Date: 03 Feb 2021 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 22 Touch
Wish this story was finished. You only made it to chapter 27!
Date: 03 Feb 2021 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 22 Touch
Wish this story was finished. You only made it to chapter 27!
Date: 03 Feb 2021 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 27
Why isn't this story finished? I've enjoyed it and it's leaving me wanting more.
Date: 03 Feb 2021 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 27
Why isn't this story finished? I've enjoyed it and it's leaving me wanting more.
Date: 03 Feb 2021 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 27
Why isn't this story finished? I've enjoyed it and it's leaving me wanting more.
Date: 03 Aug 2020 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
Is this story complete?
Date: 03 Aug 2020 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
Is this story complete?
Date: 26 Oct 2019 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 27
Amazing story, please say that you are planning on continuing this.
Date: 26 Oct 2019 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 27
Amazing story, please say that you are planning on continuing this.
Date: 16 Aug 2019 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 27
I Hope Edward makes Jacob pay.
Date: 16 Aug 2019 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 27
I Hope Edward makes Jacob pay.
Date: 16 Aug 2019 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 27
I Hope Edward makes Jacob pay.
Date: 28 Jun 2019 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 27
LOL free but unfinished
Date: 27 Jun 2019 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 27
Love this story!!!! I cannot wait to read more and see Jacob Black get his ass kicked!
Date: 26 Jun 2019 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
wish you had finished this story it is very good
Date: 25 Jun 2019 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice
I love this story, too bad you never finished it. Would you ever consider letting someone finish it for you?
Date: 23 Jun 2019 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
I figure Charlie is a drunk
Date: 21 Jun 2019 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
I ewad this a while back and was dissapointed that you never finished and I am sure I will be again
Date: 30 Apr 2018 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 27
Will you ever update this story again just wondering?
Date: 29 Oct 2017 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Loved it!
Date: 27 Oct 2017 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Loved it!
Date: 25 Oct 2017 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Loved it!
Date: 21 Feb 2016 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 27
I do not like the Jacob plot. I think it adds no value.
Date: 07 Feb 2016 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 27
So are you going to finnish this story? I really want to know whats going to happen with Black. This story is awesome so far. Please keep going!
Date: 07 Nov 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 27
I don't want to read this if ur not planing to finish it. Hanging is the worst thing
please finish!
Date: 12 May 2015 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 27
Amazing story! I have love every chapter I've read! Looking forward to more chapters soon I hope!
Date: 28 Feb 2015 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Way to leave us hanging. Good job abandoning the fandom that helped you get where you are.
Date: 22 Feb 2015 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 27
OK, still waiting for an update, don't leave me hanging😝
Date: 30 Dec 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
Hi - sorry to bother you but is this completed elsewhere? It's really good.
Date: 23 Dec 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Oh Soapy - you've hooked me again!
Date: 09 Dec 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 27
Please please continue this story. This has been one of the best Twilight reads ever!
Date: 18 Oct 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 27
OMG PLEASE TELL ME THAT YOU ARE GOING TO FINISH THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU CAN'T LEAVING ME HANGING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 16 Jun 2014 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oh damn, dammit! I've been reading this story for days and now this...no ending, no update! Ugh. Help a girl out m'kay?
Date: 15 May 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 27
Kill the f****r edward kill him :-)
Date: 12 May 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 27
You do still plan to update and finish this, right?
Date: 17 Apr 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 27
Are you going to update?
Date: 11 Mar 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 27
OMGosh!!!!!!! The lemon was really really HOT!!!!!!! I stil want to know what the deal is with Jacob. Jacob is going to be lucky if Edward does not kill him. Some how I miss this chapter when it was updated. I was going through my stories and noticed this one. I know you have not update in a while but I hope you update soon. We NEED to know what Edward has planned for Jacob and we NEED to know Jacob's plans too. Hope you update soon.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 5 Expectations
Edward sure does have issues.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Please finish :)
Date: 18 Jan 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 27
My Gosh! When are you going to publish another chapter? I am going crazy over the wait!!!!!!!!! Love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Jan 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 27
Is this story going to have an ending published?
Date: 06 Jan 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 3 *>Proposition
Clearly Charlie is a douche, I love Edward but sometimes his "voice" seems a little forced, I can't imagin referring to my IPad (whichever version) by "IPad 2" or "IPad Air". I think conveying wealthiness works better when the "voice" of the character is less specific. That said, I love this story so far and will most likely spend most of the night reading this. On to the next chapter.
Date: 06 Jan 2014 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 2 **Meetings**
Okay, I'm hooked. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Date: 06 Jan 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Intriguing
Date: 22 Oct 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh my....can't wait to see what our darling Senator has in store for that dog!!! MORE SOON PLEASE!!! LOVE IT!!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 27
i really like this story and am looking forward to reading more
Date: 28 Sep 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Just wanted to ask if you are ever going to add more chapters to this story?
If you are please hurry your killing me with the wait. You have a good story
going so far please stay with it.. Looking forward to reading more the 27 chaps.
sincerely, L. Jacox
Date: 21 Aug 2013 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 27
Will u b updating soon?
Date: 16 Aug 2013 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh god!! Continue!!
Date: 01 Aug 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 4 **History**
I love Tasteward! He's so complicated, which is great. There's nothing worse than flat characters. Your writing is amazing.
Date: 01 Aug 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 2 **Meetings**
Fascinating first chapters. I am beyond intrigued.
Date: 12 May 2013 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 27
I so love this story, i am always hoping for updates you are one of my favorite writers and i hope your story has not been abandonded
Date: 12 May 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 27
please update love this fict
Date: 02 May 2013 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 27
I loved it plz update soon!
Date: 24 Apr 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 26 Mourning Morning
I have been wondering if you are going to be able to finish this story. I have become very invested in it. I know that life has probably been hard for you. I just wanted to let you know that I am sending good wishes your way. If you can please let me know how you are doing? Thanks
Date: 23 Apr 2013 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 27
You know i have to tell you I love this story. My problem with it is that
I have been waiting for what feels likeforever fo ryou to write a new
chapter. So are you going to continue this awsome story or are quiting!
Just asking, getting board waiting for you to write more!
Date: 18 Apr 2013 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 27
I know it's while, but since AToH was pulled from ff.net I read a lot of stories;-)
i wondered if you're still up to complete this one... I'd love to see how it ends...
Date: 11 Apr 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 24 **Plans**
You give us their first anal sex scene and then hit us with Charlie killing himself?!? Talk about a sub drop!
Date: 11 Apr 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 23 Open
Holy Hell in a hand basket! That was hot!!! I loved meeting Carlisle and Esme as well. Carlisle is an inderstated character, but you can tell his approval means the world I Edward.
Date: 10 Apr 2013 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 22 Touch
Who hasn't had one of those moments? At least it wasn't mid-fuck!
Date: 10 Apr 2013 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 21 Confrontation
I get that she is sensitive, but I don't understand why she would let Tanya get to get like that. A playful spank to one can be a brutal smack to another. She needs to grow thicker skin if she wants this to work with Edward.
Date: 10 Apr 2013 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 20 Dinner
Fucking Tanya. She had to go and ruin an excellent evening. I really wanted limo sex too!
Date: 10 Apr 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 19 Discipline
I don't think she was thinking about steak when she answered that question.
Date: 10 Apr 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 18 Desire
Holy hotness Batman!!! That scene in the meadow is every sub's wet dream!!!
Date: 10 Apr 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
Amazing chapter!!! I lived the declarations and the promises He made to her as He put His collar in her. Beautiful!!!
Date: 09 Apr 2013 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
LOVED IT!!!! Amazing chapter!!!
Date: 09 Apr 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice
That scene was the hottest yet!!! Wax and rope are an excellent combination for play and you wrote it well!!!
Date: 09 Apr 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties
The anticipation of their first time having sex has me all on edge. This story is quickly climbing the chart of favorites. ;)
Date: 09 Apr 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping
Edward is in for a surprise! I can't wait to see his reaction!!!
Date: 09 Apr 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 12 **Playtime**
WOW!!! I am without words. Just wow!
Date: 09 Apr 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 11 Conversation Pt.2
Oh my! We are all peaking in that doorway with Bella.
Date: 09 Apr 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 10 Conversation
Yep. I am dying here. I have no intention of sleeping tonight until he has his wicked way with her!!!
Date: 09 Apr 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 9 Experience
Good grief! You are killing me!!!
Date: 08 Apr 2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 8 Awake
I think Emmett and his dilemma have been complete forgotten. LOL.
Date: 08 Apr 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Oh my! That was much better than late night painting!!! I loved that she caught him jerking off to her and she was compelled to do the same. So fucking hot!!!
Date: 08 Apr 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings
I feel the need to start chanting, "Lemons. Lemons. Lemons." LOL
Date: 08 Apr 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 5 Expectations
Oh damn! That was one hot little spank fantasy. This story just keeps getting better!
Date: 08 Apr 2013 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 4 **History**
I know I need to wait for the good stuff, but I am as patient as Edward is!!! The build up is excellent. I can't wait to see what Bella really meant by wanting other things. ;)
Date: 08 Apr 2013 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 3 *>Proposition
If his fantasies are this hot, I am dying to see what happens when he and Bella face off with clothes off for the first time!!!
Date: 08 Apr 2013 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 2 **Meetings**
I wish I had more time to read, but I will get through this story. There is something very captivating about your writing and I cannot wait to see what happens next!!!
Date: 28 Mar 2013 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 27
I really truly love this story!
Date: 27 Mar 2013 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 27
Ooh cliffhanger! I hope Edward beats the living shit outta Jacob JackassBlack!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 27
Are you finishing this story?
Date: 06 Mar 2013 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 4 **History**
He really luk out in the love dept. poor E.
Date: 06 Mar 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 2 **Meetings**
Oh im really liking this story. Thank you.
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
It took me awhile to find time to read this. Im starting to like it.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 27
Hei!
Love this story. Are you going to finish this? Please
Date: 01 Mar 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
This story has been rec'd to me more times than I can remember. So I am FINALLY taking the time to read it. And boy, you did not disappoint in this first chapter. What a start!!!
Date: 14 Feb 2013 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 3 *>Proposition
Loved it!
Date: 14 Feb 2013 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 2 **Meetings**
Loved it!
Date: 14 Feb 2013 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Loved it!
Date: 25 Jan 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 27
really love ATOH and am wondering when u plan on updateing looking forward to it
Febe Lee
Date: 22 Jan 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 27
I have read this story more than once and I still love it and want to read more. Are you going to finish this? I only ask because you haven't updated this since may 30, 2012.
Date: 08 Dec 2012 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
Hi, I am trying to read your fic with my Samsung android tablet and I cant get beyong the
1st chapter as it keeps returning to ch 1 after the age warning, do you know if I need to change
any of my settings?
thx HMP
Date: 28 Nov 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 27
Will u be updating soon. Omg can't wait
Date: 20 Nov 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 27
Please please please write more.... Dying to know what happens next, love it so far.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus
I really like how their first time happened. I liked that it was natural and there wasn't a big build up to it.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 4 **History**
I didn't think Tanya was a bitch at all. Her and Edward were just too different and she wasn't able to understand, I think her reaction was completely normal and to be expected from someone who doesn't have those needs or wants. And she didn't just give up on him either, she tried to make it work by giving him what he needed until it was borrowing too much from her. Just because Tanya isn't Bella and Edward's true love, doesn't make her a bitch.