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Reviewer: AtalantaCerelia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2020 2:49 PM Title: Piecing It Together - Part 2

So, I am reading this story again. It has been years but I still remember all of the plot points and all of the pain. But wow... it still hits me in the feels. I try not to be a crier, I'm not good with emotion, but this story hits me. 

I don't know if you still check this account. But, if you do, please know that there is a woman in Australia who thinks you are an amazing writer.

Thank you for writing this story.

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2020 1:13 AM Title: The Next Contestant

Damn girl needs therapy.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 7:26 PM Title: Tadpole Xmas

:)  loved this story 

Reviewer: jreeding Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2015 1:42 AM Title: Crash & Burn

You made me cry... fix it.   Loving this book btw.

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2015 2:59 AM Title: Tadpole Xmas

i have spent the last three nights without sleep reading this.  i loved every frustrating minute of it. you should have heard what came out of my mouth when emmett did his fubar.  i just adore this and adding it my never ending list of ffs to read over and over again.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 5:52 PM Title: Tadpole Xmas

AWESOME!!!!! i loved this story even second time around ;) thanks so much for posting it on here for us ;D 

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Date: 15 Sep 2014 3:28 PM Title: Angry Men and Farfegnugen

Very funny drunks

Reviewer: ky17 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2013 4:42 AM Title: You Got My Head Spinnin

alice and rosalie kinda kills my vibe. overbearing much? but the date scene was beautiful. the imagery was amazing!!!!!

Author's Response:

They're just trying to keep Bella from having yet another broken heart. They'll calm down the more Bella calms down.

Reviewer: Gryphon Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 7:54 PM Title: You Got My Head Spinnin

*sigh* sometimes I hate how Alice always gets her way. And I hate it even more...when Bella lets her. Regardless of whether Alice does it from a good place. 

But that's just me.

Author's Response:

Bella only has so much patience and Alice is really close to snapping it. And when it happens, Bella will absolutely stand up for herself.

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 9:56 PM Title: My Guiding Light

ARGH Emmett just has me ticked the hell off!  I know this is a few chapters after his douchbaggery but I just keep fuming about it.  Ok now that I have that off my chest...I so love this story and I know that there is a method to the madness. 

Mary Alice

Author's Response:

It was hard and interesting at the same time to write Emmett as such a douche rather than the nice, fun loving guy we see him as in fanfics.  Yes, there is a definite method to the madness so keep reading!!

Reviewer: fanatic22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 5:00 AM Title: Halloween Hook-Up

Glad I came to this site to read this story.

Its great and I love that Bella has a personality!

Author's Response:

Glad you found it!!  This was such a fun Bella to write!  She had personality for miles!

Reviewer: annie345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 1:47 PM Title: If At First

Ok, I know that I'm reading this long after it was finished and won't get any real time input, but I have to say this. I have been trying to understand the logic behind this but just can't. Why is he the villain for trying to protect her from his heart problem and she is not for trying to protect him by leaving? Should he have told her? Yes, absolutely. But he had what he thought at the time were good reasons. She chose to believe his brother's rant and left him at such a critical point in his life instead of talking to him. She also thought her reasons were good. She claims he didn't trust her to tell her about his heart. She didn't trust him to tell him about Emmet's words and stay to work that out. Why does she get to be the wronged party here? She messed up, too. Yeah, she was hurt. Wasn't he? She left by leaving a ridiculously casual note, basically dismissing their whole relationship and now gets to be the one who calls all the shots.  Bella agrees to give him another try? What Bella needs to do is accept her huge part in this mess and  stop playing the only injured party. This guy deserves sainthood in my opinion.

Author's Response:

I'm sorry that's the message you took from it.  It wasn't just lying about his heart that put Edward in the position of needing to earn back trust.  It was every lie he told to hide his secret.  It was pushing her to be honest while he knew he was lying.  He even went so far as to lie about what he would be doing for almost an entire summer away from her and the rest of his family.  It was months of deceit that put him in the position of needing to prove himself.  As for Bella, she cannot be faulted for believing Emmett when he never once lied to her in all the years of their friendship.  He knew Edward better than she did in her opinion so he would know what drove Edward to lie for months.  She left out of love and respect for Emmet and the entire Cullen family just as much to make sure Edward was out of harm's way.  And she did accept her part in things - she agreed to go to counseling with Edward and she participated and learned to both be a better listener and speaker.  No one deserves sainthood in this story because no one is perfect.  They are all flawed and all make mistakes - and they all try their hardest to remedy those mistakes and make amends.  The story isn't about one person being less wrong than another - it's about accepting that we all screw up and finding a way to forgive ourselves as much as the loved ones who accidentally hurt us.

Reviewer: Lafemmevegeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2013 12:49 AM Title: Tadpole Xmas

This was a wonderful story. Just enough angst and a lot of family love. Awesome job you two!

Reviewer: schnuckbuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 7:56 AM Title: Cheesy Cullen

Hey there,

don't you normally eat your fries with mayo in the us? Is it so out of there that it ended up being a craving in your story, which others find digusting? Becausae I have to tell you it ist perfectly normal here in Germany and I know it also is in beglium, the netherlands and france´, for the rest of europe i am not completely sure, but i can'T imagine it didn't travel another border.

Personally i happen to like peanut butter and banana, arent ther muffins in this combination out there.

Oh and: great story, even if a little long.




Author's Response:

In my part of the US, we usually have ketchup.  I had never seen anyone eat them with mayo until my sis got pregnant - that part was for her bc she was actually pregnant when I wrote that chapter.  Cool that it's normal in your part of the world!!

I'm a peanut butter and banana fan myself - no muffins of that combo that I've seen so far. But I'll keep an eye out!

Thanks, Anna

Reviewer: veedubgirl17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:20 PM Title: Scars & Ninja Mind-Fucks

I really like this Bella in that she's strong. But, I'm not happy that Edward and Alice railroaded her into doing something that she's clearly uncomfortable with and Emmett and Rosalie just stands around making fun. I dislike it when they do this. Bella should be able to say no to things without her friends getting on her ass or making her feel guilty about the fact that she doesn't want to do it and her friends should respect that when she says "no" it means she doesn't want to and when she says that she's uncomfortable with it they should respect that not pander to her telling her it will be fine and she'll thank them later. 

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:17 PM Title: Ghosts of Broken Hearts

What the fuck! Bella has suffered her whole life over whether she could conceive, and now Edward runs all over town telling everyone and taking that joy away from her? What a prick! She really does deserve better than him.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 3:04 AM Title: Piecing It Together - Part 2

This is about the fourth fic I've read that laments the complicated rules of baseball. I'm starting to think I'm a total freak for finding baseball perfectly simple but finding football brain-numbingly confusing.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:01 AM Title: Crash & Burn

I am looking forward to Emmett getting his ass handed to him. Who does he think he is talking to Bella like that, after how shitty he treated his own brother? The frigging heart doctor even SAID Edward was afraid of Emmett mocking him for the surgery.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 1:04 AM Title: No Turning Back

Ugh, Edward, you complete douche bag!

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 9:56 PM Title: The Next Contestant

Please to be pressing charges against Don Johnson and company?

Reviewer: JR Durham Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 6:47 AM Title: First Date Insanity

i laughed my way through this chapter... i love bella so frickin much.

their stories were painful, honest and brutal...and i too sing along to EMF (who i actually saw in concert) and Extreme :)

Reviewer: JR Durham Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:42 AM Title: Halloween Hook-Up

um, the only thing i can say is...HOT!!!

i wasn't really sure where the story was going when i first started, but i'm sitting on my couch out of breath, a little squirmy, and swooning.

bella's tattoo descriptions are amazing.  edward in a vintage baseball outfit...incredible!

Author's Response:

Hot is a good word!! We'll take that!!

Reviewer: rgh Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 5:56 AM Title: Tadpole Xmas

Thank you for such a wonderful story!! Just the right amount of everything!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it and letting us know you enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: Feminine Archetype Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2012 6:19 AM Title: Cry

oh now you have done it!! You made me cry the ugly cry so few authors can make me cry...the one that makes my husbad think I have lost my mind or something terrible has happened.

your story is beautiful and realistic at the same time. thanks for allowing us to enjoy your talent.


Author's Response:

I would really like to apologize for making you cry, but I can't because it means you felt so deeply for our characters and that's the real goal of any author - to make characters feel so relatable that you care about what happens to them. Thank you!!

Reviewer: cullenetc Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2012 7:09 PM Title: Perfect

This is a great story and turned out to be a nice surprise for me. I kept skipping over it in my faces because I wasn't sure it sounded all that exciting, and I was blown away. I loved your characters, especially the way you used Emmett to facilitate the break up. I also like that it was so long, but I am glad that I found it after it was complete. Thanks for a great read.

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 6:28 PM Title: Perfect

i absolutely loved this story through and through!  all the happiness, sadness (which i was teary eyed), surprises, heartache, estatic, wishful, seriously every emotion i got in this story!  thanks for my entertainment!  next story im starting is your other one!


Author's Response:

We are so glad you enjoyed WTB so much!!  We had a blast writing it and we love that the readers came to care for the characters as much as we did!  Thanks for reading and for letting us know you enjoyed it so thoroughly!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 6:22 PM Title: Tadpole Xmas

awwe!  so freaking sweet!  i loved it!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 4:22 AM Title: The Name Game

too freaking sweet!!! i love that they were born on aarons bday!

in love with thea! 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 1:42 AM Title: Moving Forward


Reviewer: cgooden Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 6:01 AM Title: Tadpole Xmas

The tadpoles first Christmas was a really cute one shot that I really enjoyed reading.  I hope you girls both have a wonderful Holiday Season with your loved ones!

Author's Response:

We hope your family had a wonderful one as well!  We're so happy everyone enjoyed this glimpse of the tadpoles and the happiness they've brought to their big, odd, crazy, wonderful family!

Reviewer: durteelilsecret Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 5:01 PM Title: First Date Insanity

Is Edward going to be alright? I'm a little confused as to what happened... Bad a** Bella is awesome!

Reviewer: luvstwilight14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2011 1:40 AM Title: The Best Birthday

I have thought alot about that as well.  That would also be a good outtake for you to write...what was going through Emmetts mind from when he found out about the accident to when Bella left and no one knew why especially him.  Emmett is a hoot before the accident and I loved him even though he was mean to Ed.  I still don't know if I understand why he was the way he was to Ed or not besides the Mary situation.  But when he was talking to Bella like that I was seething and felt sorry for once in my whole time reading fanfic for Bella.  I knew it had to be something that set him off and when we didn't read anything about his reactions to other family members like jasper when he was trying to get it out of her or Rose when she did talk to her, I knew no one suspected anything like that could have happened and Em being the culprit either cause Em was sincere in his temporary amnesia during that time.  Am I making any sense at at?  Hope.  Love the story!

Hugs, Stephanie

Author's Response:

Sometimes there's no easy, concise answer for sibling rivalry - I am still searching for an answer with my nieces LOL.  Yeah, no one ever suspected Em was behind Bella pulling away. Hell, he didn't suspect it because he didn't remember talking to her. But like Alice said, somewhere deep down he had to suspect b/c he never attempted to talk to Bella.

Reviewer: luvstwilight14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2011 5:49 PM Title: My Cross to Bear

Ok I really need to review.  I was going to wait but I just have to say this or ask this I mean.  I don't mind the wait (wel I do but I am pushing thru it and glad I'm getting to the reunion so to speak.)  All I want to know is...is what Emmett did to Bella going to come out in the text?  Is he going to be held accountable for what he said to cause of this turmoil between all the six pack??  You can pm so as not to give away spoilers to other review readers.  I just need to know if he is going to get a butt kicking or not cause I'm ready to reach in the story and pull him out and knock a good one on him and I LOVE Emmett immensely.  He just screwed up royally and I need his apology as well in all this to get over it!  HA. Sorry for rambling and I know some people will think Im nuts but thats something I just needed to get off my chest.!  For once it wasnt ALL Bella's stupidity that caused all this.  Refreshing to say the least.  Cant wait til it comes together.  I'm getting there slow but sure so you are bound to hear from me again when it happens to know how I feel then.  :)


*ps.  I didn't mention it but I am loving your story immensely!   

Reviewer: luvstwilight14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 4:50 AM Title: Scars & Ninja Mind-Fucks

I haven't reviewed story yet and I usually don't review complete ones until I've finished but I just have a quick question for ya...is your Emmett the Twilight Saga looking Emmett or the underwear looking Kellan?? Hmmmm?  I just love his character in this and I need the mental picture when I'm reading his hiliarity!  Know?  Thanks!  Will review soon!!

Hugs, Stephanie

Author's Response:

Hi, Stephanie!!  He's the Twilight Emmett. Hope that helps! :)

Reviewer: STYLISTA Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 5:44 AM Title: Reaction & Adaption


Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 4:16 AM Title: The Best Birthday

Le sigh. This chapter was awesome-sauce. I love that Emmett and Bella are still rebuilding their friendship and are able to talk more about it all. I can just picture their outfits; adorable. I'm loving these future/outtakes.

Author's Response:

Awesome-sauce! Love it! :)

Reviewer: annah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 6:20 PM Title: The Best Birthday

Awwwww! How sweet! Love that everything has turned out so well for Bella! So glad she and Emmett are making up, and that he's doing things right.

Don't envy Bella and Edward at all - I only had 2 kids - 21 months apart - but they were hellions to keep up with! And they have the 3 of them!

Thanx for this enjoyable outtake! I really miss this story!

Author's Response:

Yes, very glad Em & Bella are on the road to being cohorts again.  And I'm with you - definitely not envying them!!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 6:11 PM Title: Edward's POV First Date

It's funny how much underlying foreboding I could pick up in this chapter since I knew what was wrong with Edward. Seeing just how much Emmett teased him and how it affected him. Even with this last scene where he says that Emmett would tease him about being tired out, just makes me want to smack Emmett. I'm not saying Edward wasn't wrong in keeping it from everyone, but with how everything played out, plus the hard feelings for what Emmett did to Bella, he is not totally innocent in it either. 

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Reviewer: annah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 2:37 AM Title: Edward's POV First Date

Ooh! E's POV about the first date - one of my very favorite (if not THE favorite) parts of the story!

Thanx!!! Enjoyed it immensely!

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Reviewer: twigirl3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 5:26 AM Title: Perfect

I found this story on FFN and came here for the full bit, I love it! I have not been able to get anything done and you are amazing!

And I also like the name Thea, but I may be a bit partial to it as a very good friend of mine shares that name :)

Author's Response:

Yeah! Glad you found the story!!  Your friend has a great name then!

Reviewer: siswickedness Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 3:33 AM Title: Ghosts of Broken Hearts

Like the story so far, but have to be honest that I think Edward has a right to be pissed at Bella for running out on him too.  For all her thinking that she can't trust Edward, he has the right to think the same thing about her.

Author's Response:

They both have the right to be annoyed with the other.  Relationships aren't easy and when two people have pasts like they do, making a fresh future can be full of complications and setbacks.

Reviewer: JenBon Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 12:48 AM Title: Walk Away

Great story so far! On to chapter 10.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Hope you enjoy the rest.

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 8:53 AM Title: OT1 E's Halloween

I was so excited when I saw this posted. It's nice to get a look into what Edward was thinking and feeling during that first chapter but also it was like a blast from the past in the story. It was like reliving the beginning of their relationship but now with the knowledge of what happens afterward. 

There were points where I had to think and remember what happened in the beginning, like what Bella and Alice were talking about when they went off by themselves before Edward brought Bella's drink over. 

I hope there will be at least a couple more outtakes. I'm having attachment issues with this story and the little outtakes here and there help keep my clingy side to a minimum.

Author's Response:

There will definitely be some more outtakes.  We are working on the First Date from Edward's POV right now.  Then we are going to have a couple chapters with the babies, like when Emmett and Bella really start to work things out.  We also *hope* to have the first Halloween with the babies.  We will definitley have their first Christmas - this is being written for Charity for the Fandom for LLS.  Details are up on my website. :)

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 7:58 AM Title: OT1 E's Halloween

fantastic outtake that was hot!epov was fab.

Reviewer: Artemis Leaena Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 7:40 PM Title: Perfect

LOVED the story!!! =) Any chance of an epilogue with the triplets being older?

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Date: 08 Jul 2011 2:33 AM Title: Morning Aftermath

Yeah, that tat idea serious sent me into a fit of giggles that lasted a good 10 minutes!  Loved that!

Reviewer: Marci1701 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2011 1:54 AM Title: Halloween Hook-Up

You know, there are more graphic stories on FF than this.  lmao.  See, you know you are loved for me to come over here to read the whole story.  I had to use my real id instead of my FF id though.  I don't know what happened.  It didn't give me a reason just flipped back to the same page.  Weird.  Anywho...

Loved this chapter.  I love snarky, take-charge Bella!  Not sure what this rating thing is about, but I'll make an ass out of myself and assume that 10 is the best.  lol

Author's Response:

I don't know about the rating either ;)  Just glad you're enjoying the story so much!

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2011 5:42 AM Title: If At First

Wow! I loved the trip to New Orleans! It was brilliant! And so obvioulsy what they needed!

But hehe! Alice and Jaspers reaction to the triplets was brilliant! Off to read the next chapter now so I can see what happened! Lol!

Author's Response:

Yeah!! So happy you are really loving this story so much!! New Orleans was so much fun to write for them and watch them get close all over again.  And yes, leaving Alice and Jasper speachless was absolutely brilliant. I thank my partner in crime for that idea - Eternally Addicted.

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2011 4:19 AM Title: You Found Me

I knew it!! I just knew it! Lol! Sorry, just had to get that in!! Lol! Xxx

Author's Response:

LOL!  I love it that so many claimed they "knew". Hee Hee!

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:49 PM Title: Piecing It Together - Part 1

Aww!! My poor Emmett! Lol! I felt so sorry for him when Bella flinched and stepped back form him! :'( I almost had tears in my eyes for him! And hearing her explain everything to Emmett, that I did have tears ini my eyes for!

I liked Bella and Edwards convo at the end, when they coudnt sleep. They covered what they needed to and spoke honestly. It was sweet! :)

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 4:26 PM Title: Pulling All The Right Strings

Woohoo!! Bella finally told someone! I kinda wish it had been the whole family in a group just to get all the reactions in 1 go, but it could be interesting seeing how everyone takes it differently!

Cant wait to see how this goes now though! :)

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 3:27 PM Title: My Guiding Light

Ooo! I loved her day with Esme! It was all sweet!

And Im loving how everyone seems to be guessing at whats wrong with Bella and is getting it on the nose! But how has no one noticed that shes not spoken to Emmett? Although Edward noticed she flinches when hes mentioned, but Bella didnt pick up ono him saying thats twice now, or at least didnt ask about the 1st time! Intriguing! Lol!

Ok, Im done humming and hawing for this chapter. Lol!

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 2:07 PM Title: Searching for a Reason

OMG!! They actually went ahead and had Edward move in?! Ooo! I can see the shit hitting the fan!! Ooo! Is Bella going to move into Embrys place?

I cant wait to see where this is gonna go! And i keep thinking Numb nuts is Emmett or Edward but then theres stuff been said that makes it seem kinda obvious its not, but theres just something niggling at me that we know who numb nuts is! Lol!

And the past few chapters from when they were in hospital have made me feel kinda sick, angry and upset. But in a god way, in the sense that your writing is making me feel how the character should be feeling. I felt so sorry for Bella and I hated Emmett and oh, it was horrible, i felt like I was going throuhg the 'break up' too! :(

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 2:28 AM Title: Surprise

Havent reviewed in a few chapters so thought I would. Lol!

Poor Bree!! And lovin Jasper and Edward being all sweet to him! Lovely!

Now, is Edward really doing drugs? Or does he just not want to admit something to Bella? Im intrigued! Lol!

Oh so much has happened since my last review and I cant remember what! Lol! But I am really enjoying this story! Its amazing! Will finish the rest tomorrow! :)

Reviewer: roselynne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2011 5:17 PM Title: Perfect

I am so sad to see this story end i have loved reading it so much it came alone way from that halloween night i am glad it had it happy ending I am so going to miss reading it but that just gives me the chance to read it all over agin and i dont have to wait for the next chapert anyway i like your writing I have read your other stories and cant wait to read more stories that you right in the future keep up the great work and Thanks

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2011 3:07 PM Title: Keep Holding On

Ooo! Interesting! They really seem to be working things ot. And they're taking their time but to be honest Emmett and Alice are pissing me off more than Edward and Bella with their presumptions and the way they're being so careful incase they screw up again! Theres a few times in the past couple of chapters that Alice has done or said something, like when she unlocked Bellas bedroom door and walked in,that I just wanted to scream and slap her! And Emmett with all his comments towards Edward, wow what a dick! I mean it was years ago and its not like Edward did anything on purpose, its not his fault the girl wanted him and not Emmett. Ok, i think Ive talked enough about that.

But overall Im loving the story! Its really well written! The storyline is amazing! Im not normally a fan of AH stories but I read them every now and then and this has to be one of the best! :)


Reviewer: cheneylo Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2011 12:18 PM Title: Halloween Hook-Up

really nice start, am really looking foward to the whole story now

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 6:04 PM Title: Walk Away

Wow! That was intense! Not sure Id have forgiven Edward so quickly tho, he really was an ass! Lol!

But Im loving this story so far!


Author's Response:

Bella's trying her best to be different and give chances this time. :)

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 5:29 PM Title: Why Can't You Stay

Wow!! Totally didnt see the twist with Bree coming! BRILLIANT!! Really enjoying this story! Its really good so far! :) Xxx

Reviewer: Dalamar of the Dark Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 3:53 PM Title: Perfect

The passion you have for writing shows through out this story! Do keep up the good work as they say

Author's Response:

Thank you and I def plan to ;)

Reviewer: anonymouslysufferingfromOCD Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 3:52 PM Title: Perfect

So sad that this is over, I really want it to keep going but I suppose it is time.  Thank you for sharing this one with us.  I want to read it again now that it is complete ask EA, I tend to read things a lot when I love them, I just finished my 4th time with TGTCIA...


Looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response:

Well EA's story IS amazing and worthy of rereading.  That Baseballward of hers is pretty damn amazing.  And Ms Bella with her camaro is pretty fun too!

Reviewer: annah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 1:07 PM Title: Perfect

The End!

I am SO sad that this ride is ending! I've been 'on' it for so many, many months and have enjoyed every bit of it.

Kinda seemed, tho, that the last few chapters flew through their lives. I would've loved to read more about the pregnancy, about the baby shower, about the total chaos of the triplets' first year - but that's because I can never get enough.

This last chapter was so sweet - wonderful glimpses into their family life. The kids and their relationships with the adults ("my Jazzy" - perfect!), Bella's and Edward's still awesome relationship, Edward finally getting his business... Loved it all!

Thanx so much for this awesome reading enjoyment. This has been my fave fanfic of all time!

Author's Response:

Thank you! To have someone call this story their fave fanfic is an amazing honor. EA and I appreciate it greatly.

LOL - Yes, it is hard to get enough of the characters you really enjoy.  We are going to have a few outtakes here and there to give a little more glimpse. I know you'll find total chaos in the Babies' 1st Christmas one shot we will write for charity.  Not only will there be baby chaos, but Bree and Lance will be home for Christmas :)

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 8:20 AM Title: Perfect

Sad days that its actually over. I may very well find myself reading through this story again at some point. Its just one of those that you can read over and over and never get tired of. 

I didn't realize this was the epilogue until the kids were 2 1/2 yrs old. I'm going to miss this story and the characters. It was quite the ride. I'll keep a watch out for your next story. I'm already excited just because its a story by you and EA. I loved this story and your writing. I'll be sure to check out the blog too. 

Until next time. Abso-forkin-lutely amazing story.

Author's Response:

EA and I are both very saddened to see our WTB characters go and Extremely excited to see our new characters form and shape themselves.  We have lots of fun ideas for the next story and we hope all of you will enjoy them!

Reviewer: cgooden Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 7:50 AM Title: Perfect

I loved the epi!!! I'm so glad that they got their HEA.

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Date: 03 Jul 2011 5:15 AM Title: Perfect

This was a great story, and I'm a little sad to say good bye to these characters.

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 2:09 AM Title: Perfect

Thank you for sharing this beautifully written story. Loved reading it and am going to miss it.

Reviewer: Maplestyle Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 1:43 AM Title: Perfect

Thank you guys so much for sharing this!

Author's Response:

You're all very welcome!  We thank you for going on this journey with us and letting us know your thoughts on the characters and their interactions.  The reviews really do help us make the stories we write better. :)

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Date: 26 Jun 2011 6:20 AM Title: The Name Game

My eyes burn a litte from this chapter. I blinked a lot while reading, trying to keep from crying. Between the names and meanings behind them and the babies birthday, it was all so sentimental. I really love the names though. They all seem to fit perfectly. 

Author's Response:

Yep! EA and I were very sentimental as we wrote these last few chapters. Can't believe it's really ending but we are very happy to send them off with an HEA perfect for them.

Reviewer: ariawolf80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 4:24 AM Title: The Name Game

Babies! Awesome :)

Wonder how long the Tony nickname will stick. I'm bettin' that not long after some calls out for Toby and Tony comes running, or neither come and claim that they thought the other was being called, Tony will be out and Anthony will be in. (I'm of the firm belief that parents should try calling a potential baby name out before settling on one, see how it rolls of the tongue since they'll spend more time chasing after their kids and calling for them than anything once their mobile). And I think of Toby as a dog's name, but only because my grandma had a dog for over a decade named just that, so pay me no nevermind. Besides, I've always said I should name my kids Thing 1, Thing 2 and Hey You, just to make it easier on myself :)

Author's Response:

ha ha! Thing 1 and 2! Somehow, I don't think that would translate well once the kids go to school :)

Reviewer: anonymouslysufferingfromOCD Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 3:12 AM Title: The Name Game

I love the babies, and their names, they are truly perfect.  So happy that everything is ok, sad that Bella will never have babies of her own again but it is ok, this is the way it is meant to be.

Author's Response:

Yep! This way, everyone is healthy and happy!

Reviewer: Carliec Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 7:00 PM Title: The Name Game

Loved it! can't wait for ment time.

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 6:02 PM Title: The Name Game

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 4:17 PM Title: The Name Game

YAY!!!! The babies are here! It seems they are learning how to get in a groove with their new additions. THANK GOD for family! It seems that their story is coming to a close. I HATE that thought, am I right?!? I will really miss this story. I don't want it to end. :( Thanks for another great chapter! :)

Author's Response:

Yes, it's coming to close. One more chapter and then maybe a couple outtakes, but definitely ending.

Reviewer: roselynne Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 2:55 AM Title: The Name Game

babies babies babies great chapter didn't know they would be here so soon

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Date: 25 Jun 2011 2:07 AM Title: The Name Game

Names are very cute! And it is so nice that the babies were born on Aaron's birthday - that was a nice touch.

Sorry that the story is winding down, but loving all the lovin' that's in the air. So great that everyone is helping out. Jake being so helpful and responsible was a pleasant surprise. I think everyone has checked in now, and checked out the babies.

So glad Bella got over all her apprehensions and is loverin' her Edward.

Thanx for all the reading enjoyment!

Author's Response:

Maybe one of these days I will write one without an HEA, but I doubt it ;)

Aaron's birthday seemed like the only choice once we saw when Bella would get pregnant.

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Date: 20 Jun 2011 4:33 AM Title: Cheesy Cullen

OMG it's really coming to an end. I don't know what I'll do when I don't have WTB updates to look forward to. 

I have to admit I was surprised that not only was there a proposal in this chapter but also the wedding. I'm glad that the proposal happened as it did though. I just couldn't see ExB's proposal happening in front of everyone. Heck they had a hard enough time saying "I love you" to each other let alon in front of everyone so I didn't see that proposal going over well. I loved that Bella made a flower ring and proposed first. That was definitely WTB ExB. 

I can't wait for the babies! In a way Alice did kind of get her namesake. 

In honor of this chapter and all the quoting glory I thought I would end on a quote. I read this and thought of this story.

"At the end of the day faith is a funny thing. It turns up when you don't really expect it. It's like one day you realize that the fairytale may be slightly different than you dreamed. The castle, well, it may not be a castle. And it's not so important happily ever after, just that its happy right now. See once in a while, once in a blue moon, people will surprise you, and once in a while people may even take your breath away." -Meredith Grey (Grey's Anatomy)

Author's Response:

Don't worry, we are already plotting a new story so we'll keep you busy! LOL

Yeah, Bella managed to surprise everyone. ha ha!

Alice def kinda did, but she's Alice so she will continue trying to get a full-on namesake. She doesn't give up easy! :)

Love the quote! Thank you so much for sharing!

Reviewer: 0bsess3d_much Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2011 12:39 PM Title: Cheesy Cullen

such a beautiful chapter! 

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Date: 19 Jun 2011 9:24 AM Title: Cheesy Cullen

I enjoyed the update and didn't expect them to get married.  Totally unexpected but I was happy to see it happen.  Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

EA and I are tickled that we could still surprise you all this many chapters into the story! Glad you all enjoyed the wedding & proposals!

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2011 8:40 AM Title: Cheesy Cullen

Good Chapter...

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Date: 19 Jun 2011 7:01 AM Title: Cheesy Cullen

loved the wedding cant wait for the next ch. maybe we"ll find out some names for the babies

Author's Response:

Baby names are def coming in the next chapter!

Reviewer: anonymouslysufferingfromOCD Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2011 3:04 AM Title: Cheesy Cullen

OMG, I am crying like a baby, all I can say about this one is "absolutely perfect in every way."  This sums up E getting the ring with Carlisle and visiting Elizabeth, Esme and Bella's talk.  The proposals...yes I mean both of them, and of course the wedding, I love that you did that from Esme's POV.

Thanks for yet another great chapter.


Author's Response:

Aw! Yes, that does sum it up nicely. Esme's POV gave the best view of their lives in that snapshot moment and it was a pleasure to write for her. SO glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: annah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 11:02 PM Title: Cheesy Cullen

Such a lovely, sweet chapter! Watching Bella break down over picking up a crib, her proposal to Edward (sigh!), his to her, the wedding, the vows...

Don't like the thought that this is almost ending...it's been a part of my life for too long (eagerly and impatiently waiting for updates!) Hope you still keep finding bits of story to tack on, so it never ends!

Thanx for this reading enjoyment!!!

Author's Response:

LOL All stories end at some point. But this one will have outtakes so it will go on a bit longer!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 8:20 PM Title: The Past Laid Bare

The game that changed it all was great and I wondered if that was where the bumblebee came from.

I had worried she had been raped like Rose and that was why she could not have children'

This is a great story

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Date: 13 Jun 2011 1:09 PM Title: The Longest Day

Even excited about seeing each other again, everyone was pretty rude ignoring Bella and not making introductions, I would have walked out too. EVeryone except Melody pretty much ignored her.

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Date: 13 Jun 2011 10:32 AM Title: Scars & Ninja Mind-Fucks

"pay attention to his body language and make sure he’s really up for whatever the two of you are doing"

Gosh I hope you are not going to kill Edward off, you are certainl putting out some signals

Author's Response:

No, Edward will not be killed off! Promise!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 8:11 PM Title: Moving Forward

Another great chapter!!! Those two have had one CRAZY year! She still has a long road ahead, but she has so many people that love her, too. Thank you! :)

Author's Response:

Yep! Lots of people, lots of love, and one Edward. She'll be fine!

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 12:25 PM Title: Moving Forward

Good Chapter......

Reviewer: annah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 3:20 AM Title: Moving Forward

I have always been Team Edward, but, girl, I am in love with your Jasper!!! He is awesome! (Not to say that Edward isn't, but your Jasper is definitely a keeper!)

So glad to see some things getting back to normal. Sad to see Bella getting all spiked. And that doctor who sedated her? Let Emmett loose on him!

Wow - it's been a whole year for these two! Happy to see how far they've come. Hope you're not yet ready to end their adventure, at this year anniversary. Still need to meet babies, and see Edward get a ring on her finger.

Thanx for all this reading enjoyment! (And loved the Bella/Alice time!)

Author's Response:

Thank you!! Jasper has been so awesome to write for in this story and I have loved every scene he's stolen!

Nope! We're gonna go a little beyond the anniversary. :)

Reviewer: anonymouslysufferingfromOCD Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 1:55 AM Title: Moving Forward

I love, love, loved this chapter.  I loved the APOV, it was nice to know where Ali's head is.  

I am sad for E about his business but I still the job that he has now is more conducive to having 3 babies and a Bella.  I do hope he buys her some jewelry soon....

So Emmett is winning back brownie points, and I love the placard, as well as the shirt.  I so want that shirt, although I am not pregnant, it could refer to my fat too, right?


Author's Response:

LOL!  Sure if you want the shirt to! LOL

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 10:36 PM Title: Moving Forward

Aw so cute. I love how sweet they are around each other again. Even with another scare, there isn't a lasting problem. I'm glad Alice was able to get a little of her frustration and anger out without really hurting Emmett. I think he needs to get a good wake up call from everyone to have an idea of how big he screwed up. 

There might not have been kungfu moves from ninjabell but she has stealthy mind tricks to go with her ass-kicking manuevers. 

Now to go check out that costume!

Author's Response:

Hee hee! Mind tricks! Love it!

Reviewer: blueschicka Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 5:24 PM Title: Moving Forward

Just amazing!

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Date: 10 Jun 2011 2:36 PM Title: Moment of Perfection

why do I get the feeling that there is something medically wrong with Edward? Is this what is going to make Bella realize that she loves him?

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Date: 10 Jun 2011 12:28 PM Title: Walk Away


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Date: 09 Jun 2011 5:54 PM Title: Reaction & Adaption

Poor Edward cockblocked

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Date: 09 Jun 2011 3:24 PM Title: Morning Aftermath

am very interested in learning about Bella's past

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Date: 09 Jun 2011 1:33 PM Title: Halloween Hook-Up

wow, awesome start

Author's Response:

Thanks! Welcome to Worth the Burn!!

Reviewer: blueschicka Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 3:58 AM Title: Life After You

Oh my god. Freakin' amazing. I would have reviewed every chapter but I was too excited to proceed to the next one! Please update soon!

Author's Response:

LOL It's understandable. Thanks for reading!!  We'll be updating tomorrow.

Reviewer: 0bsess3d_much Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 11:53 AM Title: Life After You

this story is great and cant wait for the next chapter :)

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Date: 06 Jun 2011 12:25 AM Title: Life After You

I love Bree even more after this chapter! I enjoyed this chapter particularly because it showed everyone's maturity (or lack of maturity) in the handling of Emmett's confession. Your story is so true to reality in that therapy takes time, forgiveness doesn't just appear when you want it to. Your characters emphasize that resentment can't dissipate when you tell it to. I hope everyone forgives Emmett (eventually. As in, a LONG time from now). Although, I wouldn't mind it if someone (The Chief? Jacob?) never did. There is no such thing as a tabula rasa!

Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying Bree.  I had no idea when I first introduced him that he would turn into such an integral party of the story. But he has and I love every scene he's in!  So glad to know you guys are enjoying him too.

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 6:24 PM Title: Life After You

Good Chapter....

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