PM Title: Craft of the Father

Sure did not expect anything like this to happen. I hope they can figure out who is behind it. Some of the suspects it could be would have different targets, I think, like Mauro would have Carlisle, and Bella's brother might have Aro as a target...kill or be killed. It could be Elezar because Aro is more amenable to work with her and with her new associates. On another note... I hope Carlisle knows that Alex has been looking to move and applying for jobs elsewhere, to give him a chance to open up about how he feels for her and perhaps have her move closer to him... and tell his children about her. She could even move in with him... into a new house with the kids?

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