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Reviewer: momomacka Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2017 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Two┤s Company... Three┤s So Much Better...

Daaamn

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2016 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

I would love for you to start reposting this story 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2016 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Two┤s Company... Three┤s So Much Better...

So hot 

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

Loved it!

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Date: 23 Aug 2014 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 2 It┤s Not Easy... Being Me...

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Two┤s Company... Three┤s So Much Better...

Loved it!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

Definitely one of my fave Edward & Bella!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

I hope you get back to posting this story great job

Reviewer: Elli-Wyatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

Woah this story is freaking awesome!!! Are you still going to continue this?? I hope you do!!

 

Reviewer: Vtiedemann Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2013 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

love, love, love!  Do you plan to finish?  I keep going back to your blog and here in hopes that my email updates were broke or something.  looking forward to updates, at your leisure, of course, no pushing! :)

Ronni

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2013 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

Naughty boy he likes giving and receiving surprises.  Now WTF, Alice knows? How? and when will we see another update?   Horrible place to leave us hanging. :-(

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2013 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

Amazing.  And, the pics on you blog. No words. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2013 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

Hot hot hot.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2013 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

Pantry lovin' sweet.  Boys in the air, Momma's peeved.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2013 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

Yummy Mummy.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2013 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 1: Two┤s Company... Three┤s So Much Better...

Naughty times are a cuming. I can tell.  Hot little tail. (yes I misspell on purpose.)

Reviewer: chelle0372 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

OMG!!!  This story is fantastic!!!  What is Jasper going to do about Alice?  I want more...I love the dynamic between Jasper, Edward and Bella.  The three of them are amazing together!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: Two┤s Company... Three┤s So Much Better...

Miss ya like Krazi!  Hope to read more updates from you soon!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

That.....that was an amazing day at the office if you ask me.  Why do mine never turn out like that?  Lol.  Oh my God, Alice!  How long has she known? Do Edward and Bella know she knows?  Is this one of their secrets?  Oooooh so many questions and now I'm all caught up I'm hoping that the internet Gods and laptop Gods stop conspiring against you, get their act together and start working for you. Sheesh, I'm so selfish, lol.

Jane x

I have some recs for you:-

Headward Cullen, Jizzper Whitlock and Titlight by French Caresse

Never Forget by Jasper1863Hale

Lights, Camera, Interaction by TrueEnglishRose, texasbella

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

I want a day like Bella's, I could really do with one like that right now.  Even better though I'd love a night like Bella's, geez, I need a cold shower.  Bless Jasper worrying about whether he'd be any good, awww.  I think that's all any of us think about when it's our first time, yes even the girls.  Lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

Well I wasn't quite expecting a butt plug to be involved but then it's always a bonus, lol.  Jasper's attack was traumatic and brutal and although telling Edward everything has unburdened him he may still need to talk to someone else. That was one hot lemon, I need a lie down, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

Lol, Bella really doesn't do well with surprises does she.  I can only imagine what Edward and Jasper are up to and I'll find out properly in a minute.  I'm still dying to find out more about their secrets.  What did Caius do?  So that was what Jasper and Bella were laughing at, their sexy time in the pantry.  How sweet was Jasper, "Am I doing it right?"  Awww, bless him.  Hold on to your socks Jazzy you're about to be corrupted beyond your wildest dreams, hahahaha!  Well, I'm assuming he's about to be. *grins*

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

Hmmm, what other secrets do Edward and Bella have?  Was Edward adopted into Bella's family when his parents passed away?  Will Edward and Bella get married?  It seemed like it was real, then a cover and then real again, it's probably the way I read it.  Ooooh so many secrets, I can't wait to find out more.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 2 It┤s Not Easy... Being Me...

Wow, there's a lot going on for Jasper.  I love the relationship Jasper has with Riley although it's a little sad that their closeness developed from lost parenting in one way or another.  I'm glad that Mike didn't manage to rape Jasper, it's bad enough that he attacked him causing Jasper to have nightmares.  What a surprise for Jasper to find himself working for a couple that are more than interested in him joining them, possibly every bi-sexual seventeen year olds dreams come true, bwahahaha!!  Just how loaded is Jasper?  Things are about to get interesting, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

Way to go Alice! Great chapter!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 1: Two┤s Company... Three┤s So Much Better...

Well that's one way to fertilise the lawn, bwahahaha!!  I've had this in my favourites for a while and now I'm wondering what took me so long to dive in and start reading.  I love slash and poly fics and recently found myself enjoying some daddy kink, so what the hell, lets throw them all in there and have some mommy kink too.  I'm intrigued to find out what happens with these three.  Oh, and I love the blog as well. *grins*

Jane x

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

Why yes it WAS worth the wait!  LOL  Gotta love Alice too....direct and to the point!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

Fantastic chapter.  Yes it was worth the wait but please don't leave us on this cliffie for too long.

Reviewer: shandra Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

yay your back!!! i really missed this story. i cant wait till you update the blog.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

loved the chatper 

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

loved it! can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

glad you are back

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

Wow forward huh.....great to see you are reading some of the same storis as me 

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

loved it

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

loved it

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 2 It┤s Not Easy... Being Me...

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Two┤s Company... Three┤s So Much Better...

loved it

Reviewer: C26P Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 1: Two┤s Company... Three┤s So Much Better...

Please update soon! I love this story and it's been a while.

Author's Response:

Well, you're in luck! I'm looking to do just that tonight, tomorrow at the latest!  Thank you so much for sticking with me through all the RL crap that keeps me from updating more frequently.  Just for you, here's a peek at the next chapter!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Enjoy....

Thinking back to our trip, and the angry throbbing in my pants, a plan began to formulate.  Not wanting to give myself time to chicken out, I began to map out my surprise for Bella.

 

And what a fucking surprise it was!

 

Thankfully, Bella´s desk was large enough to fit me and her desk chair comfortably, and as I burrowed down in my hiding spot, I tried to remember what it was that she wore to work this morning.  When my mind conjured up a perfect recollection of the plum-colored, form-fitting dress that cinched at Bella´s waist, but flowed loosely down to her knees, the situation in my already uncomfortable pants worsened.  I couldn´t stop the 100-watt smile that adorned my face when I heard Bella´s voice coming from right outside the door.

 

Bella´s soft footfalls could be heard approaching her desk, and my mouth watered in anticipation.  My heart thumped loudly in my ears and my breath came in quick pants, as the black leather chair began to slowly move from behind her desk.  “Look, Bernard,” Bella said, sounding a bit exasperated.  “My offer is only good until six!  If your guy doesn´t give me what I want, the offer´s off the table, and we go to trial.”  Sitting down with a huff, I presumed that she was talking on her cell, so I thought I´d get started on helping my girl relax a bit.

 

The bottom of her dress had risen slightly when she sat down, so I gladly accepted the invitation her succulent pussy was offering me.  Taking the tip of my tongue, I ran it lightly from her ankle to the bend of her knee. 

 

Damn, her skin tasted good!

 

Two things happened at once, Bella gasped, jerking her leg back, and a deep baritone voice, sounding much to close for comfort asked, “Isabella, what is it?  Is everything okay?”

 

Shit!

 

She wasn’t on the fucking phone!

 

Someone was standing in her office!

 

Right on the other side of her goddamn desk!

 

Well, Romeo, what the fuck do we do now? My conscience chided.

 

This will not end fucking well!

 

Bella´s going to kill me!

 

Oh my God, I suddenly was paralyzed with nerves.  What if I overstepped some unspoken boundary?  So far, any sexual contact had always been initiated by one of them!  What if I´d gone too far this time, and Bella and Edward became angry with me?

 

Oh shit...what if they asked me to leave?

 

What hell was I going to do?

 

Where the hell would I go?

 

In a matter of seconds, I was on the verge of a full-scale panic attack.  Soft fingers reached down, stroking my cheek, Bella answered the person standing in front of her.  “I´m fine Bernard, just startled,” looking down, locking eyes with me, “someone just left me a little surprise under my desk that´s all,” Bella answered, fixing me with a raised brow and a smirk.

 

“Oh, well,” the Bernard person muttered, getting back to the matter at hand.  “A deadline of six o´clock is unreasonable...I need at least twenty-four hours to consult with my client and get him on board with this.”

 

Sliding her chair closer, Bella gently guided my head between her legs as she continued her conversation. 

 

This Bernard character was none the wiser! 

 

“Six o´clock and not a minute later,” Bella deadpanned, squirming minutely in her seat when I flicked her swollen bud.  “I´m tired of going back and forth with this guy.  He´s guilty!  I know it, and more importantly, Bernard, you know it too.  So save us all a lot of time, and the taxpayer´s money, and get this guy to take the damn deal!  If not, I´ll see you in court!”  The hand that was still running through my hair, tugged the strands forcefully as I began slowly lapping at her labia and slit.  “And we both know how that´s going to end,” Bella spoke slowly through gritted teeth.

 

“But Isabella...” Bernard tried again, just to be cut off.

 

“Bernard,” Bella gasped, but tried to cover it up by clearing her throat.  That little slip-up might have had something to do with me flicking my tongue against her swollen little pleasure nub in rapid succession, but I´ll never tell.   I heard her shuffle a few papers around, before her dainty little foot began applying pressure on my straining cock.

 

Damn...

 

When the fuck had she taken off her high-heel?

 

My fingers dug into the fleshy part of her thigh to keep myself from crying out.  “Bernard, as much as I would love to keep going rounds with you,” Bella said in a strained voice.  “I´ve got phone calls to make, and you my friend, have a deadline to meet.”  Leaving no room for discussion Bella added, “Oh, and could you please twist the lock on your way out, I don´t want to be disturbed.”

 

The next thing I knew, Bella was gripping my hair with both hands and riding my face like a fucking jockey.  Her heavy breaths and mumbled curses were the only sounds coming from the room.  Gripping her hip with one hand, I plunged two fingers of the other deep inside her pussy while biting down gently on her clit, and was rewarded with a flood of her sweet nectar.  “Jasper...Jasper…I´m gonna...ah…” Bella panted breathlessly, all the while squeezing the life out of me.  “Fuckkkkk…” she let out on a long hiss as her body spasms and convulses with pleasure.

 

Sucking and stroking soft and slow, I gently brought her down from her climax.  Looking up at my love, all flushed and glowing bright pink, I mentally patted myself on the back. 

 

I did that shit! 

 

I made Isabella Marie Swan cum buckets while eating out her gourmet pussy.

 

I was riding on fucking cloud nine!

 

Reviewer: Raeya Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 1: Two┤s Company... Three┤s So Much Better...

O wow. Love it. the combination with them all and the different power plays. So hot

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

Loved this:

“Javi no is stupid, jealous, yes, stupid, no.”

Love Jasper's note!

This is great:

Each one of them brought something different to the table, where Edward was my rock and security blanket, Jazz was my sense of adventure, the one who kept me feeling young at heart.

I'm jealous!  LOL!

Don't envy you on the actual physical act of moving.  I hope that went well though.  And, it sounds like you won't starve to death!  LOL!  If you don't feel like cooking then there is always Micky D's!

This was a great chapter!  I want to be a private island with the boys!!! 

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye



Author's Response:

Lol!  I wouldn't mind taking a trip with those two to a remote island myself, but unfortunately all we can do is live vicariously through Isabella!  Mickie D's lol! I never thought I'd see the day when I was tired of the golden arches, but I think I've kind of reached my limit! lol!  I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter!  Thanks for reading and always leaving me great reviews!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

Great Chapter, and picspration, was AWESOME



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

loved it



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

loved this chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

Oh wow, that was amazing!  So happy they are all together now :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

Wow, that was hot!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

Damn, I wish your updates weren't months apart!

Author's Response:

I'll try to make it sooner, but sadly, the bills keep coming and RL takes first priority, I just hope that you will continue to stick with me!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

Bless Jasper's heart!  Terrible to read his feelings of inadequacies and the assault.

Great use of the photos in this chapter too.

Lotta love in this chapter!  Hope that goes a long way in helping Jasper heal.  Good call on using Keifer S. for the Officer.  He was such a butt in that movie, wasn't he? 

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

OK, in the beginning I was slightly confused about the timeline of this chapter. I thought that Jasper already told Edward much earlier what happened to him and not just before the flight was.

It seems that the flight is going to be a fest for all of them.



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

So this one was rected in a facebook-group, and finally I decided to give it a try. And I must say I am hooked ( I mean, I am already reading chapter 4 ;) )

Anyway, it is quite refreshing to read a Mommella story instead of a Daddyward. And now with some slash from Edward and Jasper I am curious, what will happen. Normally this is not really my genre.

I hope you will update your other stories (FtloD and ArFohO) aswell anytime soon and not abandon them.



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: jess2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

god i love this story!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Robshandmonkey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

I freaking LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You rawk bb!!! I waited two updates before I read again....saving it up....squeals like a little school girl....Ed and Jazzy are gonna get their groove on.....

 

 



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

well edward now knows what happened to jasper..update soon



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: queenbee311 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

I loved this chapter. I felt so sad as Jasper told Edward what happened to him..........but its on to the new! I can't wait for your next update. Thank you so much for sharing.



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

Very unique story...I look forward to what happens next!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

my my my



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

wow those pictures are intense



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 2 It┤s Not Easy... Being Me...

Hot



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Two┤s Company... Three┤s So Much Better...

HOT!!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

Oh I am happy Jasper is talking more! Bella bella is too lucky!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

loved the chapter looking forward ot the next one 



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

wow! j'adore!



Author's Response:

Heureux que vous aimé! Merci pour la lecture et l'examen!

Krazi
xoxo

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

Loved this chapter.  Cannot wait for the plane to land!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Where Who Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

*super big hug* Seeing the pictures intertwined wtih the text makes it that much better for me.  Having them side by side is better than nothing, but this is the best format to me.  I still can't wait to see what will happen in the next chapter.  Now that I think of it, it is interesting to see how protective Edward is of Jasper.  Looking at the whole story it is nice to see a strong Bella, instead of the weak one who needs rescuing (but that is just my opinion).

Thanks again.



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

wow! J'espère que la suite suivra bientôt.



Author's Response:

Merci pour la lecture et l'examen mon histoire! J'espère que vous continuerez à lire!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

Histoire originale! 



Author's Response:

Désolé ma réponse est si tardive, mais je voulais juste prendre le temps personnellement à vous remercier pour la lecture et passer en revue mon histoire! J'espère que vous continuerez à lire!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 It┤s Not Easy... Being Me...

Google Translate. French. wow!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: Two┤s Company... Three┤s So Much Better...

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Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

*gasps and scrolls up and down for the rest of the chapter*  Oh that is an evil, evil cliffie!!!!  *pants*  No you just did NOT do that!  ROTFLMAO!  Girl you got us good with that one.

Damn, I can't wait to read what happens next!!!

Keye



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Where Who Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

Gah, I knew I forgot something after I sent off my review for For the Love of Domination....  What I ment to say, is congratulations for your tomato soup award!!

As a whole, this is an awesome chapter, even with the time jump.  Normally, I am not too crazy about time jumps because some authors make my head spin in circles before I know what happened, but this time jump is done really nicely.  I will say that you were kind of evil in the way you ended the chapter with a cliffhanger... I guess you just wanted to be sure that we will stick along for the rest of the story...



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: My Not-So-Secret Obsession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

=) Jasper has moved in!! and oh gosh, what did Bella find? I hope it's something naughty=P (I'm assuming it is) Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

loved it! wonder what bella walked in on hmm cant wait to find out!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

damn it what a freaking cliff hanger!lol update soon



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

Hi Krazi - I love all of your stories, but this one has really caught my attention.  I love how strong a couple Bella and Edward is, and also how sweet and innocent Jasper is.  I can't wait to see how their relationships develop.  And no fair on totally leaving us with that cliffie - so please don't leave us hanging too long and give us the next chapter soon!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: jess2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

i can not believe you left it there! lol i love this story! i have to read anything like it. i also wanted to tell you that i love your blog for the love of donination! so i cant wait to look at this blog!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

So you have left us with a quickie and we will probably have to wait weeks for the next chapter! Thats sucks!

Love the story!



Author's Response:

 

Oh ye of little faith... Saturday will be here before you know it! I told you, reviews encourage me to write! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

Krazi

Xoxo

Reviewer: twilove72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

I am left on the edge of my seat every chapter waiting for the next.



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: My Not-So-Secret Obsession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

=) Great chapter, I love this story so please keep updating



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

Surprise indeed....love the dinner guests!  And Jasper kinda teasing Edward?  Yesssssss......

Photos are nice too!  *winks*

Too funny:

Em ate enough that he would be perfectly okay hibernating for the winter, starting tonight. 

Yeah I bet!  LOL:

But dude, since he´s started working here, I don´t know, it´s like… like I can see a light in his eyes, like he´s almost happy again. 

Too funny that Edward was just not getting that Jasper was staying with he and Bella while Em and Rose went to Europe.  Then he had the "light bulb" moment!!!  LOL!!!

Can't wait til move in day!  *dies laughing*

No seriously......

Keye



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: jess2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

love ur pics throughout the story! i love them! also thanks for reading my story!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

My Greatest Masterpiece by luvrofink and MarchHare5 reading that one too!

 

oh wow edward got a surprise in this chapter lol and i feel like that won't be the only one to come :) update soon



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

Wow, that was amazing ;)  I really loved it so much!  Cannot wait for more of this and FTLOD :D



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

they are totally hot ... looking foward to the next chatper 



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Robshandmonkey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

lol...do great minds think alike or what?  I see you discovered the animated gif feature lol....I just added one today and went wow! Then I got the update notice for this chapter and went shit what a coincidence!!

Now I have to go back and maybe edit my previous chapters to accomadate!

Awesome...although still for some reason its just way hotter to hear Edward call Isabella baby girl than it is for Bella to call Edward baby boy...I dunno...I just get so creeped out by the whole momma thing but I am willing to look past that part and swipe the word with something different...like Kitten....but thats just me....

Other wise I love the story... Jasper seems so much more relaxed around Edward all of a sudden doesn't he....?

I am anxiously awaiting for that first fuckhawt kiss they share....arghhhhhhhh~

 

ciao bella

drea

aka

♥robshandmonkey♥

 

 

 




Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

Awesome story so far! Can't wait to see where this goes! Totally LOVE the blog! Thanks for the quick update and all the hard work on the blog... :~)



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: missielynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

wow! ive read a couple daddy/edward stories and they were pretty hot, kinky. But this one, oh my fucking god! i have to read through my fingers in places. With bella/mommy it just seems so much more perverse. its really freakin good btw cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Two┤s Company... Three┤s So Much Better...

You be the fly and tell us all about it.....soon



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

That was so Krazi, sexy, cool lady....and thanks too for the wonderful visuals too.  Great chapter.  Can't wait for all the fun to being when their newest resident gets settled in. 



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

whew! wow heading for a cold shower now......esp looking at the pics for this chapter! cant wait for more...



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

oh my!!!! let the games begin!! how soon does Jaz move in???



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 2 It┤s Not Easy... Being Me...

Looking forward to more days with these three.  Super hot!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Robshandmonkey Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 2 It┤s Not Easy... Being Me...

♥OMG that was fuck awesome!!!♥

Still a little creeped out about the momma thing but otherwise....

speckfuckingtacular! So hawt!

Awesome visuals...felix is a hottie!!! yeowwwwwwww!

♥You RAWK Krazi!♥



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanx bb!  But be honest, there would be zero weirdness if Bella was calling Edward `Daddyward¨ and you know it!  This time I decided to turn the tables and put Bella in control!  Glad to hear you´re sticking around!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: hayleyhoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2011 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 2 It┤s Not Easy... Being Me...

<3 Love love love this :D



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  Be sure to check out the blog for teasers and picspiration!  Chapter three's teaser has already been posted!

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Krazi

xoxo


Reviewer: My Not-So-Secret Obsession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 2 It┤s Not Easy... Being Me...

=) Oh god, I looked at the pix on your blog before reading this cha[ter and I was so unprepared for what I saw lol. I had to change before I read this chapter and I should probably go change again =P



Author's Response:

Lol!  Sorry about the panties, Hon!  Next time get a towel and go commando! Lol! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  Be sure to check out the blog for teasers and picspiration!  Chapter three's teaser has already been posted!

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: jess2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 2 It┤s Not Easy... Being Me...

omg u have to update soon im loving this



Author's Response:

It's an honor to have such a great writer on board!  Love your work, bb!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  Be sure to check out the blog for teasers and picspiration!  Chapter three's teaser has already been posted!

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Krazi

xoxo

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