Date: 12 Nov 2013 6:22 PM Title: Bay Ridge Avenue - An Edward Flashback
Great update; really gave a clear snap-shot of what life was like for Edward after his father sent him to live with his Nanny. It showed his soft side, giving money to his grandmother and being respectful and caring with her, and to a certain extent with his brother. Carlisle was an awesome big brother to him, and it was nice to see the beginnings of his friendship with Aro. Edward's biggest role model was clearly Marcus, which fed his need to feel important and wanted and helped fill his need to show his father - who sent him away - that he is doing great without him. So young Edward was basically a punk with daddy issues, a dispicable role model, a supportive big brother, a loving grandmother who could only do so much to reign her grandson in, and a good heart where his family was concerned, but for everyone else he's out for himself...end of story. Thanks for not including in this chapter Edward sleeping with Jane...thank God it only happened the one time. Yuck! Thanks for this outtake.
Date: 10 Oct 2013 8:13 PM Title: The Hunt Part Two Starring Aro
I thought Aro killed Alec and two of his associates? I wonder when he kills them? Or am I remembering wrong? I liked reading these chapters, its just that you would refer to, "all the shit that happened in the city last night", and I have no idea anymore what you are referring to at all. I have no idea what happened last night. I know that the Cullens are on vacation in Florida right now but I have no idea what happened last night. I guess I could go back to read the chapters that happened just before this one again, or I could just get back to the Epilogue and the Sequel and stop worrying about what I can no longer remember. I guess that sounds like a good idea. So...'on with the show'!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 28 Outtake Starring Carlisle
that makes a little sence as to how carlisle was acting at the time but in qs durring this fight carlisle told ed he loved her and was running away with her, why do that when he was never planning to? when they already kinda had a plan? that part doesn't fit....
Date: 05 Jul 2011 5:49 AM Title: The Hunt Part Two Starring Aro
oh aro baby i would help you clean up a scene and dump a body!damn he really tossed her around in bed, and the italian? holy shit! body? let's toss a body! i know i've said it before but i adore your aro! seriously crushing on this character!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 4:26 AM Title: The Hunt Part One Starring Aro
ahhh! you have made me love on aro! in all his sweetie-hardass-sexy-mobster glory. fucker could bring the nasty outta me. just sayin! i wanna cash in the airmiles leave hubbie at home and go find me an aro down in brooklyn. yummy yummy!
Date: 15 Jun 2011 6:30 PM Title: The Hunt Part One Starring Aro
love being able to get the other characters perspectives on things!! and LOVE the pics on the banner! those actors fit the character rolls perfectly esp. marcus and aro! hope to see more pics from you on your stories!!!