Date: 05 Jul 2013 8:41 PM Title: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
Mistress, you did it beautifully! Your little bird finally learned how to fly with her own wings and all the more, she had a wonderful family and friends who supported her and that's more than we can ever hope for someone to have. And like her, you also did an amazing journey and brought us all together with you. Thank you. And congratulations, I'm sure you can go on flying and flying high above and beyond. *hugs*
Date: 18 Oct 2011 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 29: Only Waiting for This Moment
loved loved loved this story, so sad though
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:55 PM Title: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
Beautiful Story <3
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2011 1:48 PM Title: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
i loved reading Blackbird Fly. It made me laugh and cry at times. Beautifully written. you have a great gift never stop writing.
Date: 16 Jan 2011 4:17 AM Title: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
This must have been difficult to write. Very good.
Date: 16 Jan 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 28: Little House
My gosh, this is so emotional. Very difficult subject. Think everyone knows someone. I got elected to talk to one of the girls at work. Mainly cuz I was the one to clean up after her. Very hard.
Date: 15 Jan 2011 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 22: Trying to be Normal
Doesn't she need a better therapist by now?
Date: 15 Jan 2011 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 11: Never Been Kissed
He should teach a course on kissing. Learn from the best.
Date: 10 Jan 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 5: Simply a Cup of Coffee
I've know people with panic attacks. It's frightening. Don't understand the arm thing.
Date: 10 Jan 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 4: Chinese Take-Out
Still confused.
Date: 09 Jan 2011 3:43 PM Title: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
I adored this story ! I thought you worte so effortlessly, it was fab :) X
Date: 19 Dec 2010 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: Broken
Great story, could tell you really understood what the characters were going through. Especially liked how you didn't rush through things, that it took a while for Bella to get better.
Date: 11 Aug 2010 5:04 PM Title: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
this was an amazing story. and i am sure very hard for you to write, i hope that telling this story has helped you. i will certainly be recommending this story to other readers, it is certainly a story that deserves to be read.... thank you
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 5:50 PM Title: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
u love it! what an amazing ending. i love it!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 29: Only Waiting for This Moment
awe! i love it!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 28: Little House
i really hope bella gets better its sad seeing her like this
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 27: Nightmare
omg! the baby is gone! and she got wat now! i hate jim and victoria
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 26: Surprises
i love it i thought she was gonna get out but im happy shes goin back in jail. i thought charlie was gonna be angry but i guess i was wrong
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 25: My Worst Nightmare
i love it!!! i had some good laughing a some points
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 24: Making Plans
i love it amazin as always
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 23: Our Holiday
i love it!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 22: Trying to be Normal
omg! i love it!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Longest Night
i love it! the wedding sounds ostentatious for me but it sounds beautiful still
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 20: My Kind of Town Chicago Is
aww i love it
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 19: Meeting Your Mother
i love it
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 18: A Woman's Guide
whoa bella!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 17: Stopple Thy Mouth, Dame!
i love it! i would be sooo embarrassed if i had someone talking bout it with me. lol its good bella is getting better
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 16: Bella's Song
i love it its good that edward is making bella happy
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 15: Girl Talk
omg! lol that must be embarrassing!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 14: Get Me Into Trouble
awwwwwww i love it!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 13: An Overnight Stay
i love it!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 12: Pizza and Beer
awwwwwwwww
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 11: Never Been Kissed
awww they kissed! i love it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 10: Bella's Story
what bella went through no one should go through that. its sad to no that some people can be going through that.....
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 9: Welcome to Forks
i love it!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 8: Flashbacks
bellas past......omg
i love the chapter
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 7: Normal Girl
aw i love it
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 6: Firsts
i love it!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 5: Simply a Cup of Coffee
awww i love it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 4: Chinese Take-Out
i love it i wonder if he likes her amazing!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 3: Armchair Medical Advice
i love it!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 2: Honey I'm Home
i love it!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1: Broken
i love it so far.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 24: Making Plans
I am so enjoying your story. Still reading. Bella is getting better. She is getting happy!
I am new to this website. I like it.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 11: Never Been Kissed
I have been reading your story. Soo sweet! I will keep reading and am looking forward to the sequel. Not sure how I found it. Im glad I did. Thank you for it.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 22: Trying to be Normal
Strep throat of the vagina!! LoL, hahahhahaha. Loved it!
Author's Response:
Yes, I love me some metaphors!
I just want you to know I love all my readers that review so very much! XOXO!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:05 PM Title: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
I have just read your story and it was a very lovely and touching story and I loved it thank you for sharing it with us!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! You know, I love my reviewers!
Date: 10 Jun 2010 9:52 PM Title: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
Wow...what a ride that was...great story!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 11:44 AM Title: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
I realy enjoyed this story thank you so much for sharing it!
Date: 17 May 2010 8:20 PM Title: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
This is excellent. I couldnt take my eyes away! Excellent job!
Date: 12 May 2010 10:29 PM Title: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
Wow she not only got to have one child but 2 and is sucessful and all that. I am glad that she got to show her classmates that she turned out ok.
Date: 12 May 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 29: Only Waiting for This Moment
aww they are married now!!! I am so happy that they were alowed to get to this point.
Date: 12 May 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 28: Little House
I am glad that she is going to go and get help and hopefully she will come out of it better.
Date: 12 May 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 27: Nightmare
Well at least she rememberd now what happened. It is terrible that she lost the baby and I hope that she will be able to have another one.
Date: 12 May 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 26: Surprises
Well at least Victioria isn't going to get out. I hope that Charlie gets better with the whole pregnancy thing.
Date: 12 May 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 25: My Worst Nightmare
Well that was just funny! I can't believe that Charlie did that but it was funny.
Date: 12 May 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 24: Making Plans
Aw she is really getting better and that is a good thing even if she really doesn't like the whole gaining weight.
Date: 12 May 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 23: Our Holiday
Well at least they all stood up for Bella! Emmett was funny and then ruined his and Rose's secret!
Date: 12 May 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 22: Trying to be Normal
Aww poor Bella! She wrecked her car and then had to have that kind of talk with Carlisle and Esme. I hope that Charlie doesn't kill Edward over all of this.
Date: 12 May 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Longest Night
So that didn't go that badly for them. I am glad that they are moving forward in their relationship.
Date: 12 May 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 20: My Kind of Town Chicago Is
Things didn't go that ba at dinner but I have to wonder what Edward's parents think that they are doing by telling Edward all of that because that is just going to make him more determined to make thing work for him and Bella not that it is a bad thing.
Date: 12 May 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 16: Bella's Song
I think I'd do a pay back. Something along the lines of throwing the books away. Maybe even the toys Alice has.
Date: 12 May 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 14: Get Me Into Trouble
You are doing an excellent job of writing this story. Eating disorders are very hard to overcome. Not to mention the events that usually lead to the disorder.
Date: 12 May 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 13: An Overnight Stay
What was nickel and diming her to death, the truck, or the car?
Date: 12 May 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 19: Meeting Your Mother
I think that Edward is on to something about her nighmares. Did something happen to Bella that she remembers but doesn't want to tell anyone.
Date: 12 May 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 18: A Woman's Guide
Oh no I think that they created a monster.
Date: 12 May 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 17: Stopple Thy Mouth, Dame!
That was a good weekend for them.
Date: 12 May 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 16: Bella's Song
Yea Bella actually likes a picture that was taken of her and that is a huge step for her. I really think that they need to leave her be about the whole sex thing.
Date: 12 May 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 15: Girl Talk
Poor Bella all she wanted to do was get some things so that she could spend the weekend with her boyfriend and gets ambushed by her friends.
Date: 12 May 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 14: Get Me Into Trouble
Oh that would be really horiffic. I am glad that she didn't break down or have a panic attack with that and I thought that she would have.
Date: 12 May 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 13: An Overnight Stay
She only had a couple of times where she paniced that was good for her.
Date: 12 May 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 2: Honey I'm Home
Fourth paragraph from the bottom, "I didn't take office," not sure what you mean.
Date: 11 May 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 12: Pizza and Beer
That is so cute and that is a good idea that they take things slow.
Date: 11 May 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 11: Never Been Kissed
See no running and she even did better that weekend that is progress.
Date: 11 May 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 10: Bella's Story
That is terrible but it is good that Edward didn't go running after hearing the things that happened to Bella.
Date: 11 May 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 9: Welcome to Forks
That is good that she is feeling normal for once. I hope that she starts feeling better every day. I think that the key to that is Edward.
Date: 11 May 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 8: Flashbacks
Aw that is sad that she thinks that she is ruining everything with Edward when it is apparent that Edward likes her and wants to be with her.
Date: 11 May 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 7: Normal Girl
I didn't think that the date went badly and hopefully Alice can convince her the dame thing.
Date: 11 May 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 6: Firsts
Poor Bella so insecure about herself. I hope that things get better for her.
Date: 11 May 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 5: Simply a Cup of Coffee
So she is going out on a date with Edward!! The I told you so is going to start when she gets home.
Date: 11 May 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 4: Chinese Take-Out
It is sad that Bella doesn't give herself the credit that she is due. I hope that someone can bereak through and break her out of her shell.
Date: 11 May 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 3: Armchair Medical Advice
Man I would be so pissed if that was my car!
Date: 11 May 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 2: Honey I'm Home
I don't think that I have read this story but I am finding it sad that Bella has been through this much pain in her life.
Date: 11 May 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 1: Broken
I am trying to remember if I have read this story before so don't be offended if I stop reviewing it just means that I have already read it and reviewed it.
Date: 11 May 2010 2:01 AM Title: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
Wow. This is an incredible story. You did an amazing job. I cried through most of it, to be honest. It was honest, and heart wrenching, and hopeful, and brutal, and just incredible. Wow.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Broken
Hey, your story even if it was difficult in some chapters is wonderfully written, and truthworty. You dealt with a very difficult subject but you did great.
Tanks.
Sam.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 11:55 PM Title: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
Very interesting story. I read it in one afternoon ! Some chapter are very dark but I really feel better with this happy end... A hard but very instructing reading. Thanks.
Date: 30 Mar 2010 12:38 AM Title: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
wow that was awesome! thank you so much for putting yourself out there and writting this story. the story was wonderful and it means even more that you have obvious indepth knowledge of the issues discussed, and you wrote for us anyway. i can only hope you have found your happy ending as well.
Author's Response:
I can't believe i didn't see this review earlier! Sorry it took me 3 months to get back! Anyways, thank you for reviewing!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 29: Only Waiting for This Moment
loved the wedding, everybody crying thinking that have come so far and they would never see the day
Date: 29 Mar 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 28: Little House
wow that was a heavy chapter! i am glad that one was saved for after work and not durring, you brought tears to my eyes.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 27: Nightmare
the story is wonderful but i am so sorry that this is what you know. thankfully with how you have written this it seems that you have delt better with what happened. i only pray that you have found whatever peace you can with the situation and have a safe and happy life now.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 26: Surprises
well at least she is staying in jail. the only down side now is that bella said that she has bad flashbacks/nightmares after these hearings. and witht the baby...
Date: 29 Mar 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 25: My Worst Nightmare
so glad that everyone is getting along. bella's reaction to charlie on adate was too funny. charlie putting a time limit and rule to the movein is hilarious
Date: 29 Mar 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 24: Making Plans
talking of the future! so sweet. glad to see that bella is doing so well. if i am correct she has gained like 20 pounds! that is awesome
Date: 29 Mar 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 23: Our Holiday
so glad that bella seems to be dealing with things better. happy that e & j & a & em all stood up to bitch rose. too funny how em blabbed about the baby!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 22: Trying to be Normal
i can not believe that edward is an early finisher! hehehe. i wonder if the birth control won't work thing is foreshadowing to something?
Date: 29 Mar 2010 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Longest Night
yay she lost her v-card! and most importantly she has realized she wants to get better!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 20: My Kind of Town Chicago Is
well it looks like liz and ted are on to bella and tried to 'talk some sence' into edward they both know it is a hard road they are on and i hope everybody allows them to travel it.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 19: Meeting Your Mother
what does he mean 'I wish that were true." ? what is edward thinking he is gonna do to hurt her?!?! he better watch it or he is gonna get his ass handed to him.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 18: A Woman's Guide
yay she is seeing that she can do it!