Date: 07 Nov 2020 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lovely beginning
Date: 29 Apr 2017 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well..thats was interesting..
Date: 28 Apr 2017 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Sweets...love blossom
Date: 08 Aug 2015 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
Its hard to read when the words are all ran together. I love the characters and the story so far. I hate Tanya and think she should be ripped apart and burried in the gorund in separate holes. Emmett I absolutely love his character. He is so funny in a child like way.
Author's Response:
Might be an Internet glitch. I've checked all the chapters, and I don't see any words running together. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 28
awesome story!!! i loved bellas shields ;) also how edward was the oldest ;)but a bit confused about his human life? in the 1st chapter it was mentioned he said his mum died when he was young and his dad brought him up? then later on it went to canon, also what was he doing in his life as a human? i liked how jake imprinted on leah and was older;) and embry on becka;)but i'm a bit lost on how old ben was cos he's bellas age and edward seemed to know him for a while? i hope the answers are in the sequel?;D
Date: 25 Feb 2015 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
chapter 24 is missing!!!!!! ;(
Date: 31 Jul 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm enjoying this ... Thanks ;)
Date: 23 Jun 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hello
I am enjoying this story
would you mind emailing me the ages of everyone in this story.. cbrasher@live.com.au
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf
:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin
This is a good chapter.
Bella loves her teacher.
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella asks questions!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2013 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the first chapter!
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2012 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 28
I loved your story, so much! I apologize for the lack of reviews. When I first started reading, I think I only reviewed the first six or seven chapter. When I got back to reading it again, I just breezed through it. It really was so great, thanks for writing. :o) xoxo Kelly
Date: 19 Jan 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 28
thanks for the story
Date: 19 Jan 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 27
okay.. intersting
Date: 18 Jan 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 25
oh the good old bed breaker!!
Date: 18 Jan 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
interesting twist on her powers!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
okay haha i just have to giggle.. how were you changed bella? HAHAHA
Date: 17 Jan 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 21
wow! i never liked paul
Date: 17 Jan 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
here comes the drama!!!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
everything always works out perfect!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
a little less drama then her b-day in the saga!!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 15
okay we have had all hearts and flowers here.. is something bad going to happen?
Date: 17 Jan 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
bella is one lucky girl... sick mind ed sick mind!!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh boy.. HOT! tanya is her usual self.. hum is she going to find james change him and then try to kill bella?
Date: 17 Jan 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
tanya the B had to show up didn't she
Date: 17 Jan 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
ed is so F-ing HOT!!!!!!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
i like this jacob!!!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
nothing like your dad coming to give you congratulations about popping a girls cherry and then welcoming her to the family!! HAHA!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
boy oh boy bella is something else!!!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh boy... ed you are something else!
Date: 17 Jan 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh bella you vixen!!! ha! can't see uptight ed doing that in the saga!! haaa sorry i just have to chuckle
Date: 17 Jan 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf
i hope carlisle is right cause he wasn't right in the saga!! please no babies!!!
Date: 13 Jan 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin
wow they do move fast and ed your dirty mouth... it would be so funny for him to say that in twilight! hah!
Date: 13 Jan 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
intresting turn of events.
Date: 13 Jan 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow kinda like you ed he goes with his impluses!! can't wait to read more
Date: 09 Dec 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 28
The wedding was nice, but the honeymoon started off with a bang! Right in front of Charlie, too! Must have freaked him out a little. Edward and Bella are going to be happy in Chicago, I hope. Alice's vision of a child in their arms is a puzzle, but never say never. This has been a wonderful story and I thank you for a great read!
Date: 09 Dec 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 27
Whew! Big sigh of relief! It's bad enough to have attacked Angela and turned her, but I feared much worse than that. Now if Ben Cheney is the one Alice sees for Angela's future, all will work out nicely.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 26
It was scary enough to think Edward accidentally killed Bella, what in the world has happened now? If Bella has killed Sue, she's in massive trouble, the pack will kill her and Charlie will never forgive her!
Date: 09 Dec 2011 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
I guess even as well as Bella is adjusting, she doesn't get off scott free, from new-born tendencies. Lucky for Mike Newton Edward and Emmett were there to rescue him from Bella's newborn rage.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 23
Bella's developing powers are way cool! This is going to be a lot of fun to watch how she adjusts to them . Edward has to be beyond thrilled the hard part is over and his love is no longer in pain. Hunting cats together is pretty damn cool, too!
Date: 09 Dec 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
I thought this was going to be a wonderful tropical Christmas vacation and now Bella's in big trouble. If her transformation is taking place now, it's going to cause problems.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
That was just horrifying! I hope the pack rips Paul to pieces for what he did to Rebekah! He's insane and evil! How could he do that to his pack brother?Yuck! Thank heaven vampires can regenerate and reattach! I'm glad the family knows about Embry and are happy for Rebekah.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella is becoming slightly enhanced by Edward's venom, so that might be an easier way for her to change, without so much pain. The Halloween costume deal was pretty funny, but there's nothing humorous about Rebekah being attacked!
Date: 09 Dec 2011 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
That was a really good way for Charlie to learn what Edward and his family are and how Bella would be changed. It's kind of neat, too, that Jake will be always in her life. There's lots about your story that is much better than the Twight saga original.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
Lots of drama there at Charlies', but at least it simmered down somewhat. It has to make a difference that Charlie and Sue are getting married, so his upset over his little girl is somewhat diffused. Wait until he learns what the Cullens are! This was by far the best 18th birthday party for Bella I've ever read.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 17
Every father's nightmare, catching his daughter in bed and in the act. Poor Charlie!. I can't wait to hear the tapdance Carlisle's about to perform. What explanation can he come up with that will placate Charlie? That mating imperative deal was pretty damn scary, too. Not to mention when Bella suffered a milder form of it.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 16
Emmett and his silly game. I knew it would get him in trouble. I laughed so hard at Esme hauling Jasper by the ear and then him and Emmett kissing. What a couple of goofs. Scared Edward a lot when he bruised Bella, good that Carlisle detected no real damage.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 15
This is so exciting for Rebekah to join the Cullens and Carlisle must be so happy to have his daughter again after all these centuries.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
First, I have to mention that the last couple of chapters have arrived on this site all crammed together. Sure makes it hard to read, but I'm into this story big time. To review, this journey to England has been great, despite Bella's nightmares. She keeps dreaming Edward leaves her and that scares me. Are you really planning on that happening? Lord, I hope not! Carlisle's taking everyone to his father's church was cool all by itself, but got amazing when Rebekah showed up!
Date: 09 Dec 2011 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
This is why it's great to have money, you can go wonderful places and do wonderful things. Bella is going to have a great summer plus she'll have Edward. What could be better?
Date: 09 Dec 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
Tanya is an unusually nasty bitch in your story, I don't trust her to leave Bella alone any more than Edward does. All things considered, this has been a good spring break.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 11
Good old Emmett, he has no filter to speak of and dearly loves to tease Edward and Bella. Jake was rather sweet, running up there to check on his 'lil sis', making sure she was okay. Now, to find out who the voyeuer is .
Date: 09 Dec 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love your description of the Alaska house, especially Edward's room, with all his mementos of his human life. I think this will be a nice vacation, even if Jake is coming up to snoop around. This is a really good take on the saga.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
That James is going to do something bad, or at least try. Hopefully Edward can take him out if it comes to that. The meeting between the wolves and the Cullens went really well, I thought. Now if spring break will get here, and Bella and Edward can get some alone time, everyone will be happy.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
Boy, Bella fights dirty! It all went perfectly, though as soon as they were alone. That was pretty cute when Bella thought she had broken Edward. Good thing Carlisle was close by to allay their fears. As it was their first time, I think it was lovely and I'm sure it won't be the last.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
James is a real prick, as far as Bella and Edward are concerned, although Bella serving her detention turned out great for them both.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
So the big discussion is about to happen. Bella needs to understand just what the consequences may be, of her and Edward having sex. She may not be thinking of the possible dangers, just that she loves him so much she wants to show him. Edward's brothers teasing him and wanting all the gory details was pretty funny.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
It would be a good thing for the wolves and the vampires to get to know each other, so this barbeque could be a real opportunity. Edward and Jake both care for Bella, so why wouldn't they get along? I can tell, Bella is going to be hard for Edward to resist.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf
How handy to have the talents of his family making things a bit easier for Edward. Alice can see problems coming, so as to avoid them, Jasper can help the emotional climate and Carlisle can offer advice, medical and otherwise. Now, I'm off to read what's up with wolf-stench in Bella's house.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin
Bella's middle name should be bravery, she just takes all this supernatural information right in stride. Makes life a lot easier foe Edward, and the rest of the Cullens.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
You said you would have Edward and Bella progressing in their relationship pretty fast, and I see you weren't joking. It's alright, though, I've always thought they fell for each other like a ton of bricks. All the Cullens seem to be happy with the way things are going.
Date: 08 Dec 2011 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like that Edward is a teacher at Forks High, instead of a student. It is going to cause a problem with Bella being his mate, though. I can see where that might be a bit illegal. Still, I'm happy Edward has found his other half. This is going to be an interesting story, I can tell.
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
Heh, I think Newton got just what he deserved. Edward better get it in gear and talk to Bella soon, before they both go insane, I really don't think either one of them can hold out much longer. Can't wait for dinner with the Cullens and Charlie, I'll be curious to see what he thinks of them. =) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm sorry that I keep repeating myself, but I love your story so damn much! It's too much fun to read; I really like the way you changed up the story, and the characters' personalities are killing me! I can't wait for the BBQ, that should be all kinds of fun. I'm really, really looking forward to Bella and Alice's 'sleepover', I know that's going to be more than just fun. ;) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf
Love your story! So...here comes the werewolf. I can't wait to see how you've written Jake. I really love the way you've written your characters, they're priceless and the dialog between Edward and Bella is so good. I of course, love the rest of the family too. I just love to laugh out loud when I'm reading a great fic, and I thank you for that. =) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin
Those two are so cute and sweet, oh and horny too; I just love Edward and Bella in your story. Once again I thank you for writing. I really like your writing style, and your sense of humor. =) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
Nope, no novel this time.(lucky for you) *giggles* I really love your story, I'm having such a great time reading. I'm laughing out loud a lot and now with this chapter, I've started in on the 'Awwww's'. I can't help it, Edward and Bella are so cute. =) See ya next chapter! Kelly
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this first chapter so very much! I could just kick myself for not reading your story sooner, I've had it fav'd since the end of July! I'm really looking forward to reading the rest.
I do love my canon characters, but the subtle changes that you made to fit your story are great. I like to read a story that's a little different in that way, I think it makes a story 'pop', if that makes sense.
I had to laugh at myself when Edward just attached himself to Bella's lips because as I was reading, I threw my hand over my eyes and said "Edward, no!" I'm not exactly sure why I had that reaction, maybe I thought it was too soon, or the fact that Bella is seventeen, or it just came out of no where.(sorry for rambling on) Oh, that was something I wanted to mention; I loved that you had Bella say that she had a 'faucet mouth', it was so cute and I've never heard that expression. In most stories when a character keeps rambling on they call it 'word vomit', so I loved that you came up with a new expression.
I think you could call me a 'faucet mouth', it seems to fit right about now. I can almost sense you yawning as you read this novel of a review. Well I love the start of your story and I can tell I'm going to love the whole thing. Thanks so much for writing. =) Kelly
Date: 02 Nov 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 28
Great story, I cant wait to read whats ur going to put them through next. Are you planning on doing just Bella/ Edward pov, or are you going to do others for the sequel. Keep up the awesome work.
Date: 30 Oct 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
holy cow was reading your story and in this chappy May 8th just jumped out at me both my dad and my best friends grandma died on may 8th 8 yrs apart (i know spooky) it gets ecen better then we burried my dad on may 12th she same day and year my best friend got married and if that is not creepy enough for you we met each othere three years later on july8th my dads birthday. see why we are best friends lol....awesome story so far
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I picked May 8th because it's my birthday. :) May 12th was my great grabdma's b-day. July 8th is my beta's b-day. Small world. lol
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 28
Awesome ending and I am so looking forward to the sequel.
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 28
Awesome job. I really enjoyed this story. I am looking forward to the sequel.
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 28
I absolutely love this story and can't wait till the sequel is up!!!
Date: 27 Oct 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
I am not sure, was this the end?
Date: 14 Oct 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 27
Poor Bella will probably always carry the guilt that she caused Angela her only human friend to have no choice in the matter of whether she wanted to be a vampire or not even though it definetely seems that Angela loves her new life. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 12 Oct 2011 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 27
I am happy Ben is showing up in the story. I am sad they are leaving Forks, but Bella should have not gotten so cocky. At least her family can visit her at their new home.
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2011 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 27
Fantastic chapter! I'm confused how Bella can turn herself back to human???
10 coffee's!
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2011 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 27
Great ending on this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
angela and ben :)
Date: 10 Oct 2011 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 26
Well I know I personally would love Edward to f*ck me until I couldn't walk.....
Oh dear - what has Bella done?!
Date: 10 Oct 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 26
They need to watch Bella closer. She is not safe. She seems to have tantrums that she can't control.
Date: 10 Oct 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow!! That is amazing that Carlisle's daughter found him after all of this time and that she has survived this long and he hasn't been able to find her.
Date: 10 Oct 2011 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh man they are taking it out of the country!! I hope that Emmett can behave himself over in Europe.
Date: 10 Oct 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well now they have to worry about Tanya!!! That damn girl just doesn't get it does she?
Date: 10 Oct 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh was it Emmett that followed them into the woods??? or maybe Tanya that has apeared.
Date: 09 Oct 2011 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
That is so sweet that Edward is able to show Bella things from before he was changed.
Date: 09 Oct 2011 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
I like this Edward and Jacob. It is good that they are all getting along for the sake of Bella.
Date: 09 Oct 2011 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well I guess that Edward can be kinna human even for a minuet!
Date: 09 Oct 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well I guess that Edward and Bella might have to watch themselves when they are at school.
Date: 09 Oct 2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
They are sooo cute together! I wonder if Charlie is going to notice that there is something going on between the two of them.
Date: 08 Oct 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 26
Hy!
I've found your Story and i love it, really!
I've begun to read and I could not stop.
Its very very erotic, cool and funny.
I'm waiting forward to your next chapter.
Angie:)
Date: 07 Oct 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
So I guess that Jacob is a little on their side which might be a good thing!