Date: 05 Aug 2011 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 4 A Night to Remember (L)
That is sad that he took advantage of her like that. Not happy with Jame at all now. Even Edward wouldn't have done that, and he is a real jerk! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Jams and Edward are both Jetks! Hard to clear the air of the persona they give off!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 3 Promises (L)
So the pact has been made.... going to be interesting. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Yep, the course is set!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 Ticket Out by Lynzi
His eyes will be opened. I don't know what to think of James. Is he really nice? But if he is cheating on Bella how nice can he be. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Yea, my friend Lynzi wrote him rough . . . I was hard pressed to make a nice guy out of him!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 Where it all began, by Lynzi
What jerk! I can't wait to see his attitude change. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
I know, I couldn't stand him when I first read this chapter!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 13 New York (V)
WOOT WOOT! I'M READY FOR MORE!!
So Bella is starting to freak about other girls? I guess thats reasonable since he was a huge ass manwhore. lol
Author's Response:
True, they have never talked about whether he will be with other women . . . or not!
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2011 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 13 New York (V)
Where does Charlie think she will be living?
Author's Response:
Charlie thinks she is in the dorms - he has some surprises coming!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 13 New York (V)
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for contiinuing!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 13 New York (V)
Just Love it!! Light and easy going :)
Author's Response:
Yep, I love the fluff, too!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 13 New York (V)
very cute story - he is so getting soft on her..
look forward to the update.
Author's Response:
He really is falling hard for her, isn't he!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 13 New York (V)
yay for Edward :) I think that he is gonna put his foot down if he finds out she is planning on getting used furniture though LOL :)
Author's Response:
Ha! they both have a lot of adjusting to do!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 Ticket Out by Lynzi
yea!
Author's Response:
So glad youre still reading!
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2011 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 Where it all began, by Lynzi
he is a dick
but clearly all for show
Author's Response:
I love that you realize right off that it's all for show! Thank you for leaving the review!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 12 Caring (V)
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 12 Caring (V)
Hi!!! I just found it a few days and when I started read it had seven chapter only you writen fast!!! I loved it is so cute to see Edward change, and take care of Bella I´m anxious for the next and see a little more of this couple!!!sorry my english hope you can understand me
xoxo
Author's Response:
Your English is just fine, and thank you for leaving a review!
So glad you enjoy the story!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 12 Caring (V)
Edward is getting better, definatly keeping his promise.
i nearly cried tho, about bella. it brought up bad memories, but i'm glad she got out safely.
Author's Response:
So sorry about the bad memories! Hope you enjoy the story anyway!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2011 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 12 Caring (V)
Great stuff!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 12 Caring (V)
Thanks so much for improving Edward.
I tried to post feedback for the last 2 chapters but it wouldn't let me...Sorry
Date: 04 Aug 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 12 Caring (V)
Very good
Date: 04 Aug 2011 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 12 Caring (V)
Loved it.....I'm liking Bella a little better after her POV last chapter :)
Date: 04 Aug 2011 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 12 Caring (V)
Great chapter!!! wow... so Edward is much better :) (but seeing her like that would prob turn even the coldest heart!) Can't wait to see more... have a safe trip! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the good wishes! Hope you continue to enjoy and review!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 11 Sticky Situations (V)
oh no a cliffy. Hurry Edward!!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 11 Sticky Situations (V)
Oooops poor Bella :( I'm sure Edward will help her!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 10 Alarm (V)
I don't think you can stand Edward being an ass for too long, but I'm so glad!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 Alarm (V)
Its probably Mike again. I hope Bella applied to NYU!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 11 Sticky Situations (V)
Great chapter! First time we hear from Bella.... Can't wait to see the next one... hopefully Edward finds her since she is not actually AT the party LOL :)
Author's Response:
Bella is trying - she is just so unsure and not wanting to put Edward out . . . like marrying her isn't putting him out! lol
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 11 Sticky Situations (V)
I hope Edward saves the day!
Author's Response:
Well, at least someone knows to look for her, and that there is screaming!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 11 Sticky Situations (V)
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 10 Alarm (V)
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 9 Graduation (V)
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 8 Unexpected by Vickisan
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 7 Married by Vickisan
:)
Author's Response:
Love that you're reading straight through! Small chapters, sometimes multiple daily updates!
Kind of an exercise in getting to know the readers from their responses! Hope to continue to hear from you!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 6 What Morning Brings (L)
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving a review! Hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 5 Songs of Loss (L)
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving a review! Hope you enjoy the story!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 4 A Night to Remember (L)
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving a review! Hope you enjoy the story!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 3 Promises (L)
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving a review! Hope you enjoy the story!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 2 Ticket Out by Lynzi
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving a review! Hope you enjoy the story!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 Where it all began, by Lynzi
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving a review! Hope you enjoy the story!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2011 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 10 Alarm (V)
Crazy! Can't wait to find out what is going on!
Author's Response:
Bella has gotten herself into trouble!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2011 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 8 Unexpected by Vickisan
Love that Edward is begining to like Bella!
Author's Response:
Yes! Underneath he is a really nice guy - he has just floated along and let his bad traits show and his self indulgence!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2011 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 5 Songs of Loss (L)
So crazy how someone as reserved as Bella would even stay with James! Love your frequent chapters!
Author's Response:
I guess Bella just really saw something in him - he was going to come through in the end, right?
Date: 04 Aug 2011 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 10 Alarm (V)
Very good
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! Thank you for leaving the review!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 10 Alarm (V)
I think somebody is messing with her at the party and she doesnt want to be messed with. Then again, I highly doubt she should be at a partywhile she's pregnant. How stupid is that?
I'm glad Edward is starting to have feelings for her. He's right henever took the time to stop and look at her, instead he judged her based on his resentment of her 'stealing' his bestfrienda way and whatever.
Author's Response:
They are kind of both starting to like each other a little, aren't they!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 5 Songs of Loss (L)
Ok, so far I'm seeing James as the real douche here...
Author's Response:
Well, hopefully he fell and not jumped off the cliff!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 9 Graduation (V)
wow! Loving this story...Can't wait to see more :)
(and this chapter is the same as the last one)
Author's Response:
Sorry about the mixup! Glad you liked the story and thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 9 Graduation (V)
i keep wondering if this is like.. iduno a duplicate?? or maybe a mistake of adding the same chapter twice? but i keep coming back to it to check to see if its been fixed,, but its not.. so im just wonderin
Author's Response:
Sorry about the mixup!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 9 Graduation (V)
Was this a duplicate or am I seeing double Edwards? LOL
Author's Response:
Duplicate deleted! Double Edwards would be fun, though!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 8 Unexpected by Vickisan
What about NYU?? Will he go? Will she go?
Author's Response:
Keep reading . . . .
Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 6 What Morning Brings (L)
Well a little less douchward! Will it last?
Author's Response:
Ha! i like that description! Hopefully he will get better with time!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 8 Unexpected by Vickisan
AWWWWW Edwards turning into a sweetie whether he means to or not :))) Love it!
Author's Response:
Secret - one I ALWAYS stick to - Edward is a sweetie in the end. Always!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 8 Unexpected by Vickisan
Great. I love how quickly you update
Author's Response:
It's only because of the encouragement!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 8 Unexpected by Vickisan
well at least he resisted the urge to have sex with Tori. and i got to hand it to him, hes doing well in school, i wonder how Bella feels. Its really hard to think about, maybe he and bella could sit down and talk??
I hope edward could have feelings for her, and love her one day.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! There is hope for Edward, in time!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 7 Married by Vickisan
I'm liking Edward, promise or not, most guys would NOT honor something like getting married to a girl he barely likes whose also pregnant! Still don't know if I like Bella yet :)
Author's Response:
You may find it difficult to like Bella for awhile - Edward, well he seems to be coming around. Something is happening to him that he doesn't even understand because deep down, he really is an honorable guy!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 5 Songs of Loss (L)
Thank You!!! Well I LOVE Your other story so I had to give this one a chance, you are such a good writer!!!
Author's Response:
You are so encouraging, thank you so much!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 6 What Morning Brings (L)
Hmmm I am seeing some considerate Edward peeking out, haven't got much of a feel what this Bella is like yet, so far she seems kinda whiney...haha
Author's Response:
Yep, some grains of honor in Edward - they were just apparently being hidden by all the partying. He was just following the need to have challenges, and get the girls . . .
Bella, well, her personality is more difficult -
Date: 03 Aug 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 7 Married by Vickisan
Very good
Author's Response:
tHANK YOU FOR TAKING THE TIME TO LEAVE A REVIEW!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 6 What Morning Brings (L)
feel free to update at anytime. lol. im really getting into the story
Author's Response:
I am fuled by all the positive reviews for this llittle story! Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 6 What Morning Brings (L)
omg this is so fucking awesome i love this story. its so sad that james died. i cant believe it. i had a feeling he was going to do it, that he was going to die.
i love that you update like this, its great. i cant wait to read more. its going to be a hard road for the both of them. i hope that they can make it, and learn to love eachother.
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! One of my favorite authors is doing daily short updates, and i love it so I thought i would try it as well!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 5 Songs of Loss (L)
Well this should be intersting. Is Edward always going to be a douce?
Author's Response:
He really is quite the arrogant jerk isn't he! lol Let's hope he learns something as he matures!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 5 Songs of Loss (L)
OMG THATS INSAAANE. SO.. tori is victoria?
Author's Response:
Yep, they shortened Victoria and call her Tori! Hope you stick with the story for awhile, it is quite a turnaround at a point!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 5 Songs of Loss (L)
good story so far, yes Edward is a jerk, but so is James.
Author's Response:
They really are quite the pair! Early twenty year old manwhores, and full of themselves too!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 4 A Night to Remember (L)
Hmm not to sure about James...maybe he will get run over by a bus!!!
Author's Response:
You were never more accurate - read on . . .
Author's Response:
You were never more accurate - read on . . .
Date: 03 Aug 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 3 Promises (L)
Haha naughty Edward!!!
Author's Response:
Yep - VERY naughty Edward!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 2 Ticket Out by Lynzi
Edward is a jerk, but a funny one...lol!!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you find humor in him! Is is quite the jerk, though, and SOOOO full of himself!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1 Where it all began, by Lynzi
sounds interesting, though it's a bummer Edward didn't take her V-card, nice twist on things though!!!!
Author's Response:
I completely agree with you - but Edward himself is something of a man whore in this story!