Hi there! I had to re-read chapters one thru fifteen again before I catch up to where you are. I loved it as much if not more than the first time I read it! I can't wait to read more! You write some of best damn lemons that I've ever read, and I love this story so much! I love how sweet Edward is, and at the same time he is so fucking sexy, hot, and just gah! I love the two of them together, they are so good together. xo Kelly

Bella is so sad, but she really has been without parents for quite awhile. She needs to realize this fact. Edward will take care of her. She needs to read the letter, so she can move forward with her life with Edward. She has to get her head together for school. Her future is about to start. The past is really over now that Charlie is gone.

wonderful chapter.... till the end.  OMG  B is gonna feel so guilty

glad the other woman in the bathroom stayed quiet.  Wonder if Skankya will contunue to be quiet?

yummy music time.  ROFL for alice

great time until jealous skankya came into the picture

ooooh  yummy training times.     lemony goodness.

Great chapters together.  He was so sweet with her. Hmmm I think that cello thoughts have some dirty times coming.

yummy times.   Oh Alice knows I'm sure.  Wonder if she's blabbed to Jasper.  

oooh  yummy.   hmmm wonder what ahppened to b's mom.  you have me wondering now.

Love their playtime together

Em is so funny.    Skankren is so pathetic.   Take a hint woman.     Sweet little first talk.

yummy wake up time.

awww she is so sweet.  Alice the cockblocker.  Hee hee

You did a great job with this chapter. I could feel Bella's sorrow and Edward's hurting for her. Loving this story.

Well done.

You did a great job!!  Way to go!!  Sad turn of events but you pulled it off!

Can't wait for your Drabble, Soapy. 

Poor Bella.  :(

Thanks for the update. 

I don't need Bella's POV I lived it (my father died of cancer).  if you do Bella's POV maybe make it an outtake?

Thanks for the update...poor Bella :(

Well I certainly didn't see that one coming.  Poor Bella is going to feel guilty now because she didn't go see her father, I hope he didn't do something spiteful like leave a note saying it was all her fault.  Poor Bella at least she has Edward to be there for her and support her and help her through everything.  I look forward  to seeing what you have in store for us next!

Oh my that was a hot and sexy chapter.  I was not expecting Charlie to off himself. 

Oh shit talk about ruin plans Charlie just couldnt take it poor sad man Bella is going to freak out

LOVED the chapter, all except that little tid bit at the end. Was that something you just thought of, or was it planned to happen for a while?

ohhh i hope bella does not blame herself

I feel so sorry for poor Bella.  Her mother dies, and her father turns into a drunk.  He uses her painting money to drink away his loss of Renee.  He treats Bella like crap.  I guess as he got sober all of the things I mentioned finally dawned on him and could not take it so he committed suicide.  How was he able to get away with that in rehab?  From personal experience, I know that they were very strict about everything when my brother in law was in rehab.  

What a beautiful lemon!  Great job.  I feel so bad for Edward and Bella, that is going to be hard news to break and to cope with.

That's devastating, at least we know that Edward will be there for Bella. The lemons were incomparable as usual, and this unexpected tragedy has me more intriqued than ever.

Poor Bella! I'm so glad Edward will be there for her!

looking forward to the next chapter 

Ed are everyone's wet dream!  Come home with me!  I'll do whatever you want!!!  I was wondering when the drama was coming and here it is!  Can't wait for more!

Oh My God how is Bella going to take that news.....

Bella's first time was exceptional so it sounded... :-)   So excited for them moving into the Penthouse.....  so worried about jow he's going to break the news to her....   

Amazing 

Good Chapter.....

love it. thanks for the update. 

i hope we will see more interaction with the family in the future. 

Love this story.....can't wait for more.

Hotest story since Fifty!!!  You rock!

Hot, Hot. Hot!

write more!!

looking forard to the nxt chapter

Greatness!!

Iwill be sad to see Isabella go.  maybe she will stay.  very funny alice walking in liek that !!!!!  Isabella is mature and Tanya is a prude

First, let me state how extremely sad I am that this is coming to an end!  I love this story, have since the start.  There, to my knowledge have not been any other stories out there like this.  It is very HOT, love the age difference.  I hope before the end we find out what happens with them, marriage and kids, Edwards not getting any younger ya know.

Tanya, all though not a sub, she was a little harsh. And maybe Edward was like that to push her away.  But in a public restroom....no.

Alice, will make herself known from the time she walks in the front door, ha!!

I hope Bella won't leave Edward for college, commute or something.  I don't think she will leave when the time comes.

OMGosh!!!!! The ending was soooo funny. Busted out laughing. GREAT job. I am glad that they talked about Tanya and got that worked out. I am kind of worried about Edward when Bella leaves, if she leaves. I am thinking on-line classes and a near by art school. lol. Bella is a better woman than I am. I would not have been able to play the cello or any instrument while he was fucking me with his fabulous fingers. Poor Alice, to witnesses her own brother fucking her friend. Plus seeing his nake ass, I would have loved to see his naked ass. lol. She may be scared for life.

I am behind on reading this story. Sorry, RL has been getting in the way. I am going to read the rest of the chapters today, promise. Yes, I want to know what Tanya said to Bella. Loved their "dinner". lol. Edward was so sweet taking care of Bella.

Super hot and awsome.  Too funny that Alice got an eye full,

Poor Alice! Cello was hot hot hot! Love it as always!

 Was the cello lemon hot enough you ask? Hell yes! So, Edward has this hot 18 year old who can cook, paint, play the cello, submit to his fantasies and kegel too? Lucky bastard.

I am glad that they understand the Tanya thing and he know that Bella is not afraid of him.  Sex in the music room sounds like a fun place to be and to shock Alice that is just a bonus lol

I don't think she is being to trusting I think Edward has been more than forth coming and open with her.  So he hasn't told her about his past relationships it's not like they have been together long and she hasn't asked either.  But as Edward said he isn't the same man he was Bella brings things out in him that he didn't know he possessed.  I think she needs to suck it up and be more mature about the situation and just tell him what happened and then ask him about it instead of letting her doubts eat at her and feed her insecurities it will only make matters worse they need to communicate.  I realize she is only 18 but if she wants what they have to grow and last she needs to talk to him about what is going on in her head and how she feels and she needs to grow a thicker skin she surely knows that people are going to be judgemental about their relationship because of their age difference and she says she doesn't care but if a few comments from an obviously jealous ex girlfriend has her keeping her insecurities and doubts to herself instead of talking to Edward about them it makes me wonder how she is going to hold up to everyone else when they thrust their unwanted opinions on them when their relationship is made public.  But I trust that you will eventually get her to spill her guts and everything will work itself out, can't wait to see what happens next!

I think bella should have beat the crazy bitch up, but thats just me. Please let her tell him soon, that way he can explain his side, cause if she doesnt let him then things are going to be hostile with them and they dont need that. Cant wait to read more, update soon.