Date: 14 Aug 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 35 Renee & Charlie (V)
Well, it is sad that Charlie didn't believe Bella. I am glad he started to listen to what Bella and Edward had to say. I have a feeling Jessica never left the ring. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Charlie is really a hard sell!
Date: 14 Aug 2011 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 27 Run (L)
wow talk about a downward spiral!
Author's Response:
Isn't it weird how fast things can turn to s^^t!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 35 Renee & Charlie (V)
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 34 Esme (V)
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 35 Renee & Charlie (V)
I hope somebody beats Jessica's ass.. shes the mousy looking one. ugh. and shes a slut, just throwing herself at people, how disgusting.
Author's Response:
Something needs to be done bout her, that's for sure!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 35 Renee & Charlie (V)
good!!! Went better than I expected!!! seriously just go make Jessica drown herself.....in a puddle....lol
Author's Response:
I think Edward would be willing to oblidge!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 35 Renee & Charlie (V)
great chapter :)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 35 Renee & Charlie (V)
Always so good
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 34 Esme (V)
Always so good. Please keep the fluff up.
Author's Response:
Fluff for a little while, anyway!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 26 Hurt (L)
well that was interesting! eddie had a very good reason for leaving. what will bella do with everything she has learned?
Author's Response:
If they would just give each other a chance and TALK!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 25 Empty
wonder where eddie took off to?it better be some place good! can't believe he just left like that
Author's Response:
He could have at lest yelled to her, huh!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 24 Christmas (L)
wow that was fast. funny to say that when they have been waiting over 4 years! heehee
Author's Response:
Guess they we anxious?
Date: 13 Aug 2011 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 23 It Was Her (V)
yay he found her!
Author's Response:
At least he knows she she is!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 34 Esme (V)
Renee' yea, Charlie hum!!!!
Author's Response:
We'll see!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 34 Esme (V)
LMao Esme is so damn kooky and insane i love it
Author's Response:
SAhe just wants to be a grama!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 34 Esme (V)
I figured they would be :) Can't Charlie just be happy for her???? Oh well that he's been lied to...lol Looking forward to your next update!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 22 Helping (V)
how does no one know bella is in forks? not her dad? not carlisle? no one but jake? wow! wonder what eddie is gonna thin of the book/ how long till he recognizes the name?
Author's Response:
He will pretty much recognize it the moment he sees it!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)
eddie never really gave himself a chance to grieve and mourn the loss of the baby.
Author's Response:
That;s really true, we never really talked about how it made him feel!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)
finally gonna get some help and find his wife.
Author's Response:
Let's hope daddy can help!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 34 Esme (V)
Esme was so funny. If Carlisle didn't move I think she would have pushed him out of the booth. Great job...thanks!!!!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 19 Note (L)
wow big jump forward. poor eddie to come home to that. did either of them ever file for the annulment or divorce? or are they still married?
Author's Response:
Still married, nobody filed!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 18 Presents (L)
oh poor eddie ! when he gets home he is gonna be crushed. not only for losing bella but the baby as well
Author's Response:
I even felt bad for him, but he handeled it as best he could!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 33 Parents (V)
i can't wait to see Charlie's reaction...
Date: 12 Aug 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 33 Parents (V)
:)
Date: 12 Aug 2011 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 32 Ours (V)
:)
Date: 12 Aug 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 31 Double (V)
:)
Date: 12 Aug 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 30 Claimed (V)
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 29 Declared (V)
:)
Date: 12 Aug 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 28 Mine (V)
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review! Hope you contnue to enjoy the story!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 27 Run (L)
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review! Hope you contnue to enjoy the story!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 33 Parents (V)
I think when it comes time to talk to charlie, Bella needs to but Edward ina bullet proof bubble, with a bullet proof vest and helmet just to be safe. lmao, charlie is gonna kill him lmao. hehehehe.
I'm glad Carlisle and Esme are happy for them.
Bella and Edward are so cute together
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 33 Parents (V)
More! more! more!!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 33 Parents (V)
great chapter... Hopefully Charlie will see how much they love each other and come around :)
Date: 12 Aug 2011 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 33 Parents (V)
Sweet!!! Thankyou for updating!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 33 Parents (V)
I can't wait to see how Esme reacts! They are so happy since they are together again. That is all that should matter. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 32 Ours (V)
Twins...I love it! These two deserve double the happiness. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 33 Parents (V)
As always......very good
Date: 12 Aug 2011 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 26 Hurt (L)
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review! Hope you contnue to enjoy the story!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 25 Empty
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review! Hope you contnue to enjoy the story!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 24 Christmas (L)
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review! Hope you contnue to enjoy the story!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 17 Blighted (L)
wow that is fucked up! she left! eddie is gonna be crushed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 16 Private (L)
finally eddie is letting his thoughts for the future be known. bella is gonna have to think about what she is gonna do with that info.
Date: 12 Aug 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 15 Setteling In (V)
aww so sweet 'good morning wife' and 'good night wife'
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 32 Ours (V)
Oh how I love that they are having twins. Great job!!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 14 Something Special (V)
welcome to the new life!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 32 Ours (V)
Cute!!!! Thank you for your writing!!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 32 Ours (V)
Amazing chapter!!! Excited to see more :)
Date: 12 Aug 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 32 Ours (V)
loved it.
Date: 12 Aug 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 13 New York (V)
looks like eddie is gonna woo his wife!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 12 Caring (V)
aww eddie found her, saved her, took care of her, and answered a few questions. big day big night for him. and doctor c knows about the baby....!
Author's Response:
Yep, lots happening!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 11 Sticky Situations (V)
bella seems to be very meek and timid. eddie is gonna have to find a way to build her up.
Date: 12 Aug 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 10 Alarm (V)
time for eddie to ride in to the rescue!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 9 Graduation (V)
ah meeting the parents never an easy thing let alone when you are secretly married to thier daughter.
Author's Response:
Love that you are still reading and reviewing! Glad you like the story!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 8 Unexpected by Vickisan
eddie my boy i think you are growing up!
Author's Response:
It's great isn't it!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 7 Married by Vickisan
so awkward and cute. very sweet how eddie is maning up to take care of james' shit.
Author's Response:
Edward has to nd up being a sweetheart!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 31 Double (V)
fuck jessica that girl who played her twilight wasnt even prettier than Bella either. I dont see why she thinks she pretty. Even in stories. like a few chapters back she called bella a mouse, ooookay.
Date: 11 Aug 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 31 Double (V)
yay for them being together.... and twins!!
and Jessica trouble on the horizon huh?! well lets hope that they stick to what they said about always discussing things and not jumping to conclusions... oh and Edward never slept with her right? please tell me he didn't! :) LOL
Can't wait to see the next one!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 31 Double (V)
I love that they are having twins! I love these two. They seem so happy. I can't wait to see what Charlie has to say. I hope he is as happy for them as everyone else. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 31 Double (V)
Jessica needs to go drown herself!!!!! Twins?? Didn't see that one coming either!!! haha nice!!! Loved how they talked EVERYTHING out!!! More updates of this story today??? Please!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you for blessing us with your wonderful writing!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 30 Claimed (V)
Happy!!!! Love it!!!! Thank you!!!!
Author's Response:
I like it when they are together, too!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 31 Double (V)
You are so good
Author's Response:
You are too good to me! Thank you so much!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 30 Claimed (V)
well im glad that they're together. finally, seemed like they were never going to get there.
Author's Response:
I know, right! It took them foreger to get back together! now we need some fun times before we have more troubles!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 30 Claimed (V)
yay!!! :) Excited to see more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Love getting reviews from you!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 30 Claimed (V)
I am very happy that they are together and that the story is far from over. I can't wait to see how their families react. I hope everyone will be happy for them. Great chapter...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, this tale is just geting stated well!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 30 Claimed (V)
Doubley happy, as you just said it wasn't over. Yay.
Author's Response:
Oh no, not over by a long shot!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 6 What Morning Brings (L)
wow james just walked off the cliff?!?! and ed has stepped up and stepped in. this should be interesting...
Author's Response:
Walked off or fell off, we don't really ever know! Glad you are enjoying the story, I'm catching up on answering reviews and so glad to see you are still reading!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 5 Songs of Loss (L)
wow that wasa totally fucked up way to loose your v card! and james? an emotional drunk. unfortunately it is time to grow up....
Author's Response:
That sis soooo suck for Bella, didn't it!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 30 Claimed (V)
love it
Author's Response:
Wait for the alone time, you should love it more!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 4 A Night to Remember (L)
that was messed up!
Author's Response:
I totally agree!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 3 Promises (L)
dun dun dunnnn and the deal is done....
Author's Response:
Yes, and he meant that shit he said! Amazing!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 30 Claimed (V)
Very, very good
Author's Response:
Ha! It gets very very better, lemon wise that is!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 2 Ticket Out by Lynzi
nice to see that even though eddie is being an asshole james is ready to step up to the plate and take care of bella and the baby.
Author's Response:
Yep, Eddie has more to him than shows in the beginning.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 29 Declared (V)
THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 Where it all began, by Lynzi
i will be fun to see how this ends up with edand bell togetherand in love.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! I love to se what new readers think of the chapters as the story unfolds!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 29 Declared (V)
Oh dear now I´m begin to think you´re not sooo evil!!! Just kidding I loved it finally them are together!! my eyes almost jump off my head when Jasper said Edward ask jessica for marry with him lol I think everyone of twilight Jessica are who I hate more lol I´m happy now ;D
xoxo
Date: 10 Aug 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 29 Declared (V)
Woop. I have been out all evening and when I get home I find 2chapters up. Let's hope it's only a delay to tell him he gonna be a daddy. :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 29 Declared (V)
ok you have my attention....your updates are great...please more??? PLease?
Date: 10 Aug 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 25 Empty
I can't believe he had to leave. My guess is something happened at the hospital. I hope they talk soon. Great job...thanks!!!!
Author's Response:
Excellent guess!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 29 Declared (V)
Awwwww.....I wonder what Edward will think when she tells him? So sweet!!! I just LOVE your writing!!!!!
Thank you for all the updates!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 27 Run (L)
OMG! Bella is such a fool! Edward was faithful to her for 4yrs. Man, she really fucked up.
Author's Response:
That's what happens when people don't jus talk to each other! Thanks for leaving a review!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 29 Declared (V)
Love it!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 29 Declared (V)
Thanks for all the updates. Love the story.
Date: 10 Aug 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 29 Declared (V)
I hope she is going to tell him now. He is going to be so happy. I am glad they are talking now. I like the way Edward handled Jessica. Why doesn't it surprise me that she asked Edward to marry her and she just took his grandmother's ring. You have spoiled us, but I can't wait for more. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 29 Declared (V)
What the he'll, you're killing me
Date: 10 Aug 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 29 Declared (V)
I WOULD KISS YOU RIGHTNOW IF I COULD LMAOO okay so maybe I wouldnt kiss you, but I damn near might have.
BELLWARD ARE BACK IN FUCKING BUSINESS BABY! well....... hopefully they stay that way. B/c I swear, this couple has me wanting to go to therapy... lmao
Date: 10 Aug 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 29 Declared (V)
well yay for getting rid of Jessica!!! Can't wait to see more :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 28 Mine (V)
So happy she told him how she felt!
Author's Response:
Me too, lets hope they both act on it!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 27 Run (L)
Naughty Bella!!! Talk to Edward!!!
Author's Response:
Isn't it silly how people don't just talk to each other!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 28 Mine (V)
wow!! lets hope he can hold her there and that she doesn't run... oh and has the guts to tell him that she is pregnant :) ... although I can understand if she doesn't tell him right away... she wants to know he will be with her because he wants to not just because he feels he needs to. Can't wait to see the next one!
Author's Response:
Yep, they both need to know how much the other loves them, regardless of the baby!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 28 Mine (V)
OMG!!! Thank you for the updates!! What three in a day wow!!! I really hope Edward throws Jessica out on her behind!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! You're welcome for the chapters, I'm grateful that you want them!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 28 Mine (V)
GOD! i cant believe he went and got engaged to that fucking jessica bitch! seriously!!
fuck him, and fuck jessica! lmao... my heart droped when iread that he was engaged to jessica... swear i got teary eyed and shit.. all sappy..
Author's Response:
If you got ll teary eyes and sappy, I must be writing something right! Yea!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 28 Mine (V)
Thank you for 2 updates so close together!!! I am so glad they are talking. I am doing my happy dance. Just make sure Edward gets his family ring back before he send Jessica on her way. I can't wait to see how Edward reacts to the baby news. He is going to be so happy! Great chapter...thanks!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 28 Mine (V)
Very good, and yes when a story is as good as yours we are relentless
Author's Response:
Lmao - Yes, you guys are relentless, and I love it! it encourages me to continue!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 27 Run (L)
Jessica...really??? I know he is hurting bad, but come on. Date...don't jump into anohter marriage. I just knew she would get pregnant. They have to talk. Enjoy this pregnancy. I don't want them to spend this time apart. It is so important. Make them talk already! Sorry. Great job...thanks!
Author's Response:
You're right - they really do need to talk and not just jump to conclusions!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 27 Run (L)
:(. How are you gonna get the pair of them round it this time
Author's Response:
Somebody is going to have to REALLY want it!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 27 Run (L)
Okay great update,but,could you do the next 2 or 3 updates in the next hour?
Author's Response:
Fine. But only one in the next hour! lol
Date: 10 Aug 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 27 Run (L)
OMG what is wrong with these 2!!!! jeez .... if they had a penny for every misunderstanding they have had... well that would be alot!!!!! :)
Author's Response:
Beyond rediculous, isn't it! At least Romeo and Juliet made the mistake only once!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 26 Hurt (L)
You got me! Excellent, I didn't see that one coming.
Author's Response:
Ah! You made my day by telling me that!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 26 Hurt (L)
yeah they really need to talk! LOL :).... I knew he had to have had a reason for running out like he did! :) Excited to see more!
Author's Response:
Funny how people jump to conclusions based on their own insecurities rather than seeking the facts!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 26 Hurt (L)
Great stuff! Hopefully Bella is going to feel the same way as he does!
Author's Response:
You know she does, she just needs to admit it!