Date: 16 Feb 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
I left my review for the end of this story.
I am a southern girl through and through.I dearly loved this story.There was times I laughed,cried,and even got jealous along with them.You pulled off the southern Edward and Bella perfectly.
Date: 14 Feb 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
he always was a shoe whore, edward too much
well that was one hell of a story
i love your writing
thanx for another great story
love it
Date: 14 Feb 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 25
wow poor bella. having kids is hell on women
i am glad edward was behind her and told her how he felt and showed her. it is tough for us to believe the guy still finds you attractive when you feel and look the way you do. so many changes you go through
well they got their baby girl. love the name
love it
Date: 14 Feb 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
wow so it seems they kind of just where after 6 years
i am glad they where able to see where they lost the connection and nowthey where able to talk about it and reconnect.
they have a great family and kids that challenge them. i hope they get their little girl
Date: 14 Feb 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 22
twins knock me over
they where so scared with one
two they must have peed themselves
two is a perfect number.
love it
Date: 08 Feb 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
GREAT story from start to finish. And this little insight into the future was very interesting. Awesome job, cant wait to read more of whatever you decide to give us next.
Date: 06 Feb 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
Thanks for sharing this beautifully written story, really enjoyed reading it. Love how you finished it.
Date: 06 Feb 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
this was a wonderful story and I really enjoyed it
Date: 06 Feb 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
AWEEEE, fabulous story and great chapter.
Date: 06 Feb 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
Wonderful just Wonderful. Thankyou so much for this story, I have enjoyed reading this so much and just absolutely adore the characters. You have a wonderful talent and hope to read more stories from you. Again thankyou.
Date: 05 Feb 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
Beautiful ;) I don't want it to end but I do look forward t ore-reading it a zillion times!
Jo
Date: 05 Feb 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
I am crying like a damn baby. I loved this story. It is just so damn sweet! Do out outtake or something, so we don't have to lose them. Thanks for such a wonderful read.
Date: 05 Feb 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
I joined the party late. It is a wonderful story. I loved all the southern flavoring. It made me laugh and cry. I never got my happy so I enjoy reading about them instead. Thank you so much for writing it.
Date: 05 Feb 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
Edward punching Graces ex!! To funny. But I gotta say when I got to the bottom of the page and read "The End". I was so damn sad. You have a great Edward and Bella. It will be hard letting them go. So future and out takes are always welcome! Sincerely Than You for sharing your amazing story!
Date: 05 Feb 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
Oh I just loved this story so sorry to see it end thank you for giving us this wonderful story.
Date: 02 Feb 2012 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 25
Awwwww-I want him to. E my husband. Can't you loan him out? I will miss southern Edward. I hate to see it end.
Date: 01 Feb 2012 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story and I am side to see it coming to an end.
Date: 30 Jan 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love it, great chap and alot like life with kids.
Date: 30 Jan 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
Well welcome..................to real life.
Date: 30 Jan 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 23
wow twins and boys
the resturant seems to be doing great. it seems these guys have come full circle and things ahve gotten in place for them
love it when edward freaked over the babies kicking that was great
Date: 30 Jan 2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 24
This chapter was extremely real, amazing writing.
Date: 30 Jan 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 23
please don't kill her, that would be too sad
Date: 29 Jan 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 24
Awesome chapter. I've enjoyed this story so very much!! I cammot thank you enough for writing it. I look forward to your next one.
Date: 24 Jan 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love Edward. He is so funny. His reactions to the different situations make me laugh.
Date: 22 Jan 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 22
I find it funny that so many of you writers give them twins, non canon but personally I would have never wanted twins
Date: 22 Jan 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
did you ever figue FF out? if so are you under same name?
I would spend 500 on used shoes either
Date: 22 Jan 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
happy times
Date: 22 Jan 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
he needs to "dress up" for her maybe a male stripper would work hmmm yummy
Date: 22 Jan 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love Savannah and your proposal was great
Date: 21 Jan 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
persistance is good
Date: 21 Jan 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
is someone helping Mike, or can someone do that from inside prison
Date: 21 Jan 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 12
this is golden
Date: 21 Jan 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
every women deserves her very own rabbit
Date: 21 Jan 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
salt down the happy trail and shot in the belly button-at least no one would be arrested
Date: 21 Jan 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
you did good
Date: 21 Jan 2012 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
dum da dum dum
Date: 21 Jan 2012 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am an Edwardholic too
Date: 21 Jan 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward the human cucumber yum
Date: 21 Jan 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
deserves more reviews
Date: 21 Jan 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
yeah well I met my future father in law naked when he used his key to his son's apartment, his mom may have hated me but his dad always liked me :)
Date: 20 Jan 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am glad to know you continued
Date: 15 Jan 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 22
Haha twins and Edward breathing into a paper bag. that's a man for you
Date: 07 Jan 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 21
That was a great one!!!!!!
Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella has gotten adventerous. Alice is crazy to spend that much on shoes. I dont' understand it. She should have the shoes put away so the dog can't get to them if she spends so much for them.
Date: 01 Jan 2012 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'll be happy to help you with FF.net. It's really easy once you get the hang of it. Let me know.
I love this story and have been here from the beginning. I know that I don't review like I should but I really love this story.
Elaine
Date: 31 Dec 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
I just love this story probably because I am a southern chick and "get" the language-ha. I can't wait for more. Love Edward!!!!!!
Date: 31 Dec 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 20
great honeymoon
love their begining
Date: 28 Dec 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter! Loved the ending with the 3 B's. thanks for writing
Date: 17 Dec 2011 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah they are hubby and wifey now.... Im hoping the next chapter is the fun sexy times on their honey moon? Keep up the awesome work.
Date: 16 Dec 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 19
I felt bad that Alice, Rosalie and the Moms took over her wedding day. I am glad though that she rebeled and went barefoot. Why wear heals on the beach. I thought the vows were funny,but sweet. These two people need the time away after all the drama and stress. Are they going to stay living in Hilton Head or are they going to build/buy a new house in Savannah?
Date: 16 Dec 2011 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
Lovely Wedding and I cant wait to see what they do on thier honeymoon!!!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad that Bella stood up to Alice about the waxing.
Date: 12 Dec 2011 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
That was a very sweet and romantic wedding and I loved Edward and Bella's vows to each other. Now, I am looking forward to them being alone on the boat for awhile, with no interruptions. I think they've earned that after all the planning for the wedding.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 18
It might have been hard to write but it is an awesome piece of work. I really enjoyed it.
Date: 23 Nov 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope Bella can move past the fact that she killed some one. She had to or she would have been raped and possibly killed. Edward could have been killed as well. She needs to think of the greater good of the situation. I can't wait until Edward and Bella can cocentrate on their new home, business, and wedding.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, good for Bella for keeping a level head during the whole Eric Yorkie fiasco and getting the upper hand before he had a chance to do some real damage to her or to Edward.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
wow bella sure has put up with enough shit from mike and yorkie
well at least one is down and she doesn't have to fear yorkie anymore
too bad bella had to be the one to take him out but yet it was self defense. i am glad he was stupid enough and didn't get that far but sniffing her undies
Date: 21 Nov 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
I say the bastard had to die. No one should feel bad for defending her family or herself. She did what she had to do,and I hope she can except that and find closure.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 18
Damn good chapter and so worth the wait!! Looking forward to the next!
Date: 20 Nov 2011 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
damn maniac!!!! first off can we address the bar skanks... can someone, anyone help me understand the mind of a skank???? what the hell??? the man is engaged and has not shown the least bit of interest in you three.....do the words self respect ever come to your mind?!?!?! oh thats right skanks don't have one apparently.. Now then Yorkie!!!! Oh shit home boy is delusional poor dear guy.. you know I can almost feel some sort of compassion for the sick bastard... okay now I said almost...not that I did... dear Bella what an amazing shot you are my sweet girl.... thank Heaven's yes, thats behind you now!!! Poor dear thought she was going to jail over this... bless her wee wittle "BIG" protective pea pickin heart!!!!!! Oh can't wait for more.. feel doubly spoilt today not just this much desired chapter but TOAL too!!!! thanks Lisa have wonderful Thanksgiving with the hubs and family!!!
Date: 20 Nov 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love it! But what about the mood swings Bella was suffering in the begining of the chapter, she was pretty harsh with him! Please update soon!
Date: 07 Nov 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love the true southern flair of this story. The plot has enough twists and turns to keep it interesting and fun. I love the Momma's. The love scenes are awesome. Keep writing and updating often.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
Sorry, I am Auatralian can you please explain what 'Fat Tuesday' is.
Loved the story as usual, it just keeps getting better and better. Looking forward to see what Edward does for the his love on V'Day.
thanks you for the update.
Fiorella
Date: 05 Nov 2011 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
The stalker, ugh.
Good story, waiting for your curve ball.
Date: 05 Nov 2011 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
i sure hope they catch this fucker. i would hate for someone to be able to get in my house and stalk around and display clothes for me. very creepy. seems bella takes things in stride. i am glad her and edward are getting back in their routine.
love it
Date: 04 Nov 2011 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
I hope no one gets hurt. I wish they would just elope! Love it!
Date: 04 Nov 2011 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
They are so cute. I am glad that Edward helped Bella keep his mother undercontrol about the wedding.
Date: 04 Nov 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 17
Gosh, I love this story. The characters are so engaging, and the setting is par none!
Date: 04 Nov 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 17
woot woot!! we have a wedding date... I really love how Edward loves Winston too! Bella kicks ass!!!! I just love this couple!!! so passionate and ready to get the salker out of there lives thats just flat out creepy... Thank you so much for this chapter. I have to go read GTTH again, yes again buts its such a good story!!!! TTFN Kathy thanks again Ms Lisa
Date: 02 Nov 2011 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
well it took me sometime today to get this chapter read but it was certainly worth it... Gosh I'm so ready to see them at the shooting range... hehehehe, that was pretty priceless hearing Emmett tell about Bella's marksmanship skills! I love it. This is such a wonderful story!!!
Date: 02 Nov 2011 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 15
ohhh how I love this story and your writing of it.. I did not figure in Eric Yorkie being the one helping sick puppy Mike!!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 14
well now who knew?!?!?! loved it... i'm wondering if the stalkers is someone else entirely like that Dan guy.. you know the soldier, or even someone else i'm not sure but this is really good...
Love the puppies name!?!?!?!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
well i'm just thinking that someone has to be paying for those flowers where is he getting the funds.... excited for the new business venture
Date: 01 Nov 2011 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh I loved this chapter lots of giggles and WTF is up with Alice's fam-damily!!!! those Rents are crazy!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 11
i'm sorry I know, and I mean I definitely know this is not funny, but seriously sometimes a person has to do what they have to do!!!!! Poor Edward hasn't even begun to think about how he has only want sex when it was what HE wanted and When HE wanted it.... Ribbitt ribbitt!!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
yes the outfits did sound just a tad bit risque, well at least Roses did... lol!!! yep body shots were hot!!!!! thank Gawd they finally got back to a little more normal of a sex life...
Date: 01 Nov 2011 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
No .... I sympathize with writing this chapter... Good job!!! no worries!!!! yes Edward needs counseling too!!! I'm surprised Carlilse didn't tell him that!!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
oh shit this isn't good... Edward and Bella re so over heels in love now this... damn, shit, triple damn.... (hum, what is a triple damn???) anyway I have to get to the next chapter....TTFN Kathy
Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
what a cute chapter.. I love the guys and the way they love and lust after their women.. Emmett was pretty funny!!! Carlilse was pretty funny!!!
Date: 31 Oct 2011 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
dang sicko Mike!!!!
Date: 31 Oct 2011 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
i must say her learning hownto give a blowjob was pretty priceless!!!! loved the chapter!!!!
Date: 31 Oct 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
so good and hell ya I'm a huge PD fan go Lady and Son's!!! now you must admit the Cullen's walking in with Bella cookin in Edward's clothes was just a little bit comical!!!!
Date: 31 Oct 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love how this is coming together and how he didn't know that what she wants to be is a cook.. oh I can see them having their own place, him running it and her cooking... yes yes I see this coming together.... great story
Date: 31 Oct 2011 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
well i loved this chapter... love how Roselie is working with Edward and helping Bella ..... Hey having Virgin Bella is a good thing in the story... just makes her more innocent..
Date: 31 Oct 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
lots of misconceptions and misunderstandings.. the story snopsis is pretty right on... really liking this. Savannah is such a romantic setting.. Magnolia blossoms, carriage rides, steamy (humid) hot days and Nights.... and lots of liquid libation... Yes, this sounds yummy!!!!
thanks so much for the heads up on reading this from here vs the other site and thanks for taking the time to go through this story and critique it...
you have a wonderful style and truly write with a wonderful southern style.. I personally love it..
Later Kathy
Date: 25 Oct 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
I don't see why they need to rush and get a new house. I think that should wait until they are pregnant. Bella doesn't seemed to rushed either. They need to get married and get the new business going. Edward will overwelm Bella with too many changes. She is not used to not worring about money. I liked the cheerleader surprize. They are a cute couple.
Date: 25 Oct 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
great day. bella and edward had a hawt engaged night. she fullfied his fantasy go bella rah rah rah.
i can't wait for them to go shoot guns. i bet bella will out shoot his ass
Date: 24 Oct 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
i am so happy they finally got engaged. i love the way he teased her about tying the shoes and stuff that was great.
great chapter.
Date: 24 Oct 2011 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love it! i hope she is a better shot them him! please update soon!
Date: 24 Oct 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
love this story another great chapter
Date: 12 Oct 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love it!!!!
Date: 12 Oct 2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella was so funny. I hope they catch Eric and can pin more on Mike to keep him locked up longer.
Date: 12 Oct 2011 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you! Great job.
Date: 12 Oct 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
Engaged! Finally! When will the wedding be?!