[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
God, I just adore this story!!! I have soooooo missed your writing, and am so very glad you are back!! This was an awesome chapter! I am wishing right along with Edward that Bella is now carrying his child! I love them together, and too funny with the house. Poor Edward doesn't know what he unleashed does he lol. Uh Oh! is right for Esme...she has some explaining to do.
So very happy to have you back, and looking forward to an update of Teacher's and TA's too??? lol...take care and great chapter, as always!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
lol lol. Esme just ran her mouth too much.
But I loved the chapter.. well worth the wait! (don't make us wait to much longer for more chapters). this is the cutest story
Date: 22 Jun 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
hahahahahah... Poor Edward! I agree that it was his fault that the house was like that but he is in for some truble! I agree with Esme, thank God that Bella is here now! I totally LOVED the chapter!!! it was amazing!! They are in love and they just haven't told the other yet! Edward wants so much for Bella to have his baby! Ca't wait to read more... UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Date: 21 Dec 2011 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
hey
great story...
but omg that was kind of quick!
but Esme and Alice... they are so great!
how they plan for them to meet...
great!
bye
Lil
Date: 19 Dec 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
update soon luv it!
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, talk about serendipity :) I like what I see so far :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2011 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
huh certain friend.. could it be charlie. hmm Iwonder what the odds of her getting pg. hm if young high. I guess we have to wait and see.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
This story just makes me feel and warm and fuzzy. I am very eager for more. Brilliant!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it!!! Great chapter by the way. I'm so happy for Jake and Jared, and of course for Edward and Bella. ;). Hope to see u soon. Thank u so much for updating
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
loved it.
i think its great but what a noisy sister.....
Date: 17 Nov 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love it!!! It is a little fast, but when you know, you know. It was going to happen at some point anyway. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
Girl.. I am leaving you love... and I want MORE!!!!! Love this story!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2011 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
What a great chapter. I love getting everyone's pov. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
They should just runn of and get married. They are already a family. If is happen it happens. They are already raising a child together.
Date: 17 Nov 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
cute chatper
Date: 17 Nov 2011 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 7
It seems like high-school is back, at leas fot those around Bella, Ally and Edward. If thicture travelled fast, I can't imagine ow this will go. For now the men ar pe acting as women, according to them and as men according to women. They love gossip, especiall this type. As for Bella and Edward themselves... It was the experience of a life time. One they weren't looking for but crashed into them with such high temperatures!!! :)
Date: 17 Nov 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
Ok, not everything can be aout Bella and Edward, but this... I nestly never imagined it.
I was impressed with how fast the news and picture spread out. Not that anyone would complain, on the contrary.
Date: 17 Nov 2011 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
Good Chapter.....
Date: 17 Nov 2011 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love it they are to be together the family is so funny cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2011 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
my goodness these guys and all their gossip. i guess they have been waiting way too long for these guys to get together
well bella and edward are so made for each other, perfection
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2011 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
renee is pregnant
wow i so loved that jacob emailed everyone. seems as everyone wanted these two to get together. finally it seems they are both seeing it as well. i am so looking forward to more
Date: 17 Nov 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
I enjoyed the two chapters and I'm curious to see if you make Bella pregnant. Although it would seem to soon for some it seems like ti would be okay for them. This is a really cute story and I can't wait to read more.
Date: 17 Nov 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
everyone is so happy for them. Is Renee going to have a baby????
Date: 17 Nov 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great story love it so far Thanks :)
Date: 17 Nov 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
LOVED IT!!!!!! Edward could keep himself in sheck any more...!!!!!! He admitted that he is falling and it is so amazing...!!!!! And Bella is pregnant??? wow!!!! Well she could be anyway... They both are scared right now and it is understantable since they only meet a week ago but I'm sure they are going to be extetic when they make sure!!!! They will creat the family they both want so much... Esme ans Alice are crazy but as it seems Carlisle and Charlie isn't much better... ahhaah... UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
omg!!!!! hahahaha... Can't believe that Edward was so out of everything... His family is so much more extented than he though...!!!!! I'm so happy about Jake and Jared!!! They totally deserved to have a kid!!!!! Ally is so cute!!! Edward is so in love with Bella and the same goes for her... When will they admit their feelings??? Renee is pregnant????
Date: 17 Nov 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
I think this story is just adorable, between each family member being invovled in one way or another. To our favorite couple finally getting together. Now the question becomes are they going to be pregnant after this, or are you going to draw this out for them for a while? Great chapter keep up the awesome work.
Date: 17 Nov 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
I so love this story...keep the chapters coming...
thank you
Date: 17 Nov 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great couple of chapters!!! wow... So Bella and Edward really just jumped into things huh?! LOL oops.... Can't wait to read more!
Date: 14 Nov 2011 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Amazing couple of chapters!! Loved it!! Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
aww what a cute chapter
Date: 13 Nov 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
My favorite kind of Jake! Gay!
Date: 12 Nov 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hmmmm Edward jealous already!
Date: 12 Nov 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love Love Love the story!!
Date: 12 Nov 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Everyone is in on it, they don't stand a chance!
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
hope they get good news1
Date: 11 Nov 2011 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
omg!!!!!! LOVED IT!!!! It was only natural that Edward would be worried about Jake but when he get to know him he saw that everything is ok!!! Bella would never have put Ally in any danger!!!! they are just so perfect together!!! Like a family!!! Well they already are... I bet that pictures that Jared and jake got are amazing!!!! Edward is in love with Bella!!!!! When will he admit it??? And Ireally hope that Jake and Jared take the baby they so desperatelly want!!!! Can't wait... UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Nov 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it!!! Is jake gay??? Because he called Edward a God and all... hahaha... Edward is right to be mad!!! Some stranger knows his duaghter and hug her out of nowhere... Bella is diferent!!! He feels for her and she is a woman... but Jake... The car trip was great and they really enjoyed it!!! Can't believe that Bella has her whole house lwith Ally in her mind...!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Aww I hope they get approved for their child=) and hopefully Edward and Bella gett "together" officially and start their relationship soon because i am dieing to read about it. Please update soon=)
Date: 10 Nov 2011 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
hahahahah.... Alice will always be Alice... hahahah... Of course she has to 'help Edward and Bella along'... and then she want to get Ally to drees like her... hahahah!!!!! Amazing!!!! Edward and bella are getting so good!!! He isn't agry just confused how he could have missed all this... And he is starting to like Bella so much!!!!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
omg!!!! Can't believe it.... And Edward never knew??? how??? How where they able to not ever meet??? And Bella was friend with Tanya too??? Who will he take it all??? Bella loves Ally so much ana dshe has done so much for her over the years!!! She really is her mother!!!! I love Esme... hahahahh...
Date: 10 Nov 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow!!! I really like this story... I loved that Edward wasn't married to Tanya... It's not like I have something against her but I really like for Bella to be the one to marry...!!!!! Ally knew Bella but Edward didn't??? wow!!!! And they both love each other!!! they are like a mother and a daughter!!! Now all that Edward has to do is to make it official!!!!! ahahah... Will he give it a chance????
Date: 10 Nov 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
What a perfect day for them all. Ally is loved by so many people! I hope Jake and Jared get good news. Sounds like they deserve this. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am so glad that Edward is going along on this trip. I hope Jake lives through it! Edward is doing very well with everything he is finding out. He could have been really put off by all the things at Bella's house, but he wasn't. I love these two. I am glad it looks like they are finally making their way to each other. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
I was glad to see one update and couldn't believe there was actually two. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 10 Nov 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
Sucah a cute story so far. cant wait to see where you go with this one.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2011 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
The was by far one of the best chapters I've read. I hope they get a child.
Date: 10 Nov 2011 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
I hope they get aproved. That is so sweet a happy little family they are perfect for each other. Thanks for the update I have missed you and thanks for the double. Cant wait for more
Date: 10 Nov 2011 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
Having such a good day I think Bella should of givin Edward a heads up about Jake.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2011 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
i am liking it so far.
Date: 10 Nov 2011 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Things don't always are what they seem. Once Edward really saw how the relationship between his daughter, Bella, Jake and Jared. He felt so oddly strange, his daughter has so much and he feels he has not done enough for her, Bella told him how wrong he has been.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2011 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh i so hope they get a chance to be parents. they would be perfect
i am so glad edward gave the guys a chance. seems this group has a very happy life ahead of them. seems edward and ally have quite a few people in their corner. i am hoping edward embraces it.seems as if he is and seeing his daughter is truly loved even though he might have checked out for a little while
so love the story. thanx for writing
Date: 10 Nov 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
awwwwwwww i hope jake/jared get approved
Date: 10 Nov 2011 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
It'S amazing how much Ally has in her life, in spite of the situation. She has her father and aunt and a whole life with them. But she also has another very good lofe with Bella. It seems so odd that both hadn't crossed until now.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
well i am thrilled edward is getting a look at his daughter's life and what she does with bella. alot of love. bella sure has made a place for her and loves that little girl. ally is very lucky little girl
Date: 10 Nov 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
this was such a good chapter. nothing to exciting happened as in drama or stressful things. it was nice seeing them enjoy a nice day together, and to get a little insight on Jake and Jared, lmao i love how you placed them together. i hope they get to adopt a baby or a small child, it would complete their small family.
i also hope that Bella and Edward get together soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thank God u updating. I thought u had left us. Great chapters. They r so cute together.
Date: 10 Nov 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
cute chapters ! looking forward to the enxt one
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
i love ally. the relationship bella has with her is adorable. you can tell bella loves her very much and would do anything for her. funny how edward doesn't or didn't know anything about their relationship. it is too bad tanya past while giving birth. but he has so much to live for and his daughter is great and i hope he gives bella a shot.
looking forward to where you go with the story. loving it
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
I really like this story.. it is very sweet... I know people might think I am a little mean to say this.. But I think Edward she be a little upset.. If it was me I know I would be. not saying I would stop it.. But to keep it away from him all this time was wrong.. But I 'm a mamma bear..
But Like I said I love this story.. And Alice is bad.. hehehe..
<3 Leona :)
Date: 19 Aug 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it. Looking forward to reading more.
Date: 16 Aug 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I'm happy you like it.
Date: 16 Aug 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
oh i just loved this chapter! I just loooove this story. eeeeek!!!
sounds like eddie is a really interested in Bella already. woot woot!
Author's Response: Oh, just wait. It gets better...
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2011 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
Such a great story! I absolutely love it, and this chapter was perfect! Can't wait until Edward gets to really see Bella and Ally together! Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter, take care until then!!
Author's Response: The next chapter is one of my favorites. I'm glad you like it so far.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
Really great
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 15 Aug 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
very cute story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: 15 Aug 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
=) that was a really good chapter! I'm glad Edward is accepting of this and I hope their relationship starts soon=) And, nice try Alice with the shoes lol
Author's Response: I hate having the characters of a story asking themselves all these stupid questions when they could just...go with the flow. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
Another winner! Love it hon, they are so cute together, I can´t wait to read about the trip to the petting zoo! And Alice was too funny about the Chucks!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response: Some new characters get introduced in the next chapter. Hope you like it.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love it. Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 15 Aug 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
LOVE it!!!! :) Can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Thanks!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love it! Wot ho!
Author's Response: Thanks! It's always nice to hear that.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love this story to death!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
edward took news well
Author's Response: My Edward will always take it good...just saying.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
This story is so cute! I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I'm going to try and post a little more quickly...no promises.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is such a good story!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!!!
Date: 15 Aug 2011 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
Bella and Edward are, after a long, long time, getting to know each other, and just only through Ally, but amongst themselves. They have lots in common. much more than they imagined.
Life is changing,radically for them, how will it all go?
Author's Response: Yes they are. It is going to take meeting Bella to make Edward realize some things about his life. It will all be good though. Thanks for reading.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
I think Edward would like Bella to take care of him to ;)
Author's Response: Can't blame him...
Date: 15 Aug 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait to see how Ally reacts to having time with her Dad and her Mathair at the same time. Edward seems to be taking this all well. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response: Ally is going to respond to it like any five year old would...it just seems natural.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
I hope Edward takes this well. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response: Always
Date: 15 Aug 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response: Thanks
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
More please. I am HOOKED!!!
Author's Response: Glad I made a good enough hook for ya! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter a lil Upset u cut it so short *pouts. thanx for the update hopefully I will see another update verybsoon ;)
Author's Response: I used to think that three typed pages was enough...so this is a lot more than it used to be for me. Glad you liked the chapter. :)
Date: 02 Aug 2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loving this!!! Can't wait to see more :)
Author's Response: More soon...promise.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Awww... this story is just so sweet! I love the relationship between Ally and Bella. Can´t wait to find out more about Bella´s relationship with Tanya and what Edward will say when he finds out that Bella has been the only mother that his daughter has ever known. Can´t wait for the next chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response: Let's just say that Tanya would have felt the same way as the rest of the family about Edward and Bella meeting.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
so sweeet i love it
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 01 Aug 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella is a key part of Ally's life. She has been there right from the start, however she has also always kept her distance from Edward. That must have been complicated at times, even with the rest of his family helping her.
It's no secret they want Bella and Edward to get to know each other, and like each other. It's not always so simple. What are Bella's feelings for him? What will Edward think and say when Bella tells him what has been going on around him for the past five years?
Author's Response: Bella's feelings for Edward will be revieled soon and what Edward thinks about her involvment in his daughters like. I know this is vegue, but all these questions will be answered in the upcomming chapters. Hang in there and thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
I really love this story and can't wait until the next chapter.
Author's Response: I promise to post by the end of the week.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
I wonder if Edward is going to be pissed that he was so clueless about Bella being in his daughters life???? Esme is planing the wedding now lol.
Author's Response: I'm not one for writing pissy, overly depressed Edward. We got enough of that in the books...
Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hmmm.....picked up that Bella knew Tanya also! Knew her enough to help pick out nursery stuff?? WOW this just gets more interesting!! Can't wait for the next chapter and Bella explains stuff to Edward!
VERY good chapter! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Just keep in mind for this story that Edward is really out of the loop with real life in this story. He was no planning on things to turn out the way they did and he was entrenched in life with his daughter and work...all will be revieled.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
oh gosh Edward knows. At least he didn't blow up and get mad. I can't wait to read their conversation=)
Esme and Alice are good at scheming, lol
Author's Response: Just wait...it gets better.
Date: 31 Jul 2011 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Was happy to see this continue - and really looking forward to Edward learning the truth about Bella's relationship with his daughter. C x
Author's Response: There will be plenty more where this came from.
Date: 31 Jul 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
oooh i hope you continue i just love to read more
Author's Response: I already have 12 chapters of this story done and many more on the way...don't worry, I will be continuing.