Date: 13 Jul 2016 1:17 AM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
thank you so much for picking this story up and finising it for us ;) i'm so glad that edward kept his last name masen ;) althought in one chapter early on bella mentioned edward as cullen ;) it was a shame you killed off charlie and sue but it fit with their naming thier 3rd child ;D
Date: 12 Oct 2015 10:25 PM Title: Ambient Light
It figured that Charlie would be all protective of his baby girl, so it was no surprise that he had checked out Edward! It was a pleasant one when he proposed to Sue, and even better that Bella realized that she was going to be in the same position soon! I really liked the holidays with both her folks, since they seem to approve of Edward!
Date: 06 Aug 2012 3:24 AM Title: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
I was so taken with this story that I read almost non stop. I wish I would have followed when you were writing it because I had a lot to say about the chapters. This story is awesome and I am so glad I found it.
Date: 01 Nov 2011 1:25 AM Title: Conflicting Shadows
So that's why the other bidder agreed to not buy the piece!!! Makes lots of sense and made Edward very, very happy, in an odd way. And in a few hours he will be surprising Bella. I'm guessing she has no clue ;)
Date: 18 Oct 2011 8:42 PM Title: Contrast
You've said that finding a title for chapters has been sometimes difficult, let me tell you this one was perfect!!!
From the changes in their everyday lives, to Marcus and Edward's talk and to Bella's reactions to the pictures. Contrast is vital.
Date: 29 Sep 2011 9:11 PM Title: Infinity
I had suspected he would propose that night, but not where he did. It was simply perfect.
Edward was right about talking with Charlie. Bella thought of him before anyone else. She must have been thankful to Edward for thinking about him so early on his plan.
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:35 PM Title: Ambient Light
The trip to Forks turned out very different than what Bella thought it would be like. Edward wasn't shocked or scared by Charlie and his ways. On the contrary he admired his love for Bella. She never saw that one coming. Then finding both guys in the middle of the night talking so seriously on the porch, it might have stayed as just a conversation, if she hadn't noticed Charlie touching his pocket constantly. Edward had been doing the same thing, suddently it all seemed too similar, too much and oddly just perfect.
Edward didn't propose, yet. But he will and when he does, Bella will say yes in a flash (no pun intended)
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:13 PM Title: Diffuser
Renee was fun, easy-going, and wonderful to Edward. Even with her unique comments and strange foresights and scary knowledge (or maybe she went looking for the ring). How ever it might happen, Edward is leaving Florida with his mother in law's blessing, one down, one left, and it's the tough one, everyone says...
Date: 26 Sep 2011 6:58 PM Title: Negative
You were right, of course, it was sweet and short. But really great and with quite the surprise. Alice and Jasper are engaged!!!
Bella wil be having plenty of girl time with Alice from now on, helping her plan everything, Alice won't let Bella miss it. Of course, Alice being Alice will find a way to keep the girl time to slots where it won't interrupt Bella and Edward's time.
Both were so adorable, ready to go spend the night with each other. Of course Edward was there faster since he went alone, good thing they didn't cross each other on the way ;)
Date: 26 Sep 2011 6:22 PM Title: Dominant Object
Esme knew... there's something mothers have that allows them to be prepared and ready for when kids will come and ask and not need to ask at all.
Edward now just needs to wait for the perfect moment. It's not easy to think when it will be, especially with the good news Bella got. She deserves it but will probably be a bit busy. Not that Edward minds, he is proud of her.
Date: 26 Sep 2011 2:08 PM Title: Close Up
I moved my reading over here. I reviewd until chapter 17 at f f, even if I read the chapter again here, but I'm starting reviewing from here on.
Edward is an amazing uncle, but he isn't aware of the do's and don't's when you share lodginging with kids. I think he learned it.
Everyone's suspitions were correct and of course everyone is thrilled about it. Bella's presence was as well received, which kind of overwhelmed her. Edward stating he is spending Christmas with her was such a nice gift and surprise. He is willing to go meet his in-laws in hollliday season, that says a lot about his level of commitment.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 10:41 PM Title: Candid
It's not too soon, they are adults and having been dating for months. He used to make out with women all the time very quickly and now all of a sudden he couldn't care less about sex. Why is this a M rated story? there hasn't been swearing or sex. I don't mean to get on your case, but I'm getting frustated,lol.