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Reviewer: ellabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 83 Babies

Dec. 21, 2012

I have just come to know your stories in Nov. 2012 at Fan Fiction and came to this site to continue with this story (which I am glad you have turned me onto).  Your writing makes me laugh, tear up, and aww. 

It is amazing with all you have going on in your life that you write and bring joy to your readers.  I know it has been awhile since you have written but please know you have followers who anxiously await you and appreciate your creativity and your time.

Wishing you and yours all the best in 2013!

Reviewer: distinctly_forbidden Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward

Im really loving this!

Just to let you know, you should proof read these chapters. You keep re-pasting content that has already been written.

 

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies

Okay, I just came over here from fanfiction, to read this story. There are more chapters here then the one in fanfiction. but its at the same place at the end. I joined this site just for your stories they are awesome. Thanks for not quiting ur story.

 

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies

Are you gona finish this story

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies

miss your story. good luck

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 83 Babies

Yes, Yes hanging in with great anticipation.  Good luck with the new job and all... You will be great!!!!  thanks for the update especially given your busy and all,.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies

:)

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies

9/12?????????????/eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkkk  what will I do :P  No really we understand, I will be waiting on pins and needles for the next update :)  And Kick real life's butt back....I hope your new job gets easier!!!

Thank you for the update!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies

We are getting closer!!  WOOHOO

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies

you're back! it is all that matter! we understand you...as long as we have updates it;s just fine!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies

I hope Charlie is going to be okay.  Edward needs to tell Bella when she wakes up.  He needs to keep the promise they make to each other.  She can handle it.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies

great chapter!

congrats on the job even if it is hard... but RL always comes first.... I am trying to get a job now too... but haven't had any luck yet :(

Excited to see more next week!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward

Loved it!!! Thank you for the update!!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 81 Babies

Yah!!!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward

:)dubbel the fun



Author's Response:

YESE yes YES, YOU ACTUALLY WROTE SOMETHING!  i'M SOOOOO FRIGGIN EXCITED, RELLY.  nOT MAKING FUN OR ANYTHING!

tHANK YOU!!!!!!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 81 Babies

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 80 Ice Cream

:)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward

Thanks for the update/delivery of the twins, yeah.

Good luck at your new job, hope you have some fun, training can be very trying.

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward

awwwwwwwww! anyway, goodluck on your training and the new job! leaving us a cliffy! I am so anxious to know what happened to Charlie and....you'll be out for 4 days! 

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward

hmm hope charlie is alright!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward

Thank you for updating again before you left.  I am so glad the babies are here and are okay.  I am really worried about Charlie.  He has to be okay!  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

I couldn't leave you hanging about the babies!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 81 Babies

I can't wait for the babies!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 81 Babies

yay for babies! :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 80 Ice Cream

yay! for babies... but still hoping that Charlie is ok :)

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 80 Ice Cream

those two together are so damn cute.

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 80 Ice Cream

CAN NOT WAIT!!!!!!!   Thank you for updating!!!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 79 Nursery

Sweet!!!!! Thank you for the update!!!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 80 Ice Cream

Yeah, oh no though, Charlie's hurt somewhere, I hope he'll get to see the little ones.

Thanks for the update;D)

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 78 Toy

LOVE it!!!!! Thank you for the update!!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 80 Ice Cream

They are so cute together. I can't wait for the babies!!! Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Babies, coming up!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 79 Nursery

:)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 79 Nursery

Awe, thanks

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 78 Toy

Awe, hang in there, what's that saying tomorrows just another day. Hopefully better than the last?

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 79 Nursery

Nursery all ready then! When are the boys coming?

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 77 Tyler

oh no!!! Poor Charlie...hope he's okay...

 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 79 Nursery

Great chapter.... hopefully someone will realize something happened to Charlie soon :)

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 79 Nursery

Very sweet!  I love that Bella has Esme.  I have to say I am really worried about Charlie though.  Great chapter...thanks!!!

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 78 Toy

Bella horny as ever! the babies coming? Wonder what happened to Charlie?

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 77 Tyler

well, it seems that Lee is an accomplish to all that is happening! I have a feeling he is into that DA and the politician.

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 78 Toy

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 77 Tyler

:)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 78 Toy

With days like that, I find it better to just laugh... Some might think I have gone over the edge and lost it but it is always better than the alternative of crying or screaming...lol! Thanks for the update! ;~)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 78 Toy

Loved this chapter!

Hope your day gets better :)

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 78 Toy

I love these two. I hope Edward is right and this is just the babies getting ready to come. I don't want anything to happen to them or Bella. Great job...thanks!!! I hope your day gets better!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 78 Toy

Good luck with all that!  Where in Fl do you get to be?

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 77 Tyler

uh oh :(

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 77 Tyler

Oh no, not Charlie.  I hope he is going to be okay.  That stupid Lee guy needs to be fired!  I can't wait to see what is next.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 77 Tyler

Oh wow, poor Charlie, I hope he's okay & left a message somewhere of who he was trying to arrest.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks

;D)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 77 Tyler

Lee needs his ass fired! Starting to think he is working for Victoria and James!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks

no kidding so proud of you Mrs Isabella Cullen

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 75 Information

come on Mike fess up with any and all information   please!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 74 Private Eye

understand about RL and the tolls it can take.. take caee of you and know that this story is LOVED...  Yes at least they know that something smells in Denmark

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 73 Waiting

I hate moving...and spiders...  now for the review.... Damn I hope he remembers to tell Charlie about Tori

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 72 Plans

well I'll be that Bitch!!!! Tori!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 71Ups & Downs

smack smack  Office Lee   got that  hey officer are you friends with Tyler or something???

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 70 Loosing

poor Edward continually having to defend himself...  Listen up!!! Hear my words, his wife believes him loves him and totally 100% trusts and has faith in him   what would his motivation in hurting Jessica be   you silly nosey busy bodies !!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 69 Forced

yes I liked that he dropped something like that to Miss gossip monger

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 68 Evidence

wow!!!  let Edward save that baby 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 67 Duty

I am so glad that my opinion last chapter was just confirmed once morenwith this one.. he is a caring dr for his patients that have no voice, and the mother is the incubator for that patient.. you don't getnthe sense he doesn't care what happened to Jessica because he clearly does but at the same time its mot like he has feelimgs for her like he does for his wife..  Charlie is a honest person who will be impartial and honest...  loved the way he addressed those gossips at the hospital  he's right they should know of his compassion for hs patients at this point...

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 66 Questions

well honestly I think his reactions are logical!!!  Meaning that he isn't emotionally connected to her she has after all lied about him over and over... on top of that he has tried to show compassion because of her unborn child and each time it bites him in the butt!!!!  Edward is a compassionate doctor that doesn't mean tht he should be overly emotional about someone that he knows thats neen hurt.. make sense??!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 65 Happenings

Edward teuly is a compassionate doctor, wno just adores his wife love, the trust these two have in one another!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 48 Life

Yes, Esme is wonderful and thankfully they have her!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 47 Strange

I love Nurse Cope

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 46 Back to Work

gosh Jane catch a grouchy pill or two with your morning cherrio's????  something doesn't look good here 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 45 Back Home

love this story

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 63 No Doubt

Hell yeah!!!  we alllll  need a Edward, but lets not forget that Only Bella makes him this way.. they complete each other....

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 62 Uncertain Actions

Love these sex starved newlyweds..... they do have 5 yrs to make upnfor after all

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 61 Intentions

I hope you have some painful and horrific planned for Tyler

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 60 Advice

Bella is a great partner for Edward, so sad that Jessica couldn't find that in her life along the way

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 59 Confrontation

jealousy is a horrible thing... sad sad sad Jessica

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 58 No Contact

you kinda have to feel sad for Jessica even tjough you know that something horrible and a forboding is being felt...

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 57 Explain

continuation of loving Charlie!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 56 July 4th

love that Charlie finally saw the light

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 55 Rough

tyler is horrible... so that time that both Bella and Edward were in Hawaii  Tyler had beat up Jessica and that's why she wasn't there either... I seeeee!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 54 Obnoxious

feel sad for Jessica' not to say thst she couldn't make a better life for herself and her baby but she is looking for the quick get rich scheme!!! 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 53 Blackmail

Jessica what on earth girlie   sad she has so little pride... truly truly sad...

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 52 Toy?

yes yes  we all could use a needy Edward!!! that's for sure

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 51 Somewhere in a bar . . .

tyler is horrible  but love this story

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 50 Shopping

such a wonderful story

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 49 Lawyers

love this story

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 64 Bonus

holy hell that was hot... okay I read some of the chapters on my android and couldn't review, but promise to go back and review those chapters...

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks

I loce a fierce Esme! Glad you put her back to the picture!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 75 Information

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 74 Private Eye

:)

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks

YOU GO BELLA! WOOT WOOOT!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 73 Waiting

:)

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks

Way to go Bella.  I love how she set everyone straight.  I wish they would listen already.  I also love how Esme let Edward have it.  Always trying to keep her boy in line.  Great job...thanks!!!  

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 43 Jessica (V)

time for work no more reading today!!!  read the rest after work tonight!~   Hum what is Jessica up to!!! 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 42 Trust (V)

I guessed right at the end of the last chapter!!!!  Yea!!!!  Oh Shit Jessica!  What the Hell!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 41 Angela (V)

she will trust him!!! I know she will!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 40 Checking In (V)

Oh shit, I don't like bad surprises!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 39 Surprise (V)

Yea!!! to all that!!!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 38 Family (V)

Dang!  Can't they get some nooky before being swallowed by all the family love~~~~  LOL!!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 37 I Want to See You (V)

Yes, of course he liked that idea... he's a smart husband that has just discovered another talent his wonderful wife possess....

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 36 New (V)

Yes, Yes, I think she likes what she sees,,,,,

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 35 Renee & Charlie (V)

I can see Charlie's side too, but he did know that Edward had searched for Bella, high and low, so for him to think that Edward left Bella well that was silly on his part....

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 34 Esme (V)

yay

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