Date: 15 Oct 2012 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Please update!!!! Please please please!!!!
Date: 14 Oct 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 27
OHHH, I love this story, cant wait to see what Edward is going to do to Jacob. My guess is firstly he does not like threats, secondly, I am sure he is a force to be reckoned with.
Thanks for all these chapters as well... A lot to read after coming back from holidays.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 27
I don't think Edward should pay Jacob a cent. Bella owes him nothing and I doubt Jake wants to mess with Edward.
Sure they can call the police, but no offense to a small town police force I am not sure if they can handle it. Edward might need to go higher up and he does have connections.
I am glad she told him. Instead of trying to take care of it on her own.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 27
i cant wait for the next capter....
Date: 26 Sep 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Mmm...I think I might just like this Edward, but exactly how old is he?
Date: 23 Sep 2012 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 27
Fantastic story! Update soon? It's quite a painful cliffhanger!
Date: 20 Sep 2012 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 27
Looking forward to a new chapter and hoping you haven't given up on this story.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 27
I started reading this on ffn. But since the great purge, I dont go on that site very often. I was happy to find u here. Will finished this soon! I luv it!
Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 27
Love the story, I can't wait to read the rest!
Date: 16 Aug 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 27
i love this... update soon???
Date: 30 Jul 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
lol that is cruel leaving it like that.... thank god I can keep reading
Date: 30 Jul 2012 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
following this on fanfiction and on here, and its great!
Date: 30 Jul 2012 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 5 Expectations
loving it
Date: 30 Jul 2012 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 4 **History**
strange about charlie...
Date: 30 Jul 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 3 *>Proposition
such a vivid imagination he has!!! yes please
Date: 30 Jul 2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 **Meetings**
oh this is good :)
Date: 30 Jul 2012 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
hmmmmmm cant wait to read more :)
Date: 28 Jul 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
these two just keep getting better n better!!
Loving the naughtyness on both of their parts!!
just when one thinks he cant get yummier... he does!!!
thanks for sharing =o)
p.s. bad girl Bella... Amazing!!
Date: 28 Jul 2012 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
Im enjoying this to too much!!! Im loving their scenes ;o) he's so hot n sweet at the same time... cant get enough of him!!
The tree scene almost killed me!!
thanks for sharing =o)
p.s. sorry its taken me so long to review but its difficult to stop reading when u leave each chapter in such an achy way!! =p
Date: 24 Jul 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 27
Finally!!!, I found you! great story, can't wait for the next update.
Date: 15 Jul 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 27
I've read this story and, so far, it's fabulous! But I'm not sure if I got ir wrong but, isn't it a complete story? If it is, will you write a sequence?
Date: 15 Jul 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
What's up? You haven't up dated on any of your stories in a long while. Come back to us...you been gone for a whole. Pleease give us some closure and finish some of these wonderful stories, I love them all.
Please up date soon
Date: 14 Jul 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
"Say it…" I nearly growled "…out loud." The context in which u used these words, was just perfect!! Its just the way it should they should have been be used originally!! F*ing HOT!!!
That was an amazing 1st time ;o) n a 2nd ;P
p.s. since I have yet to say it =o/ ur AMZING!! ur writting pulls u in n once u start its really... no I mean really difficult to stop!!
thanks for sharing <3
Date: 07 Jul 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 27
Aww man can't wait for the next chapter!!! That Jacob Black what an ass and as for Charlie I can't believe he did that and left Bella alone :(
Date: 24 Jun 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 27
As always you've done a wonderful job. I'm glad that I found your story again.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 27
OK, I'm at the part where Bella's going to the store on foot. I've got a sick feeling about that:(
In hindsight, Edward shouldn't have paid the hospital bill & Bella should have walked away from everything. She's not legally/morally responsible for her father's stupid bills. That doesn't keep Jake The Loan Shark off her back tho. Doubt paying him off would keep him away:(
Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
Bella's aunt Rebecca sounds a little like Renee in the books...ditzy::)) But, she came for Bella:)
"Something about this guy just seemed off, like he was taking this whole situation much too personally." I was thinking the same thing. He says he's the executor of the will? And Bella doesn't know him? Something's up! Hope Edward's smart & not just rich. He needs to investigate since a lot doesn't add up, all the way back to the health insurance being dropped thru Charlie's work. He was Chief of Police. That just doesn't happen:(
Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 27
Just found this story today and I'm hooked! Cant wait to see what Edward does to Jacob :)
Date: 17 Jun 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 25 Breaking
"...not wanting to be on the pointy end of Isabella's anger" lol lol For a Dom, Edward is a wuss::))
Great chapter!
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 23 Open
I'm glad Bella & Esme got along so well:) Another thing I'm sooooo happy about is that I get a reprieve from having to read about a bitchy Rose:) Doesn't happen much!
Date: 17 Jun 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 22 Touch
With them running around the house naked & doing the nasty, I've been wondering when Alice was going to walk in:::))) Love it! lol lol lol
Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
The run-in with Tanya was milder than I expected. I'm guessing this is the 1st time she's seen him since....
Date: 16 Jun 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
Wow! Tanya was there such a short time but left total destruction in her wake:( But....reading Edward's short version of how he treated her in the playroom, a total newbee, maybe he did create the monster!
Date: 16 Jun 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
Sure we haven't heard the last of Charlie:(
Date: 16 Jun 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
"What does sunshine smell like?" I've always wanted to know that too::))
Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
Originally I thought that Exsenatorward would be a good name for Edward, altho a mouthful::)) I think the name Tasteward has finally grown on me! Afterall, he does love to taste! lol lol
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
"...because she hastily began grabbing pieces of fruit trying to get me to eat faster..." The visual of Bella quickly craming food in Edward's mouth while the food's dripping everywhere & he has no time to chew or swallow is hysterical::))
From reading the preview for chapter 17, guess I'll need to put a hit out on Charlie:(
Date: 15 Jun 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice
Great Chapter!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 14 Panties
"Damn, I sound like an idiot" LOL LOL He really does:::))) He's a regular dork! lol lol
Date: 14 Jun 2012 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping
"You look chipper....You also look horny as hell" Alice suspects! Eavesdropping probably runs in the Cullen family:)
"...but La Perla is much better. My friend, Laurent, can get us a huge discount..." With Bella's budget it better be a 95% discount::))
Bella getting a Brazilian:) lol lol
Date: 14 Jun 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 12 **Playtime**
Another great chapter!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 11 Conversation Pt.2
"I swallowed reflexively, trying to rid my mouth of the salty thickness" LOL LOL What? Not the ambrosia most ff would like us to believe? LOL
Date: 14 Jun 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 10 Conversation
"...she's a virgin...fresh out of Catholic school" lol Put like that it sounds pretty bad:::)))
Date: 14 Jun 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 9 Experience
Great Chapter!
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
"...but his sister – sheesh – what an obnoxious brat" LOL LOL Sweet Bella doesn't seem to like Alice:::)))
Regarding Bella hitting her head on the door knob then coming face to face with Edward....after I unburied by head from embarrassment (LOL), I laughed::::)))
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
Edward & Alice have such a 'lovely' brother & sister relationship:::)))
Edward's internal dialog cracks me up! Even his kinky internal dialog is so formal::)) The guy isn't THAT old! He needs to loosen up a bit:) Also all his angst about Bella/Isabella:) I'd be willing to bet that even if she gave him 'permission' to call her Bella, the Dom in him would rarely do it:)
All Edward's angsty 'dance steps' regarding his seduction of Bella is entertaining::)) I have a feeling he's out of his element & doesn't quite have a clue to what he's doing! I can't wait to hear what sweet Bella's thinking:)
Date: 13 Jun 2012 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 5 Expectations
"I placed my iPad2 in my lap to hide the fucking boner..." LOL LOL Guess there's a use for iPad2's afterall::))
I'm starting to feel bad for Edward:(
Date: 13 Jun 2012 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 4 **History**
Obviously Tanya never took the time to learn anything before trying bdsm:( She's the one that should've been raked over the coals, not ExSenatorward!
I'm guessing that Charlie's either pouting or Bella killed him before she left the house::))
Date: 13 Jun 2012 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 3 *>Proposition
"Honeywh00res" LOL LOL great name::))
"hoping to be seated before my growing cock popped another tent in my slacks" Yes, please do before Charlie sees it::))
I'm not liking Charlie much:( I'm surprised, with his trailer-trash mentality, he was able to raise someone like Bella. Bet there's a weird story there:)
Date: 13 Jun 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 2 **Meetings**
Can't wait to see what Charlie has to say::))
Date: 13 Jun 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Great 1st Chapter
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 27
Holy shit! Jacob is about to get the business!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
I can't tell you enough how much I love your stories!!!! Please keep it coming:)
Date: 05 Jun 2012 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 27
so glad i found you over here. ffn is getting ridiculous. also i am having a hard time reading the small print & i can't seem to make it larger using the text button. will keep reading anyway. love this story
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 27
I read your fic, yet again, thank you
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 27
another get chap .. just reread this one after moving over from FF... cant wait for the next thanks for sharing ..
dont like this Jacob at ALL...
Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 27
Kick him where the sun don't shine!
Date: 04 Jun 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 27
Think edward will have something up his sleeve
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 27
I just found your story. One word. Amazing. Luv this Edward and Bella. Please hurry and post your next chapter. I am addicted now. On my way to Amazon to buy your Sophie's Sweet Temptation and Tied To You.
Date: 04 Jun 2012 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 3 *>Proposition
I'm loving the story more lol such a dirty Edward :)
Date: 04 Jun 2012 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 2 **Meetings**
Wow that's all i got to say lol :)
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
IM LOVING THIS EDWARD ALREADY!!!! IM A NEW READER AND IM JUST LOVING YOUR STORY ALREADY :D
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 27
Once again Thanks for moving your stories here. As usual this chapter was a pleasure to read. (literally and figuratively) Keep them coming. Thanks and blessings.
Date: 02 Jun 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 27
Glad to see you're able to get your stories up rather quickly over her
Kate
Date: 02 Jun 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 27
Just wanted to let you know I found your story here since TOH came up missing on my fav list. *gives FF the middle finger* I couldn't go without reading this story and I re-read this chap so I am more than ready for the next. (formerly ecullensgurl)
Date: 02 Jun 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
Welcome to your new location! Great chapter can't wait to see how Senator Cullen gets down!
Date: 02 Jun 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
Think that he'll be very "happy" to discover she has no panties. Oh the things he can do to her.
Date: 02 Jun 2012 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 27
Having just started (and now completed) reading this story thus far, I have no idea how long you take between updates or even how to be alerted when you do update.
But I am enjoying this tale. I'm quite amused that Jacob is such a jerk and that Edward has fallen so in love with Bella, half his age. But it's all quite provocative and certainly entertaining.
Please update REAL SOON!!!
~~Quietthoughtz
Date: 01 Jun 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 27
Excellent as always
Date: 01 Jun 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 27
Yes, that was a hawt lemon.
They should call the police, even though I want Edward to break his arm for handling/hurting Bella the way he did & the ridiculous interest he expects.
Cant wait to read your new story & update of ToH.
Date: 01 Jun 2012 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 27
Enjoyed reading you on fan fiction but noticed that your stories and profile where gone. So sorry to see you were forced to leave. This has happened to other of my authors. What's fan fictions deal?
Date: 01 Jun 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 14 Panties
Fashion Show, dinner fun and sleep... sounds like a great day!
Date: 31 May 2012 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter.
Date: 31 May 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 27
looking forward to more
Date: 30 May 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 27
cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 30 May 2012 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 27
loved it - I can't wait for JB to get his own!
Date: 30 May 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 27
I feel like I have already read this before. Is this a repost, by chance??
Date: 30 May 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thanks for the update.
Date: 27 May 2012 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Good God! Is It Hot Here Or What?
Date: 02 May 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
what is up with that snake Jacob? He was acting wierd, poor Bella being left with all that burden, I'm glad they seem to be coming back together again.
Date: 11 Apr 2012 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
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Date: 09 Apr 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
thank you for the update...EDward & Jake were funny......Bella introducing Edward as her boyfriend .um that was huge right, Charlie didn't know right? Can't wait to see what's in the letter he left. I hope Bella does well at school..until you post again
Date: 01 Apr 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
well i am wondering what jacob's story is and why he seemed to be happy at taking charlie's house from bella. unless he wanted to be the savior for some reason. maybe he has motives towards bella
i am glad edward came to her side to be able to purchase the house for her to keep.
love it
Date: 01 Apr 2012 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
Great chapter! Love the story! Update again soon please!
Date: 01 Apr 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
Wow.... How superbly insensitive Jacob was being. All happy happy with her father just dying. Lemme guess....he wanted the house?
Date: 01 Apr 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
loved the chapter looking forward to more
Date: 31 Mar 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
Loved this chapter.
Date: 31 Mar 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
Great writing
Date: 31 Mar 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
Thanks for the update, wonderful as always! Ed is a sweet man and hell yeah we want his Dom nature back!
Date: 31 Mar 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
Great chapter.
Date: 31 Mar 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
The loss of a parent or loved one is difficult enough, however add in suicide and it seems to compound the grief....hopefully the letter Charlie left can provide some sort of healing for her... Jacob Black seems like a low life and I wonder if he wasn't some sort of wolf in sheeps clothing...
Look forward to reading your novel when it's published and encourage and praise you in your efforts....till next time... take care...Kathy
Date: 31 Mar 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
loved this chapter!
Date: 31 Mar 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
soooooooooo glade to have you back , Can't wait for next update I know it will be a good one. good luck with you other stories and thanks again for letting us into your wonderful mind.
Date: 31 Mar 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
I love this story! Please update soon I cannot wait to see what happens next
Date: 29 Mar 2012 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
Edward is going to want to crawl under their table at dinner and feast on Bella instead. Well I hope Charlie can get dried out, and get his shit together. What a sweet and caring boyfriend he is to take care of those ever looming medical bills, and to take the time to get Charlie into rehab. xo Kelly
Date: 29 Mar 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
Yeah, I can imagine you getting hot and bothered while writing these hot assed scenes, but please know that it's equally titillating for your readers. I'm sure you know that, but I had to remind you of how erotic these scenes are to read. You rock the lemons! xo Kelly
Date: 29 Mar 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
God, I really love these two insatiable lovers. They love each other already! I guess you know when you've found your soulmate. xo Kelly