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Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

There are plot lines that call to us, Edward as a single father is one of them. Thinking how to help and console him. However, there must be twists and details that spike our curiosity. You got it.

Considering that parents are part of the plotting group to get these two together and that  Bella seems part of it too. How will Edward react? What are they going to tell him and what not? And what about Ally?



Author's Response: There will NOT be a lot of drama between characters in this story. I like my stories to be nice and light. Edwards reaction will be in the next chapter. Edward also finds out some more and things really start to move. Remember...Bella has known Edward this entire time through his daughter and his family. Just because they haven't interacted in person. Edward will find out that Bella has more than just a little relationship with Ally...Thank you for the great review, they really mean a lot to me.

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

So far I liked it. A lot actually. Hope to see more updates soon. I love Edward as a doctor and I love it more when he is playing the single father route. Thank you.

Author's Response: I like single dad Edward too. Next update will be soon.

Reviewer: My Not-So-Secret Obsession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

AWWW this story seems so good and its only the 1st chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really like how your story is beginning. Can't wait for an update! It seems so romantic!

Author's Response: I am so glad this story is being so well recieved. Thank you.

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Too cute of a story. So Ally knew Bella before she was her teacher this should be interesting.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

OMG... I loved the first chapter! I can´t wait to see where you take this.  I absolutely love that Ally and Bella already have a relationship.  Can´t wait for the next chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I am so thrilled this is being read and loved.

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start to the story!



Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sounding good so far, but how did they never meet?  And what's with the Tanya thing, sounds like his family think that Edward and Tanya were closer then just 'ggod friends' so to speak...



Author's Response: All these answers will be in the next few chapters...I really don't want to get too far into the plot or it will spoil the story. Plus, what fun is a story that all questions are answered so soon? Keep reading and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

This sounds great cant wait for more

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

love it



Author's Response: I really am happy that you are enjoying this, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: jacoblucas Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

ok, so I really love where I think this story is going and I relaaly love your Edward!!

I am confused though..how does Bella and Ally love each other so much and Edward doesnt even know who she is?



Author's Response: That will be reveiled in the next chapter. Don't worry, all questions will be answered.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is a really cute story.....I think its so funny that Ally and Bella already knew each other and she never met Edward! 

Can't wait for MORE!!!!  Thanks for this story!



Author's Response: I'm glad you are liking the story so well, though I didn't say Bella hadn't met Edward...

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like! cant wait to read more



Author's Response: Thanks, I was hoping it would go over well. Connie

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