Date: 08 Oct 2013 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 27
Looking forward to more
Date: 04 Oct 2013 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wonderful chapter. :)
Date: 04 Oct 2013 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 26
That must be so frustrating.
Date: 01 Oct 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 26
Bella is being way too whiney. I give Edward and the boys a lot of credit for putting up with her attitude. Hopefully she will have these babies soon.
Date: 30 Sep 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 26
It was a good chapter :-). Looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow!! I was extatic to finnaly see this story updated!! It hadn't been updated since last may. Thanks for the update!!
Date: 29 Sep 2013 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 26
I liked the chapter but I agree with Edward. If its best for her to be in the hospital, so be it.
Date: 29 Sep 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 26
Poor B. Gotta know she is miserable. Hope she;ll be ok.
Date: 18 May 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm glad that as much as it sucks Bella is trying to be pleasant about her bed rest. The guys are all so sweet. My heart still goes out to them all bedrest is horrible. I was on bedrest for a while and that was before fan fiction. Lol
Date: 18 May 2013 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 25
BB - Great chapter. I get that this is hard for Bella, she is always the caretaker, but I probably tend to agree with the "selfish" reviewers. For being such a caretaker she was being pretty whiny. I know its hard. Great chatper though,. I love all the effort that Edward is making. So sweet.
Date: 15 May 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am glad Bella is out of the hospital, but I wish she would have a better attitude. It would make things much easier for Edward. He is trying so hard to juggle everything. Her bad attitude is not helping.
Date: 15 May 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
looking forward to more
Date: 15 May 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'd be knocking that place of my buy list too. ridiculous. Poor B is prob going nutso
Date: 05 May 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm sorry people are hounding you. But I'm not sorry you updated. Lol
Hope RL gets easier and your son is okay.
Date: 03 May 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
Just want to say, please keep writing! I enjoy your stories! I understand! I have 3 kids under the age of 3. A 3 year old and 1 year old twins. I totally get it. Please stay positive!
Date: 03 May 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter. You made it very real. Take care.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
I have to say that to be honest you don't owe us readers nothing, you write for yourself and don't let anyone tell you different, I get it, you update when you can and its all good, I hope your son is feeling better and that your book edit went smoothly, I love the chapter
Date: 30 Apr 2013 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella needs to grow up and stop being selfish. She is in the hospital because she wasn't taking care of herself and her babies. Their health is what is important. I am sorry she is inconvenienced , but the babies are important.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
great chapter, I am glad you did not your stories down. Update when you can!
Date: 30 Apr 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 24
lookinh forward to more
Date: 30 Apr 2013 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 24
I really love your stories so thanks for not taking them down. They r your stories so update when u can and ignore the people who pester you or just tell them that good things come to those who wait. Personally I think people need to learn how to wait and be patient. :)
Date: 30 Apr 2013 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 24
Poor B. Being stuck in hospital sucks arse.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for keeping your stories up, this one is great. Life is not easy, and I think we owe you some patience and a thank you for the stories you write.
It's amazing how avlive your characters are, I can almost feel Edward's tierdness, and how much Bella wants and need to go home. Looking forward to the next uppdate.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 24
I appreciate the update! I'm looking forward to more but understand real life is a bit more important...lol!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2013 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great start to a story :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2013 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wonderful chapter, looking forward to more. :)
Date: 19 Feb 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm glad that they are going to be honest with each other now.
Date: 19 Feb 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 23
looking forward to more
Date: 18 Feb 2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
they both need to let others in.
Date: 06 Feb 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 22
Poor Edward. He is going to have to calm down or else he's going to go insane. I bet it's safe to say there will be no more babies after these two. There is no way Edward would be able to handle another pregnancy no matter how good the outcome.
Bella needs to really start putting herself and the babies first. I know she is worried about the boys and Edward but they would never survive losing her. They are all lost too much already.
Date: 04 Feb 2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 22
oh E. You can only help so much. Hope she'll be ok though.
Rl happens hun. TC of yourself first and foremost. We'll still be here.
Date: 04 Feb 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 22
I hope Bella starts taking better care of herself. It isn't Edward's fault that she is so stubborn.
Date: 04 Feb 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
oh boy, she is never going to have a moments peace until those babies are born. Rightly so.
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2013 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
WOW Tissue warning! good chapter!!! Being a mother of twin girls I can some what relate to Bella. I had no problems but didn't like people doing things for me.
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2013 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 22
All I could think about as I read this chapter is the tragedy of Lady Sybil on Downton Abbey!
Date: 26 Jan 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
She really needs to stop being do stubborn. Esward really is goj g to have a stroke when they find her. It looks like they are going to have Christmas babies. New Year babies at the latest. I can't see the doctors letting her go longer then a week she is defently in full blown preeclampsia by now.
Date: 25 Jan 2013 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
This is why Edward worries. Bella doesn't take care of herself like she takes care of everyone else. She doesn't see her worth. I hope Edward was outside the bathroom and heard her fall.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2013 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter, I hope Bella is alright.
Can't wait for more. :)
Date: 24 Jan 2013 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
A cliffie!!!! I can't wait to see what happens. Poor Edward is going to go to worry overdrive. I hope everything is okay.
Date: 23 Jan 2013 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 21
Gee why do author's like to leave us hanging? LOL Hurry with the next chapter. Love the story!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 23 Jan 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 21
And you leave it there!!! Ugh! ;-) write soon!
Date: 23 Jan 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
oh no for the cliffy end!!! You are killing me.
Date: 23 Jan 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 21
oh shit! He is going to go ballistic.
Date: 23 Jan 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
Looking forward to more
Date: 18 Jan 2013 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
Edward did the right thing showing Bella all the happy times that will be at the new home. It doesn't matter who paid for the land. It is their home and they will make the memories.
Date: 11 Jan 2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
awww sweet chapter. Glad they got to go out on a date night.
Date: 08 Jan 2013 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think Charlie did the right thing. Renee finally was able to do something to help Bella and her family. Bella needs to go therapy to let go of this anger. Renee is dead. It is only hurting Bella and her family being so angry. She needs to free herself of this burden. Why waste so much energy being angry at a dead person.
Date: 05 Jan 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
My thoughts exactly. Bella needs to let it go. Not for Renee or anyone but herself. She knows she's a good mom, everyone knows that. Bella deserves something from Renee. While I know all she ever wanted was her love and acceptance. Now she can use Renee's money to free them up to spend more time with their family.
Date: 05 Jan 2013 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
Looking forward to more
Date: 05 Jan 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward really has to relax. Bella's right he is going to make himself sick. Bella should be taking his blood pressure along with hers
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter, looking forward to more. :)
Date: 04 Jan 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
Sneaky 'rents. I'd take the land. I'd considering payment/payback for her egg donor being such a biatch
Date: 01 Jan 2013 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
Looking forward to more
Date: 01 Jan 2013 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
glad her and caius got things worked out.
Date: 01 Jan 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 18
I love the story. Keep up the good work!
Date: 30 Dec 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 17
Poor Bella bed rest sucks.
I think I would read them eventually. But not now.
Date: 28 Dec 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella's blood pressure will go down when she rests. She may be in bed, but she is not resting. She is working and worrying about that book. It is no different than sitting at a desk and doing the same task. This is not what the doctor wanted. Bella needs to remember what is truly important.
Date: 24 Dec 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
Def wouldnt read those journals while prego. Not good for the blood pressure I think. Wonder what will come out of the lawyer stuff.
Charlie is such a trip.
Date: 24 Dec 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
loved the chapter looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wonderful chapter, looking forward to more. :)
Date: 18 Dec 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love that they are having girls and MERRY CHRISTMAS to you and yours!!!
Date: 17 Dec 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
Besides resting, Bella might want to watch the sodium in her diet. She needs to eat good food, not so much fast food. Edward needs to get Esme to make some dinners that can be frozen and reheated while Bella is on bedrest.
Date: 17 Dec 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
yey for baby girls. think they should have just sucked up and stayed with the rents for the three months. Esp if B is gonna have to be on bed rest
Date: 17 Dec 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ahh! Girls. And Edward is right the bits are never going to let them live it down.
Date: 17 Dec 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
looking forward to more
Date: 17 Dec 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 16
They have gone through enough... please let them baby girls be okay and everything work out for them... please
Date: 01 Nov 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella handled the situation as well as can be expected. I'm glad they are building a home they really need a place of their own. The boys are great.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 15
It is amazing how the babes seem to have the answers. They don't over analyze they just see things in the simplest terms and come up with an answer that works. I hope this one will work for Bella and she can move on with her live and finally let Renee go. She has more important things in her life.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
looking forward to more
Date: 31 Oct 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
cant really blame bella for not caring much.
Date: 26 Oct 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
They should have checked on rebuilding right after the fire. Whether they did or not they would have been prepared once they made the decision. They should be able to afford a morgage like most Americans. She is an author and he is a photographer. They should make enough money. They just may have to work a little more. It seems like they are playing around more than they are working. At one time they each owned a house and ran a household. They should be able to do one larger house and household.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 14
Can understand wanting their own place. I say build.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
No matter how much she hates her mother and wished her gone it is still going to hurt that's she's dead. Who knows maybe something good will come out of her death.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
looking forward to mroe
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
YES RENEE IS DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
Poor thing s still looking for a house. Renee is so pathetic.
Date: 05 Sep 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
I know they had to have insurance. Why don't they just rebuild a house on the lot. It will take time, but at least they will get a house they love. They can rent a house until then. It might not be their dream house, but it is temporary.
Date: 31 Aug 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
I wonder what he said to her. I had to laugh when you described the house because when we were house hunting we found a similar house. But it was green shag carpet. The downstairs had neon colored lion wallpaper, one bedroom had toy soldier wallpaper and another bedroom had big neon flowers all over. They even covered the kitchen cabinets with "wood" contact paper. I kid you not.
Date: 30 Aug 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 13
I like it. Update soon :)
Date: 29 Aug 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
looking forward to more
Date: 01 Aug 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 12
Another amazing chapter.
Date: 16 Jul 2012 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well you knew she was going to eat fudge too. My obsessive craving were Wendy's cheese fried and Chocolate Lasagna. Got to love those pregnancy hormones.
Date: 13 Jul 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella needs to take care of those babies and eat properly. The sugar will give her brain energy to write, but it is not enough for proper baby growth. She has to stop crying over the house and move toward the future. Edward and Bella are driving the boys crazy. They have to find a place to live or build their dream home before they want to kill Edward's parents. It is hard to live full time with parents as an adult.
Date: 12 Jul 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
looking forward to more
Date: 11 Jul 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
Lol for cotton candy cravings
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Bella. Not only does she have double the amount of hormones coursing through her body, but now she has all the added stress of losing the house. I hope the stress doesn't have a negative effect on the babied. Carrying twins is hard enough without the added pressure.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
I can understand Bella being lost right now. She is nesting right now with no where to nest. She feels she has lost all her memories. She will be more realistic at how blest she is that everyone is safe as time passes. She will see that she can recreate quite a bit with friends and family help. They all have pictures to copy and share. They all have memories to rewrite in baby books. The wedding photographer should still have the pictures. Documents can be applied for at government agencies. They have insurance for the rest of the stuff. They are blessed because they have a loving family who will help them recreate their past life, while they work on building a future.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter, looking forward to more.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
Awwwwwww, they were making a cradle? Let's hope that somehow Sarah and Brody somehow kept some stuff safe or something. That just completely sucks!!! Poor guys!!!! Looking toward to the next update.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 11
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter, I loved it. Sweet what the boys were making 4 the babies & how Brody & Sarah came 2 them in a dream & told them 2. Devastating how they lost all their personal items.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
boys took it fairly well. aww the cradle was sweet
Date: 18 May 2012 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
That was gut wrenching. Tge poor things losing everything like that. It makes me want to backup all my pictures and put them in my safety deposit box. Cloths and things can be replaced but I think I would be Tge most upset about my pictures.
Date: 17 May 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
The stuff in the house doesn't matter in the long run. That is why you buy insurance. Esme and Charlie have pictures that they can get copied. With their careers I would hope they were smart enough to have off site back ups in case of emergencies for there worki computers and archives. Businesses should do this. It doesn't matter if it is a small or large one. Hard drive back ups should be done at least weekly and kept in a fireproof safe for all home based businesses. This will help them get their business side back up pretty fast. They have family to stay with until the insurance money comes throush and they can rebuid their house on site. It will take time, but the Cullens will be come through this stronger than ever. All the people are safe and that is what really matters.
Date: 15 May 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
That bitch!!!! Or whoever did this... That's horrible!!! I really hope it's nothing the boys were up to in their room. Theyll feel devastated if it's their fault. So glad to see an update for this fic... Can't wait for the next one ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love the update!!