Date: 27 Sep 2015 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
really cool 2fer ;) thanks for sharing it on here ;D
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
Too short! BUT very good!! :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2012 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
Seriously! Seriously! Oh my god! Seriously! You just ended it there. "i think my water just broke." Seriously! I'm loved the story! But I'm a little disappointed about the ending. Did they have a boy or girl, i think you could've added another chapter or at least added to this one. But anyway... your the writer and you did an amazing job.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thank you so much for sharing this. I had a great time reading these two chapters. It has been a pleasure to be able to read your works.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
The power of a wrong number. I wonder if Alice knew who E was before they met up.... ;-)
Thank you so much for sharing this story!
Date: 08 Apr 2012 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
omg!but is it too early? what was his surprise?update soon
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 2
I loved this story and the continuation! I am so sorry to heat that you won't be writing any more stories! Why not?! Are you dying? Leaving the fandom? Pulling to publish? What happened? Very disappointed to hear and wish you well, but you will be missed.
Thank you for sharing your work with us!
Date: 08 Apr 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
perfect timing edward!
Date: 07 Apr 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thanks for writing
Date: 07 Apr 2012 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
I've never read your stuff, but thanks for a great story. Will read your others. I hope you continue writing in any way you can.
Date: 03 Feb 2012 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting.Not sure if this was meant to be a one shot but I seemed like everything happened to fast. I love how Jacob just magically disappears and is never heard of again. It's true he always ends up getting his heart broken. You are a good writer and I enjoyed they story, but I think this story has potential to be something bigger like a full story. More time for things to developovertime. Every good story has a good conflict, and I never saw that in here. So just an idea of making it into a full story having both guys fighting over her possibly. Not trying to offend just giving my thoughts and suggestions!
Author's Response:
This was always intended to be a one shot. Something light and fluffy for charity. I will however be adding a second chapter (again for charity) but it won't be made public until 14th March. So if you want to read the second chapter before its posted, you need to donate to Fandom for Heroes.
Date: 06 Jan 2012 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
It was ment to be I knew Alice had to know about it. cant wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh love, love, love that was great. Thanks xxx
Author's Response:
Thanks. Add to your alerts as there will be one more chapter.
Date: 01 Jan 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
hey
great OS!
soooo cute!
they really belong to each otehr!
bye
Lil
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 31 Dec 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your stories are quite captivating. Each on makes me wish there was more.
Author's Response:
Thank you. And I'm sorry there's not more but I'm a firm believer in "always leave them wanting more" lol. Good news though, there will be a second chapter of this.
Date: 07 Oct 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awwwwwwwwww, so beautiful. I loved how they meet each other in the end *-*
I wish I could find someone like E someday, hahahahaha.
Congrats for this o/s!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your review x
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
I had a reivew all typed out... and the site decided to log me out. Grrr...
Anyway, here's what I remember:
This was very cute, I really enjoyed reading it. It's nice to read something fluffy every now and again, though I tend to sway towards fluff more often then not.
This is my very first reivew on this site! I got off to a good start on the submitting it part didn't I?
Anyways, more on topic, great job!
(Does this site look suspiciously like Twilighted or what? I like it!)
...Yeah went something like that!
Author's Response:
lol. Thank you for the review. I'm honoured to be your first review on this site. And yes, it is a lot like Twilighted.
Date: 26 Aug 2011 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
OH MY GAHHHHHHHHHHHH
Im gonna have a heart attack with it ending right there..I need like...oh GOD I WANT MORE!!!!
Jesus woman...all that hotness and then to just leave it hanging...I think ima die from unresolved sexual tension.
*passes out*
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry I left you hanging! Maybe one day I'll bring these two back to correct that UST! Thanks for the review.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
cute!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
I actually think this would be a great full story. Loved it.
Author's Response:
Maybe one day. Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
loved it!! :) wish i got a wrong number like that....lol!
Author's Response:
Thank you! And I actually did get a wrong number like this. It led to a life long friendship (unfortunately no soul mate at the end of it) and that is what led to this story!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Aww, how sweet!
Thank you for the amazingness!
I would love to read more of them. I probably won't get these two out of my head!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Perhaps one day I'll bring these two back!
Date: 08 Jul 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
cute
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 07 Jul 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was adorable. I loved it. Very fluffy!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awwwww - I loved this! Wouldn't phone sex with E be fantastic?!!!!
Thanks so much for this story!
Author's Response:
I should be thanking you for reading. So thanks!
Date: 07 Jul 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
this was a awsome story, I loved it. So sweet!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really loved it more please!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. Perhaps one day there will be more...
Date: 07 Jul 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Cute!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review x
Date: 07 Jul 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
awwww...
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review x
Date: 06 Jul 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
that was so sweet. loved it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review x
Date: 06 Jul 2011 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I LIKE IT I HOPE THAT YOU KEEP GOING WITH IT..
Author's Response:
Thank you. I have no plans to continue with this story but who knows what the future may hold.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
I give you all my love for a beautifull, beautifull story.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great job. I enjoyed it a lot.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Date: 06 Jul 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
So perfect and romantic... i loved it. can you pleas write more?
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. There are no plans for a continuation at present but who knows what the future may hold.
Date: 06 Jul 2011 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great o/s!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 06 Jul 2011 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
this was so effing cute!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
enjoyed reading
Author's Response:
I'm glad, thank you.
Date: 06 Jul 2011 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesomeness..... Maybe continue this? I would love to see how things play out since they now have 'met' Alice was being very sneaky, and i wonder what happened with Jacob?
Author's Response:
There are no plans for a continuation at present but maybe in the future that will change.
Date: 06 Jul 2011 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! What a shame this is oly a oneshot.
Author's Response:
Thank you x
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful oneshot!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much.
Date: 06 Jul 2011 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was so cute! I loved it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.