[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
wow christmas seems great for theses guys. winston is adorable and seems he will fit in just fine. go bella go spicing up your sex life. wow so impressed. i bet edward is blown away and is thanking his lucky stars for having you.
i keep waiting for that other shoe to drop.
love it
Date: 27 Sep 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh this reminds me of the time I spend in Savanah, Charleston and the Carolina's. Yes I would love to meet jazz on a beach in hilton head. maybe edward and he could get head. jus sayin'. I like how the story flows. I always love alice. em is a big teddy bear as well.
thanks for posting, I'll say hello as I read.
laters, myblueeyes
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
I had a really crappy day and my little interlude in Savannah was just what the doctor ordered!
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
You know it was this stupid aversion to marriage that I hated about book Bella. I hope this one sorts her shit.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
I have a feeling Mke is not the only one behind this...
I have to say I have enjoyed reading your story and I know i have come in a little late but I found it by chance.
cant wait for the update.
Fiorella
Date: 21 Sep 2011 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
Mr and Mrs Newton need to be charged with obstruction or justice or hindering a police investigation.
Mike needs to be charged with harrassment.
Maybe there is a way for Bella to go after them in civil court for damages....That would be very interesting!
Date: 04 Sep 2011 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
i'm wondering how Mike could do those things! does he have someone in Savannah following Bella?
Date: 01 Sep 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
I just found this story recently and I love it! Good mix of drama and lovin' Can't wait for the next update
Date: 31 Aug 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
so glad to hear that you are doing well after the Hurricane, I live in Mississippi not far from the coast and I know how scary that can be.. Loved this chapter!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
Newton.. hang him high.
Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
I wish he would propose already.
Date: 28 Aug 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
loved this chapter, I like the way you have written Edward in this story is so differrent!!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
JUst started reading this story, I love it the whole story setting, and they way you write everyone is great!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
I am very glad we got the whole rabbit situation under control. i am glad bella didn't cave and made her point and edward fully understood. i loved what he told her to do if he forgot again. Ms Newton man oh man she is just as delunisional as her son. I can't believe she asked bella to write a letter and go edward for speaking your mind. this was a great chapter and i love that they are going to put a bid on the restraunt. seems promising
Date: 19 Aug 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
I really really love it! can´t wait for more
Date: 19 Aug 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella has such a temper and does not like it when she does not get her way. I think it is called being an only child and when you get two of them together, trouble.
Date: 19 Aug 2011 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
They are perfect. I hate the overly sweet oh precious crap. I like real people. Like always love your stories.
Date: 19 Aug 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
I love this story and I'm looking forward to more GA on their minds.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bella needs to learn to communicate with Edward. She goes off half cock and he thinks she is mad at him, so he should stay clear. It is not getting the results she wants. She talks to everyone else except Edward, unless she wants sex from Emily. She is sending off the wrong signals. They are not ready for marriage until they can communicate better.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm thinking if they are looking down the barrel of marriage they should be able to communicate their needs better insead of playing childish and pathetic mind games
Date: 16 Aug 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
Haha that is so funny!! Love the chapter. Please update soon
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
what a chapter. i am glad edward finally got help well at least talk to dr denali. halloween wow what a night. omg
seems things will work itself out. they need to talk but it seems as if edward knows what he has and doesn't want to lose it.
love it
Date: 12 Aug 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
Everything will be fine between them. It just takes time. Bella just needs to realize that Edward needs his own time table to heal. She can't force it. The therapy was good advice.
Date: 11 Aug 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
The advice was perfect. Obviously Edward needed it.
at least they are on better footing.
Date: 11 Aug 2011 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well Bella is handling this better than Edward. He has some issues, being a man he does not want to get help or acknowledge them.
What will happen is it will drive them apart.
Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
oh girlfriend you are so scaring us.
Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
love the story. He acted like a guy that is in love. Slightly off on his worry though. He could have just paid her the compliment and said for a gal that has never done that before you were PERFECT. So she would have owned up to it. Save the drama.
xo
Date: 11 Aug 2011 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
You never disappoint, a real author. Not some hack that copies.
I love Paula Dean. I would go to Savannah just to eat at her resturant.
Good job
Date: 11 Aug 2011 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
As ususal when you write I like the story. Well our southern roots, yes we were raised to be chaste ( not all stay with that), honest, go to church on Sunday. Drink iced tea! My northern family always found that strange, we drink it year round down here. I thought the first time I went north and there was no chicken fried steak, I would die. So funny! Of course that was many many years ago.
Good story,
Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
This is such a fun story! Love it!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
I so love your writing. I have enjoyed this story. keeps me going and laughing and wanting more. love your writing . thank you
Date: 08 Aug 2011 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 9
I think they need couples counceling because they both went through this trauma in different ways. Edward should talk to his dad,
Date: 05 Aug 2011 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, that was a fabulous chapter. Hopefully, Edward will go see the trauma therapist soon. Looking forward to the next chapter, love the story.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
Honey, this is just a joy to read. I am so in love with you and your delightful writing! Thanks so much for sharing your work! -Kimberly
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was searching around the site looking for a new story - nothing was really grabbing me. I came across one of your other stories - decided to check out your portfolio. I am positively giddy over this premise! I am a Georgia native (Atlanta and Savannah) living in Hollywood, CA for work. I do love it here, but I miss home often. I have NEVER seen a FF with a Savannah setting (and I have read a lot) so this is just a real joy to me. My parents and baby sister are UGA grads (I went to Emory in Atlanta) - you are really striking a lot of great chords for me. It is like you wrote it for me personally! :) I can tell you love Savannah - I know I am biased but I have been to over 25 countries - some very fabulous places in Europe and lush island countries all over the world - yet Savannah, GA is still my favorite place on earth. So far the story is so well written - I can already see that you have a real talent for story telling, dialogue is very natural and flows easily. Clever word play and witty reparte, just a joy so far. Thanks so much for sharing your work and giving me a nice little story from my home! Churchill's is a great bar - great backdrop for their workplace! -Kimberly
Date: 27 Jul 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
I can't believe they didn't think about Mike when they sent her to Forks. Charlie better call in all of his IOUs and get a search party looking for her. I have been on a flight from Georgia to Seattle. There is a lay over and it takes forever to get there. Edward and Jasper are going to go crazy with worry.
Date: 26 Jul 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
really great story... hopin´ for more soon
Date: 25 Jul 2011 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am loving this story. I just wish he had gone with her in the first place. Hurry with the next update.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
cliffy much? how soon will you update pout!
Date: 25 Jul 2011 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
uhg and it stops right here! You are trying to kill me slowly, please update soon and I am glad you enjoyed your trip.
Date: 11 Jul 2011 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it , such a lovely story!!! xxx
Cheers Louxx
Date: 11 Jul 2011 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
yep keep going ,sounds like its hotting up !!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2011 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
lmao!!!
poor Jasper!
shame on you Edward!
right on Rose!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2011 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
OMG!! what a way to meet the parents!!! i would've die
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2011 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
laugh so hard with this cahpter especially morning Rosalie.... great story!
Date: 07 Jul 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
I like this story, but I am worried about your Bella. Many bellas have a tendency to turn obsessively anti marriage and thwart a very sweet Edward. Please don't take her down this path. It gets old and annoying when Bella gets overly weird about girl time or about not getting married until a proscribed time. Anyway, I am worried she is heading down this path-hope not. Now, if Edward becomes a jackass then fine-let her take up for herself, but heck a little jealousy because he loves her, and desire to marry her are reasons to give in not go the other way.
Date: 07 Jul 2011 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
This is so fun. I can't wait for more.
Date: 06 Jul 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love Edward the southern gentleman. I also love how he's "so twisted up inside that he doesn't know if he's coming or going." He pined after her and now has fallen hard and fast. But despite Bella's admiration of him, she doesn't fawn all over him. I love how she stands up to him.
Date: 06 Jul 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love this spunky Bella. She's innocent and sweet but not naive.
I drug my husband to Club One too. The karaoke in the basement bar was a scream.
Date: 06 Jul 2011 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
Gotta love the to go cup!
Those friends of Bella's are quite the schemers.
Date: 06 Jul 2011 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ah, finally some down time today to enjoy being in Savannah once again. It's like spending the afternoon with an old friend. The carriage tours, Mrs. Wilke's, etc. Just fantastic!
I forgot about all the 'beautiful prick' animosity that opens the story.
The setting is fantastic. I was hoping to get back to Savannah again this summer, but sadly it looks like it isn't going to work out. I'll have to relive all my happy Churchill moments with your story!
Date: 06 Jul 2011 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
from the first few chapters till now it almost reads like a different author is writing this, Wow you have really grown as a writer and this chapter isn't as well writen as the others, Please I'm not dishing you. Your awesome, it was strange as I was reading I kept wondering is there were two people writing this story. and your note says it was an old story. Thank you and can't wait for a new chapter.
Date: 06 Jul 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
Ok I really like this story but I think you rush a lot of it. First I think their first lemon was really lacking and it was VERY short and not very descriptive. I cant wait to read more of your story. I did see that you have most of your stories on Twilighted and I really HIGHLY recomend that you post them all here. I used to read on Twlighted but since they are so strict on their authors sometimes I decided to move to a more relaxed site. I do enjoy your story and I hope you are not offened by my review. I only give my opinion to try to help the author.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
that blew me away when you had Rose show Bella how to give a BJ on her finger, cause that is exactly what a friend of mine did with me - years and years ago : )
I am falling in love with these two the more I read....
Date: 02 Jul 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
Damn woman, I'm still loving this... faster ;)
Date: 02 Jul 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
fabulous chapter, and I love a southern Edward, makes my heart go pitter patter.
Date: 29 Jun 2011 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
another wonderful story!
Date: 28 Jun 2011 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
I absolutely love a southern Edward. Fabulous and I can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
Another great chapter! Just lovin' this story! :D
Date: 27 Jun 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yep! I'm ah loving it ya'll
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
I can't believe she told him before the date! And Edward was totally swoon-worthy when he dropped her off. ;)
Great update! Ready for more! :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
what a sneaky pair the 'prick' and 'blondie' make..... thank goodness they are just friends : )
Date: 26 Jun 2011 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Okay woman, ya got me! I so want to read the rest of the story. It's looking Good
btw how fast do you write? LOL
Date: 26 Jun 2011 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hopefully he feels her how he feels next chapter. Thanks for updating
Date: 26 Jun 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love it looking forward to the next update.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2011 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yep, another one of your stories has got me hooked! You better keep posting it! ;)
Date: 25 Jun 2011 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story, hope to see more of it.
Date: 25 Jun 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved it!! Please keep writing. I have followed all your stories and think you are an amazing writer. This one might be my favorite so far. Hope to see an update soon!
Date: 25 Jun 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very excited about this new story, looking forward to more wonderful chapters
Date: 25 Jun 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really like this story-its off to a great start so please keep writing
Date: 25 Jun 2011 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoying your story so far. Please continue.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2011 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
You have astounded me again.... I really do love your work : )