[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2012 3:39 AM Title: O.O. O/S
I wish there was more to their story :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2011 5:41 PM Title: O.O. O/S
I think you make a PERFECT writer for BDSM..I have read quite a few fics including the BDSM..I truly hope you consider contuining this one as they explore they D/s lifestyle.
Author's Response:
First off, sorry I'm just now receiving this! I need to get better at checking reviews over here!
Secondly, thank you so much for your kind words! I was really nervous writing this story, so to hear that is so flattering. I'm working on my first multi-chap story right now, and I'm trying to give that all my attention until it's up and running. But I definitely haven't ruled out the possibility of continuing this story :)
Thanks again!
-shpwhitney
Date: 28 Jul 2011 8:58 PM Title: O.O. O/S
Read twice & loved it! 7/11
Author's Response:
Hi! Sorry I'm just now responding to your review, but I am so fail with checking them! Thank you so much for the support, though. Glad you liked it!
-shpwhitney
Date: 23 Jul 2011 11:23 PM Title: O.O. O/S
This story should definitety be continued. Very Erotic and well written
Author's Response:
Sorry it's taken me so long to reply to your review! I mostly post on another site, and I'm bad with checking over here! Thank you so much for the review, though. I haven't continued this fic as of yet, but the thought is quite intriguing :)
-shpwhitney
Date: 15 Jun 2011 3:00 PM Title: O.O. O/S
So hot and so awesome! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! And thank you for the review :)
Date: 03 Jun 2011 3:40 AM Title: O.O. O/S
OMG!!!! This is one f...... HOT chapter. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!! I know that this was for a O/S contest but are you going to continue it. PLEASE PLEASE PELASE say YES!!!!!!!! This one chapter is soooooo gooooood I would love to see what you could do with a whole story. I am putting this story on alert. I hope to hear from you soon that you are going to continue. PLEASE!!! PRETTY PLEASE!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! I am so glad you like the story so much; you're review makes me smile! I am so tempted to continue because a lot of people seem to think I should, but I don't know much at all about BDSM and I would really need to brush up on that info! Keep me on author alert and we'll see :)
- shpwhitney
Date: 31 May 2011 1:19 AM Title: O.O. O/S
I think you need to expand this from a one-shot to a full length story pronto. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and for liking it enough to want me to continue! I'm really not well versed in BDSM knowledge, and that frightens me from continuing the story! If I get some more knowlege tho, I might consider it!
- shpwhitney
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2011 9:23 PM Title: O.O. O/S
After reading too much stories with BDSM theme I develop opinion that I dont like them - I just dont enjoy in the lack of free will, and find it crap. I like to much witt, intelligent Bela that to be supressed by some fictive rules, and someone longing for ages of slavery ( I seriously doubt that anyone could realy enjojed beeig real slave 24/7).
But there are two stories which are one of my favourites - For the love of domination, and Submissive - Dominant - Training trilogy, that are beautifull, probably because of undying love of Edward for Bella.
So. Your naration is very good, your story has a hint of being quality, and such love I mentioned . Looking forward to another chapters. Very good and logic begining. I hope that the rest would be in the same spirit and quality as the firs chapter. Aaaand... I reeeealy hope that you updating pattern wouldn`t leave us to long to wait ( I realy hate this updating system).
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review. I actually love Tarasueme's stories, so for you to put me in the same category as her blows my mind! lol I actually just meant for this to be a o/s, but I am getting a lot of positive feedback so if I'm able to get enough BDSM info to whee i feel confident continuing, I will. Stay tuned :)
- shpwhitney
Date: 30 May 2011 11:00 AM Title: O.O. O/S
please more! We would like bella to catch him cheating or edward could be very dominant of bella and she would love it!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I don't know if I'm confident enough in my knowledge of BDSM to continue the story, but I'll think about it :)
- shpwhitney
Date: 30 May 2011 5:42 AM Title: O.O. O/S
I know this was a O/S, but what are the chances of you expanding it? PLEASE? :)
Author's Response:
LOL! I'm glad you like the story enough to want more, but I honestly don't know anything about BDSM so it makes me nervous to think about continuing it! I'll keep an open mind though ;)
- shpwhitney
Date: 30 May 2011 2:16 AM Title: O.O. O/S
Great story... I'd love to read a bit more about these two...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review; so glad you like the story! I don't know if you will continue this because I honestly know nothing about BDSM, but I'll keep an open mind ;)
- shpwhitney
Date: 30 May 2011 12:11 AM Title: O.O. O/S
Awesome story! I knew edward could change things for bella!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it :)
- shpwhitney