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Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

I liked it soooo much! Thank You

Reviewer: Kellans girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2015 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

My god I love this story... Is there made a whole story out of it?? If not I would really love to read one, though I would actually love it more it it was Charlie's story. And not an edward/Bella story :)

Love it..

 

Marie

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

I see you haven't written anything in about three years. Does this mean you have given up on fanfiction? I sure hope not, this oneshot about Charlie(my favorite dad), was great! I'm going to favorite Planet Twilight and the outtakes from it. I know it will be as enjoyable reading as The Changes in Me, which would have been a neat story to have continued into a longer form! Having Bella come to live with a vampire father and fall in love with vampire Edward would be a real different story and one I sure would enjoy! Regardless, just know I like what you have so farwritten, and thanks!



Author's Response:

I am still around.  Just reading, but no writing.  I even had to re-upload a lot of pics for Planet Twilight because the site that held them had shut down.  You have to have an open mindset to enjoy Planet because of the dominant men.  I have gotten a lot of flack from anonymous readers on fanfiction about female equality.  Anyway, glad you enjoyed "The Changes in Me".  I have a couple more one shots on fanfiction that I didn't put on here, if you so inclined to read them.

Reviewer: hoppyliz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story!

Reviewer: Voracious_Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Seriously, you should extend this--it's the most original take on Twilight I've ever read! I'd love to know how Bella would take returning home to a vampire father, if she smells as good to him as to Edward, who changed Charlie, how it would change the confrontation with James, all of it! MORE. Please, pretty please?



Author's Response:

Well, you are the first one to comment on it.  I guess I need to explain to folks that it would turn into an Edward/Bella story if I continued it.  That way more people might be interested.  I am still waiting to see if folks would be interested in reading it.  Thanks for the review!

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