Date: 27 Jun 2013 6:48 PM Title: One Month Ago
I LOVE HOW THEY MADE OUT AND FEEL BAD FOR BELLA HAVING TO GIVE UP HER BABY AND YES THEY ARE MAKING GOOD HEAD WAY I THINK I HOPE BELLA KEEPS BEING NICE TO EDWARD AND STOPS HITTING HIM I DON'T LIKE THAT AT ALL.
Date: 27 Jun 2013 4:36 AM Title: Three Months Ago
I'M SO GLAD EDWARD WAS WITH BELLA WHEN JAMES RAN IN TO BELLA TO KEEP BELLA SAFT FROM JAMES AND SEEN HER HOME AS WELL BUT I'M SURE JAMES ISN'T DONE YET I HOPE EDWARD CAN SAVE BELLA FROM JAMES THE NEXT TIME HE SHOWS UP.
Date: 26 Jun 2013 7:38 PM Title: Five Months Ago, Still
i'm glad edward went to help bella it gave them a chance to get friendlyer i hate james he's an real asshole and should be fired but somethink tells me even that wont stop him from going after bella.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:40 AM Title: Epilogue
LOL, took him long enough to get it done. great job and thanks for the insight into where their lives went after they got married.Great job, cant wait to see where you go from here and what your going to share with us next. Keep up the awesome work.
Date: 03 Aug 2011 5:41 AM Title: Prologue
Well, the way you started this off definitely givesus hope for Edward :) Can't wait to click next :)
Date: 03 Jun 2011 4:25 AM Title: They Tried To Make Me Go To Rehab
Great story, although tragic, glad its fiction. I know things like this happen in the world, but I so don't want to think about that! I love HEA for Edward and Bella, an I do believe they are headed for one. I hope they, Emmett, Jasper and Edward find James! I can't wait for more updates!!!
Date: 26 May 2011 11:02 AM Title: Living Hell
OMG!!! what a crazy chapter... Poor Bella... she needs to accept love and know that Edward is not going to hurt her... Maybe they could heal together.. Edward can make amends with his Mom... I know that he is angry.. but maybe his Mom can help him through this. Bella has never known love..maybe Esme can help with that as well....;)
Date: 22 May 2011 5:17 AM Title: The End of Edward's Apprenticeship
LOVED the date! It was so sweet until that assclown showed up. I'm so happy that Bella and Edward are finally attempting a relationship. They're both so screwed up, but they both have such good hearts. They need each other. And Alice. Oh how I love Alice! She's a riot!
I'm scared about what's going to happen in the next chapter! EEEK!
Date: 18 May 2011 11:05 PM Title: One Month Ago
Love, love, LOVE! So glad that Edward and Bella had these moments. Bella is opening up to Edward. I'm thrilled because she needs to learn to trust others. I can't believe he was her first kiss! Poor girl has had a really effed up life. Edward is growing and changing too. He really is a softie under that hard exterior. He's still so upset about his parents abandoning him. Sigh.
Can't wait for some more sweet E and B moments. We will be having some, won't we? Oh gosh, does the next chapter bring us to the prologue? AAAAACK!
Date: 18 May 2011 10:56 PM Title: Two Months Ago
Bella bought that guitar! I know she did! She loves Whip! LOL Alice is still a riot, and I love her. She and Edward have such a special relationship, and he really needs it. I'm glad he had his evening with Rose and realized that she's not the one he wants. Nope, he needs Bella. Edward and Jasper's duet was great, and the almost kiss--AAAAAAAACK! Damn Alice and her bad timing!
Felix's tattoo was great. I loved that part, and I'm happy to see Edward growing as an artist.
Off to read the next chappie!
Date: 18 May 2011 7:52 AM Title: One Month Ago
I really love how Edward and Bellas relationship is slowly developing. They will be good for eachother it seems, but James will rear his ugly head im afraid and I bet nobody but Edward will be able to piece Bella back together. I still want a HEA!!!!
Date: 14 May 2011 11:14 PM Title: Three Months Ago
I love the way this story is developing!!! WQith shared pasts that are somewhat similar Bel and Edward seem good for eachother, support for eachother, I just hope James doesn't break Bella. Its hard to keep rising above and back down to back up again. Edward I have a feeling will be there thru it all though. Great story, I can't wait for the updates!!!
Date: 14 May 2011 10:54 PM Title: Three Months Ago
Bella and Edward can actually get along like civilized people! It's amazing! LOL Seriously, though, it was great to see their relationship grow. It's obvious that Edward cares about her, the way he takes care of her and worries about her. I'm glad that Emmett finally fired James even if it was hard for him financially. Bella didn't deserve to be treated like that by that fucktard! The whole Jessica tattoo was hysterical! I've seen girls like that try to get on TV at Saints games, and it totally grosses me out! It's also good to see Edward growing as an artist as well. He's going to do some amazing things at Dreamstyle. And why do I have a feeling that Bella is going to buy that guitar for him?
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 12 May 2011 3:26 AM Title: Five Months Ago, Still
Well, I for one really like this story. i can 't wait for Bella & Edward to realize they need eachother to get thru the pain they have went thru. The only problem is Emmett, does Rose happen along in this story? I can't wait for more!!!!!
Date: 12 May 2011 2:15 AM Title: Five Months Ago, Still
Oooooh, really likey! I loved that we got some of Bella's background here. I think Edward tattooing her was a big turning point in their relationship. She bared herself to him, literally and figuratively. I absolutely adore Edward and Alice's relationship. Alice knows the right things to say and can call Edward out on stuff without being mean about it. I agree that Alice should have called an ambulance, but Edward was the next best thing for Bella. I loved their moment even though it sucked as to how it happened. I think things will be different for them now. Well, Bella will still be a bitch and Edward will still be an asshole, but I think there's a new understanding between them. Hopefully Edward can help her through some of her shit.
Please ma'am, may I have some more? Haha!
Date: 11 May 2011 5:43 AM Title: Five Months Ago
being a total edward/bella fan i'd love to c them get together and suport each other as they battle their demons.
bella is apparentlly angry at edward coz he reminds her of jake ... a manwhore .. but is bella any better ... she judges edward on his behaviour with angela but puts not accountability on angela ... bella is all over emmet and it seems to b friends w benefits ....
i hope bella opens up to edward at least a little when they have this talk
and the silent partner ... edwards parents?????
Date: 11 May 2011 3:57 AM Title: Five Months Ago
Love Edward and Alice together! They're such an odd couple, but they're fun. I think I was just as amazed as Edward was when Alice was able to tell him his whole life story, but that's Alice. Poor Bella. Her life sounds just as sucky. I don't think she's going to apologize to Edward, but I do think she's going to open up a bit. At least I hope so.
I'm really enjoying your story so far!
Date: 10 May 2011 11:56 PM Title: Six Months Ago
“Edward, you make Osama Bin Laden look like a puppy dog,” One of the best lines ever! Leave it to Emmett! I'm actually liking this Edward. I think it's because he's so vulnerable underneath his hard exterior. The fact that he's still bothered about his parents abandoning him shows that. Yeah, I wasn't happy about him and Angela, but I understand why he had to do it. I'm also interested in hearing Bella's story. Can't wait for that!