[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2011 12:46 AM Title: Negative
hea in sight
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 10:36 PM Title: Fixation
I can't believe she doesn't swallow? Most men would not agree that it doesn't matter. It was a good chapter none the less
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 7:46 PM Title: Fogging
they are just so sweet
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 7:27 PM Title: Candid
some lemons please, 3 of us are getting too hot and bothered
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 4:59 PM Title: Complimentary Colors
wow this is just really turning into a great story. I am enjoying your character development.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:23 PM Title: Latent Image
I would love to be HIS muse
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:42 AM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
great beginning
Date: 11 Dec 2010 1:16 AM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Wow! Just speechless!!! So wonderful! I am a fan of Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights and didn't know what to think of this one, so it took me awhile to get into wanting to read it. I must say this was awh inspiring. The detail you put into making you be able to see in your mind the photographs he took of Bella were just incredible. Like his showpiece for the "Heavenly Muse" you really could see the exquiste picture in your mind.
Well just many details you brought to life in this story, thank you for that and thank you for sharing your wonderful talents with us.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:17 PM Title: Composition
I do the same thing with scents! I have happy, confidence-boosting, calming, and make-me-happy scents!
Date: 14 Oct 2010 3:52 AM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Wonderful story !!!! Beautifully written, love the details, and the flow of story line !!
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:29 AM Title: Candid
gotta love a story with a gay Jacob !!!!!!
Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:16 AM Title: Definitive Beauty
wow, love this story so far !!!!
Date: 22 Sep 2010 4:17 AM Title: Overexposure
its going to be interesting to c edward get jealous
Date: 16 Aug 2010 7:37 PM Title: Observational Distortion
Argh! I really dislike Fatalistic, self-conscience, self-depricating, compliment seeking Bella. So very irritating. Sorry, can't help it. BUT I do love this story so far. Let's hope she grows out of it quickly!
Date: 10 Aug 2010 12:53 AM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
Good first chapter.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:51 AM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Good Job..
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:20 AM Title: Aerial Perspective
I know you finished this sometime ago. But, I have enjoyed the ride. You write well. Your story progresses. The characters are like real people. Bathroom breaks, anger but then forgiveness. Bella is strong and yet still Bella. Some of these have her in such a state she needs to be commited.
Thank you,
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2010 11:30 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
I really enjoyed reading this story thank you so much for sharing it with us all. It is and was truely amazing and well written and worth the read! Thank you!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 5:00 AM Title: Complimentary Colors
I love it!!!! I am so happy for them. :) I love the pictures of Central Park. I have been there once and I LOVED IT!!!! I am trying to convince my husband to go back with me on a family vacation. ::Crosses fingers:: I could really live near Central Park. Again beautiful pictures.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 3:48 PM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
SO far so good. :) I will be keep reading for now. :)
Date: 07 Jul 2010 8:57 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Wow! I loved this story! Thanks so much for the great writing. I can't wait to read more of your talented work! :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2010 3:06 AM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Nice story! I really enjoyed the epi. It's not often that we get to see their children as adults and their grandkids too. It's a great way to set your story apart from the others.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2010 2:42 AM Title: Angelic Phantom
Beautiful wedding! Thanks for all the photos - tho Rob in a tux was missing. ; )
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2010 12:36 AM Title: Montage
If only entertainment TV shows would actually devote so much time to "setting the record straight."
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 11:15 PM Title: Aerial Perspective
The whole Jane run-in would have been more believable if Bella hid in the hotel room bathroom for awhile to think through her feelings. She seemed to get over it quite quickly, which is so unlike her. I also think she should have gotten his list of Hollywood conquests then because you never know WHO they might run into when they go out to dinner.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 9:57 PM Title: Subordinate Object
Oops! You used Kellan's name in one paragraph toward the end of that scene.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 7:49 AM Title: Conflicting Shadows
You set up an imaginative selling situation in this chapter. I suspected one of the parties, but not the other.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 2:09 AM Title: Infinity
~ Sigh ~ Such a nice evening complete with proposal and quad-nooky. Thanks for the recipe too!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 7:00 AM Title: Diffuser
I love that Edward is a chef in your story so he could actually help with Xmas dinner.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:22 AM Title: Composition
The story's improved with the new author. Much cleaner writing.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 2:30 AM Title: Backlighting (Collaboration)
I like the EPOV.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 2:05 AM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
Hmmm, it's a little rough, but I'll read more and give it a chance.
Author's Response:
Yeah...the first three chapter or so were written by someone else. Read A/N's to see when I take over...
Date: 28 Jun 2010 6:19 PM Title: Composition
LOL - Are we regretting the Sandra Bullock / Jesse James comparision now? :D
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:12 AM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
What a wonderful story. I laughed and cried a bit at the last chapter. Great wrap up. Always enjoy what you write. Thank you for sharing. Meg
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2010 1:31 AM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
I absolutely loved this story! You did a wonderful job picking it up and loved the ending!
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 10:56 PM Title: Focal Point
How old is everyone?
Author's Response:
Oh man. It's been a while since I thought about the logistics. Bella is pretty much fresh out of college for about a year, so she was supposed to be around 24 and Edward is only four years older at 28. Since I wasn't the original author, I had to sort that out after the fact, which made things a little difficult. Hopefully that helps.
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 10:28 PM Title: Backlighting (Collaboration)
I really like EPOVS. :)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 10:04 PM Title: Out of Focus (by Nikteche)
I love this! Great storylone so far!
Date: 03 May 2010 12:38 AM Title: Vignetting
this story so far is awsome, but wanted to point out one thing, if she is allergic to shelfish she cant have shrimp. I have a shelfish allergy and that will kill me if I eat it.
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 5:02 AM Title: Candid
First off...love your writing!
When I first saw this story, I had a difficult time "connecting" with it. Somehow (no offense to the 1st author), it wasn't capturing my interest. When I saw that you had taken over, I decided to give it another chance and by the time your writing completely took over, I was hooked.
Thank you for this; I'm only into the 1st half but I am looking forward to reading the rest and not have to wait for updates as it's complete!! YAAAYYY!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:31 AM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
This story has already gained my interest... at first I wasnt so sure about reading it but I can already tell that i am going to like it!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 12:03 AM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
funnyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:36 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
i just wish that you told belly welly preggy months to her 3 kids..or you could put it in a sequel to this story..
the downfall of the story is they're time for each other and balancing parenthood..
Date: 03 Apr 2010 2:01 PM Title: Aerial Perspective
ugh come on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
jane??????? are you crazy??????????
thats just disgusting!!!!
pleh!
>:l
Date: 02 Apr 2010 1:07 PM Title: Sharpness
why does it say JOHNSON??????
SHOULDN'T BE PITT OR JOLIE?????
Author's Response:
TWCS rule...you're not supposed to use real actors, even if they do a guest spot in an AU, so I changed the last names...but you so know who they are. I also have Jackson and Kellan later as Jameson and Kaden. As if the whole world doesn't know what I mean, but rules are rules.
Date: 01 Apr 2010 3:25 PM Title: Observational Distortion
oh come on..why did you put that edward slept w/ icky vicky?
come on why cant edward be a virgin or he believes for the special someone to give it?
Date: 26 Mar 2010 3:27 PM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
bien me gusta sludos
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 10:28 PM Title: Shutter Lag
He could have eased her into the idea of being his muse a little more slowly but then that would have been less dramatic. Glad the angst did not last too long.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:51 PM Title: Shadows
AH Ha the penny drops...
Date: 17 Mar 2010 10:16 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
loved this story, especially the epi!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:11 PM Title: Flash Fill
he he ... let's see the childs
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:24 AM Title: Overexposure
uff. i hate Tanya and Victoria...
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 9:41 AM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
wow... i like this man
Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:23 AM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Wonderful!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:13 AM Title: Angelic Phantom
I am glad you included the picture of the dresses and cake. Bella's dress is beautiful. It looks like an inverted calla lily.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:29 AM Title: Montage
I am so glad that Jane turned out to be a good person, and did not try to ruin everything by try to make it seem like it was something it wasn't . Poor Edward his past came back and bit him in the butt bad! He is lucky he has such an understanding fiancee.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:58 AM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Congratulations on such a wonderful story! The epilogue was one of the best I have ever read. It showed completion, spanned a great number of years, yet never was rushed nor forced.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for all of the reviews!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:38 AM Title: Angelic Phantom
Beautiful!! Simply beautiful!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:07 AM Title: Montage
Hollywood is a special place and the stupid vulture pap's make the poor people who entertain us crazy! Great depiction of the situation!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 12:14 PM Title: Los Angeles Edward Style
That was certainly the full on citruis cocktail! It was delightful, delicious and damned hot!!!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 11:45 AM Title: Aerial Perspective
Yes, Edward was being a single good looking guy in his past. Hard to fault him for that. Jane was a twit the way she jumped at him, but I dare say she was the one with egg on her face throwing herself at an engaged man. I would have been much more embarassed to be in her position than Bella's!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 11:20 AM Title: Subordinate Object
When writers add in 'real life' people it usually ends up awkward, and forced in my opinion. This did not at all!! I loved having the two guys in this capacity and it just fit so well. I am looking forward to this reunion!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 7:35 PM Title: Sharpness
That was so sweet of him, he is totally into her its not funny. I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop I hope it won't be to unpleasant if it does. I don't see him letting her get away from him lol!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 12:59 PM Title: Latent Image
Poor Edward I felt so bad for him, but I get why Bella took off. Its a lot for her to take in, I think she will be ok with it once she has a chance to think it through.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:06 AM Title: Conflicting Shadows
My favorite part of that chapter was definitely when Edward set Tanya straight. I never like her in any story, and you did a phenomenal job of making her as nasty and plastic. I was really surprised that Edward even allowed the pictures at the center of the collection to be sold originally. I thought he would only use them to show the collection. I am glad they were all on the same page to not allow that. He would have absolutely regretted that.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 10:17 PM Title: Contrast
Bella has certainly come a long way! From the girl who was embarassed to have Alice's painting sold to one who realizes although she is in a picture it is about something altogether different is huge for her!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:21 PM Title: The Perfect Background
I can literally feel the positive energy flowing out of that chapter! I can think of no more perfect location for a beautiful wedding!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:10 PM Title: Infinity
Great proposal and I want to see a picture of that dress! It sounds amazing!!! Is Edward going to tell Bella the significance of the ring?
Author's Response:
That particular dress was all in my imagination. Sorry...wish I did have a pic to share.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:11 PM Title: Ambient Light
The visit to Charlie's was great, but I cannot help but wonder what was up with Leah. Why was she so stand-offish? Maybe time will tell. It was probably good that Bella assumed Edward was thinking of proposing since she ran such an emotional rollercoaster following her discovery. Had she not done that, it could be a real disaster when the time does come!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 12:27 PM Title: Diffuser
I think Renee was one of the most unique and eccentric Renee's I have read. She was great, and I was completely astonished that she knew about the ring. I am sure Edward is wondering the same thing - did she go through his things or his she just all knowing?!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 12:00 PM Title: Negative
Sweet indeed! Even Alice was able to puch down her - well Alice- to send Bella to her happy place instead of her partner in bride wars!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 11:47 AM Title: Dominant Object
What a happy bubble they are in. I really hope nothing is going to pop it when they to back to 'real' life!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 2:54 AM Title: Close Up
What a wonderful storybook thanksgiving! Nice teaer at the end! Bella is ready for some serious down and dirty!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 12:01 AM Title: Fixation
Oh my goodness! That was beautiful and perfect for them! It was so great that they waited until they could make it as special as it deserved to be. Edwards last line left me a bit breathless!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 12:33 PM Title: Sharpness
I am looking forward to having her meet Esme & Carlisle! The way Edward glows simply to be around her is definitely going to warm their hearts!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 12:20 PM Title: Fogging
What a beautiful chapter! It was so tender and sweet and perfect! The emotions were palpable and I could feel the tiny cracks in Edward's heart healing.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:54 AM Title: Candid
I enjoyed that you did not do a cliche couple costume. Not the picks that I would have thought Alice would go for, and I like that she is also a bit different than usual while still being the Alice we all love. I also love that you made Jake gay thus tossing him right out as the unrequitted love who tries to interfere.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:08 AM Title: Vignetting
That was an incredibly perfect first date! WOW!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 3:08 AM Title: Additive Color
What a great day! I love that the girls gave her a hard time before deciding she was ok. I am looking forward to their date!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:43 AM Title: Flash Fill
They came full circle and fast! When they both decided to listen to their hearts things went from good to fantastic in seconds! Now they find themselves pulling out in a minivan playing family. It will be interesting to see how this goes.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:09 AM Title: Complimentary Colors
Oh my goodness! She did it! She did not chicken out like I feared. The passion in your words was really moving!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 12:47 AM Title: Shutter Lag
I really hope in the cold light of the morning, Bella doesn't chicken out and admits what Alice helped her realize too. I think slow is out the window at this point, so time will tell.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 10:31 PM Title: More Latent Images
You gotta love Alice! Please do not let Edward do anything stupid since he thinks all hope is lost!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 10:15 PM Title: Latent Image
Oh my goodness! Poor Edward! I understand that would be pretty overwhelmign to hear, so I am not mad at Bella, but to just run off! I have tears in my eyes!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 6:57 PM Title: Shadows
I think I just fell in love with your 'Edward the lovesick lunatic' a little more. I really hope Bella follows her inner romantic's lead when Edward spill his heart out to her. I wonder how she will feel to know her painting is amongst those that Edward loves.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 6:32 PM Title: Illumination
I wanted to hug Alice too! She now gets to go have some make up fun. ( I hope for her sake) I hope Bella is ready to listen to her heart, her inner romantic, and her best friend and go for it! The phone call is a start for sure!!! With three against one I think her pragmatic side might have to agree that it is for the best too!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 6:01 PM Title: Observational Distortion
Thankfully her subconsious is able to dial a phone! Her inner debate was quite dynamic. I was about to name the two ladies. I get the feeling her romantic side just might put her foot down and stick the pragmatic side's head under water for a bit!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 5:46 PM Title: Definitive Beauty
Edward has got it bad, and if that was cheesy it was also terribly romantic. Something tells me that if Bella is as artistic as I believe authors are, she will be melted cheese!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 5:30 PM Title: Overexposure
I think I am as sad as Edward that she wants to go so ultra slow. I am glad she took his hand because I think he was taking her 'friends' comment to heart!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 5:28 PM Title: Composition
Alice was awesome, and how hilarious is it that Bella has 'power' scents in her B & B collection!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 5:27 PM Title: Focal Point
I enjoy that Edward and Bella are learning and relating on an intellectual level first. The chemistry is there, but they are not allowing it to take over before they are ready for it.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 4:54 PM Title: Backlighting (Collaboration)
I am new to this sight thanks to ff running off so many good stories. I felt wierd reviewing the first three chapters since they were not yours, but I definitely think you did an excellent job of taiking over, changing to your style without making a glaring switch. I really am enjoying this story and I love anyone who immediatley puts Tanya out of the competition for Edward's affections.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 9:38 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Beautiful ending to a wonderful story. I've enjoyed every single chapter. (especially the ones where you took over). This had me it tears, but that's good because I was so happy for your characters and touched by the love they still had for one another and their families and friends. Great job! I'm going to going to be sure to read all your stories because I really like your writing. :0)
Date: 07 Mar 2010 4:51 AM Title: Angelic Phantom
Beautiful wedding. I cried when Charlie talked about giving away his little girl. Girls with their daddy's choke me up. :0) Wish it was a real wedding so I could see the pics. haha
Date: 07 Mar 2010 3:33 AM Title: Montage
If I were Bella I wouldn't sell that studio the rites to the next book. If she does I'd make them really pay for it. :0) Glad that whole mess got staightened out. :0)
Date: 07 Mar 2010 1:35 AM Title: Los Angeles Edward Style
California dream'n.... :0)
Date: 07 Mar 2010 12:44 AM Title: Aerial Perspective
Wonder if Edward can even remember all the women he's been with? :0) Bella may not want that list... glad Bella didn't stay mad at him. :0)