Date: 26 Aug 2011 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 66 Questions
well he didnt do it, so why should he be concerened now its time for me to hit the next button, because youve added two more chapters since i've been away from this lovely story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2011 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 67 Duty
I agree with crystanroten on this, there has to be someone who witnessed him changing a tire off a busy road by the hospital. And witnesses to the scratches he received in the hallway. Not to mention the former patient in Jessicas parking lot that could verify he did not leave his car. But something tells me trouble and BIG trouble it will be is ahead.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2011 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 67 Duty
so im guessing tyler beat jessica and she better wake up and set it straight! and good for edward he should let everyone know he never slept with jessica and when the baby is born and paternity test are done then everyone will know what a liar that woman is!!!
Date: 26 Aug 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 67 Duty
uh oh.... well jeez lets hope that Jessica wakes up soon so that she can tell them that Edward didn't do it... (or at least doesn't lie and tell everyone that he did)
Date: 26 Aug 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 67 Duty
good Edward should yell it from the rooftops......cant wait till the baby is born and they can prove it is not Edwards!!!!!!
Date: 26 Aug 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 66 Questions
great chapter...i had a feeling that Tyler had something to do with why no one had heard from Jessica
Date: 26 Aug 2011 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 66 Questions
ummm me thinks Jessica will lie and say Edward did it ........ugh!!!!!! :(
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 67 Duty
Just hope Jessica doesn't claim Edward did it just to get money from him...
Date: 26 Aug 2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 67 Duty
What a mess. Things don't look good, but all those things the investigation found can be explained. Like the Chief said there are two sides to everything. I hope Jessica wakes up soon. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 26 Aug 2011 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 66 Questions
Wow...what a mess. Jessica started this mess, but she doesn't deserve what Tyler did to her. I hope she and the baby will be okay. I know Charlie has to get the facts, but I feel bad for Edward having to defend himself to everyone. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Bit of a mess, really, but let's hope Charlie sorts it out!
Date: 26 Aug 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 62 Uncertain Actions
Awe, :D)
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 65 Happenings
Ugh...Edward will be blamed for Jessica's dissappearance or death :(((((( Thank you for the update!!!
Author's Response:
It's gonna get kind of touchy!
Date: 26 Aug 2011 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 65 Happenings
Edward was having a great day! Sounds like that party will be fun. I have a bad feeling about Jessica. Did Tyler get to her??? I can't wait to see. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
EDWARD'S DAY IS ABOUT TO CHANGE!
Date: 26 Aug 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 64 Bonus
I love it! Bella knew what she wanted and she took it. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
I just loved the idea of her dismissing him and leaving him lying there!
Date: 26 Aug 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 63 No Doubt
I am glad that Bella could make Edward understand that she was not made at him for helping Jessica. These two are really good for each other. Bella is right...a lot of time was wasted, but if they had stayed together they may not appreciate each other as much as they do now. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts with me, I couldn't agree more!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 65 Happenings
Oh boy, i hope nothing happened to Jessica, with Edward following her home and the former patient that saw him in the parking lot, oh boy. Thank you for all the updates, I know writing is hard work and takes a lot of time, just thanks for sharing your talent and for the updates!!!!! Great story, hot too!!!!
Date: 26 Aug 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 65 Happenings
lol im sure he will never go back on his word and 'forget' dessert for now on... lmao.
Author's Response:
That's right! She showed him!
Date: 26 Aug 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 65 Happenings
Great chapter... and I know that Jessica is horrible and all... but I hope that she is ok and Tyler didn't do something to her
Date: 25 Aug 2011 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 64 Bonus
how can i make a review when i'm all satisfied with the way your story is going! love it! i just want to wait till the time Jessica goes to tell Edward & Bella the truth. but i'm worried of what complications Tyler is planning for Jessica.
Author's Response:
Tyler is going to create REAL trouble!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 64 Bonus
Hello vickisan,
you are so busy, it's impossible to review every chapter. But I really like your stories. This one and of course "Heaven, Hell and Harleys".(Please excuse my mistakes, I' m German and English isn't my mothers language).
In the moment I'm happy because everything works out nice for Edward and Bella. It's a genious idea of you, to shift the problems to Jessica. I have never read a story, where the main characters (our beloved Eddy and Bells) are happy, but the obvious "bad" character, as Jessica in this chase, are deeply in trouble. In the moment I'm full of compassion for her. Go on I'm really curious.
And if you want to give me an answer, my e-mail address is martina.buenning@buenning.de
Lol - Tiina
Date: 25 Aug 2011 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 63 No Doubt
Me too! (Where's my Edward????)
Only women can write such stories - Tiina
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2011 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 64 Bonus
Well, I for one LOVE this story, I did hate it when they were apart. The way you wrote it, made me feel their pain. It was unbelieveable! Im so glad they are happy, but why do I feel there is a but coming??? Tyler?? Nothing happens to the babies I hope. I can't wait for more. Thank you for updating like you do.. there is nothing more frustrating to literally get hooked on a story and then no more updates....Thank you..GREAT STORY!!
Author's Response:
I will finish the story, though the updates may not always be this often! lol
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 64 Bonus
Haha you have my reviews silly!!! I just don't get on as early as I used to...kids are back in school, so I don't have any free time till 9:30am my time :( I LOVE your writing keep it up please!!!!! Three updates in one morning wow girl!!!!!!
Author's Response:
So, I'm in Georgia - - - where is your time?
Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 64 Bonus
:) Loved it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for letting me know!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 64 Bonus
Love this story for some reason my phone wont let me leave comments on this site! Cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you for finding a way to respond! Glad you are enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 63 No Doubt
Loving all the fluff and that so far they are trusting eachother no matter what!!!! Worried about the angst and what kind it might be...eeek!!!!!
Thankyou for another update!!!
Author's Response:
Well, I definately liked the idea of him lying there, her ruuning off to the shower, and him wondering what the hell had happened - with his fly open and his tie and lab coat on! ha ha ha ha ha
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 64 Bonus
WOW! That was a totally fun morning activity...lol! Thanks for the update! :~)
Author's Response:
It certainaly seemed as though Edward was blown away by it! lol
Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 64 Bonus
Bella is one naughty little minx lol. Using her husband for sex in anyway she wants it lol poor edward, was practically distraught! lol oooh i loved it lol, she dismissed him and went to the shower leaving him with his mind swirling in thoughts lmao hehehe. he's never going to look at his work clothes the same ever again.
I can see Edward being home for awhile, getting a break from the hospital and the crazy! Sorta feel like he deserves to take time off. Allow him to be alone with his wife until the babies come, and even afterwards. He should definatly do it!
Author's Response:
Nope, that lab jacket hanging open will never ever be the same! And even a tie on for heaven's sake!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 63 No Doubt
Yes! Don't we all!!! LOL! :~)
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 62 Uncertain Actions
Nice!!! I love it!!! Thank you for updating!!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 63 No Doubt
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 63 No Doubt
I WANNA EDWARD TOO!!! WHERE CAN I BUY ONE!?! LMAO
Author's Response:
I guarentee you that if one could be found, bought or stolen, I would have one and not have NEAR as much time to write! lol My husband was killed 20 years ago this January and I am just ready to go find another one!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 64 Bonus
ha! well that was a great morning for him... hopefully things don't go south when he gets to the hospital :)
Date: 25 Aug 2011 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 64 Bonus
I love this story!! I also love how you update so frequently. Can't wait for the notifications to come announcing another chapter. Keep up the great work!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 63 No Doubt
great chapter! :)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 62 Uncertain Actions
great wake up call!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 62 Uncertain Actions
Very nice. Loved it.
Date: 25 Aug 2011 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 61 Intentions
Tyler is scary!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 62 Uncertain Actions
What a way to wake up! I am sure that made his day! Great job...thanks!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 61 Intentions
You do a good job painting Tyler as a disgusting pig.
Date: 25 Aug 2011 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 60 Advice
conclusions are being jumped to.. ha ha, that would describe me.. of course , imp, that's some of the fun in reading mysteries, trying to second guess the plot & then finding out how off base you were or on to something;D)
thanks for writing, great fun reading with all the updates!
Author's Response:
True, but I'm afraid you've gotten kinda good at it! Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 61 Intentions
Yah know I am thinking Jessica is going about this the wrong way, I bet if she would just sit down with Edward AND Bella and tell them what's really going on, they would help her......
Date: 25 Aug 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 61 Intentions
Great chapter... good job Edward on just changing the tire and getting out of there... now I wonder if something will happen when you had Jessica mention that she didn't wash her hands before she left the hospital? will that mean anything? Can't wait to read more!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 61 Intentions
he's gonna be uber pissed to find jessicaaaaa pregnant... they both are gonna need money... and i have a good idea that they will plan some shit together. both of those fuckers, tyler and jessica, are ruthless... mostly when it comes to money, obviously.
Date: 25 Aug 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 60 Advice
smh, he should have left her to change the tire alone lmao. i would have if i were him.
Author's Response:
He's just too much of a gentleman (eek, he didnt used to be) and a doctor!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 59 Confrontation
that girl isnt ever going to learn.... she shouldnt have even went back to Forks to begin with, she should have stayed away and moved somehwere else...
Author's Response:
She reaslly should have gone elsewhere, coming back to Forks where there was nothing for her, well, except the job of course.
Date: 25 Aug 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 60 Advice
could that be good, helping Jessica?
Author's Response:
You would think it would soften her up, wouldn't you!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 Where it all began, by Lynzi
WHERE IS MY MIND...I FORGOT ABOUT TYLER, I KNOW CRAZY!!! I AGREE WITH MHAWKINS9802 WHAT ABOUT A DNA TEST, SHE IS 7 MONTHS IT SHOULD BE SAFE, RIGHT??
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 60 Advice
NO EDWARD'S JUST BEING NICE. I JUST HOPE IT DOESN'T BACKFIRE. I HOPE JESSICA DIDN'T DRUG HIM OR SOMETHIN AND THAT'S HOW SHE GOT PREGNANT....OH BROTHER!!!!! YOU KNOW WHEN SHE WAS FIRST HELPING HIM BY BEING A FRIEND?????
Author's Response:
I bet she could have easily drugged him and had her way with him! THAT WOULD JUST SUCK!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 60 Advice
Well........when you say angst is coming how can we not come to bad conclusions :P......anyways thank you for the chapter!!! I wish Edward wouldn't have stopped, I am worried Jessica will just think this means he really does care.......
Author's Response:
True, true, conclusions must be jumped to, that's half the fun! You know, I never considered that Jessica might think that he like her cause he stopped!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 60 Advice
This should be interesting. No matter what Jessica will turn it to her advantage. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
I agree, Jessica is just such a brat!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 60 Advice
wow... ok Edward just change the tire and leave... don't talk to her! LOL :)
Author's Response:
Luckily he did just that! lol Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 59 Confrontation
Oh no, I've got a badd feeling about this. He's going to help her, Tyler's going to kill her & Edward is going to get blamed because the people at the hospital will say they saw E. tell her to stop before she gets hurt and the losers at the bar, Mike & Tim wont say anything and the boys will grow up with their father in jail. Yuck, that would not be fun to read.
Author's Response:
Woah! Woah! Woah!
Do you take me for a fool or just an evil b***h?
Keep reading . . .
Date: 24 Aug 2011 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 58 No Contact
2 new chapys today! Yeah. I almost feel sorry for Jessica {probably because she's caring a poor defenseless child in her, although it is her & Tyler's offspring so that almost negates it all he he}, except that she's such a liar & she used to kind of hang out with Bella, so lousy friend too. And if she didn't want to fight with him she should stop her lies & stay the heck away. Stil, I gotta say I'm a little scared for her when Tyler finds her which i'm guiessing will be soon.
Author's Response:
Yep, Jessica has lots of issues, but she is just handling situations sooooo wrong!
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2011 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 59 Confrontation
I understand that Jessica has had a hard life with Tyler but that doesn't excuse what she is doing to Edward and Bella. She at one time considered herself Edward's friend so it is sad that she now wants to ruin not only his marriae but also his career. Why doesn't Edward demand a dna test?
Author's Response:
Oh he will, in fact, he has already talked to Carlisle about it! He is positive that the baby isn't his!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 59 Confrontation
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 58 No Contact
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 59 Confrontation
Haha...oh I do every chapter...and ARGH!!! Edward is too nice for his own good!!!!!! She will totally use this against him cause she is a B***tch!!!! Thank you for another update!!!! one more would be just AWESOME!!!!!!
Author's Response:
One more today, coming up!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 59 Confrontation
wow! Great chapter! Can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
Really glad you enjoyed it! More to come!
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 58 No Contact
Well I don't get a message saying when you have replied to my review, buuuttt..haha...I do scroll through the reviews to check :P Anyways, I don't know who on earth gets 200 reviews per chapter....I kinda thought your total for reviews was very high!!! Also I am not usually a good reviewer, but with your stories that I like SO much, I just hvae to review haha!! ANd anst....umm it's cool with me as long as Edward and Bella DO NOT doubt eachother even for a second, it's one of the reasons I love your Edward and Bella, the always back eachother up, no matter what!!!! Okay thank you for all the updates today!!!!!!
Author's Response:
You have no worries!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 59 Confrontation
I am not sure Jessica will ever learn. Edward is too good of a person not see Jessica in that situation and not stop. I was really afraid it was going to be Tyler. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Well, I;m not sure it was in Edward's best interest, although she definately did need the help!
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 57 Explain
Aww I am glad I was so wrong!! Good old Charlie!!! Thank you for the update!! BTW I love reading your responces to reviews almost as much as I like reading the story!!!! Soooooo thank you for that too!!!!
Author's Response:
Ha! you're so funy! I wondered if anyone actually read responses to reviews! Glad to know that they send you a note or something when you get one!
Sorry in advance for the angst that's about to happen - just hang in thee with me!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 58 No Contact
GOD THIS BITCH JUST NEEDS TO LEAVE HIM THE FUCK ALONE! WHAT THE HELL!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 58 No Contact
Jessica will never learn. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! I just don't know if she will ever get the right idea or not! lol
Date: 24 Aug 2011 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 57 Explain
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 57 Explain
I just wanted to be sure you got 400 reviews before you added more.
Keep it coming! Love it
Author's Response:
You're awesome! Thank you!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 57 Explain
I know this comes off as all about me, cause it is, but boohoo I've been enjoying reading this for 57 chapters but am all caught up now;-{l Although I'm appreciative of the update, it's so nice that Charlie has woke up & smelled the coffee. He's been looking at things through a very heavily tinted set of Daddy glasses. For being a cop he sure was missing how much they love & care for each other. I blame it on the glasses.
Thanks for writing, this has been fun to read, keep the updates coming;-D}
Author's Response:
It's good and bad to be caught up, isn't it! Thanks for hanging in thee, I told you you would fall for Edward! i think you fell HARD! lol
Date: 24 Aug 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 57 Explain
I think the talk between Edward and Charlie was great. That is a big step of Charlie. It seems like a great day for all of them. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
I'm happy to have Charlie more on team Edward now!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 56 July 4th
Well, I guess Bella didn't turn out to be so frigid after all*~D))
I wonder if Charlie knows what a looser Tyler is & if he's already moved to town to cause trouble & that's how he knows??
Author's Response:
Charlie knows nothing of Tyler, yet and Bella . . . well, Bella let loose once she was married, didn't she!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 55 Rough
Tyler is less than worse than I don't even know, he just is.
Author's Response:
I was trying to make him pretty much scum . . . hope I succeded!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 54 Obnoxious
I hope she starts going to see the therapist and that it helps her
Author's Response:
I kind of hope she gets mental help as well - though I doubt she and Edward could ever be friends!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 53 Blackmail
I know I haven't mentioned it but their consistent terms of endearment, husband & wife, are really cute.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for saying so! i had one reviewer tell me that it annoyed her, but the husband and wife nicknames are, to me, an important part of the story!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 56 July 4th
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review! Hope you enjoyed the chapter!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 55 Rough
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review! Hope you enjoyed the chapter!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 56 July 4th
Ah, i was wondering when Daddy Swan was gonna pull Daddyward aside. the rumors probably have him carring a nice hand gun inside his pants lmao
Author's Response:
You know, he just might find a way to accidentally shoot Edward if he betrayed his daughter!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 56 July 4th
I love how well everyone was getting along. I can't wait to see what Charlie has to say to Edward. I hope it is some kind of welcome to the family. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
You just never know with Charlie! lol
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 56 July 4th
Of course there's a gun...it's Charlie....lol...he likes to scare the boys.....hahaha!!!!
Thank you for the update!!!
Author's Response:
Charlie is a trip, and soooo fun to write. I think he's about to surprise y ou
Date: 23 Aug 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 47 Strange
I had a feeling she'd stoop to this. But with a paternity test in 9 months the gig will be up, unless she raped him when he was asleep or drunk or stole sperm from a used condom[is that even possible? immediately after?? people do sperm donations it seems almost feasible], can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response:
You know, I have always wondered if it would be possible to steal sperm from a condom! Wonder how fresh it would have to be? Maybe there is a story in that!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 55 Rough
Tyler is horrible. If he ruffs Jessica up again, I am thinking a nice jail cell would be a good place for him. Then he wouldn't have to worry about putting a roof over his head and I am guessing he would get a few paybacks for the way he treated Jessica too.
I hope Edward doesn't pay Jessica off. It is not right what she is doing. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Not to worry, he won't pay her off.
Date: 23 Aug 2011 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 54 Obnoxious
On one hand I feel bad for the situation that Jessica is in, but the way she went about trying to fix her situation is just wrong. She is just going to make things worse for herself and her baby in the end.
I loved the time with Angela and Ben. They are going to be very close friends. Great job..thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Jesica just doesn't have any skill in how to e a nice person, she was a brat in highschool and it continued!
Angela and Ben, now they are seriously fun!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 55 Rough
hes bad news, but Jessica deserves it, look what she's trying to do to Edward's life... they seem like the perfect couple, tyler and jessica lmao
Author's Response:
They do seem alike, probably why they got together in the first place, bad folks it seems!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 55 Rough
Umm I think they both are :( Still think Jessica is bonkers!!!
Author's Response:
Delusional or desperate, or both!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 54 Obnoxious
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 37 I Want to See You (V)
Yes, now that's how to go exploring. Happy days
Author's Response:
I had fun with that! See, you do like Edward, don't you?
Date: 23 Aug 2011 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 33 Parents (V)
I'm giddy happy for them. I hope Jess doesn't show up pregnant to test their love & commitment.
Author's Response:
You were right on the money with this one!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 54 Obnoxious
isn't she working in a hospital she should know that Edward knows how to get to know even before she gives birth if he is the father or not! DNA's can be done. isn't she even use just a little brain on that...Carlisle is also working there & Edward himself is with the pediatrics section! that bitch is not realyy thinking!
Author's Response:
No, she's mpt thinking - she's just desperate!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 27 Run (L)
All right she takes the cake in idiots, she's right she doesn't deserve Edward and I'm convinced Jessica does because she would never be so cruel to him.
Author's Response:
I love it! you're taking Edward's side!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 26 Hurt (L)
Boy, she is queen of the idiot moves it seems. She's just insecure, he needs to figure that out about her.
Author's Response:
Really dumb move - people should really investivate things before they act!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)
I'm nearly bawling my eyes out here. awe, so sweet
Author's Response:
Yep, I have to have sweet Edward's . . . even if they start out seeming to be assholes!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)
Oh, crockadile tears here, and he was so unworthy just 19 chapters ago, ha ha
Author's Response:
You are so funny!
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 54 Obnoxious
She's crazy!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Absolutely delusional. Yes.
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 53 Blackmail
Seriously! Eddie boy needs to STOP all this PDA with his Angie girl cause it is REALLY NOT helping his case with Jessica in any way!!! Even if Bella is that stupid, him kissing on, hugging, and having coffee dates with another girl he works with is not a smart move when he already has one girl screaming about sexual harrassment... Can he just not keep his loving focused on Bella? Is it necessary for him to be kissing and hugging fellow female employees??? I am guessing his parents would have a problem with this. And his wife should but we all know how she is...
Author's Response:
Good point, but they are just being friends . . . it will work out, you'll see soon . . .
Date: 23 Aug 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 12 Caring (V)
HA ha, what a great line, “She’s my wife, Jake. What did you expect?”
God, how is it the Edward character's growing on me? I don't know but he really is.
Author's Response:
Ha! just wait! You will grow to absofuckinglutely LOVE the Edward Cullen! Give him time, and give you the facts . . .
Date: 23 Aug 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 54 Obnoxious
I think that chick is retarded. She needs to just pack up and leave.
Date: 23 Aug 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 6 What Morning Brings (L)
ha ha. Completely serves Edward right, he should talk about karma
Author's Response:
Yep, karma is a bitch. Give Edward a chance, you may see his actions in a different light . . .
Date: 23 Aug 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 2 Ticket Out by Lynzi
Can't imagine a 180 degree turn around that could save him, can't wait to read what happens
Author's Response:
Keep reading . . .
Date: 23 Aug 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1 Where it all began, by Lynzi
Yeah, he can be a total self absorbed assh*le. I'm intrigued how this is going to work out that slut James could snatch Bella not as good a girl as E thinks maybe?
Author's Response:
Hello! I love new readers! The first two chapters were given to me by a friend, and I was to turn it around! Just wait and see what you think when you find lut all the facts!
Love that you took the time to review! Thank you soooo much!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 53 Blackmail
Jessica is a mess! She is just looking for a free ride. That is sad.
I am glad that Angela and Edward are such good friends. Hope to see more of her and Ben. Great job...thanks!!
Author's Response:
Angela seems like a breath of fresh air, doesn't she!
Date: 22 Aug 2011 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 53 Blackmail
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 22 Aug 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 53 Blackmail
fire her, sue her, get a restraining order, have her locked up in a loony bin lmao...
i still say you have the aminiotic fluid tested for DNA. it will give you the correct answers.
Author's Response:
Testing the fluid is a good idea, though Jessica would never agree to it!