Date: 17 Nov 2011 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love it! So, I guess there is going to be a wedding soon! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2011 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love it Charlie is priceless and Edward is to die for lol.
Date: 17 Nov 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
3 babies and a wedding. They are going to be busy!
Date: 17 Nov 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
hahahahah.... It was so amazing!!!!! Such a hilarious chapter... hahahha... "run Edward, run..." hahahaahh... Charlie is right to only want the best for his daughter and Edward is really lucky that he likes him...!!!!! Can't believe that Bella is pregnant... So Sue, Esme, Bella and Alice pregnant all together... No the only one missing is Rose...!!!!!!! Can't wait to read more...!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
loved the chapter looking forward to seeing what happens next
Date: 14 Nov 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
cute chapter lol
Date: 14 Nov 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
This shit is priceless! I love it!!!!!
Date: 13 Nov 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
I think that is the funniest chapter btw esmee and sue. I wonder will you have edward and bella pg and someone else pg same time. omg i hope you update soon. still laughing my ass off.
Date: 13 Nov 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
This is great please update soon
Date: 12 Nov 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
To funny all the old folks are getting pregers lol
Date: 11 Nov 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
They where all perfect to gether.
Date: 11 Nov 2011 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
So Edward has the go ahead I cant wait for Bella's reaction.
Date: 11 Nov 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love Carlisle to funny. At least Edward has admitted his feelings to his dad.
Date: 11 Nov 2011 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
That was hilarious! That chapter was great from beginning to end, Edward getting caught necking with Bella, Charlie and Sue pregnant and Bella's reaction, and finally Esme being pregnant to. Must be something in the water, everyone is pregnant except Bella and Rose but I'm sure if Edward has anything to say about it he will be getting her down the aisle and pregnant in no time. Can't wait for more!
Date: 11 Nov 2011 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
Brilliant turn of events!!
Date: 11 Nov 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
Whoa!! Can't wait for more!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
lol double...no triple baby because Alice is pregnant too!!! Ahh mania lol. Please update soon=)
Date: 10 Nov 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
just found this story and read all 7 chaps...i really hope u continue and update soon! i love it!!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMG, is it in the water? Whose next E&B or R&Em?
Author's Response: You will soon find out...it's going to run rampant ... It's not in the water, more like an airborn virus!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
wow so both of their parnets are having babies, too funny !!!!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love it! Sue and Esme...this is prefect! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMG!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!! Jessica is still trying but it won't do any good... hahahah... Can't believe that both parents are expecting!!!!! GOD!!!! Both Sue and Esme are pregnant!!!!! PERFECT!!!!! All the kids are so happy!!!!! And you expected for Bella or Alice or Rose to get soon or something but not the parents...!!!!!!!hahahaah!!!!!
I love what Edward and Bella hav etogether and that they can't keep their hands off of each other... Charlie took it really well in the cafe...
Can't wait to read more... UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
love it Bella and Edward need to get pregnant :P
Date: 10 Nov 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
Whats in the water? Is Bella next?
Date: 10 Nov 2011 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
so far i love this story!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh wow, is there something in the water? Great chapter!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
loved the chapter looking forward to the enxt chatper
Date: 07 Oct 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
Go Bella!!!!
Date: 07 Oct 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
hmmm very interesting!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
I needed a good laugh and you surely accomplished that! Great descriptions too!
Date: 26 Aug 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
I really loved it!! I can not wait for more!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! They defenatelly know great games...!!!!! They learnt so much about each other!!! And the best is that they told the truth... Loved the lemon!!!!!! Can't wait till next chapter... How will Jessica react when she sees Bella as a TA????? And Edward's girlfriend????
Author's Response: Jessica doesn't like TA bella...at all.
Date: 20 Aug 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
hahahhaa PERFECT!!!!!!!!! Edward was so cool at first and then he showed the paper... Be;;a was so happy!!!!!!! I loved that they said I love you!!!!!!!! And Emmett has fallen for Rose!!!!! Will Edward brake Carlisle's and Esme's record????? Please YES!!!!!! Can't wait...
Date: 20 Aug 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
omg!!!!!!! Of course Alice knows Bella and Rose... And aro was so understanting!!!! Edward should have told Bella what is going on... Can't wait to read their conversation!!!!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
hahahaah I LOVE Carlisle!!!!!!!!!!! He is amazing!!!!!!! And hilarious!!! HE know tha exact think to say to creep out Edward!!!!!!!!!!
It's perfect that Edward have alreadu fallen!!!!! And I think that the same goes for Bella!!!!!! Aro will be fine right????? PLEASE!!!!!!!! And Edward had to hear everything... haahahah.... CAn't wait to read more....
Date: 20 Aug 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
Sounds like a good way to wake up to me...minus Rose's music choices of course. I can't wait to see what is next for these two. I love this story! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response: There is so much more.
Date: 20 Aug 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love the whole family! Carlisle and Esme are so much fun. Edward and Bella are so hot together. Great chapter...thanks!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah!!! It amazing that Bella kissed him and of course he wanted it too... Please don't make them regret it or anything... Edward was so worried but he will help her to not get hurt again... hahahah... Carlisle doesn't know that Bella is Edward's s tudent-TA???? And Alice already met her??? Perfect!!!!!!!! What will happen to the BBQ????
Date: 20 Aug 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
omg!!!! I really like how this story is going... Edward is already starting to feel thinks for Bella and the same goes for her too... What are the rules about teacher and TA??? And what I didn't like was what Bella said... Will she try to stay away from Edward???
Date: 20 Aug 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is going to be so much fun! I love this Rose by the way. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love getting Carlisle's POV. The conversation here at the end was so funny. Bella has so m pretty awesome dreams too! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
Is this last part a dream? I am loving this story. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
lol awkward questions with the Cullens. And at least when they woke up in the morning it wasn't awkward to see each other, at least until Bell went to the bathroom=P
Author's Response: Bella and Edward will never be against each other in this story and you will find out soon how things come together.
Date: 18 Aug 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is going to be interesting! I can't wait to get caught up. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 18 Aug 2011 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
good chapter :)
Date: 18 Aug 2011 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
Haha! That was great! Enjoyed the party and the morning after hangover sex! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Aug 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
looking foward to seeing what happens next
Author's Response: Will be soon.
Date: 18 Aug 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love it. Great update.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Date: 18 Aug 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
I want Edward for a teacher...even if I am too old too even remember schooling. You are never too old too learn
Author's Response: Only if he teaches like that...hell yeah.
Date: 18 Aug 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
LOL she broke her hoo-ha
Author's Response: That actually happened to my sister...she will never live that shit down. My brother was the moron who broke his leg.
Date: 18 Aug 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hilarious great chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it and that I'm keeping the funny up.
Date: 09 Aug 2011 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am loving this story so far! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I hope it stays as funny as it has been...I think where I am taking this story will surprise some and just make other ROTFLTAF (roll on the floor laughing their asses off).
Date: 05 Aug 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
Perfect! :)
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
Brilliant!!
Author's Response: I love the reviews. Thanks for leaving one for every chapter. I try not to be a review hore, but who the hell isn't really...
Date: 05 Aug 2011 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! :)
Author's Response: Again...thanks.
Date: 02 Aug 2011 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMG.... can we sat hawt! That chapter was awesome and the bathroom sex was O-mazing! I just Esme and Carlisle they´re so bad! Can´t wait for the next chapter! Great job!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response: Hey, sex between these two can be nothing but...right? Hell yeah!!!
Date: 01 Aug 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
hottttt i would attack edward to lol
Author's Response: You know it!
Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
love the meeting the family
Author's Response: Edward's family has nothing compared to my own.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
goog grief this is freak'n good please more chapters... please!!!!!
Author's Response: More chapters soon, was stuck a little on chapter 6, but managed to get it fixed. Will be posting by end of week.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
this keeps getting better and better please keep going...
Author's Response: I swear I chuckle constantly while I'm writing.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
gosh this is so flippin funny with all the wonder stuff that one also likes in a mushy E and B kinda way when the story isn't all angsty.... love it!!!!
Author's Response: I really hate angst...so my shit is going to be funny (pardon the french).
Date: 01 Aug 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
that was just over the top hiliarious!!!!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Keep reading.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can tell just from the wonderful POEM how much I'm gonna love this fanfic
Author's Response: I really enjoyed making that poem. It is going to be a fantastic ride. Keep reading...
Date: 01 Aug 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
Just read straight through... I love it!!! Looking forward to next update!!! Soooo wedding in next chapter? JOP at city hall is open :)
Author's Response: What I have in store for this story is just going to thrill all of you. Let's just say Jasper isn't the only one who is going to be in hell...
Date: 01 Aug 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
lol 2 weeks is fast but I love Carlisle and Esme's relationship with their children. =) Awesome chapter, please update soon
Author's Response: I actually based a lot of Carlisle and Esme's relationship off of my parents. They may have waited a little bit to get married, but my mother was a fifteen year old, three month pregnant bride in 1967. Yeah, I'm the oldest to have children at the ripe old age of 18. Now I have an 18 year old. More fun to come...
Date: 01 Aug 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
cute chapter
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 31 Jul 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
Awesome chapter! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you, and I am really glad you like the story so far. Keep reading.
Date: 31 Jul 2011 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loving it! Looking forward to the wild ride of them getting to know each other now that they've moved the relationship on. C x
Author's Response: Going to be funny...can promise that.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
so cute :)
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 25 Jul 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter. Can't wait for the updates ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, next update soon.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
I loved it freaking hysterical the whole hospital situation. Poor Bella can't even make herself relieve some stress without injuring herself any further. And yay they kissed!!!!
Author's Response: How can that scene not be funny...something I always wanted from the books...humor.
Date: 24 Jul 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
LOVE IT.......dying for more
Author's Response: soon...promise
Date: 24 Jul 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
lol car porn and Emmett
Oh god, did Rose give Emmett rode head or somethin? lol
and good, E and B can be together
I love this story. It's so good so far and I can't wait to read more of it. please update soon
Author's Response: I left that open so you could fill in the blanks...depends on how nasty your thinking is...
Date: 24 Jul 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
lol Carlisle and Esme creepying out Edward=P
Aro better approve of E and B because he is friends with Carlisle=)
Author's Response: My parents do that shit to ma all the time...haven't been able to eat magic shell for a long time (shiver).
Date: 24 Jul 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
LMAO she fell out of bed doing that!! haha
Author's Response: I loved writing this chapter...almost as much as writing it.
Date: 24 Jul 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
OOOOoooh this sounds really good so far. I love your writing style and both points of view. I'm excited to continue reading this story
Author's Response: Truthfully, this is the first time I have written in first person. Glad you like it.
Date: 24 Jul 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
your story is wonderful, I love it cant wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that.
Date: 24 Jul 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
Finally, the BBQ! Can´t wait to see who has the honor of unbuttoning Bella´s dress afterward. I thought it was cute that Rose, Bella and the Pixie formed a relationship without knowing who the other one was. Now about Ms. Rose... did she or did she not give Emmy Bear a little road head? I´m just say´n Rose and Em were a little discombobulated by the time they showed up. I´m just say´nª! Loved it bb, can´t wait for more!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response: I'll give a hint...Bella doesn't take off her dress, but one really doesn't need to to...
Date: 23 Jul 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
I have no problem with the pace these two are moving. It works for them. Her word vomit in Edward´s presence is funny. Rose is a mess and Carlisle and Esme are bad. Still lovin´ it! Keep up the good work and see you next time, looking forward to reading the new story!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response: Will be posting soon, Carlisle only gets worse...
Date: 23 Jul 2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
Lol! She fell out of be masturbating! AND SHE TOLD HIM! Priceless! This story is hilarious. I´m loving your use of the characters. Don´t get me started on Rose and that hot a$$ kiss! Can´t wait for the next one!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response: I am so glad you like it. I have to say when I revisit the story to edit, I laughed as well. Next chapter soon, promise.
Date: 23 Jul 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
great update !!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the encouragment to keep writing, it means a lot.
Date: 23 Jul 2011 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well, well...I like the way this Edward works, no sneaking around, checks things out so there's no surprises...good man!
Author's Response: I have to admit that I hate it when a story isn't at least a lttle realistic. There is not going to much drama in this story, so the whole thing will run smoothly. Thanks for the review.
Date: 23 Jul 2011 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
excited to see what ahppens next
Author's Response: fun and games...nothing but fun and games.
Date: 23 Jul 2011 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it ! Keep up the great work and dialogue, can't wait to see where things go.
Author's Response: Every person in this story will get a surprise...just keep reading.
Date: 23 Jul 2011 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great story so far. Interesting how you got them all together. Can't wait to see where it all goes. Wonderfully written.
Author's Response: This story will only get more funny...
Date: 21 Jul 2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
cute chapter excited to see what happens next
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, I plan on posting soon. Connie
Date: 20 Jul 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
that´s funny!!! I like POVC and now I´m anxious to know your new story I have to say when I started read it I was thinking it will be more serious but I really like what you are doing here!!! hope you can post a new story soon!!!sorry my english.
xoxo
Author's Response: I'll be getting that new story out as soon as I get some chapters worked out. Thanks for reading Connie