Date: 09 Jan 2018 4:20 AM Title: In the Wings: a One-Shot
I just simply love this story. Great work!
Date: 17 Dec 2012 6:48 PM Title: In the Wings: a One-Shot
hey
soooooo cute!
my gosh!
it really is perfect...
Jacob was a great idiot!
but Edward was really sweet!
bye
Lil
Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:31 AM Title: In the Wings: a One-Shot
Beautiful and wonderful. If only we knew that high school was not the highlight of our lives during those 4 years so many of us would have survived it better and succeeded better as well.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2011 4:46 AM Title: In the Wings: a One-Shot
Loved it! Mahalo=TY Aloha,Leilani
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2011 3:56 PM Title: In the Wings: a One-Shot
Aw... Normally I'm not crazy about epilogues for one-shots (I mean, they're called one-shots!), but your epilogue was great! It showed the after-effects of the evening without actually showing them, and gave a clear moral to the story.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2011 12:37 PM Title: In the Wings: a One-Shot
A very nice written tale of two people finding each other.
Date: 25 Jun 2011 12:32 AM Title: In the Wings: a One-Shot
Oh wow what a fantastic story!!! I loved every word. Wish you would consider making this more than a one shot. Would love to pick the story up the next day after that awe inspiring night together. Love Edward & Bella. I never get enough of their story no matter what spin is put on it. This was awesome. Thanks
Date: 24 Jun 2011 7:08 PM Title: In the Wings: a One-Shot
This was a really good O/S! Good luck in the voting....am going to vote now!
Date: 24 Jun 2011 5:30 PM Title: In the Wings: a One-Shot
SO Sweet!!!
Date: 24 Jun 2011 4:17 PM Title: In the Wings: a One-Shot
good story. i enjoyed it a lot. :)
Date: 24 Jun 2011 2:38 PM Title: In the Wings: a One-Shot
cute