Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 20
started this story over on FF...so happy to have found it here and finish reading it!
i can't tell you enough how much i love your writing, how effortlessly everything flows and how engaging your characters are.
thank you for this piece :)
Date: 01 Nov 2011 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 17 **Revelations**
I read it in one sitting. Loved the plot.
I feel bad fo her that she has to deal with Renee on a daily basis but I agree with Edward that she is to blame on the choices she made about her friends and attitude in school. Though, it is not something she can't fix, since her actions weren't because she is emotionally bankrupt like her popular friends or out of maliciousness. She was like a lost puppy and it seems every time she was going to say or do something out of character for her -the real Bella- she internally cringed and questioned herself.
When will u continue with this gem of a story? Not that I want to take you away from the impossibly hot new story of yours but this needs some love too :)
Date: 21 Aug 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 17 **Revelations**
Parents are, up to a point, responsible for influencing the kids for their outlook on life.
Especially single parent kids, probably more so. Being a teenager is tough, and we all want acceptance and praise from people we are close to, or people we are supposed to look up to--Mom certaily should fit that bill. Bella is not an airhead though. So up to a point, yeah. Mom's definitely not blameless. But if you've got a head on your shoulder, Bella should have known Better!. But that's what being young is for--making mistakes and learning..
I love your stories!
Thanks so much.
Date: 30 May 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 16 **Misconceptions**
Wow, Edward handled that rather well I think. This was a good chapter, I liked the way Bella realized that James was a shit head and that Edward was more than a convenient booty call..I hope things work out. :) I'm going to go tweet now..I'm more of a facebook person, but if you ever give snippets on upcoming chapters...I'll follow you and be all :) I love this story. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 25 May 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 15 **Absence and Fondness*
Hot damn, I can't wait to see what happens next! James is a total douche bag & he SHOULD get his ass kicked by Edward but I don't see that happeneing unfortunately :/
I see Edward stepping in to save the day, only to be knocked out or something by James and then Bella can get over his disgusting sorry ass & take care of Edward :)
GO EDWARD! GO EDWARD!