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Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 123 Simple Question

No, No and no!!! Bella should not let Edward off the hook!!!!! NO!!! He should be taught a valuable lesson.  Silent treatment for days...Leave with Masen for a few days then catch up with them,. She can't let him keep doing this. Assuming, makes a ass out of you and me. Hard lesson. Let him come back, tell him the truth about who waxed her then teach him a lesson. He is more scared of her leaving. Do it. Make him sit is his own mind for a while. He needs this to grow up so to speak. Bella is stupid just to let him come back and grovel and her forgive.



Author's Response:

Oh Edward will learn all right - Bella will see to it and Alice is letting them flounder till they do!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 123 Simple Question

I think that Edward is going to need more than a box of chocolate......



Author's Response:

You are SO right!

Reviewer: Queendel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 123 Simple Question

Nice update. Funny in part as Masen seems to be more logical than Dadward in his thoughts.



Author's Response:

Dadward just has his possessive vampire hormones in overdrive right now!  lol

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 Bella

I think they should talk more and even if I see and understand Bella`s point of view,Edward isn`t human, therefore his emotions are intensified more than a human.I think their love is stronger than anything and will overcome everything.



Author's Response:

Good point, well made.  I think you are exactly right.

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 123 Simple Question

She needs to let him have it!!!   Cant wait for the fight!!!!  Love it!!!



Author's Response:

Ha!  I thought you might!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 123 Simple Question

I am so looking forward to her tearing him a new one...



Author's Response:

Well, Bella will have an interesting way of doing that, to be sure!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 122 Reactions

He never waits, does he...



Author's Response:

Ha!  No, no he doesn't!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 123 Simple Question

Ah posessiveness and hormones great combination. :0). And childish hissy fits. Loving it.
Well at least they have the weather for it, as there is a bit of a heatwave going on in Paris (and back home) at the moment.

As per gold stars, and you have made my morning. :0) **********

Author's Response:

Thank you so!  Edward really does need to learn not to over react!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 123 Simple Question

Uh oh........not a smart move on Edward's part. Hope the can work everything out soon. I hate seeing  when happily married people argue or have a falling out like that. Poor Bella :-(



Author's Response:

Especially when it really was just a misunderstanding!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 123 Simple Question

Okay Vic. there will be times like this. HE said, she said and it is all a misunderstanding. She is full of hormones, not a good time for him to show his ass.

 

Mad Bella? I bet Edward has never delbt with her mad.

 



Author's Response:

Oh, but he is about to!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 123 Simple Question

I know she loves to make love with Edward...but honestly I would have held out...he was acting like a child, not even asking her that vital question.  I love that Alice is blocking him, she knows that it wasn't that guy.

Payback is a bitch...I hope Bella lays into him...he deserves it!!!



Author's Response:

Alice was right, she can't help him with every lesson!  lol

He needs to trust his wife! (asking and not asuming would be nice as well!)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 123 Simple Question

loved it their bubble finally burst! looking foward to the next chapter 



Author's Response:

It had to happen - everyone has misunderstandings!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 123 Simple Question

hmm i think edward took it to the extreme. marking bella like that i understand being the vamp and all..... now bella has ever right to be angry but she should have  just yelled that she didnt let the man tough her but duhh edward why wouldnt you think to ask if she let him or not. now if i was bella i would be mad as hell at edward for taking off for the whole day then leaving again and taking mason! whew i have a feeling he is goin to be in some trouble!!



Author's Response:

I love your reviews!  Edward is in soooooo much trouble!

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2011 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 122 Reactions

He is in so much trouble with Bella, lol, and he will feel like an ass when he finds out.  Too funny.



Author's Response:

Edward needs to learn to check out things before he goes off the deep end!

Reviewer: shookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 122 Reactions

UHHHH AM I remembering incorrectly or mixing up stories..I thought B refused Jean and a woman came in to do it...Wouldn't Renee and or Rose know this and have thought or told E that



Author's Response:

Bella did refuse to let Jean Claude do the waxing, but only Alice was with her and knew that.  Renee was in a room of her own and had no idea who did Bella, but presumed it was the same guy.  Rose was unaccounted for, presumable not with either of them, so she couldn't have told him anything.  Alice DIDN'T explain it to himk because she knew that he needed to learn a lesson - she had seen it!

 

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 122 Reactions

Well I wonder how much trouble he is in at home.... It is good that his siblings went after him because who knows what he would have done.



Author's Response:

He is probably in a great deal of trouble with his wife!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

Well is Edward drunk too??? That might be kinna funny!!



Author's Response:

Yep!  Drunk Edward . . . well, tipsy!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 122 Reactions

Oh.. Bella is gonna hand him his ass... he is so much trouble and I hope that she makes him sweat...



Author's Response:

Not to worry - she will handle him!  lol

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 122 Reactions

Thank you!!  Loved me some pissed off Edward!!!!!!   Bella will set him straight!!!!  Keep up the awesome writing!!!



Author's Response:

You wanted it, so I'm glad you're happy!  Their first fight . . .

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 122 Reactions

poor edward is in soo much trouble with bella! he should have ust asked bella about it! man....and edward drunk from bellas milk..too funny! cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

They are going to have quite a time sorting this one out!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 122 Reactions

Haha, drunk Edward is so cute, and I guess he didn't know about girl talk and how nothing is sacred when it comes to details :)

Apparently hungover Edward overreacts just a wee bit.  And nobody has still bothered to let him know that Bella refused a male waxer, so all his angst is for naught.  Sounds he he will be eating some crow soon.



Author's Response:

He will indeed  and a VERY large helping of it!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 122 Reactions

Just Newley mated and possessive. B is gonna kick some vampy ass I thinks ;0)
Stumbly Edward was cute, could see some more of that.
Well I'm off to Paris on Friday hubby e-mailed me my ticket, so a weekend with out the kids.. Should be fun, will defo be taking my I pad with me just so I can keep up with all my stories.
As normal gold stars **********.

Have fun, even if it's only in your make believe E&B world

Author's Response:

YEA!  hAVE A GREAT TIME!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 122 Reactions

i hope bella beats the shit out of him 



Author's Response:

Ha!  i wish she could sometimes!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 122 Reactions

Oh shit!!! This is total Possesiveward! He might be newly mated, but this was just possesivness coming out!!!

Bella's gonna be pissed when he gets back. Not only did he not ask her about it, he showed his crap in front of her mother!!!!

So this is what Alice saw happening. Kinda glad she didnt say anything to him. He needs to get his ass handed to him by Bella. This was sooooo uncalled for it isnt even funny. OK, thats a lie, this was sooooo funny!

Loves <3



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a review!  It sounds like you enjoyed it, and that makes me smile!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

Delightful...so smooth to read. Knew they would have fun.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  They did have fun, didn't they!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

Very forthcoming when tipsy and can you imagine what they will get up to now.



Author's Response:

Love tipsy Bells!

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2011 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

Very well written,extremely romantic in my opinion and, what is the most important,forever true love being stunningly portraited.I think your effort will be most appreciated.Thank you very much.



Author's Response:

WOW!  I appreciate the kind words VERY MUCH!  THANK YOU!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

Well, I think Bella just may continue going to the spa, till shes turned anyway!!! I love the last paragraph....you can picture it so visably well!!!! Edward sleeping with his mouth slightly open, with milk in his cheek....so sweet.  But raw vampire sex rawks too!!!



Author's Response:

I really can picture him falling asleep that way - my husband used to (uhoh - too much information!) - - - but so did all five babies of mine!

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

The dinner sounds wonderful - sigh.  I think the 2 of them are trying to give Renee a heart attack :)    Poor mason needs to go another while without nursing - but it is better than him getting drunk on alcholic breast milk :)  thanks for writing



Author's Response:

Not to worry about Masen, they had some stored for him and worse case, he can have blood!

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

How i would love the Cullen back account!  The spa day sounded truly lovely.  I like tipsy Bella, especially since she will have to deal with her sister for enternity!  Renee is handling it all better than I expected.  Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to leave me a review!  This trip of theirs is going to be loads of fun!

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

He is so intense and adorable.  Love how he fell asleep.



Author's Response:

SOOOO glad someone else loved how he fell asleep.  I envisioned a baby kind of dong the same thing where they fall asleep and release their hold on the nipple and there is still milk pooling.  It's so cute when they do it, and i would imagine it to be REALLY cute for Edward to be seen like that, so still and gentle.

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

One of the things inlove so much about your story, is the honest emotions, yes it is a little ott, but mainly in the staying power :0).
Wonderful as always, so here are your gold stars ***********

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I was kind of concerned about this one being TOO over the top, but it is what it is!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

Tipsy Bella is funny spilling secrets about Edward that she would never do if she wasn't tipsy.



Author's Response:

Absolutely true!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

loved it looking foward to the next one 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing!  Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

Loved it!!!! Thank you!!!!   Keep up the awesome writing!!!



Author's Response:

Really excited that you enjoyed the chapter!  Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

French-speaking Edward is such a turn-on.  Where else in Europe will the Cullens visit?



Author's Response:

The Cullens will visit several countries, including England, Ireland, Switzerland and italy.  There are more, but that gives you an idea!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

I loved her heart necklace Edward bought for her.......seems like he very much enjoyed Bella's 'bare' present for him also ;-)  Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

She loves it too, but when she sees the cost is in the millions, she may flip out just a bit!

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

superb story so far. keep up the wonderful job.  I hope its not to get to rough for them especially the yucky Italian gang.

jukie



Author's Response:

Not everything can be rosy all the time!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

It looks like Edward got a little drunk on Bella's milk... to funny...and I love that he can sleep..



Author's Response:

Yep.  We have now found a way to get a vampire drunk . . .

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

Always good when you get some Edward lovin' and he speaks French too...cant wait to see where they go next

Author's Response:

Next stop coming up, but some rough waters first . . .

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

i loved it!!! and loved the pic u posted of the restaurant  glad edward loved the waxing and the sexy time was beautifully written as usual! cant wait to see what happends next./....



Author's Response:

You were the first to review the chapter - thank you.  i was kind of afraid I went overboard with the sex, but it has a reason for being there!  lol  of coutse, edward kind of went overboard with millions of dollars on a diamond!  Wait till Bella finds out what it cost!

Reviewer: andreacf77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

Loved this chapter, thought tipsy Bella was so funny. Can't wait to see what Edward thinks when he finds out Bella has waxed. Looking forward to the next chapter, thank you.



Author's Response:

Hope you enjoy Edward's reaction!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 119 A Romantic Evening, Part 1

I wonder how Jacob is dealing with things! It is really nice that Bella and Edward are getting to enjoy spending time not only with Mason but with each other too.



Author's Response:

We will hear from Jacob soon enough, I promise!

Reviewer: pamikulski Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

I love this chapter, it was funny and I loved how they let loose with each other... thank you  I love this story sooooo much...



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a review!  Bells is funny in her own innocent little way!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 118 Paris

I wonder what Alice has seen that she wants Edward to learn from. It is nice to see the family all on vacation together.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 117 Landed

I think that Renee might finally be ready to accept Bella's life for what it is now even with all of the weird in it...

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 116 Flight

Well I think that Renee has learned that she needs to not disrupt things when it conserns Bella and Edward in the bedroom!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

TMI, Bella, TMI!!!  Lay off the wine when mom's around...



Author's Response:

Ha!  renee insisted on coming to Europe with them!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 115 Renee

Wow I guess that this is going to be an interesting trip to say the least. I wonder what Jacob is going to do about the tribe and his business and Bree??

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

Oh I'm sure people still love you. Tipsy Bella is funny. Poor Renee though! I wouldn't want know that many details myself.



Author's Response:

Renee is rediculously nosy, though I don't understand it myself. It's kind of like she needs to live through Bella!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

loved it ! cant wiat till the next one



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Team Switzerland 2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

Awesome chapter :) LOVED tipsy Bella <3



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

What a bunch of naughty non-reviewwers!!!!!   Ban them from reading your story that'll teach them!!!! hahahahaha!!!   

Sooooo will there be a pissed off over protective Edward next chapter????  Pretty plz banana split with cherries on top :P ????



Author's Response:

You are so very funy wanting your pissed off edward . . . and you're likely to get him soon!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

Tipsey Bella is funny.  Talking about Edward's sexual prowness was HOT!!!



Author's Response:

It's so funny to hear her say those things, though.  She's only 19!

Reviewer: budgie36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

I just have to say please keep writing I live this story, and I can't wait for Bella to become a Vampire.  I am sorry you only got 4 reviews, I don't normally review  until the end of a story and I want to keep it on my favourites, but I thought I would let you know just how happy I am when I see that you have posted a new chapter, keep them coming.



Author's Response:

So glad  you like it!  Can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

loved spa day! wonder what edward is going to think  and how is he going to react about the waxing? hmm cant wait to find out!!



Author's Response:

Well, next chapter! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 119 A Romantic Evening, Part 1

little mason is just so adorable!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad everyone is enjoying Masen!

Reviewer: broadwayrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

Love it :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

Well that was an instering turn of events for Edward and Bella. I wonder how long Renee will be with them.



Author's Response:

Hopefully not too very long, unless it works out well - - -

Reviewer: IANticipate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

Can't wait for the next chapter.  Love this story.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

OMFG, I almost died laughing. Bella saying all that in front of her mother, I don't know if I could ever be that forthcoming about my man's sexual prowess with my mother. But hot damn for Bella! Way to go girl!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it - I think I should have put more of a reaction from her mom in it! - maybe I still will . . .

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 Bella

I'm sorry I don't review every chapter that you write.  I usually read this story from my phone at work.  I hate that I can't seem to figure out how to write and submit my reviews from it......ughhhh.  I will try to remember to come home and review from my computer...promise :-/



Author's Response:

Thank you so much - just an occasional letting me know if  you're enjoying it would be awesome!  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

Boy.....that Bella didn't hold anything back...poor Renee ;-)



Author's Response:

Yes, we didn't hear much about her mom's reaction!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

I love ALL the chapters!!!  Literally!!!  I am so glad Bella had the waxing and can't wait to hear Edwards reaction to it!!  He may be the one to faint!!!  And just so you know....this faithfull reader, loves all your work and appreciiates it and I can't wait till next time!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for that, some times it's just nice to hear!  I would hate to spend hours writing chapters for my amusement alone!  lol

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

Great chapter again.... don't get your feelings hurt, I don't always take the time to review... but I truly do love the whole story....and I try to review often... keep going... I can't wait to see what Edward thinks of a bare Bella...



Author's Response:

It's going to turn into something you haven't thought of - - - I think!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 113 Council

I think that Jacob did what was the best thing for everyone involved. I just hope that the rest of the tribe thinks that too.



Author's Response:

Good point.  I hadn't really thought about what his tribe would think of the decision!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

Well remember we read at FF too. If I am there and  you update I catch it there. I am here. good chapter we are on a trip so where next?

 

:-)



Author's Response:

Venice.  I think we're taking the Orient Express to Venice, by way of Verona, Italy.

Reviewer: Queendel Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

A Really nice update.  Tipsy Bella was a riot. Hope that Emmett finds out that Edward makes Bella faint.  Looking forward to their makng the twin.
update soon.



Author's Response:

I'm so sure that Rose is in for it with Emmett trying to prove he can do it to!  lol

Reviewer: vetteqld Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

I'm enjoying the story line thus far.....can't wait to see what happens with Bella and Edward that Alice saw!!!!



Author's Response:

Well, they're a new couple and they have things to sort out!

Reviewer: AlliSweets Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

Absolutely loved tipsey bella!! LOL!! I can't wait for there date! Thank you! =0)

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  Tipaey Bells is oh so daring!

Reviewer: BigBsMom Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

Love the story, and tipsy Bella is very funny.



Author's Response:

Glad youlike it!  i thought she might be funny on wine, having never had it!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 120 Spa

That was great girlie chapter, :) loved the dirt dishing on Edwards equipment.

Can't wait for the date and more importantley what comes after;0).
As normal here are your gold stars **********

Author's Response:

Nice!  I love that you leave me gold stars!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 112 Playing Nice

Go Charlie!!! I am so glad that he has come to the tribe and reinterated what Jacob said and has tried to help Bella's dreams come true.



Author's Response:

Yep, kind of sneaky the way the eldars had Charlie make that request instead of amending the treaty - I liked it, anyway!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 111 Delusions

Well I guess Jacob has some really big decisions to make doesn't he?



Author's Response:

Yep, Jacob has some really hard decisions that affect ots of people!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 110 Plans

Well I guess that they are going to decide what is going to happen after Renee gets there and sees Mason. Part of me kinna thinks that they are going to have to disapear from her because she was kinna sceptical the last time that they were there.



Author's Response:

You're almost caught up!  Yea!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 109 Alone

Cute family time that is a rarity for them...



Author's Response:

Yes!  Relaxed time needed after all that happened!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 108 Moms

Well it seems that things are starting to get back to normal for all of them. I wonder how things are going to be when Renee comes to town.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 107 Patients & Patience

Well at least we know how Esme really feels about the whole thing that happened with Sam!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 106 Realizations

Well Mason is truly a gift to them and he is just a wonderful little guy. Hopefully Alice will be able to tell them wether or not they are in danger from Aro.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 105 Spying?

Never thought that I would see a day when Edward would be thinking about leaving Bella human so that they can have another baby.



Author's Response:

Kind of a new twist on it, isn't it!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 104 Details

Ok I am cracking up at Mason and Edward fighting over Bella! And poor Jacob imprinting on Bree and now has to deal with the fact that she has a boyfriend.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 103 Reunions

Wow!! I guess that maybe Alice's vision might just come true after all! I wonder what Renee is going to say about things because she is going to notice that Mason isn't like other babies.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 102 Consequences

Wow! I can't believe that Sam actually apologised to Edward. I hope that Emily will be alright.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 101 Sam

So Jacob imprinted on Bree huh? Wow that is just going to put her in the middle of all of this stuff isn't it? How exciting for Jacob!! Now off to deal with Sam.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 100 Morning

I wonder what punnishment Jake is going to give Sam for hurting his friends...

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 99 Restored

Well I guess that they really help each other more than they know don't they?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

Wow I never thought about doing research on it I just told them that I wanted my son to be. The reactions of each of the Cullen males though was interesting. I wonder how Charlie is going to take all of this knowing that Bella is going to become like the Cullens. I guess it will make it easier for him to be part of her and Mason's life.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 97 Burned

Well I wonder what is going to happen now that Jacob has taken authority. I wonder if Sam is going to get into trouble or if he will just leave and go back to La Push.



Author's Response:

Well, you're aboput to find out!  ;p lol

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 119 A Romantic Evening, Part 1

loved it 



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 96 Breastfed

Well I really hope that Edward's arm heals with the treatments that Carlisle is trying on him because it would kill him to loose his arm. And Mason!!! What an amazing little guy he is.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 119 A Romantic Evening, Part 1

Thank you,

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 119 A Romantic Evening, Part 1

Awww a really sweet Edward and Mason chapter,
The fact that you are still writing with all that's going on around you really lights my day. Hoping all goes well with the sale etc.

Gold stars as normal**********

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review!  Glad you enjoyed the masen/Edward time!  They are both just so cute!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 119 A Romantic Evening, Part 1

Aww I'm sorry you are so busy, but understand :) I love the Mason/ Edward time, I just love how you write each and every one of the characters!!!  Thank you so much for the update!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the father/son time.  Masen is an important part of the family now and i don't want it to seem like bella and Edward just shove him away and leave him all the time . . . though they do require lots of private time!  lol

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 95 Masen Charles Carlisle Cullen

I wonder how disapointed Renee is going to be when she finds out that Bella had the baby and she wasn't there.



Author's Response:

She'll be disappointed but you know, Renee is kind of flaky!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2011 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 94 Arrival

It is good that Mason is finally here and everything is good with all of them!



Author's Response:

Yes, FINALLY a quiet moment!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 93 Delivered

And here comes Mason ready or not!!



Author's Response:

Hope you enjoy the way it happened!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 92 Discovered

Awww... Yea!! Bella got her out and Bree too! Now we are finally going to meet Mason.



Author's Response:

Yes!  Excellent job, Bella!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 91 Fire

Thank God that Jacob finally took his rightful place as the alpha of the tribe. I really hope that Bella and Masen are alright



Author's Response:

Jacob has proven to be somewhat of a Godsend, hasn't he!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2011 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 90 Tracks

Well I am glad that  Jacob can smell Bella because that means that what she did worked!!! and I am really enjoying the story and I can't wait to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

So glad you are still liking the story after all these chapters!  Thank you for always reviewing!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2011 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 89 Storm

Well at least he is talking to them still and not just sitting at a computer trying to get his daughter back. I wonder if Emmett is going to be able to track Riley or if the tracking devise will work and Victoria wont find it.



Author's Response:

Charlie is trying - are you enjoying the story so far?

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