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Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 9:21 PM Title: The Funeral

Great chapter, even though Mike's a douche.  I feel awful for Taylor's family, but I'm so happy there was a huge turn out - that way they know how much he was loved.

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Date: 26 Jul 2012 7:35 PM Title: The ER

Well this was steamy!  Love that she's coming out of her shell!

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Date: 26 Jul 2012 5:32 PM Title: The Realization

Ugh, I totally understand her worry - so much!  I am SO happy, though, that she's letting him in.  What a TRAGIC nightmare!

 

OH, and I didn't get a word in about Jake.  I feel terrible about that, but I have a feeling Quil is going to get his - real good!

Love it!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:38 PM Title: The Parties

*HAPPYDANCE*  I am SOOOO happy all of that *flails hands* happened!  And can I just say........WHY NOT MEH?!?!?!  HAHAHAHA!!!

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Date: 26 Jul 2012 1:06 PM Title: The Plans

OMG! HOW FREAKING CUTE IS THIS CHAPTER?!?!?!?!!

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 7:56 PM Title: The Flashback

Ugh, that pooooor guy!  How terrible is THAT???  BUT, I'm so glad he felt something when he was with Bella!

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 6:44 PM Title: The Storm

LMAO!  He's not making her 'cat lady future' easy for her, is he?

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 6:20 PM Title: The Calm

LMAO!  I loved their exchange!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 6:04 PM Title: The End

How did I KNOW it was going to be that whore?  UGH, I can't WAIT to see what Bella does/says!!!

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 9:09 PM Title: The Accident

I had been wondering about Bella's parents, I couldn't remember what happened to them (I kept meaning to go back and reread the first chapter or two but had not yet!!)

Now need to finish up this shit with Mike so they can marry & have babies!!! 

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 8:52 PM Title: The Conferences and Concerts

:-/

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 8:43 PM Title: The Halloween Party

Someone following - is that shit about to hit the fan?  :-/

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:27 PM Title: The Breakdown

I knew Aro gave me the creeps. 

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:11 PM Title: The Fire

Poor Rose!  

Aro & the sisters *shudders*

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 5:56 PM Title: The Birthday

Hot! In more ways than one...let me guess mike started fire?

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 5:36 PM Title: The Morning After

;-)

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 5:25 PM Title: The 32 Year Old Born Again Virgin

Perfect

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 5:14 PM Title: The Wedding

No time to dwaddle - first time lemon is coming! Yay!!

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 11:00 AM Title: The Reality

,-)

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 10:34 AM Title: The Talk

Holy shit is right!  Didn't see that coming!

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 10:17 AM Title: The Recovery

Sometimes Bella drives me batty - why the hell is she soooooo stubborn? 

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 9:48 AM Title: The Funeral

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 9:22 AM Title: The News

Thank goodness none of that at the end was rooted in real life!

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 8:56 AM Title: The ER

Great chapter. Sad about kid & accident and effects on Edward but before and after were a solid A+!

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 8:21 AM Title: The Realization

;-) Celebrating that she was able to say it!!!! Edward continues to be perfect!

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 7:00 AM Title: The Confessions

Unexpected and horrible twist to Jake :( 

Love love love this Edward!!!

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 4:01 AM Title: The Courtdate

;-) well hopefully Jacob stay's "harmless" and good job making him gay - that's usually the only way I'll even considered liking him!

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 3:35 AM Title: The Parties...Still

Well I wondered about Jacob when he popped up - still not off the radar but I guess Mikey boy is gonna be the problem in this story?

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 3:10 AM Title: The Parties

Yay!!! Kissing - about time she gave up!!! Love love love to ya ;-)

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 1:29 AM Title: The Plans

love love love ;-)

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 10:36 PM Title: The Holiday

;-)

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 9:44 PM Title: The Flashback

So sad but sometimes the saddness needs to happen for the story to work. 

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 9:21 PM Title: The Lunch

Glad they are getting to know each other. 

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 5:14 PM Title: The Storm

;-)

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 4:59 PM Title: The Calm

Love his McDoctor name!!

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 4:46 PM Title: The End

What a start. So sorry this is rooted in reality for you. 

Reviewer: kitty25478 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:47 PM Title: Epilogue

Have you tried going to the website Autism speaks, it can tell you about the spectrum and the different branches of the disability, my niece and nephew are autistic, my nephew much more so than my niece but them my neice shows signs of having Bipolar disorder, so the kids are a mess

Reviewer: sparkledamnu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:37 AM Title: Epilogue

They say the best is saved for last!!!!  I've read straight through, time allowing,  only giving you the highest rating available.  Now that I don't have another "Next" I need to apologize.  I should have done a better job reviewing but I just couldn't stop with limited time for reading.

But ---- what an amazing story!!!  You covered every emotion there is.  Edward and Bella were very creative charachters.  I believe the part that I enjoyed the most was from their wedding through to the end of the story.   The most emotional part for me was the birth of the triplets.  Love Lizzie's and David's personalities but I Marie found a place of my soul.  I could see her tug on their ears and that just tugged at my heart.    I know the struggles associated with a challenged child.  My 18 year old son is not autistic but he is ADD,has a delayed speech pattern and also slight tendencies toward Aspergers.    This might help you more understand my FB rant on bullying regarding the review that you received.  Yeah, I'm a mom through and through.

I can't wait to read the sequel, time permitting.  Im getting my son read to attend technical school in the fall. 

Loved the story.  You are a very talented and amazing author.   Creativity to the Nth degree.   I am so happy that I have an entire catalog of your stories to read!!!  Thanks for writing for our fandom.  I appreciate you so much.

Elaine - sparkledamnu on twitter   Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB

 

P.S. -- Cacked when I read Rene's middle name!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 8:34 PM Title: Epilogue

:)

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 8:31 PM Title: The New Beginning

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 8:16 PM Title: The Bean

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 8:13 PM Title: The House

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:58 PM Title: The Announcement

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:46 PM Title: The Interview

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:32 PM Title: The Honeymoon

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:19 PM Title: The Dream Wedding of Bella and Edward

:)

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:07 PM Title: The Destination Rehearsal

:)

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 6:43 PM Title: The Dress and Weddng Preparations

:)

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 6:33 PM Title: The Fight

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 6:25 PM Title: The Baby

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 6:12 PM Title: The Surprise

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:50 PM Title: The Emerald City

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:39 PM Title: The Meeting with Dad

:)

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:06 PM Title: The Hospital at Christmas

:)

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:49 PM Title: The Eve

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 4:05 PM Title: The Christmas Ball

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:58 PM Title: The Brunch

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:08 PM Title: The Accident

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:14 PM Title: The Conferences and Concerts

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:07 PM Title: The Halloween Party

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:31 PM Title: The Breakdown

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:58 PM Title: The Fire

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:39 PM Title: The Birthday

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Reviewer: sparkledamnu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 9:16 PM Title: The Talk

Oooh,  mystery!!  Cliffie!!!  Love it, love it, love it!!

Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter  Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB

 

 

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 6:03 PM Title: The Morning After

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 5:47 PM Title: The 32 Year Old Born Again Virgin

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Reviewer: sparkledamnu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 9:20 AM Title: The Funeral

Very touching.  Very heartfelt words.

 

Elaine - sparkledamnu on twitter   Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB

Reviewer: sparkledamnu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 8:39 AM Title: The News

Wow, that was intense!!!

Great story, great writing!!

 

Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter   Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB

Reviewer: sparkledamnu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 6:36 AM Title: The Realization

JSYK I could crush Mike with a fly swatter and smash his guts!!!!  Yeah, that's how well you write his character.   Fucktard is a perfect description.  Sorry for the language there.  ;)

Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter   Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB

Reviewer: sparkledamnu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 5:17 AM Title: The Courtdate

The FB comment was great!!!  Laughed loudly.

They are certainly getting more comfortable with each other.

 

Thanks for writing for our fandom!!

 

Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter   Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB

Reviewer: sparkledamnu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:37 AM Title: The Parties...Still

I cackled at everyones reaction to Emmett and Rose.  So funny.

And yes, sounds like Mike is a tool!!

 

Got to hurry - "Next" is calling.

 

Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter   Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB

Reviewer: sparkledamnu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:39 AM Title: The Parties

Ok - a lap dance from Edward.  Crap he didn't see my hand raised so instead of looking stupid I lowered the temp in the room!!!  :D

This was a chapter well worth waiting for.  Can't wait to see where things go with Rose and Emmett.

Loving the story.

 

Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter    Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB

 

Reviewer: sparkledamnu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 1:41 AM Title: The Plans

I owe you an apology.  I began reading last night really late and became so obsessed with your story that I continued to Rate and hit next.  So I decided I would come back this morning, more alert, and give you the review that your story deserves!!!

I LOVE YOUR SNARKY ASSED BELLA!!!  Her mouth, even though quite rash at times, simply puts everything into a proper perspective.  She has verbalized thoughts that I have kept to my self before.  And the blush is perfect!!

I LOVE YOUR GLASSES WEARING, LIGHTLY SCARRED SEXY ASSED EDWARD!!!!  His history and personality are killing me softly.  And when he blushes I just simply melt.  I love that his personality is such that he has a beautiful heart!!

Yeah, I put those in caps.  Thought it might put more umph into my feelings about these two.  Just from reading this epistle can you tell that I LOVE YOUR STORY?

I read that this was your first forray into writing -- well honey, you broke into writing the right way.  Truly amazing way with words.

I also read that this was cathartic for your.  I believe that by the time you completed this story you must have felt pretty good!!!

Loving the story -- loving your words so well written across the page!!!

 

Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter     Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB

 

PS  -  I will do my best to review after every chapter!!!  But I promise to always leave a rating.  The no review from me means that I had to hurry on to the next chapter!!!  Smiles shyly here while peaking through my eyelashes!!!!

Reviewer: dtimoteo318 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:39 PM Title: The End

It's kinda hitting home for me too. what's even funnier is that my husbands name is mike too!

Reviewer: ArlynG Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:33 PM Title: Epilogue

Just finished reading this story... I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: krjemb Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:46 AM Title: The Interview

Edward has money. Why hasn't he hired bodyguards or hired someone to find Mike. 

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:14 AM Title: The Fight

Totally disagreeing with Alice. 

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:54 PM Title: The Emerald City

I'm surprised Bella would tell a complete stranger about Mike. 

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:25 PM Title: The Christmas Ball

I can't fathom Bella allowing Mike to alienate her from her father.  

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:56 PM Title: The Conferences and Concerts

If she thought she was being followed then you never go to your house. Considering what's going on she needs to be smarter. Is she still going to therapy?

Reviewer: krjemb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:39 AM Title: The Reality

Bella is killing me. I know she has issues from her marriage. But she left like as much as he left her. She wanted the divorce. And after what Mike has done him leaving is a blessing. And what "logic" is her mind using that would keep her in that condo after what happened?

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:30 AM Title: The Talk

I'm not sure about the dates. Would Charlotte have been killed before Bella and Mike hooked up or during the relationship?

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:11 AM Title: The Funeral

What is Mike's deal?  He cheated and moved on with Jessica. Why is he obsessed with Bella. He wasn't this interested when they were married. 

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 1:52 AM Title: The Calm

Why is Bella not asking for alimony?  She's only hurting herself. 

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 1:44 AM Title: The End

One of her coworkers?  That's extra shady. Cheating is awful but when it's someone he spouse knows is worse. And Bella has to see the skank everyday. 

Reviewer: redbug Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 3:10 PM Title: Epilogue

  I really enjoyed this story and can't wait for the sequel:)

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Date: 21 Jul 2011 10:56 PM Title: The Interview

I am loving this story and cant't wait till the part where Mike gets his. I would like to see them have twins. One boy (Andy) and one girl (Abby). I hope for a very happy ending. It's been great to read your story. Thanks

Reviewer: birdee18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 11:27 PM Title: Epilogue

I came a little late to this party, but I'm so glad I did.  This story was amazing!  I absolutely loved it!  Poor Bella and Edward went through so much, but they finally got their happy ending.  I'm a teacher not a doctor, but it seems to me that Marie is autistic.  I've taught students with autism, and one of my favorite little buddies is autistic.  They are amazing children once they're given a chance and properly diagnosed.

I'm so excited that there's going to be a sequel!  I'd like to see you explore Marie's relationship with her siblings.  How does she get along with them, especially since Lizzie's so bossy?  LOL  Someone else also mentioned Edward's medical issues, and I'm also wondering if any of them will come into play as he gets older.  (I wrote my own story about an Edward with a brain injury, and I did tons of research on it.  Sometimes I felt more like an MD than a teacher!  LOL)  I can't wait to see what's next for our little family.

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 5:22 AM Title: Epilogue

I have loved reading this story. Thank you so much for writting it. All that Bella went through is something so many women face everyday. I hope you do write a sequel I think it will be great to see what happens next with their family..

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 3:42 AM Title: The Announcement

love this story I'm voting for girl

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Date: 16 Jun 2011 4:14 AM Title: The Honeymoon

love this chapter, so happy about the baby!!

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Date: 12 Jun 2011 10:42 PM Title: The New Beginning

Aww..... That is so sweet that theyare all happy and helthy!

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Date: 12 Jun 2011 10:14 PM Title: The Bean

Ummmm..... Wow that kinna sucks for Bella that she can't take the job but it is good that they are having babies and not just a baby and that they are have girls and a boy!

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Date: 12 Jun 2011 9:38 PM Title: The House

It is good that Bella listened to her friends and family and is going to get her life back on track.

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Date: 11 Jun 2011 5:33 PM Title: The Announcement

That is sweet that they are going to live in Esme and Carlisles neighborhood. And now the family knows about bean!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2011 4:15 AM Title: The Interview

Well Mike comes in a ruins yet another happy event in Bella and Edward's life but I really hope that they can move on from this and be happy!

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Date: 10 Jun 2011 3:57 AM Title: The Honeymoon

Yea!!! Edward and Bella are going to have a baby!! I really hope that Mike doesn't ruin things for Edward and Bella.

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Date: 10 Jun 2011 3:32 AM Title: The Dream Wedding of Bella and Edward

One word!!! AWWWWW.....

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Date: 10 Jun 2011 2:52 AM Title: The Destination Rehearsal

Bella is pregnant isn't she???? I really hope so because that would be so great for the two of them.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 1:18 AM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for the amazing story.  I hope to read the next installment.  You were amazing with this story.  In the future I am curious about E's health and any lingering effects he may have from his accident when he was young.

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