Date: 09 Aug 2019 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
Emmett needs to seriously mind his own business. Know one said anything when he fucked Rose the same night he met her. At least Edward and Bella waited and got to know each other. Edward should have told him to stay out of their relationship and mind his own.
Date: 27 Jun 2017 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! So glad I'm getting to read it! It was recommended by a FanFiction spreadsheet that had lists of great stories. Angelina Marie was listed as the recommender! Is that even a word? Anyway, so glad to have started this! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
I have read Labels, and loved it as I do all of your stories. This chapter nicely covered the first couple months of their marriage and boy have they been busy! I'm impressed that they got their restarant up and running and doing so well! Esme giving Bella Granny Masen's recipes was such a loving gesture! Their families and friends are so supportive, it almost makes me envious! The surprise birthday party was great, too!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 19
Your description of their wedding made me want to be there, it sounded just lovely! He lucked out on the honeymoon, by the way! Their vows were just wonderful ! Aww hell, I love weddings! With the restaurant coming right along and and their therapy putting them in a good place, I'm happy for them! It's great that their parents all get on so well and they have such good friends! Life is pretty near perfect now!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
It's sure nice of Esme to cook for that whole bunch, and for Carlisle to fill the basement fridge with beer. The guys will be thrilled with that and football and food! Too bad the police can't round up up Eric and make him leave Bella and Edward alone. The total of Edward's worth sure shocked Bella, but it will enable them to have the life they dream of!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
He almost left it too late, but Edward got the job done! It was real nice that he could propose when his folks and hers were both there to witness and New Years Eve was a great time, too! I can't believe Eric Yorkie would help Mike do this to Bella. He must be nearly as nuts as Newton is!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
Their private Christmas was great! Winston was a stroke of genius on Bella's part, as was the black leather dress, etc.! I am still worried about whoever is working with Mike on stalking Bella in Savannah! Hope they can put it out of their minds for the holiday!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
That was a pretty good Thanksgiving, in most every way! They got through the encounter with Mike's mother, and told Charlie about the letters and phone calls. Edward managed to spit out what he wanted to ask his love and Charlie said okay and good luck! They have even started planning to have their own place if the price is right on that beach shack.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 10
It made sense to me, too! I'm glad they are starting to get back to where they were before Bella was taken. The talk they will be having should help smooth things between them even more. I do think the Halloween costumes were great, though Emmett and Jasper were a bit shocked! The body shots sounded sexy as hell, by the way.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
You mean like the first time I met my future in-laws? I talked him into letting me drive his beautiful blue and white '54 Oldsmobile part way to his folks. What I didn't tell him was I had no license and really didn't know what I was doing. So, going around a corner, I hung on to the wheel and drove into a ditch, and a fencepost! He made me buy him a new headlight, which was hard because I was cashiering at the movie theater at 60cents an hour! That was nearly fifty-four years ago and I still have to smile when I think about it! I guess Bella's meeting Edward's parents was a bit more humiliating, but these are different times!
Date: 23 Oct 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
How sweet!! What an awesome story!! :)
**What a coincidence...I couldn't believe it when I first read of where Alice lived in the very beginning!!! Up until she sold it a few years ago, my sister lived on W. Jones St in Savannah across from Wilkes House restaurant!!! She used to get take out from the back door!! Small world!!! Before that, she lived on Wilmington Island!!!**
I was born & raised in SC and now live in NC. It was fun to read abt all the familiar places!! I luv Savannah & Hilton Head as well!!! :)
Keep writing!! I luv ur stuff!
Date: 22 Oct 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 6
"mistakes"??? I haven't seen any!! I'm a stickler for those b/c when I read, it's for entertainment!! A writer I am not. Therefore, it's very difficult for me to decipher what an author is trying to say if there are goofs!!! That's one thing I love abt you...u value the integrity of ur work and it shows! Your work is credible and should be acknowledged!!
Date: 03 Aug 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
Not sure if I missed it along the way somehow but what happened to Mike? Did Charlie shoot him is he dead or alive??? How in the hell did I miss that part? Anyways awesome chapter I loved it poor Bella I feel bad for her...and Edward he left his keys and has to sleep outside
Date: 02 Aug 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
🎉🎉🎈🎈🎉🎉 goooooo bellllllllla lol great chapter that sucks she met his mom and dad that way. But at least they weren't mean to her. Glad they seem to like her. Poor Eddie boy seems to be almost in love with her. I 💗 the chapter
Date: 08 Apr 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
I loved this story very much. Edward with his southern charm and Bella with her fiery temper. The progression of the story was interesting, reading about them first dating up to their 30th anniversary.
One of the things I liked the most about your story is that you showed them having to work through their marriage; they had been drifting apart due to work, kids and even their insecurities and they had a reality check in order to start correcting the things that were damaging their relationship. You made clear throughout your story that communication is key to a good relationship of any kind, much less a marriage.
Thank you for sharing this story with us simple readers, I enjoyed it very much and appreciate all your hard work.
Date: 01 Mar 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Epilogue
I loved this story so much. I didn't want it to end. so I didn't read this chapter for awhile. I live in Georgia, so it was extra special to me. I loved the spark and friendship between all of the charactors. Edward and Bella could have not been any cuter. They faced real issues with love and respect. I can't wait for your next story. I have you on favorites.