[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 68 Genes
Really enjoyed the snarkiness between the werewwolves and Edward. Victoria keeps getting closer and closer. I'm starting to get really woried.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoy the playfulness between Edward and jake - wait till Sam arrives!
Date: 24 Jul 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 68 Genes
Loved the banter!!! I want to see Edward pissed!!
Author's Response:
You know, Edward pissed would be a very scary thing indeed!
Date: 24 Jul 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 68 Genes
well im excited to see their relationship now that hes a werewolf now
Author's Response:
Hope you enjoy the banter!
Date: 24 Jul 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 68 Genes
Oh, definitely "interested"! Can't wait for the next chappie!
Author's Response:
Nice! Really glad you left an opinion! i love hearing your thoughts on the chapter! Thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 24 Jul 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 68 Genes
I loved the scene between Jacob and Edward....I was laughing very hard....just picturing Jacob freaking because he's a wolf and not knowing how to turn back....can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
Well, it's gotta be kind of disturbing to look down and find that you have fur and paws! lol!
Hope you continue to enjoy the story, and thank you for letting me know the pats you like!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 68 Genes
HILARIOUS!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW THE CULLENS LURE SUE TO THE WOODS TO TALK TO JAKE WITHOUT CHARLIE!!! I HOPE THERE IS MORE TALK WITH EDWARD AND MASEN. BELLA ON THE FLOOR SCREAMING, WAS SHE PREGNANT IN THIS VISION??EVEN THOUGH I DON'T KNOW HOW THEY COULD POSSIBLY EXPLAIN MASENS BIRTH SO EARLY TO BEGIN WITH BUT WHAT IN THE NEXT WEEK OR SO HES READY?? AND HE WILL PROBABLY GROW FAST, VERY FAST ONCE BORN, CAN'T WAIT TO READ HOW THEY HANDLE THAT! I JUST LOVE THIS STORY. YOU ARE VERY GOOD. THE DETAILS, THE HUMOR, THE LEMONS....JUST ALL GREAT!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope you find the conversations between Edward, Sam and Jacob funny, I tried to find humor in the situation! Drama occurs later, and all humor is lost! Glad you continue to review, i look forward to reading your thoughts!
Date: 23 Jul 2011 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 67 Jacob
well im gald that edward was there for jake ! im excited to see what ahppens next
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! Hopefully, you'll enjoy the banter between the vampires and the new werewolf!
Date: 23 Jul 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 67 Jacob
Okay...Jacob becoming Jacob Eclipse style....damn, kinda hoping he wouldn't but oh well...
Can't wait to read more...love it!!
Author's Response:
Ec;i[se style? But Jake is friends with Edward and across the country from La Puxh? Oh My! Hope you like the rest of the story!
Date: 22 Jul 2011 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 12 Relatives & Reunions
I love this story. This chapter was just what it needed to be:) I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Okay, I have to know . . . what did you feel it 'needed to be'? I would really love to know!!!!!!
Thank you for reviewing! Have I seen a review from you before?
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 67 Jacob
finally jacob phased. hope the friendship continues....and maybe sue can help some. looking forward to them caching victoria and the threat going away... as always a good chapter!!
Author's Response:
Jacob had tyo phase at some point, and what is he more passionate about than Bella!!! That was my thought anyway . . .
Date: 22 Jul 2011 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 67 Jacob
Nice!! Love it!!
Author's Response:
As ever, thank you so much for leaving a review!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2011 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 67 Jacob
OK, now we are getting somewhere. Hes finally a wolf....yeah! He can help Kill of Vic and Riley now. I will patiently wait for the next chapter to see what the hellis up with Alice.
Have to admit, just kinda wished that Jake would run and never come back. But that's the Team Edward in me, ALWAYS!!!
Loves <3
Author's Response:
ha! Thanks for being patient! Jake just running away would seemingly solve things, right? He has a role to play, as always though! Yes, we are starting to get into the drama! Thanks so much for faithfully reviewing! I really do need to hear what you think of what's going on or if yhou se any holes I left, like you're wanting to know why the hell Alice hasn't seen!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 64 Enlightening Mom
loved it!!
Author's Response:
So glad you're continuing to read and enjoy! THANKS SO MUCH FOR REVIEWING!
Date: 21 Jul 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 66 Cullen Gang
Love this story!!! Love the daily updates, you must be busy!!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it! It's about to get interesting!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2011 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 66 Cullen Gang
Oh they know where she is now!! GOOD! Why does Alice not see that she is sitting in the trees watching the houses? Vic has made decisions the get Bella, their money and to sit there and watch. Just a smidge confused on that part.
Loves <3
Author's Response:
Give it a minute - it will explain itself!
Date: 21 Jul 2011 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 66 Cullen Gang
well im looking foward to them catching victoria
Author's Response:
Yes, Victoria is becoming quite the problem! Much more from here soon to come . . .
Thank you for taking the time to leave a review!
Date: 21 Jul 2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 66 Cullen Gang
Great chapter
Author's Response:
Well, you're up late - at least where I live on the east coast of the US! Glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thank you for reviewing! i was just sitting here going over the next chapter and deciding if i was going to post two on Saturday this weekend or not!
Date: 21 Jul 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 65 Bonding
cute chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks! Thanks for responding!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 65 Bonding
Didn't ever figure that Edward and Emmitt would be the ones to tell Jacob about their vampire nature. Wondering when Jacob will phase into a werewolf?
Author's Response:
Kind of a different twist, right? Werewolf coming up . . .
Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 65 Bonding
Yeah, I would have liked for that gun to go off on Jake? Yeah yeah yeah...i know that i should like him cuz he gonna come in handy, but I still dont like him.
Can we just kill of Vic, she is kinda really annoying! She wants things that she should have thought about before she became a B*tch!
Loves <3
Author's Response:
She is sooooo annoying! She has her part to play, though! lol
Thank you for the review!
Date: 20 Jul 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 65 Bonding
Maybe Victoria could make friends with them?????lol
Author's Response:
Ha! That would be something to see! Glad you are enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 62 Plans
wootwoot !!!!! loving the 4 chapter update you rock!!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for responding!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 64 Enlightening Mom
Aw, that last line is so beautiful. I'm really curious to find out, if and how they are going to explain Masen's early birth and advanced growth to Charlie and Renee.
Author's Response:
I love Edward!
You will be surprised how Charlie and Renee find out about the Culens ( or not )!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2011 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 64 Enlightening Mom
Little does he know...
Author's Response:
Yep! Hope you continue to enhoy the story! Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 63 Purring
So do I...
Author's Response:
There is a chapter called Winter Afternoon coming up - you-re going to LLLOOOVVVEEE!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 64 Enlightening Mom
im glad that she put her mom in her place
Author's Response:
Yea, renee is just too flighty and nosey! She neded to set some limits, although it was really Edward that finally put his foot down! lol
Date: 19 Jul 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 55 Arrivals
OK, I like Jake...who am I kidding. I cant stand him! TEAM EDWARD! I know he was there for her, but MAN...cant we get rid of him?!?! He just annoyes the hell out of me!!!
Loves <3
Author's Response:
Yea, Jake can be a handfull! He comes in handy later though!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 64 Enlightening Mom
Just love love this story!!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you are still enjoying the story! Keep telling me what you think!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 63 Purring
well they are so cute togehter and im excited for the next cahpter
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing - things are going to get interesting!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 53 Images
He thinks too much...hehehe
Please tell me that the baby will go okay?? I dont think I could handle any angst with that one. Its just too perfect to mess with.
When do we get to kill Vic? She is kinda annoying ya know!!
Loves <3
Author's Response:
Glad someone else is annoyed vy Victoria! She worries the heck out of me cause I know she is going to pull something . . .
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 52 Cinderella
Ooooo...daddies gonna be pissed at them...lol
I loved this chapter. Always love it when good things happen to great people! Loves <3
Author's Response:
Well, Edward just couldn't let it go that they would be in Disney and she needed the fairytale . . .
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 63 Purring
OK, I HAVE TO SAY THIS , THIS STORY TALKS ALOT ABOUT BELLAS HUMANITY, HER EATING, SLEEPING, BEING FRAGIL, NOW HER PREGNANCY, AND EVEN HER HUMAN MOMENTS, WHICH REFER TO BATHROOM MOMENTS. IF VAMPS HEAR AND SMELL, IS IT TABOO TO REFER TO SMELL. BELLA NEVER ASKS EDWARD IF HE SMELLS HER AND WHAT ABOUT PASSING GAS?? YES YOU CAN KINDS CONTROL IT BUT IT DOES HAPPEN AND MAYBE EVEN WHILE SHE SLEEPS??? AM I GROSS TO BRING IT UP. EDWARD EATING HER OUT WHILE SHE HAS HER PERIOD IS KINDA EQUAL IN GROSSNESS.....I WAS JUST WONDERING....
Author's Response:
Love it! i guess I never really thought about it . . . I'm sure his acute sense of smell is not to his advantage sometimes - humand are disgusting with all their bad breath and gas and bathroom smells! Guess he's just too polite to say anything about it? i don't know, I have to think about it! Good point!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 51 Magic Kingdom
OK, soooo not fair! I want to stay in her castle too!! I want my HAWT ASS Vampire to make love to me in Cinderella's Castle!! Loves <3
Author's Response:
I Know! I Know!
I want a prince in a castle and sex all the time!
I seem to make Edward into my ideal man! lol
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 63 Purring
umm wow that was way hott! vamp edward comming out to play and commin again and aain over some breast milk just wow!! whata great chapter! lol u know renee heard it all! cant wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Yep, I love what her fluids do to him! THE VAMPIRE TURNS TO MUSH . . .SORT OF! (after geting all fierce and all)
They just never stop expressing their emotions for each other, do they?
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 50 Towels & Rollercoasters
Oh, please tell me we get to have sexing at Disney World? That would be AWESOME!!!! Loves <3
Author's Response:
Sex at Disney! pfffft . . . of course!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 63 Purring
Love this story!! Looking forward to the birth of Masen.
Author's Response:
Me Too! I can't wait to meat Masen and see what he;s like! Thabnkj you so much for leaving a review! They seem to be few and far between!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 48 Surprise
That was perfect. WIsh I could trade like that!!!! Loves <3
Author's Response:
So glad you've joined us! I love readers that comment and give me feedback! Hope you continue to enjoy the story!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 62 Plans
ONCE AGAIN, WONDERFUL AND EXCITING!! I HOPE VICTORIA DOESN'T GET HER CHANCE TO TAKE BELLA, MAYBE VICTORIA DOESN'T KNOW ABOUT ALICE AND HER SEEING ABILITY?? EDWARD WILL LOOSE IT IF VICTORIA ACTUALLY GETS HER CHANCE!
Author's Response:
Wll, Victoria is pretty persistant!
Let's just hope the cullen's cover all their bases!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 62 Plans
loved this as usual! but that damn victoria ugh she makes me soo mad. i hope they end her and soon. i really hope she isnt able to get to bella but oif she does i know edward wil totally kick her butt!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review - it is about to get going on some drama!
So sorry about the chapter mix-up!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 61 Presents
just to let you know you posted this twice. you didn't post Jacobs reaction. I love this story!
Author's Response:
SOOO Sorry! I posted chapter 61 insatead of 60! Please reread and it will make better sense!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 61 Presents
Um, this is a repeat chapter....I got this with chapter 60
Author's Response:
SOOO Sorry! I posted chapter 61 insatead of 60! Please reread and it will make better sense!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 61 Presents
this chapter did end up uploading! heehee
Author's Response:
SOOO Sorry! I posted chapter 61 insatead of 60! Please reread and it will make better sense!
Date: 17 Jul 2011 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 60 First Christmas
excited to see what happens next
Author's Response:
SOOO Sorry! iposted chapter 61 insatead of 60! Please reread and it will make better sense!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 60 First Christmas
so glad jacob is going to continue being freinds with edward and jacob. and at the end will everyone laugh off bellas indestructable comment or did she accidently open a can of worms?
Author's Response:
SOOO Sorry! iposted chapter 61 insatead of 60! Please reread and it will make better sense!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 60 First Christmas
BELLA SAID THAT ABOUT EDWARD IN FRONT OF HER DAD, MOM AND PHIL??? OR JUST SO ESME AND CARLISLE COULD HEAR?? I LOVE THE SENTIMENT OF FAMIY PRAYER BEFORE A MEAL, VERY REFRESHING!!! WOW 2 CHAPTERS, ONE DAY.....YOU ROCK!!!!
Author's Response:
SOOO Sorry! iposted chapter 61 insatead of 60! Please reread and it will make better sense!
Date: 16 Jul 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 59 Christmas Eve
Oh hell....I can't wait to see what Jacob says...
btw, I loved the line...I didn't want Bella's entry into my world to be because we had to use venom to save her life...so non-Breaking Dawn...
Keep up the good work...can't wait for the update!!
Author's Response:
thank you so much for commenting! I really appreciate knowing what lines the readers like in particular! No one has ever commented on that line and that excites me to know that you liked it so much!
I never liked Edward's lack of dialogue about the baby - he never showed that he cared for it and then all of a sudden he could communicate with it and he cared? Oh Hell no!
I think you will like the birth - at least i hope so, and I love that edward is so in love with the baby already!
Date: 16 Jul 2011 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 59 Christmas Eve
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Love the way you portray all of the characters!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I just want you to see what my minds eye sees when I envision the events that are happening - that's what I hope for with each chapter, giving the right details to allow you to envision the scene as I am seeing it! I can only hope!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 59 Christmas Eve
what a great chapter! poor jacob i bet he is really freaking out but i bet bella will et him calmed down and when he phases he will be able to help with the victoria situation.. im glad charlie finally likes edward but i would be so embarrassed if my dad heard me screaming out during sex!
Author's Response:
Jacob will be around, but will he help? The question is, will they remain friends or let themselves become the natural enemies that they are!
Thanks so much for leaving a review!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2011 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 59 Christmas Eve
I had goosebumps when I realized they were gonna tell Jacob...awesome chapter. I cant wait for tomorrow :)
Author's Response:
Yep, gotta tell Jacob before he phases - otherwise he is alone in the woods of Highlands and has to figure it out on his own lke the book says Sam figured it out! Jake gets some help on this from the vampires, of all people! lol
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2011 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 59 Christmas Eve
WOW, WHAT A WAY FOR JAKE TO FIND OUT! I HOPE SUE HURRIES! I ALSO HOPE JAKE WILL BE REASONABLE AND LISTEN NOT ASSUMME AND BE THERE TO HELP WITH VICTORIA FOR BELLA! VICTORIA WILL FREAK, HOPE SHES NOT LISTENING NOW AND OUT LOOKIN AT HOUSES. HOW WILL THEY EXPLAIN MASEN BEING BORN SO EARLY, CONCEIVED EARLIER THAN THOUGHT? HIS GROWTH RATE AFTER BEING BORN, THEY WILL HAVE TO TELL OR DISAPPEAR. I JUST CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF THIS STORY. I LOOK FORWARD TO LOGIN IN DAILY FOR UPDATES, THANKS FOR THAT!!! I HAVE SAID BEFORE AND I WILL SAY AGAIN, PLEASE CONSIDER CONTINUEING THIS STORY TO INCLUDE MASENS LIFE AND BELLAS CHANGE AND ALL AROUND LIFE WITH EDWARD, ITS TOO GOOD OF A STORY NOT TOO!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the commentary! There is lots more story to come!
Date: 16 Jul 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 58 Town
well im excited for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Yep - Christmas is coming!
Date: 16 Jul 2011 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 58 Town
she is twisted.....
Author's Response:
Yep . . . twisted and about to show her stuff!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 58 Town
WONDER WHU THE CULLENS NEVER SMELLED VICTORIA WHILE SHE WAS WATCHING EDWARD AND BELLA HOUSE, OR WAS THAT THE SCENT THEY TRACKED?? I HOPE SHE DOESNT STEAL EDWARD BIKE WHILE ITS SITTING OUTSIDE THE DOOR!!! THINGS ARE GETTING VERY INTERESTING!!!
Author's Response:
Victoria has been very careful to stay at least a few miles from the house, though she had laid tracks all over town . . . purposefully . . .
Date: 14 Jul 2011 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 57 Showing
well im looking foward to the next chapter to see what victoria does
Author's Response:
Victoria is such a wild card, isn't she? Not really sure herself what she wants, except fo the revenge part!
Date: 14 Jul 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 57 Showing
I got a nook and been reading from that and can't update using it.. but love the story. funny moments!!
Author's Response:
Thanjks so mch for sneaking a review in! It really helps to know that the story is liked and wanted! It's going to start to get kinfd of interesting . . .
Date: 14 Jul 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 57 Showing
nice!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Date: 14 Jul 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 56 Trees
well its going to be intresting !
Author's Response:
Yep - we had to add the readheaded brat factor at some point! Hope you enjoy it!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 56 Trees
ohh i hope they get victoria or she ends up turing a new leaf so to speak and decides to be friendly wih the cullens..but is she can see in the living room and in their windows wouldnt edward be able to hear her thoughts??
Author's Response:
She can see from some distance away, like 4 or 5 miles from her mountain perch - Edward can only hear familiar voices as far away as three miles, so hers would be a lesser distance. I tried to consider all the limitations put forth in the book! lol It is fiction, so lets assume she can see farther than he can hear her mind!
Date: 13 Jul 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 56 Trees
I do love Christmas, and the family decorating the tree just makes me melt.... however, if you have Victoria kill Bella & the baby, I will never forgive you. Not kidding.
Author's Response:
I would NEVER kill Bella . . . not kidding! lol I love reviews like this cause I leave just as passionate ones when I find a story that I enjoy reading! Thanks for sharing with me and please leave me a comment as we get to some of the tense and anxious moments!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 56 Trees
Wow, what a wonderful story. Started it yesterday and finished it today. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
So so nice of you to leave a review! I thought your name was a new one, and I love to get perspectives and opinions! Hope you enjoy the next chapters, and let me know what you think of each one, if you have the time!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 56 Trees
WELL I FOR ONE LOVED THIS CHAPTER AND THE LAST ONE TOO!!! VICKI IS WATCHIN, MAYBE THEY CAN THINK OF A WAY FOR JACOB TO GO TO TOWN OR SOMETHING SO ALICE CAN "SEE"???? HOW FAR DOES JACOB NEED TO BE AWAY FOR ALICE TO SEE AROUND HIM??? I WONDER IF VICKI ATTACKS WHILE JAKE IS THERE WLL HE PHASE??? INTERESTING....SINCE THE BABY IS DUE IN THE NEXT FEW MONTHS, BELLA WILL JUST GET BIG ALL OF THE S UDDEN AFTER CHRISTMAS??? EDWARD SHOULD PLAN SOMETHING EXCITING FOR NEW YEARS....MAYBE GO TO NEW YORK??? TIMES SQUARE??? CAN'T WAIT FOR TOMORROW FOR NEXT CHAPTER, WILL EDWARD FIND OUT ABOUT ALICE'S THEORY ABOUT JACOB AND SEEING AND VICKI BEING AROUND?
Author's Response:
I love the idea of New York! I actually hadn't thought of it! Thank you for reviewing and leaving suggestions!
Date: 12 Jul 2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 55 Arrivals
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to leave a response! Hope you keep reading and commenting!
Date: 12 Jul 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 55 Arrivals
Just Lovely...Keep it up!!! Love Love Your Edward!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Edward really is a sweet guy! Thank you for reading and commenting, and I hope to hear from you again!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 55 Arrivals
WOW, I JUST HOPE RENEE DOESNT VOLUNTEER TO STAY AT THEIR HOUSE WHEN IT GETS CLOSER FOR THE BABY TO BE BORN!!! I HOPE JACOB DOESNT GET UPSET AND PHASE WHILE HE IS THERE AND FREAKS OUT!! FUNNY!!
Author's Response:
Well, you know Jacob is going to have to phase at some point! He will need someone to help explain it to him! lol
Date: 12 Jul 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 54 Tips
well im glad that charlie came to his sences !
Author's Response:
You just never know with Charlie, do you!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2011 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 53 Images
loved it!! cant wait till tomorrows update =]
Author's Response:
I love that you are so anxious! Glad you are enjoing the story!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 53 Images
thanks good chapters
Author's Response:
So glad you liked them! Thank you so so so much for continuing to review!
Date: 10 Jul 2011 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 53 Images
awwwww!! I love the fact that got to see something in the ultrasound. Its really nice that the whole family is behind them. this is such a great story.. cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so so so much for taking the time to review - glad you are enjoying their adventuree!
Date: 10 Jul 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 53 Images
aww so sweet a baby boy:)
Author's Response:
Yep - didn't want to go the way of Renessmee!
Date: 10 Jul 2011 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 53 Images
This chappie is soooo yummy! TYVM~
Author's Response:
What does TYVM - oh - thank you very much?
Date: 10 Jul 2011 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 53 Images
im excited to see what happens next
Author's Response:
So glad that you cvontinue to review!
Date: 09 Jul 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 31 Blood
HOT, HOT & HOT! LOL and he's finally asleep! yeah!
Author's Response:
Good, good, good. I was afraid it was too much!
Date: 09 Jul 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 30 Past
ah ha...I see where you are taking this! LOL
Author's Response:
What?
Date: 09 Jul 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 29 Mending
begging for comments?....hee, hee....you are too funny!!!
Author's Response:
Hey, sometimes you just need a response!
Date: 09 Jul 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 28 Meadow
Compromise? Not likely!
"Hut his thoughts told me"...what does that mean? (in the Charlie POV)
Author's Response:
Still can't find the error - help me out!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 52 Cinderella
WOW!!! SUCH GENEROSITY, THIS CHAPTER TOUCHED MY HEART, I'M SURE LOTS OF US WISH WE COULD HELP LIKE THAT!! YEAH, WHERE IS TANYA???? I HAVE A FEELING THINGS ARE JUST "CRANKING UP" SO TO SPEAK!!!!
Author's Response:
Tanya will make her presence known, have no fear! And yes, things are JUST CRANKING UP! I really appreciate you taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2011 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 52 Cinderella
aww that was so sweet of edward to help that family but i shouldnt be surprised its edward! lokin forward to the confrontation with victoria. and what about the denali sisters? tanya going to be a problem for bella? bella could put her in her place real fast i bet/
Author's Response:
Tanya is always a problem! I love the Cullen generosity, too! Thanks! I really appreciate you taking the time to review!
Date: 09 Jul 2011 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 52 Cinderella
love it!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really appreciate you taking the time to review!
Date: 09 Jul 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 52 Cinderella
I really liked how Edward and "Cinderella" helped out this family with the sick little boy ;-) Soooooo cute!
Author's Response:
Edward is so cute! The mind reading thing really coies in handy as well -
Thank you for leaving a review!
Date: 09 Jul 2011 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 52 Cinderella
well im glad taht edward has become a humble vampire!
Author's Response:
He really must have been a kind, caring human. He just lost himself in self doubr and loathing as a vampire!
Date: 09 Jul 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 51 Magic Kingdom
im glad taht he realized he isnt a monster
Author's Response:
Edwad is so self doubting, I hope he has gotten the message as well!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 51 Magic Kingdom
NOW THINGS ARE GETTING MORE AND MORE INTERESTING!!! THE BABY MOVING, HE WILL BE COMING BEFORE WE REALIZE IT! HOW ROMANTIC THAT THEY WERE TOGETHER WHEN HE MOVED.I STILL CAN;T BELIEVE THEY WENT 24 HOURS WITHOUT SEX. HA! THOSE 6 IN THE DISNEY PARKS, WISH I COULDVE BEEN THERE, FUNNY. GREAT CHAPTER!!!
Author's Response:
Wouldn't you just love to be a fly on the wall and watch 6 such charactes take on the theme parks? I think it would be hilarious!
Thank you for leaving a review, i just love getting ideas and feelings from the readers!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 51 Magic Kingdom
aww!!! how awesome for edward to plan such a cool dinner and overnight stay in the castle. and soo sweet of bella to help out that family. and love how bella just accepted the ring and didnt fight him on it. so glad edward was able to feel the baby mve.....love this story and thank you thank you for you almost daily updates!!!
Author's Response:
I love daily updates as well, and you're welcome. Glad you like the story! thank you for taking the time to review, I really like hearing from readers!
Date: 08 Jul 2011 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 51 Magic Kingdom
I'm loving this! Hope to God that they're able to have the baby and it be a BABY, not a monster....
Author's Response:
I haven't noticed your name b efore in the reviews! Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know your thoughts on the story and i hope to keep hearing from you with each progressive chapter! Thanks again!
Date: 08 Jul 2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 50 Towels & Rollercoasters
well im excited to see what happens next
Author's Response:
I think you'll really like the picture of the Cullen family that I paint in the next few chapters, we get some insight into the family unit and some fun!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 50 Towels & Rollercoasters
who ville, I just love it...all I can see is Emmett doing a skipping dance down the roadway...
Author's Response:
THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR TAKING THE TIME TO REAPOND TO EACH AND EVERY CHAPTER!
IT MEANS A GREAT DEAL TO ME.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 49 Confidants
Ha, ha so protective...
Author's Response:
You have to love Rose, she really is passionate about things she believes in. It's glld to have her understand Bella a little bit more, don't you think?
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 48 Surprise
Very emotive chapter, painted ascene of great love and joy...
Author's Response:
Ah! new word for me, I love it! Bella just knew what he neded instinctively!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 47 Investments
<Love the broken bed and that they help Rennee and Phil.
Author's Response:
I really did love the broken bed, too!
Date: 07 Jul 2011 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 50 Towels & Rollercoasters
We shall see indeed...GO BELLA!!!
Author's Response:
Ha! Are you enjoing the idea of the Cullens going to Disney! I thought it would be hilarious!
Date: 06 Jul 2011 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 49 Confidants
I like the interaction between Rose and Bella...I knew how much Rose dislike Bella at the beginnin because of her choices...but now that Bella is going to keep the baby, she seems quite happy.
I loved the vision Alice showed Edward...the thought of them having more than one child is awesome!!
Author's Response:
You have got to love Alice! Hope you keep enjoying the story!
Date: 06 Jul 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 49 Confidants
well im excited to see what ahppens next
Author's Response:
Glad you're still with me!
Date: 06 Jul 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 49 Confidants
Oh I love this story don't worry :). I'm loving the daily updates too. Aw the kids sound cute for Bella and edward.
Author's Response:
Love hearing from someone new! I really appreciate it when you take the time to keave me a note about what you liked or did not like in the chapter - it really helps me to write! (and to want to write)
Date: 06 Jul 2011 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 49 Confidants
wow overreact much orse:)natural reaction for a male:))
Author's Response:
Ha! he goes postal on anyone near Bella if he finds her crying! Wonder if he'll settle down when she becomes a vampire?
Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 49 Confidants
Sorry for not reviewing very much. I usally read these chapters from my phone and have not figured out how to do the reviews from it. I usally do it from my computer at home. I have loved every chapter you have written for this story so far. I like that you have Rose warming up to Bella and willing to help her with the new baby on the way. Please don't stop writting this story :-/
Author's Response:
I know what you mean about reading on the phone, and it is a hassel to review from a phone. I have a friend that sends me lists of which chapters I forgot to review for her! lol
Glad you are enjoying the story - and i will finish it, not to worry!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 49 Confidants
WELL I FOR ONE THOUGHT THIS CHAPTER WAS HILARIOUS!! AND A MINI EDWARD.....JUST WHAT THE WORLD NEEDS!!! HAHA. YOU DESERVE MORE REVIEWS!!! THIS IS S GREAT STORY. EMMETT BIS SO FUNNY, ROSALIE IS EASY TO TOLERATE, MUCH BETTER!!!! AND YOU CAN FEEL EDWARD AND BELLAS LOVE IN THIS STORY!!! WE READERS GET LAZY AND FORGET TO APPRECIATE THE WRITERS!!! DONT EVER FORGET ,YOUR WORK IS GREAT!!! THIS STORY IS GREAT! I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS WITH VICTORIA, HOW BELLA DELIVERS MASEN, DO THEY REALLY HAVE MORE KIDS? BELLAS TRANSFORMATION, SO MUCH TO LOOK FORWARD TO READING!!!!!
Author's Response:
Absolutely, lots to look forward to, and all will be answered . . . in time . . .
Enjoy the ride, and keep telling me what you think! PLEASE!
Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 49 Confidants
Love it! Enjoying the peace but anxious for some drama too :P
Author's Response:
You will have no lack of drama, believe me! the scene just has to be set and you have to be relaxed and enjoying the fluff and love!
Date: 06 Jul 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 49 Confidants
As always I love it!!!
Author's Response:
thank o so much for telling me, and i hope you continue to read and review! The Cullens at Disney will be fun!
Date: 06 Jul 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 49 Confidants
aaaw, I just love this Edward. Can you borrow him to me just for a short while?? I'm curious to see what Victoria is planning, but I really enjoy all the fluff right now. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Just as soon as i find this edward in real life, I will loan him to you . . . well . . . not really. I will hide him away with me forever! lol
Victoria will emerge soon enough . . .
Date: 06 Jul 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 48 Surprise
Love it :)
Author's Response:
I don't believe I have heard from you before, glad you decided to leave me a note - the reviews mean alot and serve to end=courage me to be a better sriter! Hope you keep reading!