[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 8:51 AM Title: Life After You
I love me some Emmett ass kickin. Although this seemed to be a failed experiment, I think more trials need to be taken to see if you can beat the stupid out of someone. Emmett is thick-headed; you need to break through the concrete barrier before it sinks in. I hope there's going to be a Alice/Emmett encounter, cause I wouldn't mind a little Ninjabell action. It will be interesting to see how the family interacts with Emmett now. After Jazz went psycho killer on him and he's the calm one, what is everyone else going to do?
It was nice to see some Bree/Edward time. I love that they interact like they've known each other for years. They seem so comfortable around each other.
Author's Response:
LOL If Emmett doesn't behave himself, I'm sure someone will attempt to beat the stupid from him. But I have faith in his committment to his counseling.
There will be an Alice/Emmett encounter, but I can't promise Ninjabell. LOL That would be interesting to see though.
Bree and Edward both see how important the other is to Bella and how they each contribute to her happiness. Though, there will never be a shortage of moments where Bree makes Edward's ears turn red but that's just life with Bree. LOL!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 4:37 AM Title: Life After You
Yay for Jasper beating the crap out of EM, He totally deserved it...wow 18 weeks already, time does fly doesn't it.
Author's Response:
It really does. All too soon, it will be October and a brand new Halloween.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2011 11:45 PM Title: I'm Not Calling You A Liar
I like reading this so much better over here... plus work actually lets me review!
Loved the lovin, it was so needed.. that blood pressure moment was quite scary, so heartbroken for Ali right now... and Bella all over again, its just too much to believe sometimes...
Loving it as always!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Yeah, a little more heartbreak at first but from here on out, things will get infinitely better!
Date: 31 May 2011 2:30 AM Title: I'm Not Calling You A Liar
Another great chapter! I'm so glad that they are moving to a pout of trust in their relationship that they could move on with their intimacy. I'm also glad that The secrets around Emmett are finally coming out.
Author's Response:
Yes, all the secrets with Emmett are coming out and after a little more hurt, things will be better for everyone.
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2011 5:46 AM Title: I'm Not Calling You A Liar
Its the end of the chapter already!? O well, I was glad to see we were back to a little lemonade. I worry about Alice though. I can see her go both completely ballistic or suck it up, talk it out and be the best friend with a chip on her shoulder to her brother.....OK maybe I've read too many stories.
Nothing like a little pregnancy scare to keep the readers on their toes, right? As long as its not a tragedy, I don't mind the little drama here and there.
Author's Response:
LOL Yes, the chapter had to come to an end. Yep! A little sweet lemonade for these two people. Alice will take it hard but at the end of the day, Bella will be more important than anything else to her.
No tragedies in this story. Promise.
Date: 29 May 2011 3:58 AM Title: I'm Not Calling You A Liar
So glad that Alice knows now, but seriously worried about Bella and the babies. I am also very glad that Bella and Edward are back to being themselves and I think that their communication skills are growing more every day.
Author's Response:
Edward and Bella are both working hard to get things right this time, especially with communication. It's great to see them getting close quickly and being more open than ever before.
Date: 28 May 2011 9:56 PM Title: I'm Not Calling You A Liar
:) alice finally knows! great chapter
Date: 28 May 2011 9:44 PM Title: I'm Not Calling You A Liar
Good Chapter.....
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2011 7:52 PM Title: I'm Not Calling You A Liar
Thank you for the very nice, long chapter! I really am (personally) too involved with them and their lives!
Also thanx for the citrusy lemon - she needed that, as did Edward.
Emmett's going to tell the family. I don't envy him, and wouldn't want to be in his place when the fall-out starts. Hope Alice gets it under control. She's a touchstone for Bella, and will need to be prepared to give her support.
Hope you send the kids go back to the meadow soon - Edward didn't get to see the fireflies come out yet.
Thanx for this reading enjoyment!
Author's Response:
So are me and EA! LOL Yes, Bella definitely needed some citrus and it certainly didn't hurt Edward either. Yes, he didn't see the fireflies but he wasn't the least bit disappointed. ;)
Date: 23 May 2011 6:20 AM Title: The Reason
good chapter.....
Date: 22 May 2011 1:09 AM Title: The Reason
Nice to see things are still calm for B/E and they are making amends with the people that matter. I am so excited for these babies....
Date: 21 May 2011 5:05 PM Title: The Reason
Cant wait till Jasper runs into Emmett...........
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 3:50 AM Title: The Reason
Before even starting this chapter I was already squealing. That is what just seeing updates does to me.
I knew Alice was going to be excited. I just pictured a cartoon-like person jittering and shaking like someone that ate something hot and her head was going to explode, with steam coming out of her ears.
I was glad to hear from Bree again. Even though it was a little more serious than I was looking for. I liked that we got a litlte look into who Bree is and see a bit more depth to his character.
Author's Response:
Oh, don't you worry. Bree will be around with his usual sillyness turning Edward's ears red all too soon. LOL
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 3:02 AM Title: The Reason
amazing chapter Alice is so cute I DID It!!!!!!! that was hysterical
Author's Response:
*Snorting* Yeah, Alice was too cute with her "I did it!" Though, Edward wasn't nearly as amused. LOL
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 2:33 AM Title: The Reason
Now everyone is in the know! Loved Alice's reaction!
Geez, I love Jasper in this story. I voted for him in the Sunflower Awards' Best Jasper category. Can't decide now if I want an Edward in my life, or a Jasper.
Thanx for this reading enjoyment!
Author's Response:
Aw! Thank you for voting for Jasper!! He's been an amazing character to write for in this story!
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2011 1:41 PM Title: If At First
This was a really beautiful chapter and I just can't wait to get Alice's full responce.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 15 May 2011 8:47 PM Title: If At First
Aww! Now everyone knows, and E/B are happy & together! Thats fantastic! I can't wait to find out more. Thanks gain bye for now.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 6:40 PM Title: If At First
Oh Lordy, please let Alice be happy for them. That would suck balls if EVERYONE else was & she wasn't!
So very glad they are gonna give things an honest go. That kind of love doesn't come around but once in a lifetime if your lucky.
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 7:39 AM Title: If At First
Yay for happiness, happy happy happy. I could just picture Edward laying in bed facing away from the door listening to his parents talk with a smile on his face and then all of a sudden cringing and frozen hoping not to hear them. I wonder how Alice is going to respond??? Hmmm, she's always so exuberant but then again the pixie can be unpredictable. I think it comes from too much "pixie dust"...no one told her it isn't for snuffing (j/k drugs are bad, not funny). I miss Bree and all his awesome gayness.
I do realize this was all incredibly weird and random, but as it is after midnight and I'm teetering on the edge of consciousness its all I got.
Author's Response:
OMG! Snorting pixie dust!! Love it!!! Bree will be back soon! Don't you worry on that one!!
Date: 15 May 2011 6:31 AM Title: If At First
Good Chapter....
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 5:14 AM Title: If At First
well i am so glad they finally - finally told Alice and Jasper! I hope they aren't going to be ticked that they did not find out sooner, after all both of them especially Jasper has been with Bella and Alice has been with Edward... Must not have negative reaction Alice.... Keep calm, but yes, that is how you render Alice speechless!
Date: 15 May 2011 4:04 AM Title: If At First
You know I was sending IM's to EA asking when this was going to post....just sayin'
Nice that Bella is feeling better about things, and I am glad that Alice and Jasper finally now, although I think it will be funny if Alice finds out she knew after everyone else...
See you next week!
Author's Response:
Yes, it was that IM that alerted me to my grevious oversight! So thank you for that and thank you for the review!
Date: 10 May 2011 2:10 PM Title: Learning to Breathe Again
aww Freaking AWW!!! that should be my motto for this story! lol I love it. granted bc its so long it takes me FOREVER To read a chapter lol but don't ever change that. I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now
Date: 09 May 2011 1:01 PM Title: Need You
fine fcitional man in a kilt - soounds like Jasper in "The Transfer"? myOmy
Date: 09 May 2011 12:39 AM Title: New Start
I keep thinking that he's hiding a health issue just like she is...
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2011 8:12 PM Title: Learning to Breathe Again
I was extremely happy to see the early update, even though I couldn't read it until now. This was just one of those chapters that made me smile and finally got us to a point that I was waiting for. It feels like we're right back to the happy go lucky times. I know it isn't quite there but it's been so long that this chapter feels so fluffy.
I loved the tattoo idea for the rings. I've always loved that, especially having all the "symbols" in the middle of it. I'm all for inner meanins and symbols. I've thought of getting a tattoo and I use some of the ideas I've read from these stories to help me pick.
Its so great to see these two being able to be happy and relaxed around each other. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
The "ring" scene tops my list of favorite things I've written so far. It was definitely filled with meaning and emotion. Tattoos should definitley have a strong meaning behind them.
Date: 07 May 2011 3:19 PM Title: Learning to Breathe Again
Wow, amazing chapter! I love how they now both know they are Numb and BB.
This is my first ever review but I just wanted to say I think your writing is amazing and this story is one of, if not my favourite. Every weekend I can't wait until I get an email saying a new chapter has been added.
Just out of curiosity how long is left of this story?
Keep up the amazing writing! :D
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed! As of Chptr 58, there are seven chapters left.
Date: 07 May 2011 2:45 PM Title: Learning to Breathe Again
OMG, YAY!!! I'm so happy things are moving in such a positive direction for them! I absolutely love this story! Thanks for making it real because their make up is some much better than it would have been if you'd have written Bella left, Edward got better, he came to live with them, & everyone lived happily ever after!
Author's Response:
The realness of the story is one of my favorite things about it. That and all the great ideas EA gives me to work with :)
Date: 07 May 2011 8:10 AM Title: Learning to Breathe Again
Good Chapter.....
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2011 5:45 AM Title: Learning to Breathe Again
this was fan-flippin-tastic!!! I knew she would finally come around, and she is by gosh!
Can't wait for more I will check out the blog!!!
thanks again
Date: 07 May 2011 4:50 AM Title: Learning to Breathe Again
Yay! for early updates. Thanks so much. Great chapter, I am glad that they are talking things out and that Bella didn't hold on to the Numb info for too long....
Author's Response:
Nope! Bella didn't want to hold on to it at all, just wrap her head around it.
Date: 05 May 2011 5:48 AM Title: Crash & Burn
I was born with a vsd as well due some prenatal drugs my mom was on. My vsd is called ventricle septum defect causing one of the valves in my heart to not shut properly. The tiredness is something I've always had to deal with but I've let it stop me or get me down. I've come pretty close to dying from a bacterial infection 5 yrs ago that left me weak as a kitten for 2 months after that. It's something I've got to keep an eye on cuz it could happen again.
Date: 04 May 2011 7:43 PM Title: You Found Me
I was wondering when Bella would figure out who Numb was, I knew that she would figure it out first. Ok, I am all caught up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
It was a lot of fun to see all of your reviews as you went through the chapters and everything they've gone through pretty much all at once. So glad you have enjoyed and continued to read!
Date: 04 May 2011 6:37 PM Title: Finding Our Way
I know they need to watch heir money and he needs to get a job and all of that but seriously I so wish he would have gotten the guitar...just sayin'...
Only one more until I am completely caught up, this kind of makes me sad...
Date: 04 May 2011 6:17 PM Title: More Than Words
I am so glad for Esme and I am also so glad that we have been Alice free for a few chapters, Bella needs calm right now and as much as I love her, Alice is anything but calm.
Date: 04 May 2011 5:52 PM Title: Ghosts of Broken Hearts
We are getting better, which is good...
Date: 04 May 2011 5:25 PM Title: One is the Loneliest Number
Argh, I mean I knew that Bella was going to be difficult but seriously, I want them to be happy again....Argh!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 May 2011 5:04 PM Title: Piecing It Together - Part 2
A little afraid for next chapter, I don't want her to react the way Rose thinks she will, I want her to keep getting better and be more understanding...
Date: 04 May 2011 4:35 PM Title: Piecing It Together - Part 1
So I am glad that Emmett came, but I hate that he doesn't remember it is like he gets a free pass, maybe Rosalie will beat some sense into him, God knows he needs it.
Date: 04 May 2011 4:04 PM Title: Pulling All The Right Strings
Thanks freaking goodness that he knows finally, and I wouldn't be opposed to him hopping on a plane and kicking his ass, but I have a feeling we will be seeing Em at the ann. party so maybe that isn't necessary.
Date: 04 May 2011 3:31 PM Title: My Guiding Light
I can't wait until the rest of the family find out about Emmett, I really want him hurt badly.
Date: 04 May 2011 3:12 PM Title: So Different Yet Still The Same
Ok, I am still a blubbering mess with these chapters...stupid Aunt Flow...
Date: 04 May 2011 2:48 PM Title: Searching for a Reason
Well nothing like forcing her to face shit...
Date: 04 May 2011 2:32 PM Title: My Cross to Bear
:(
Date: 04 May 2011 1:58 PM Title: Cry
Wow, I picked a bad week to read something so emotional, I am an emotional basket case now. I really still want to freaking kill Emmett, like badly.
Date: 04 May 2011 12:36 PM Title: Crash & Burn
Fucking Emmett, OMG, and I was prepared for it....I am going to run some errands before I begin the rest of the angst....Oh and I have some choice words for Edward but I think I know why he didn't tell Bella....Damn It!
Date: 04 May 2011 3:28 AM Title: Eclipse
So awesome the Grand Canyon was and i am still laughing about Edward's inability to fish...
Date: 04 May 2011 2:33 AM Title: Surprise
hmmm...detecting a little bull shit coming from our honest Edward....I don't like it....not one bit.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2011 5:51 PM Title: You Found Me
I am absoloutley loving this story. I can't wait to read the next update ;)
Date: 03 May 2011 4:15 PM Title: You Found Me
Aww wonderful chapter addition... i'm glad bella found out it was edward. I think it will ease her mind. Cannot wait to read more keep up the good writing.
Date: 03 May 2011 2:13 AM Title: Air & Water
I am back, well sort of, I only read one chapter now I am off to bed, it was a very long day.
Date: 02 May 2011 5:47 AM Title: You Found Me
Damn so it was really is Edward i was never really sure it almost seemed to easy.. Anyway thanks for a great chapter can't wait to read more
Date: 02 May 2011 4:56 AM Title: Adjusting
They grow more and more in each chapter and it really is so nice to see. I know it is a little late but sorry to hear about your arm. Now I am off to bed, as it is almost 1 am, I had to pause my reading to see the President announce that Osama Bin Laudin is actually dead....I am sure you will be hearing from me tomorrow when I get home from work...
Date: 02 May 2011 4:32 AM Title: Complications
So glad she is opening up to the idea of being a mom later on, I know how important it is to her. Also I have to say while I hate that she has to go through this I am glad she has Edward there for her, and I am glad that he stood his ground with Alice. I love the Pixie, I do, really but sometimes I want to clip her wings.....
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2011 4:00 AM Title: You Found Me
I KNEW IT!!! I EFFING KNEW IT!! the whole time i kept telling myself numb was edward, and i was right. i love it, and i really think that it is going to help bella to heal and move forward with her realationship with edward. Great chapter, cant wait for the next.
Author's Response:
It will definitely help! :)
Date: 02 May 2011 3:26 AM Title: Don't Worry, Be Happy
I totally thought Em would man up and propose but the promise was nice I will admit.
I loved how much research you did for all of the Hawaii chapters, really it was great that you put so much time and effort to make us feel like we were there with them.
Date: 02 May 2011 2:42 AM Title: Beaches, Boys, & Blues
It was nice to have some Bella and Em time and while he pisses me off with some of his reactions in this one, I will always love the "grape ape".
Date: 02 May 2011 2:20 AM Title: All Shook Up
Have I mentioned that I am loving them in Hawaii. Great choice of song there too, and him singing to her is just awesome...
Date: 02 May 2011 1:59 AM Title: Moe'Uhane
Awesome, for them that they finally got a whole day away from everyone....where they could just be them.
Date: 02 May 2011 1:37 AM Title: Hoaloha
Great day in Hawaii!!!!!! I am glad that Bella has opened up so much, but I notice how long this story is and I worry....
Date: 02 May 2011 1:20 AM Title: Aloha Wau Ia Oe
Thank God she finally said it, i was really getting ready to smack her. Oh and I am back, I wrote my review and sweet Mary is going to read though to make sure it doesn't suck ass...
Great chapter, although I have to say, I said ti to Mary earlier but I really just want to smack the hell out of this Emmett he pisses me off with the shit he did to E.
Date: 02 May 2011 12:14 AM Title: And So It Begins
Damn it would have been so funny to have had Em tased but it was pretty funny having him think he was going to get tased....
Ok, I am going to do my review now, hopefully I can get it done and be back later tonight....
Date: 01 May 2011 11:57 PM Title: Need You
Yay! for Hawaii...Boo for the summer issue, but not everything can be sunshine and daisies all of the time....Ok one more chapter and then I have to write my review for Indie Fic this week, then I can finish up on the story....
Date: 01 May 2011 11:35 PM Title: Keep Holding On
So very intense chapter, have to say I am so proud of both of them because they really did come a long way, starting with Edward not leaving, that was huge...But honestly the hero in this chapter was freaking Bree, he rocked his shit this chapter, and really helped them both see so much.
Yay! for Bree!
Date: 01 May 2011 11:02 PM Title: No Turning Back
I would like to personally smack the jack ass upside the head now...Oh and Alice pissed me off too, damn it!
Date: 01 May 2011 10:43 PM Title: That's How You Know
I will admit I did want to throttle Bella a bit in this one, I mean as I was just IM'ing to Mary, he is Edward freaking Cullen, I mean really it shouldn't be this hard, even for her....LOL
Date: 01 May 2011 10:20 PM Title: The Past Laid Bare
I can't tell you how great it was to see them in this chapter, and letting E help her through this time with the Aaron situation was huge...
So glad that she told E about her condition, and I am so happy that he had the response that he did.
Date: 01 May 2011 9:51 PM Title: Learning As I Go
Nice to see Bella growing as a person, even if Rose and Alice have to help her along the way....
Date: 01 May 2011 9:16 PM Title: Somewhere I Belong
That was a fun chapter, and I love me some LP so props for using my fave band so much in this story!
Date: 01 May 2011 8:48 PM Title: New Start
Ok, this has been my favorite chapter by far because I got to see Edward stand up to Bella and put her in her place, sometimes I think she needs it...(not that he doesn't)
Date: 01 May 2011 8:16 PM Title: The Next Contestant
Got to love a bar fight with a pissed off don't be touching my girl Edward....
Nice to see EPOV's I do so love to hear from him.
Date: 01 May 2011 7:45 PM Title: The Longest Day
Ok, I am with Bella, I want to introduce Mary to my fist too, although it makes me think of the other Mary and that is sad because I luv her!
Date: 01 May 2011 7:13 PM Title: Drive
I wanted to hit a little pixie in this chapter, just sayin'...
Glad E went to pick her up though.
Date: 01 May 2011 6:25 PM Title: Scars & Ninja Mind-Fucks
I really love this Bella, and I am sorry for not reviewing every chapter like I should be...I know I suck, I get engrossed and forget, I am bad...
So like I said, loving this Bella, love this Edward too, although there have been a couple of times I wish he would get sassy back to her, someone needs to put her in her place sometimes...
Date: 01 May 2011 1:13 PM Title: You Found Me
Eeeek Bella has figured out that her online buddy is Edward I was wondering when they would learn they where talking to each other the whole time, I wonder how Edward will react when Bella tells him that they've been speaking this whole time. Great chapter I love Bella's little chat with Jasper made me fall in love with jasper all over again. I hope Bella and Edward figure things out but I do wonder will everyone ever find out what Emmett did? Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Oh they will all find out. Don't worry about that. And Jasper will be the first. I'm sure you'll fall in love with him again during that chapter. But first! Edward needs to find out Bella is BB.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 6:20 AM Title: You Found Me
I wondered if this was the chapter that one of them found out about being online buddies. Especially after the little teaser summary in the AN at the top. Once I started reading their conversation this last time and saw where it was going, I was nothing but a squealing psycho. I'm glad I was alone otherwise I'm sure I looked crazy. Although my dog was giving me funny looks, its a good thing she can't tell anyone. (Yes I'm one of THOSE people that talks to their pets)
I could just imagine how all the pictures that were described in this chapter came out. Even the WTH scared face Edward made with the living statue. Just the visual idea of the black and white of Bella's belly and Edward's profile, made the chapter that much better. I love being able to feel like I'm there.
Author's Response:
EA & I work hard to describe it well enough for you guys to feel like you're right there watching so it's good to know you feel that way. I'm having fun imaging you squealing and the dog wondering what's up with you. LOL
Date: 01 May 2011 3:54 AM Title: Halloween Hook-Up
Ok, after much berating from Mary, I am finally reading, even though I hate TWCS, because the format sucks, but I love Mary and your other stories so I am reading.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2011 11:03 PM Title: You Found Me
what a great story and I really loved this chapter! I loved that Bella (BB) knows now that Numb is Edward, wonder what he is going to think when he finds out that Bella is BB....humm this should be interesting, hopefully it will help her see that he has been being so truthful with her since the return AND that he loved her all along.....
Cant wait for more!!!! so engrossing
Author's Response:
You'll see how they both react next Saturday! I really think you'll all be pleased with the reactions.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 10:35 PM Title: You Found Me
I know that I haven't posted in awhile (shame on me) but real life has been a whirlwind lately! So I got some extra time on my hands now and I am doing the "Happy Dance"!! I just knew it!! I just knew that Numb was Edward! I am so glad that Bella now knows and realizes she can see things "differently" now that she really remembers Numbs views on his relationship woes!! I just can't wait till Edward finds out that Bella is BB!! I really think that things are going to get better and keep getting better from now on!!
I for one can't wait for the next update. Thanks for this one!!
peach
Author's Response:
Things are definitely going to be looking up from here on out! I think you all will really enjoy next week's chapter.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 6:30 PM Title: You Found Me
Good Chapter....
Date: 30 Apr 2011 5:28 PM Title: You Found Me
I KNEW IT!!!!! Numb is Edward. I love that he continued to be there for her even if he doesn't realize it. I wonder how he's going to take that news? I loved her shirt! I was just pregnant & that's exactly how I felt. Looking forward to more! :-)
Author's Response:
LOL I had a few people who were suspicious of Numb. He will realize it next Saturday and we'll get both reactions, plus his reaction in both POVs.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2011 5:24 PM Title: You Found Me
god i love these two. cant wait for next chapter
Date: 27 Apr 2011 10:28 PM Title: Finding Our Way
Good Chapter.....
Date: 27 Apr 2011 10:23 PM Title: Halloween Hook-Up
awsome story!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2011 6:49 AM Title: Finding Our Way
Bummer, I guess I was a little too into the chapter to notice that it was coming to an end. That Train song would have made the perfect proposal if it was the right time, but it wasn't. I love that song. I just about cry everytime I hear it.
It's good to see Bella opening up more to Edward and that they are getting along more. They are able to express their feelings a little better.
I can't help but wonder if they will realize that they are talking to each other as Numb and BB. Then I think maybe Bella will find out and it will help her to come to terms about the situation a little more. (Just thinking out loud)
O I just wanted to say: "Damn you scuba Steve!" Now I really want a beignet. It sounds so good right now.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2011 1:30 AM Title: Finding Our Way
love them opening up to eachothere i can't wait for them to become a couple again and i want to see what edwards decided to do about starting his company
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 11:00 PM Title: Finding Our Way
I love this story! Yes, it's slow going for our little couple right now, but Rome wasn't built in a day either. Time!!! It takes time!
Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:00 PM Title: Finding Our Way
This chapter reminds me of the time I spent in New Orleans. Really craving some beignets right now!
I'm hoping Bella gets over her insecurities and mistrust soon. I don't think she had to put up with all that (except from her own self) when she was trying to get over being DC Bella.
Still looking forward to them telling Alice about babies. That should be good.
Happy Easter, and thanx for the reading enjoyment!
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2011 12:23 AM Title: More Than Words
this has been a pretty engrossing story! it's really good!
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2011 2:49 AM Title: Reaction & Adaption
really enjoying your story! I came over from ff with the promise of hot loving! 'Worth the trip'! I didn't totally understand re: the limitations you wrote of for rating/content. I've read some serious raunchy nc17 stuff over there! Hope nobody gave you a hard time. I love your snarky Bella, such a welcome change from a lot of the ways she's portrayed. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 10:59 PM Title: More Than Words
I love how much growth is happening in their relationship. They have some wonderfully supportive people in their lives, which is very good & will continue to be needed. I'm looking forward to their trip &, hopefully, more healing. ;)
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:29 PM Title: More Than Words
aww I'm soo glad they're getting back to their normal selves. :D I also loved the talk between Esme and Bella, Edward and Carlisle. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 2:36 PM Title: More Than Words
Loved it can't wait for the week in new orleans
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 5:20 AM Title: More Than Words
I got a little upset with Edward in this chapter. He seemed so oblivious that his plans for the future needed to change. I just kept reminding myself that he never was put in a situation that would help him understand it. Also I like that Carlisle was getting him to understand that it's not that he can never have his dream of running his own business but that the path in which he gets there has changed.
It's good to see Bella being more open and trying to open up, but seeing her war with herself about what to do and what to think drives me crazy. I just want to yell at my screen to tell her about what she needs to do. Too bad it doesn't work like that. Although I could go for a little Inkheart right now. That would be interesting...hmmm. OK fantasy over. As always, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 4:19 AM Title: More Than Words
Wow - Esme and Carlisle are really awesome!
Hope Edward and Bella work things out on their trip, especially since I can't wait for her to tell Alice.
Thanx!
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 4:10 AM Title: Halloween Hook-Up
wow this is going to be fantastic if the this ONE chapter is any sort of indication!
Date: 17 Apr 2011 3:03 AM Title: More Than Words
Good Chapter....
Date: 12 Apr 2011 3:18 PM Title: Ghosts of Broken Hearts
aww Edward is adorable. I loved that part where he was bouncing between her belly and her eyes in excitement. too cute. and charlie! that was adorable. I can't wait to read more. I'm so glad she's coming around finally. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now
Date: 10 Apr 2011 11:27 AM Title: Ghosts of Broken Hearts
Great chapter, I'm glad Bella is becoming more accepting of her being pregnant I understand why she still doesn't trust Edward but I wont lie I do just want them back together again. Can't wait for the next chapter and see how their little trip goes and how everyone takes the news to Bella being pregnant. well really how Alice and Jasper take it since everyone else seems to already know.
Date: 10 Apr 2011 8:53 AM Title: Ghosts of Broken Hearts
Good Chapter.....