Date: 02 May 2015 11:22 AM Title: Epilogue
AWESOME story ;) a have a couple of questions though ;) forks university? and when she changed did she change to an animal diet? and did her eyes stay brown? i was a bit disappointed that edward didn't have green eyes though ;D
Date: 01 Mar 2015 4:09 AM Title: Prologue
I started reading this as a PDF on my Kindle. I wasn't aware it was on this sight. I'm on chapter 3 and just love it and wanted to tell you how much I love what you are doing with the characters so far. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 22 Jun 2011 3:03 PM Title: As I Lay Dying
I'm guessing that Jazz was hoping he could keep her around by turning her. Although she hates him now, she should realize that he was insane and that made him hurt her. I guess I see it that Jazz was a victim in this as well and I'm kind-of sad he's dead.
But yay! She's with Edward. Waiting....
Date: 22 Jun 2011 2:18 PM Title: As I Lay Dying
I loved this chapter! This is the first story I've read where Bella is changed and doesn't know it...even when she wakes up! I don't think Edward needs to worry about "protecting" Bella from Alice. Yeah! Bella is gonna kick Alice's butt!:)
Date: 22 Jun 2011 12:45 AM Title: Battered and Bruised
I think Jasper was lying to Alice to keep Bella safe. If he really didn't care about her, he wouldn't have cared if Alice snapped her neck. She may keep him calm, but now she wants the madman. I think Jasper is going to fall on his sword to help save her.
But what do I know?
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 8:13 PM Title: Battered and Bruised
Edward better get there fast before there's nothing left of her to save. Also at the beginning did Jasper feed her some of his blood? If kinda seems like that's what he did knowing Alice like he did and what she'd probably do. He doesn't want to lose Bella so he took drastic measures before Alice could do more harm
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Next chapter will be posted soon.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 6:53 PM Title: Battered and Bruised
Alice is a scary mean girl because she pretends to be so sweet. I hope that Bella gets to kick Alice's butt. :)
LOL yes she is! Next chapter will show if what you want comes true!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 09 Jun 2011 6:26 PM Title: Consequences
Oh my. The shit's hitting the fan now! Feel bad for Bella. I'm sure she heard what Edward said and misconstrued it. Now she's in the clutches of a wack job. Next chapter should be very interesting. Is it the prologue portion?
Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:15 PM Title: The Truth Hurts
Wow, Jasper sucks! Hope Edward gets to beat the shit out of him. How about Alice and Jasper getting it on the first day they met? What a tool! Whew. It felt good to vent. Ha!
LOL thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:11 PM Title: Kiss The Pain Away
Oh man, I'm liking this story. It's great that you've made Alice the manipulative bitch and Rosalie the caring friend. Yep, I'm figuring it's been Jasper killing people all along........Edward left to keep the family intact. Enjoying the chemistry between Bella and Edward. Was it Rosalie who asked Edward to come back or someone else? Hmmm.
So glad you are enjoying it! Yes, Rose is the one who asked Edward to come back.
Thanks for the review!