Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:27 AM Title: Blurry (by Nikteche)
Like how the date is going so far :)
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:18 AM Title: Out of Focus (by Nikteche)
Like this one :) I think E is so romantic for doing that for her!!
<3
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:07 AM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
I like it so far, and can't wait to see where it goes :)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 1:14 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
You never fail to delight with your original plot lines. I love this epilogue with a glimpse into the more distant future!
Can't wait to start another story of yours.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 9:18 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Oh man ... I cried at this last chapter. What a wonderful story! I simply adore romance stories. Thank you so much!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 9:07 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Wonderful Story!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 6:35 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
the long island house is the house edward lived in with his parents yes? wow bela and edward have had a good life together and their love for each eachother is very much in evidence i will admit to wet eyes when the children snapped bella from her daze after charlies & sues death with baby name ideas that was very special kids have a sixth sence about that stuff, the children went all out for that party with some wonderful ideas the slide show was fab, both edward & bella have had very succesful careers topping that they had three very healthy happy children who have gone on to live well and have happy lives with families of their own, that i think at the end of the day is all we strive for as parents, first and formost we wish our children love and happiness in the big wide world and just hope we have equiped them with the compassion and skills they will need to live happy productive lives, so we come to the end of this most wonderful tale and thankyou for writing it, i have enjoyed it such a lot and happy writing in your future projects best wishes tracy
Author's Response:
Yes...the Long Island house had belonged to his parents and Esme kept it for him. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for taking the time to leave all of the wonderful reviews
Date: 22 Feb 2010 5:38 PM Title: Angelic Phantom
oh how suitably wonderful and extremely beautiful their wedding was, everybody they love was there to wish them well, i adore the cullen crest idea, nice touch at the end doing an esme pov as she was the one who raised edward from the age of ten and it shows just how much her and carlisle love edward and now bella,
i'm off to check out the photos like you say you paid for premium service so make the most of it
Date: 22 Feb 2010 5:31 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
excellent story.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 5:07 PM Title: Montage
well they certainly shut down that gossip machine, poor bella having to deal with all the crap from his past no wonder she went to bed and cried all night it probably reminds her way too much of when they first get together and she lacks the confidence to believe she's good enough, but give edward his due he is working to make her feel better about the whole situation and to reasure bella of his complete devotion
oh just realised this only has a couple of chapters left to go i always get a bit sad when stories i have really enjoyed and loved wrap up, although i appreiciate these things have a natural close and you fab authors are always bubbling with the next idea so giving us something to look forward too,
Date: 22 Feb 2010 4:16 PM Title: Los Angeles Edward Style
well i for one am liking this nc17 thing you do, edwards heartfelt declarations to bella at the end were really very sincere makes me wish i wasnt still single but then i have to remember this is fiction and blokes like that dont exist, very nice chapter thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks oh. Glad you liked it. Yeah, I defintely feed the prince charming fantasy with my stories. LOL!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:59 PM Title: Aerial Perspective
oh edward i was wondering when that modelizer and now acctressizer past would pop up again to bite you, i like the stephan & damon refrences that show arrived in england a few weeks back and it went down well in our house and yes it helps that the boys are easy on then eye but as my teenage daughters remind me you cant beat twilight
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:04 PM Title: Subordinate Object
how crazy is all that hollywood glamour? but now her edward is there to make it all better, busy chapter but fab at that, love how you changed the actors around and got bella asking for twilight characters autographs
Date: 22 Feb 2010 12:33 PM Title: Conflicting Shadows
oh superb, a bidding war between bella and carlisle just to keep the piece in the family, and how surprised will bella be tomorrow when edward turns up, i sense a reunion lemon in the offing (hoping anyway)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 11:33 AM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
thank u
Date: 22 Feb 2010 10:51 AM Title: Contrast
wow this just gets better and better, bella is filled with so much confidence through her relationship with edward she can easily agree to showcase the photos what a difference to the bella we got to know at the begining of the story, she believes in the power of love and all this makes edward love her more, superb chapter
Date: 22 Feb 2010 12:16 AM Title: Complimentary Colors
:)
Date: 21 Feb 2010 10:19 PM Title: Observational Distortion
;)
Date: 21 Feb 2010 10:17 PM Title: The Perfect Background
in the meadow, near the lake, in the spring just perfect, loved the ending scene with the chanting very funny
Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:13 PM Title: Infinity
yeah!!!! LOVE this story!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad :)
Date: 21 Feb 2010 8:45 AM Title: Infinity
miracle whip is that a dessert? powder and you whip in milk let it set in the fridge and feed it to kids with sprinkles on top? it cant be can it? if yes i cant work out how that goes in stirfry lol so bella said yes yippee they saw the new year in in style! and yeah still lovin this upped rating
Author's Response:
It's actually a condiment much like mayo, except with more of a tangy zip. I'm not sure how to explain it exactly, but we use it instead of mayo on all of our sandwiches in this house. Does that help? :)
Date: 21 Feb 2010 7:21 AM Title: Ambient Light
i actually like rennee twin flames analogy for love, well i think charlie managed to surprise his daughter totally in a good way, and now bellas got the heads up about edwards proposal at least it gives her a chance to sort out any negative feelings towards marriage before he askes her
Date: 21 Feb 2010 7:03 AM Title: Diffuser
well i like rennee she might be a bit wacky but she's very in tune with whats happening between bella and edward, bella's book idea was an excellent and thoughtful gift those sorts are the best kind i always think, as for tofu turkey no thanks, had to giggle at the end with edward and his shotgun images
Date: 21 Feb 2010 6:40 AM Title: Negative
oh yeah i love the rating as well nice lemon, very nice, so they just couldn't stay away from each other, must be love lol
bty dont worry about the review thing we're all on limited time and having to prioritise our time, i'm more than happy that new chapters wins out over replies especially as you produce stunning ones at that,
Date: 21 Feb 2010 6:31 AM Title: Ambient Light
Gotta just love protective Charlie! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 6:30 AM Title: Infinity
Thanks for all the updates today. I can't wait to read more...
Author's Response:
glad you enjoyed!
Date: 21 Feb 2010 6:24 AM Title: Dominant Object
fantastic news for bella, turning her book into a movie on top of the fabulous day she had with the family, if this deal comes off it will put bella more in line with edward? (not sure those are the right words) before she felt out of sorts with him thinking they came from different worlds but i dont think she feels that so much now , and the ring i wonder when he'll pop the question?
i looked at the list that is so cool, i notice you are too in two catagories no less, good on you!!
Date: 21 Feb 2010 6:17 AM Title: Infinity
Um... Recipe, please!
:)
Author's Response:
I will post it in the end notes in a few minutes for you and anyone else who might want to try it. I'm going to have to figure out the amounts though because I've been cooking it so long that I don't follow one anymore...I go by sight and taste ;) LOL
Date: 21 Feb 2010 5:53 AM Title: Close Up
some strong emotions here from both bella and edward especially as they spend the night together and wake up together for the first time and move their relationship on to include sex, thanksgiving was a great day and the girls running in i thought was funny kids do that all the time, i think bella was a bit stunned that edward would give up xmas with his family to spend it with her especially as she does not paint a very posi9tive picture of that holiday, just goes to show how much he cares, bella is accepted by al the family, great chapter
Date: 21 Feb 2010 5:23 AM Title: Diffuser
Okay, so I had to laugh at the mention of the tofuturkey as my diehard vegetarian sister talked my ever loving meat and potatoes husband into trying some this past Thanksgiving. The poor man was so kind to keep his comments to himself and not complain once. Well, not until we got home and then I was sure to hear that he will never in his life try that again. LOL
Thanks for the update! Off to read more.
Author's Response:
LOL...that's a great story. Thanks for sharing. i've never had it myself, and I have no intention of it either! Ugh! I HATE tofu! I think it's the texture that kills me more than anything.
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:45 AM Title: Infinity
Just two comments. First a few chapters back you said they were coming home on the 29th, so New Year's eve wouldn't be the very next day. Also, Sky Harbor airport is in Phoenix, Arizona not Jacksonville, Florida. I was a little confused. I do love your story though.
Author's Response:
I thought I caught all of those errors...sorry. I had goofed when I originally wrote it and they spent the week in Phoenix...LOL. I handn't caught the date thing either...so thanks for pointing that out.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:45 AM Title: Dominant Object
Thanks for the update. :)
Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:31 AM Title: Close Up
Thanks so much for the updates. It is so nice to see how close the family is. As well as how much Edward wants to spend Christmas with Bella no matter where she is.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed them! Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:05 AM Title: Backlighting (Collaboration)
:)
Date: 21 Feb 2010 3:53 AM Title: Blurry (by Nikteche)
:)
Date: 21 Feb 2010 3:44 AM Title: Out of Focus (by Nikteche)
:)
Date: 21 Feb 2010 3:31 AM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
:)
Date: 21 Feb 2010 12:15 AM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
Again, a story I probably not read except you wrote it, so I had to take a look. Your writing blows me away. Not as much angst and drama as FDKK, but what a nice clean story. Really curious to see where you are going to take it now that they are completely together. Knowing you, it will be somewhere interesting with citrusy scents along the way. Keep it coming but don't forget about those flyboys!
Author's Response:
Wow...thank you so much. I'm so pleased you liked it. Never fear, this story is actually already completed and so I'm just slowly moving it over since I have to do quite a bit of editing to combine the outtakes with the original story and fix a few of my errors that I keep finding along the way. MOst of my writing time is now dedicated to both Flyboy and also another story that I've been working on slowly on the side...another period piece with Royals and Arranged marriages. At any rate, never fear....I'm still hard at work!
Date: 20 Feb 2010 7:54 PM Title: Fixation
OMG!! I love this story!! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you've enjoyed it and I hope you like the rest!
Date: 20 Feb 2010 3:17 PM Title: Fixation
dry mouth here. Love this story.
Date: 20 Feb 2010 7:20 AM Title: Fixation
oh an historical story i have never read one like that, so ill be on the look out for it (wont be hard you are listed as fav author) i swear i dont know how you find the time to write such fantastic stories i have to give up so much time to read ( honestly its not hard household jobs v reading twilight fanfiction no contest reading wins) but seriously i applaud you doing what you do, so happy writing
that was incredibility erotic and beautiful at the same time they have a special connection with eachother, i'm so pleased edward likens the experience to how he thinks his aunt & uncle and rose & emmett feel for eachother and that he recgonises he's had sex before but never been this in tune with anyone before, lucky bella
Author's Response:
Yeah, it totally eats up all my spare time and leads to sleep mornings when I get wrapped up and don't get to bed until far later than I should, but I really do love it. It keeps me sane :) I'm really bad about letting the house go to write and read as well...it's horrible, but that's just how it goes. LOL!
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks again for all of the reviews...btw...did you know you have made the most prolific reviewers list?
Date: 20 Feb 2010 5:37 AM Title: Sharpness
how lucky is bella going to be if ms johnson buys her book also loving the upping of the octane, more please
Date: 20 Feb 2010 2:58 AM Title: Fogging
fab chapter as we get to see declarations of love on both sides, and they chose a beautiful setting to do so, edward completly opens up about his childhood to bella and something tells me thats the first time he has opened his heart to somebody flourishing in the memories of his parents, this only serves to strengthen the bond between edward and bella, more please
Date: 19 Feb 2010 9:00 PM Title: Candid
oh my god you made quill and jacob gay that is hilarious, well edward and bella are sure close, now anybody who is prepared to dress up as a 70's reject deserves full on privaliges for the other party, they are both getting dangerously close to a full on evening of love (if you catch my drift) look forward to the reason this fic was upgraded to a nc17 nudge nudge
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed that. That move was a big hit with reviewers! LOL! I did an oppsie first time I uploaded, so I hope I got it fixed before I confused you...If not...the EPOV lemon belonged at the end@!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 8:46 PM Title: Fixation
Thanks for the update.
Umm, I think when you updated this chapter it copied the lemon and posted it twice in one chapter. Once at the beginning (when they went to rest before dinner) and once at the end, after dinner. ;)
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Whoops...thanks....I'm not sure how that happened but I fixed it now. Sorry about that...the dangers of trying to copy and paste stuff from two sources :(
Date: 19 Feb 2010 7:28 PM Title: Sharpness
Wow, sounds like they are going to have their hands full soon.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 7:14 PM Title: Fogging
What a full day for them. Sounds like he needed it. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 6:45 PM Title: Candid
Poor guy...I half expected for him to at least stay the night even if they weren't going to do anything past making out.
Too funny that she took a pic and sent it to Emmett.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:53 AM Title: Vignetting
So very poignant, her feelings of inadequacy versus his painful childhood losses. Very lovely chapter. Thank you.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:33 AM Title: Additive Color
Cute outing . Funny Emmett has all girls! You must be a parent!! Good chapter.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:16 AM Title: Flash Fill
Loved her description of the kissing. Alice on Red Bull, what an apt description of kids on a sugar binge! Thank you!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:04 AM Title: Complimentary Colors
Enchanting, beautifully written awareness of their mutual import. And, from an art minor, it's "complementary colors".
Date: 19 Feb 2010 4:43 AM Title: Shutter Lag
Liquor is quicker....and then he "hallucinates". Poor Photogward and Musebella! Another satisfying chapter.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 4:33 AM Title: More Latent Images
*lightbulb over Bella's head* Finally!
Thanks for another superb chapter.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 4:08 AM Title: Latent Image
Yeah, if I'd heard it that way, I'd have run screaming to the nearest police station to begin the process of stalking charges! Don't blame her a bit for bolting. Very nicely written.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 3:55 AM Title: Shadows
"Lovesick lunatic". Brilliant description. But who else has had a burst of creativity? Fine chapter, love that EPOV !
Author's Response:
LOl...I really enjoyed writing that chapter! Thanks!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 3:46 AM Title: Illumination
Alice IS funny - sometimes! Proud of Bella for calling him. Good chapter!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 3:14 AM Title: Vignetting
ok how perfect was that date, except for edward little verbal slip up in the car all was well, they had beautiful time and thankgoodness no ex's popped up, and i think bella is a bit more ok with her position in edwards life she feels less insecure now? fab chapter
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you've enjoyed it so far. To answer your last review...there will be a couple more bumps along the way, but nothing earth shattering :) I took a break from editing to work on another story I have brewing in my head. I haven't written any new chapters in days and couldnt' resist when the inspiration hit to get some more chapters in. It's 17th centruy Edward and Bella facing an arranged marriage to one another. Hopefully it turns out good. I've had so much going on that I've slowly been saving up chapters so when I post I'll have a bit of an archive built up. I'm up to chapter 5. Anyway, back to writing. Take care and thanks again for the great reviews!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 3:06 AM Title: Observational Distortion
Nice progression of the relationship. The handshake angst was funny as hell. She could have kissed him on the cheek !
Date: 19 Feb 2010 2:57 AM Title: Definitive Beauty
Ah, so romantic. Love the EPOV! Thanks!
Author's Response:
LOL...I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I hope you like the rest. I took an editing break to write some new stuff on a story I'm working up to post before long. I needed a break from editing. :) thanks for the reviews!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 2:51 AM Title: Overexposure
"Danger!" Very funny but realistic. Two exes in as many dates? Could they be each other's muses...hmm. Thank you for a readable, entertaining chapter.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 2:49 AM Title: Additive Color
i think over all it was a good day a few hichups but the girls seemed to like bella most kids can play tricks and be a bit rude even with people they know and love (my kids have me before now), and bellas falling in love so have you planted any rocks at the bottom there? lol, great chapter
Date: 19 Feb 2010 2:34 AM Title: Composition
Writer's block! Don't we ALL know something about that? I liked the bodywash "armory". I like her doubts. Nice chapter.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 2:26 AM Title: Flash Fill
i'm lovin this emmett such wit, makes me giggle as i read what he has to say, the kiss wow! how that made her feel something special is definately there between them, i like how edward vows to make bella see how special she is, moving on for fun at the farm with the every sweet cullen girls
Date: 19 Feb 2010 2:25 AM Title: Focal Point
Interesting, well-written and very entertaining. Thank you!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 2:11 AM Title: Backlighting (Collaboration)
Great EPOV. Provocative.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 2:04 AM Title: Complimentary Colors
wow some strong emotions from edward, but i suspose he has been building to this point for a few years where as to bella it's all so very new, patience may be needed for edward so bella can catch up as it were, edward was needy and afraid of bella leaving again so i think he's just as nervous as her about being together even though he wants her so much
Date: 19 Feb 2010 2:04 AM Title: Blurry (by Nikteche)
Jealousy! Tanya, always a great foil.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 1:58 AM Title: Out of Focus (by Nikteche)
Uh-oh. If I were Bella, I'd dump the pixie and live alone! Amusing attraction, despite herself.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 1:52 AM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
Cuter than hell hath no fury than a woman feeling violated!
Date: 19 Feb 2010 1:37 AM Title: Shutter Lag
that wasn't to painful, at least she got to him before he was too drunk to make any sense, and so in tune they are she was planning on saying the exact thing he daydreamed of her saying, like you say more in the morning, another fab chapter
Date: 19 Feb 2010 1:18 AM Title: More Latent Images
good old alice pointing out the obvious, bella is finding all this harder to believe more to do with how she feels about herself she dosen't describe herself in a very positive light even though she is a very strong peson, lets hope edward is home
Date: 19 Feb 2010 1:08 AM Title: Latent Image
a bit of a shock i'll say, she just learns that the man she was begining to fall for has been dreaming of her for years and spent a good chunk of that time looking for her in crowds, but before that they were having a good time and they do get on well, maybe alice will have some words of wisdom for her, fab chapter
Date: 18 Feb 2010 11:47 PM Title: Backlighting (Collaboration)
Love this story ! Wonderfully written. Please,update soon !
Date: 18 Feb 2010 11:41 PM Title: Vignetting
Aw what a lovely date night. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 10:00 PM Title: Additive Color
Thanks for the quick updates. Had to laugh at what Kennedy did with the animal food. A sure sign of being Emmetts kid. LOL
Author's Response:
LOl...you know it! Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review. I'm actually working on an update on one of my other WIP's right now since i haven't been able to write in about a week. I really needed a break from editing this one. I've found a ton of errors I missed originally. It's amazing what a little time away allows you to see that you havne't before.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 7:44 PM Title: Additive Color
Such a sweet day!! Can't wait for the date!! I hope he doesn't take her somewhere too snooty-- he should realize that she won't be impressed- just uncomfortable. Plus, I don't think we want to run into any of his previous conquests on this date-- I mean, you've heard the phrase "Three strikes, and you're out!! Right??
Author's Response:
i guess you'll see :) I'm glad you seem to be enjoying it!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:08 PM Title: Shadows
well i wonder if bella will be receptive to the news that she is acting as edwards muse? and hasn't edward done a complete 180 let's see where it all leads
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:52 PM Title: Illumination
oh now i see why her two ex's were losers lol, and bella is now pushing for more dates ohhh, that alice sure does dispence good advice i hope her and jasper make up also that way bella keeps her evening free to see edward, fab stuff
Author's Response:
Fair warning...you know I write rollercoaster rides :) The one here is a bit smaller, but still a rollercoaster
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:39 PM Title: Observational Distortion
loving the internal monalogues, and their chat on the phone lasted an hour i love the way he describes her in the photo, so they had lots to chat about then, and another date on monday cue entry of karma and another ex lol , bella is being sensible in her decisions well see if her resolve lasts, fab chapter
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:22 PM Title: Definitive Beauty
how romantic, that note was sweet i'm sure bella will be pleased with that, with his ex's it sounds like he dated them for convenience and sex and by wooing bella he's trying to prove he can be different, but you know what karma is a cold hearted b***h at times so we'll see if edwards pop up further to bit him on the arse
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:03 PM Title: Overexposure
ok so the date was good till another reject from his modelizer days pops up, hey i take it those are behind him now he's dating bella, i know they agreed to go slow and think this is a good start cause think that bella quite likes edward bt is scared of getting her fingers burned, great chapter reading on
Date: 18 Feb 2010 4:34 PM Title: Composition
another date so soon good or not so good? we'll have to wait and see i'm thinking more good as he seems quite smitten does the handsome mr mason, loving all the different scents bella uses and their different meanings, more please
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 18 Feb 2010 1:25 PM Title: Flash Fill
Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you are enjoying it!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 10:29 AM Title: Focal Point
so who was the mysterious person who made them miss the dinner reservations? but i think that may have worked in their favour as they seemed to have a really good evening together just hanging out, more please
Author's Response:
Thankfully I've gotten enough chapters posted to answer the bulk of your questions :) Thanks so much for the great reviews! It wasn't as hard to take over as I though, but mainly because she hadn't really thought out the plot beyond the beginning concept, so I got to weave it myself from there. I sent her a message when I completed it saying it probably turned out far differently than she had intended, but I hoped she liked it. She said that while yes it was far different than what she had planned, that she liked the end result.
I'm sort of glad we didn't collab. I think that would be really hard for me. I've got my own ideas and my own way I write and it would be hard to reconcile that with someone else! At any rate, thanks again for all the fantastic reviews! I really appreciate them all!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 10:07 AM Title: Backlighting (Collaboration)
ohhh why is bella the reason he doesn't photograph brunettes? and this chapter is much more descriptive and describes emotions much more liking it, liking it lots,