Date: 17 Jun 2021 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
I loved this so much! Thank you!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2019 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
What is with Bella always going without underwear? Guess it's suppose to be sexy, but all it is is redundant along with the super tight jeans. Every chapter is the same shit.
Date: 09 Aug 2019 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
Emmett needs to seriously mind his own business. Know one said anything when he fucked Rose the same night he met her. At least Edward and Bella waited and got to know each other. Edward should have told him to stay out of their relationship and mind his own.
Date: 24 Dec 2017 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
Amazing story. Thanks for sharing
Date: 04 Sep 2017 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
Just a great story.
Date: 29 Aug 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 24
Good job describing how real life can get in the way of intimacy!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 23
Twin Boys! They'll have their hands full now!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved the time jump and that they are having twins.
Date: 25 Aug 2017 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great honeymoon!
Date: 24 Aug 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love how Bella put those skanks in their place.
Date: 04 Aug 2017 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, that was dramatic!
Date: 03 Aug 2017 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
That was pretty brazen of him to go into their house.
Date: 03 Aug 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
Seems as though things are coming together for them!
Date: 26 Jul 2017 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great,proposal!
Date: 26 Jul 2017 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved her Christmas present!
Date: 26 Jul 2017 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, Newton just had to rear his ugly head again!
Date: 20 Jul 2017 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
He just can't keep from sticking his foot in his mouth can he!
Date: 20 Jul 2017 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
Sounds like a great party!
Date: 14 Jul 2017 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
Very realistic reaction by both of them!
Date: 14 Jul 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow, when u said there was trouble up ahead, I never dreamed it would be a kidNapping!
Date: 14 Jul 2017 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
What a wonderful term, Edwardaholic!
Date: 07 Jul 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm really enjoying reading this!
Date: 07 Jul 2017 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
I think Edward needs to cool his jets with the jealously or he's going to scare her away!
Date: 07 Jul 2017 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
What an interesting way to meet the parents!
Date: 27 Jun 2017 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! So glad I'm getting to read it! It was recommended by a FanFiction spreadsheet that had lists of great stories. Angelina Marie was listed as the recommender! Is that even a word? Anyway, so glad to have started this! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 04 Mar 2017 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, great chapter, you mixed up the times though. You stated that she goes to work at 7, but you have her waking up at 7 then heading out the dorr t 645. Might wanna fix that. One to the next now!
Date: 17 Apr 2016 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
It was good! sugar! ;)
Date: 29 Aug 2015 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
Great story. Very entertaining.
Date: 23 Dec 2014 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
AWESOME story!!!!! thanks for sharing it ;D
Date: 12 Sep 2014 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
This was just a super neat way to end this story! I loved the whole thing, except for the stalkers, but thank you so much for writing it!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 25
That was simply beautiful and I damn near cried when he told her how much and why he loved her! Makes perfect sense to me why she thanks God for him every day!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 24
This whole chapter was so real and true to life, it was amazing!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 23
Bella is an amazing woman, working up through her eighth month, carrying twins! It sure scared the bejeezus out of Edward when his Bella had to undergo surgery to deliver the boys!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 22
Trust this couple to be over achievers, even when it comes to having babies! Sure made Esme a happy woman, and probably Renee also!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
I have read Labels, and loved it as I do all of your stories. This chapter nicely covered the first couple months of their marriage and boy have they been busy! I'm impressed that they got their restarant up and running and doing so well! Esme giving Bella Granny Masen's recipes was such a loving gesture! Their families and friends are so supportive, it almost makes me envious! The surprise birthday party was great, too!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great honeymoon, just not a long enough one! It's so cute that Edward is so thrilled about being married to the love of his life!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 19
Your description of their wedding made me want to be there, it sounded just lovely! He lucked out on the honeymoon, by the way! Their vows were just wonderful ! Aww hell, I love weddings! With the restaurant coming right along and and their therapy putting them in a good place, I'm happy for them! It's great that their parents all get on so well and they have such good friends! Life is pretty near perfect now!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
It was scary as anything and I'm so glad it's finally over. Now if the state of Washington will just lock up Mike until he dies, I'll be happy! Hopefully Dr. Denali can help them both feel better about all this mess!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 17
That creep coming into their home and putting clothes on their bed just gave me goosebumps! I hope they find a way to lock this asshole up!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
It's sure nice of Esme to cook for that whole bunch, and for Carlisle to fill the basement fridge with beer. The guys will be thrilled with that and football and food! Too bad the police can't round up up Eric and make him leave Bella and Edward alone. The total of Edward's worth sure shocked Bella, but it will enable them to have the life they dream of!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
He almost left it too late, but Edward got the job done! It was real nice that he could propose when his folks and hers were both there to witness and New Years Eve was a great time, too! I can't believe Eric Yorkie would help Mike do this to Bella. He must be nearly as nuts as Newton is!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
Their private Christmas was great! Winston was a stroke of genius on Bella's part, as was the black leather dress, etc.! I am still worried about whoever is working with Mike on stalking Bella in Savannah! Hope they can put it out of their minds for the holiday!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
I sympathize with Bella, is there to be no end of dealing with crazy Mike Newton? For every good thing there seems to be a corresponding bad thing! Good thing they have each other!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
That was a pretty good Thanksgiving, in most every way! They got through the encounter with Mike's mother, and told Charlie about the letters and phone calls. Edward managed to spit out what he wanted to ask his love and Charlie said okay and good luck! They have even started planning to have their own place if the price is right on that beach shack.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 11
I guess even Edward isn't perfect!Not that he thought he was, but it is kind of funny that this vibrator thing has him in such a swivet!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 10
It made sense to me, too! I'm glad they are starting to get back to where they were before Bella was taken. The talk they will be having should help smooth things between them even more. I do think the Halloween costumes were great, though Emmett and Jasper were a bit shocked! The body shots sounded sexy as hell, by the way.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 9
Sounds to me like Edward better go see the trauma therapist, too! He's taking this harder than Bella it seems! I hope they lock up Mike and throw away the key!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
You really threw me for a loop there! Poor Bella! Poor Edward! That crazy Mike must have kidnapped her right out of her folks' front yard! I hope to hell he doesn't hurt her!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
I figured Edward's parents would have a pretty nice home and Bella would be a bit impressed. I think Esme and Carlisle know that their son has met his match!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 6
I didn't see anything wrong with it, so I guess it didn't hurt to not edit it! Mike trying to drag Bella out of the bar was a bit scary, but luckily Jake held the fort until Edward got there.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
I really like this Bella and Edward too, of course. He is just darlin' with that sweet southern drawl!There's just something about southern boys!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
You mean like the first time I met my future in-laws? I talked him into letting me drive his beautiful blue and white '54 Oldsmobile part way to his folks. What I didn't tell him was I had no license and really didn't know what I was doing. So, going around a corner, I hung on to the wheel and drove into a ditch, and a fencepost! He made me buy him a new headlight, which was hard because I was cashiering at the movie theater at 60cents an hour! That was nearly fifty-four years ago and I still have to smile when I think about it! I guess Bella's meeting Edward's parents was a bit more humiliating, but these are different times!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
The big reveal! Can't wait to see how he takes it! I'm pretty sure Edward is really into Bella!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
Some girls just don't shop around before they find the one they want. Too bad most guys aren't made that way! This is starting to be promising between them.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, good lord, you two, let each other know how you really feel! Sounds like Bella lucked out, running into Alice again. Now she has a decent place to live, at least.
Date: 15 Aug 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
Loved the whole story!
Date: 14 Jul 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
I loved it!
Date: 09 Apr 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
I'm slowly making it through all of your stories and I love them all ! Looking forward to the next one keep up the awesome work.
Date: 02 Mar 2014 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 25
Another really good story, loved it
Date: 23 Sep 2013 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
:) loved this story
Date: 27 Dec 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm glad she shot him! How terrifying.
Date: 27 Dec 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
I absolutely love his reaction to her new toy :D
Date: 27 Dec 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
That was a great first meeting! :)
Date: 23 Oct 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
How sweet!! What an awesome story!! :)
**What a coincidence...I couldn't believe it when I first read of where Alice lived in the very beginning!!! Up until she sold it a few years ago, my sister lived on W. Jones St in Savannah across from Wilkes House restaurant!!! She used to get take out from the back door!! Small world!!! Before that, she lived on Wilmington Island!!!**
I was born & raised in SC and now live in NC. It was fun to read abt all the familiar places!! I luv Savannah & Hilton Head as well!!! :)
Keep writing!! I luv ur stuff!
Date: 22 Oct 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome! Hot!!!
"mistakes"??? I haven't seen any!! I'm a stickler for those b/c when I read, it's for entertainment!! A writer I am not. Therefore, it's very difficult for me to decipher what an author is trying to say if there are goofs!!! That's one thing I love abt you...u value the integrity of ur work and it shows! Your work is credible and should be acknowledged!!
Thank U!!!
:)
Date: 22 Oct 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 4
OH!!! This is awesome...AND hot!!! :)
Date: 19 Oct 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
a very sweet story---I loved it
Date: 09 Aug 2012 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
That was so sweet I'm goin cry awesome, awesome, awesome story I loved reading it
Date: 09 Aug 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love the name Gracie Mae soooo cute I'm glad they got their lil girl awesome chapter I loved it
Date: 09 Aug 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
Glad they are workin on themselves awesome chapter I hope they have a lil girl loved it
Date: 08 Aug 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
😢😢 I hope everything works out well I'm glad Edward held the boys I love their names btw awesome chapter I loved it
Date: 08 Aug 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh shit twins!!! And Edwards already talkin about a third awesome chapter I loved it
Date: 08 Aug 2012 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm so glad they are finally getting married awesome chapter I loved it
Date: 08 Aug 2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 20
Edward has a lot to learn about lil Alice awesome chapter loved it
Date: 07 Aug 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 19
So sweet...love the way Bella put the bitches in their place awesome chapter I loved it
Date: 07 Aug 2012 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh damn didn't see that one happening wow she shot is stupid ass loved the chapter awesome job
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh wow so Yorkie was in their house wow he's got some huge balls awesome chapter I loved it
Date: 06 Aug 2012 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter I loved it. I'm so glad they are engaged that makes me so happy
Date: 05 Aug 2012 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh he's so sweet! Still waitin for the bottom to drop out with Mike/Eric!! Awesome chapter I loved it
Date: 05 Aug 2012 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
Winston I love it such a cute name. Awesome chapter I loved it
Date: 05 Aug 2012 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome chapter I love the way Mike keeps popping in the story
Date: 03 Aug 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow Mikes mom has lost her damn mind!!! So now that he's asked Charlie when's he goin ask her? Awesome chapter I loved it
Date: 03 Aug 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
😊poor ole Edward he just can't catch a break loved the chapter awesome as always
Date: 03 Aug 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
Whew I'm glad Edward talked to the Doc and seems to be comin around and gettin back to the way things were before. Awesome chapter loved it
Date: 03 Aug 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
Not sure if I missed it along the way somehow but what happened to Mike? Did Charlie shoot him is he dead or alive??? How in the hell did I miss that part? Anyways awesome chapter I loved it poor Bella I feel bad for her...and Edward he left his keys and has to sleep outside
Date: 03 Aug 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
I knew trouble was coming. Everything has been goin way to smooth. Great chapter I 💗it
Date: 03 Aug 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
Awesome chapter I 💗it
Date: 02 Aug 2012 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
So mike is the creepy stalker what a loser! I have a feelin we will be seeing a lot more of the jackass another awesome. Chapter I 💗it
Date: 02 Aug 2012 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
Fuckin loved it!!!! Awesome chapter I'm glad I stumbled across your other story last night you are an amazing writer!
Date: 02 Aug 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
🎉🎉🎈🎈🎉🎉 goooooo bellllllllla lol great chapter that sucks she met his mom and dad that way. But at least they weren't mean to her. Glad they seem to like her. Poor Eddie boy seems to be almost in love with her. I 💗 the chapter
Date: 02 Aug 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Their so cute together!!!! Another awesome chapter I 💗 it can't wait to see how he reacts to her still being a virgin 😏😏😏😏
Date: 02 Aug 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
Aww that was so sweet I'm glad. Ella told him about Emmett awesome. Chapter I 💗 it
Date: 02 Aug 2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
💗the chapter so Edwards not the man whore Bella thought he was interesting
Date: 24 Apr 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
Such a beautiful story. Very well written, your writing flows from one chapter to the next. Wonderful.
Date: 08 Apr 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
I loved this story very much. Edward with his southern charm and Bella with her fiery temper. The progression of the story was interesting, reading about them first dating up to their 30th anniversary.
One of the things I liked the most about your story is that you showed them having to work through their marriage; they had been drifting apart due to work, kids and even their insecurities and they had a reality check in order to start correcting the things that were damaging their relationship. You made clear throughout your story that communication is key to a good relationship of any kind, much less a marriage.
Thank you for sharing this story with us simple readers, I enjoyed it very much and appreciate all your hard work.
Great story!
Date: 01 Mar 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
I loved this story so much. I didn't want it to end. so I didn't read this chapter for awhile. I live in Georgia, so it was extra special to me. I loved the spark and friendship between all of the charactors. Edward and Bella could have not been any cuter. They faced real issues with love and respect. I can't wait for your next story. I have you on favorites.
Date: 17 Feb 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
I love love love your story!
So emotional, so sweet, so entertaining!
Loved the ending! the reenactment of their wedding!