Date: 14 Nov 2022 12:48 PM Title: Out of Focus (by Nikteche)
did not play real hard tp get
Date: 11 Apr 2017 4:15 AM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
Geez can we say bitcherella!
Date: 13 Jul 2016 1:17 AM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
thank you so much for picking this story up and finising it for us ;) i'm so glad that edward kept his last name masen ;) althought in one chapter early on bella mentioned edward as cullen ;) it was a shame you killed off charlie and sue but it fit with their naming thier 3rd child ;D
Date: 13 Oct 2015 9:09 AM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Absolutely the most perfect wrap-up to a very wonderful love story! I laughed, I cried a bit and loved it all!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 8:39 AM Title: Angelic Phantom
Fabulous, fabulous wedding! You couldn't have made it any more romantic!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 8:04 AM Title: Montage
What an ugly experience to have to live through! At least some good came from it, Jane ridding herself of representation who cared nothing for her!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 1:22 AM Title: Los Angeles Edward Style
She really staked her claim and made her mark, so to speak!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 1:00 AM Title: Aerial Perspective
It was a possiblr bump in the road, but actually turned out great!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 12:31 AM Title: Subordinate Object
Bella is really having to fight tooth and nail to realize her book turning into a movie she can be proud of! What a treat to come back after a long day and find Edward waiting for her!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 12:03 AM Title: Conflicting Shadows
That was probably the best story of a bidding war I've ever read!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 11:42 PM Title: Contrast
Just a truly wonderful chapter!Kind of choked me up, just a bit!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 11:22 PM Title: The Perfect Background
The two women are quite the pair! It's a real kick to see them get so excited over their impending weddings!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 11:08 PM Title: Infinity
Thanks for the recipe, it sounds good! Loved the proposal even more!That's the way to start the new year!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 10:25 PM Title: Ambient Light
It figured that Charlie would be all protective of his baby girl, so it was no surprise that he had checked out Edward! It was a pleasant one when he proposed to Sue, and even better that Bella realized that she was going to be in the same position soon! I really liked the holidays with both her folks, since they seem to approve of Edward!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 9:05 PM Title: Diffuser
I really like Renee as much as you did! Their time in Florida was great! Now, on to "Shotgun" Charlies!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 8:37 PM Title: Negative
It's so sweet how his family is becoming hers also! Alice's exciting news was unexpected but not as much as him showing up at the door, meeting her on the way to him! That was just darling!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 8:23 PM Title: Dominant Object
What amazingly good news and a really great reason to celebrate!Life is looking rosy for them both! The family dynamic and the love between these two are really wonderful!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 7:47 PM Title: Close Up
What a really wonderful holiday! Now I can hardly wait for Christmas and Edward meeting her crazy family!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 11:45 AM Title: Fixation
That was beautiful! They took their time getting to this moment and it was well woth the wait!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 10:24 AM Title: Sharpness
Just as most of uswould be, Bella was rather star struck. Edward keeps trying to tell her, but she still thinks too little of herself!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 10:05 AM Title: Fogging
Sounds like a really fabulous day!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 9:39 AM Title: Candid
You sure can't accuse them of rushing into anything, they have really taken their time, but I'm thinking it's about time!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 9:11 AM Title: Vignetting
Amazing, the music you had them dancing to, loving Ella and Louis the way I do! Their first official date was wonderful. Now if you can just get Bella to relax over the differences in their economic circumstances!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 8:43 AM Title: Additive Color
That was fun to read, I could just picture those three little girls having such a good time and Edward and Bella enjoying their delight!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 8:18 AM Title: Flash Fill
Sounds like tons of fun to me too!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 7:56 AM Title: Complimentary Colors
Wow! How much more romantic could it get? That last part blew me away!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 7:29 AM Title: Shutter Lag
This conversation they will have is going to be both funny and painful, just not too bad, I hope!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 7:16 AM Title: More Latent Images
What would Bella do without Alice to help her see the light?
Date: 12 Oct 2015 7:03 AM Title: Latent Image
Who would have thought that Bella could be such a coward? She's really afraid to let herself believe what he told her!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 6:43 AM Title: Shadows
Boy, I sure hope Emmett gave Edward the right advice and finding out she is his muse won't scare her away!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 6:26 AM Title: Illumination
I just knew if she listened to Alice, things would become more clear!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 5:38 AM Title: Observational Distortion
Bella just refuses to see herself as he sees her! Makes me wonder who stomped on her self esteem? The inner monologue thing isn't doing her any favors, either! She ought to listen more to Alice, I guess.
Date: 12 Oct 2015 2:24 AM Title: Definitive Beauty
I love when Edward becomes obsessed with Bella!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 12:51 AM Title: Overexposure
Interesting curse Edward works under! If it keeps happening, Bella is sure to give up on them!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 11:11 PM Title: Composition
Sounds delicious, smelling of cherry blossoms and all, but mostly that he wants to spend more time with her, and she with him!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 10:27 PM Title: Focal Point
If they sat and talked for that long, getting to know each other, there is definitely something going on here!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 10:03 PM Title: Backlighting (Collaboration)
I'm liking the way he is drawn to her and she's nor quite sure about it!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 9:42 PM Title: Blurry (by Nikteche)
Women keep doing that to Bella, not giving a damn that Edward asked her out, not them!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 9:31 PM Title: Out of Focus (by Nikteche)
I really don't understand her attitude towards him!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 8:45 PM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
Seems like the lady doth protest too much! What is this woman's problem? Plus, what is so fascinating about her to him?
Date: 10 Mar 2015 12:30 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Loved it, that's all I can say!
Date: 07 Feb 2015 6:09 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Thank you so much for this read. Loved it so much, soo real!
Date: 08 Jul 2013 11:40 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Loved the story very good job!!!!
Date: 27 Sep 2012 7:58 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
:) loved this
Date: 27 Sep 2012 7:31 PM Title: Los Angeles Edward Style
:)
Date: 26 Sep 2012 1:26 PM Title: Observational Distortion
:)
Date: 26 Sep 2012 12:28 PM Title: Backlighting (Collaboration)
:)
Date: 26 Sep 2012 12:17 PM Title: Out of Focus (by Nikteche)
:)
Date: 06 Aug 2012 3:24 AM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
I was so taken with this story that I read almost non stop. I wish I would have followed when you were writing it because I had a lot to say about the chapters. This story is awesome and I am so glad I found it.
Date: 03 Apr 2012 7:34 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Such a sweet story. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 20 Nov 2011 5:25 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
The story is fantastic. Great love story-- wonderful read.
Date: 20 Nov 2011 2:33 AM Title: Infinity
Transferred over here from the "other site." I guess I like to read about it all and not the "watered down" version! LOL. This story is fanfastic. I am really enjoying it. This chapter was really beautiful too.
Date: 01 Nov 2011 4:16 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
I loved this story, it’s beautifully written and I can’t wait to read the rest of your stories
Date: 01 Nov 2011 1:25 AM Title: Conflicting Shadows
So that's why the other bidder agreed to not buy the piece!!! Makes lots of sense and made Edward very, very happy, in an odd way. And in a few hours he will be surprising Bella. I'm guessing she has no clue ;)
Date: 29 Oct 2011 3:55 PM Title: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
I love this story
Date: 18 Oct 2011 8:42 PM Title: Contrast
You've said that finding a title for chapters has been sometimes difficult, let me tell you this one was perfect!!!
From the changes in their everyday lives, to Marcus and Edward's talk and to Bella's reactions to the pictures. Contrast is vital.
Date: 29 Sep 2011 9:28 PM Title: The Perfect Background
It's settled, they both have dates, locations, dresses and a lot to do from now until both weddings.
Each will be perfect and according to their tastes and dreams.
Wedding central will be crazy!!!
Date: 29 Sep 2011 9:11 PM Title: Infinity
I had suspected he would propose that night, but not where he did. It was simply perfect.
Edward was right about talking with Charlie. Bella thought of him before anyone else. She must have been thankful to Edward for thinking about him so early on his plan.
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:35 PM Title: Ambient Light
The trip to Forks turned out very different than what Bella thought it would be like. Edward wasn't shocked or scared by Charlie and his ways. On the contrary he admired his love for Bella. She never saw that one coming. Then finding both guys in the middle of the night talking so seriously on the porch, it might have stayed as just a conversation, if she hadn't noticed Charlie touching his pocket constantly. Edward had been doing the same thing, suddently it all seemed too similar, too much and oddly just perfect.
Edward didn't propose, yet. But he will and when he does, Bella will say yes in a flash (no pun intended)
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:13 PM Title: Diffuser
Renee was fun, easy-going, and wonderful to Edward. Even with her unique comments and strange foresights and scary knowledge (or maybe she went looking for the ring). How ever it might happen, Edward is leaving Florida with his mother in law's blessing, one down, one left, and it's the tough one, everyone says...
Date: 26 Sep 2011 6:58 PM Title: Negative
You were right, of course, it was sweet and short. But really great and with quite the surprise. Alice and Jasper are engaged!!!
Bella wil be having plenty of girl time with Alice from now on, helping her plan everything, Alice won't let Bella miss it. Of course, Alice being Alice will find a way to keep the girl time to slots where it won't interrupt Bella and Edward's time.
Both were so adorable, ready to go spend the night with each other. Of course Edward was there faster since he went alone, good thing they didn't cross each other on the way ;)
Date: 26 Sep 2011 6:22 PM Title: Dominant Object
Esme knew... there's something mothers have that allows them to be prepared and ready for when kids will come and ask and not need to ask at all.
Edward now just needs to wait for the perfect moment. It's not easy to think when it will be, especially with the good news Bella got. She deserves it but will probably be a bit busy. Not that Edward minds, he is proud of her.
Date: 26 Sep 2011 2:08 PM Title: Close Up
I moved my reading over here. I reviewd until chapter 17 at f f, even if I read the chapter again here, but I'm starting reviewing from here on.
Edward is an amazing uncle, but he isn't aware of the do's and don't's when you share lodginging with kids. I think he learned it.
Everyone's suspitions were correct and of course everyone is thrilled about it. Bella's presence was as well received, which kind of overwhelmed her. Edward stating he is spending Christmas with her was such a nice gift and surprise. He is willing to go meet his in-laws in hollliday season, that says a lot about his level of commitment.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 10:32 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Beautiful story...couldn't stop once I started...even though it was my second time through. Thank you so much for sharing this.
Date: 25 Mar 2011 3:28 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Wow! what sweet ...hott... madding......wonderful story
Date: 15 Feb 2011 10:41 PM Title: Candid
It's not too soon, they are adults and having been dating for months. He used to make out with women all the time very quickly and now all of a sudden he couldn't care less about sex. Why is this a M rated story? there hasn't been swearing or sex. I don't mean to get on your case, but I'm getting frustated,lol.
Author's Response:
It's coming..
Date: 18 Jan 2011 1:13 PM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
A truly wonderful story!!!!
Date: 18 Jan 2011 1:30 AM Title: Diffuser
I liked this Renee