[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2013 4:44 AM Title: The Bean
wow was thrilled she got the job
3, 3 babies that is a shocker. i guess get it all done and over with at once. 3 blown away
Date: 17 Jun 2013 3:48 AM Title: The Christmas Ball
I'm so glad Aro is going to be punished for what he did to Bella, both times! The little toad managed to taint a wonderful evening, but at least he didn't hurt Bella physically. Now if only the police could get Mike off the streets, all would be well. I'm looking forward to Edward meeting Charlie!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2013 3:45 AM Title: The Interview
loved hearing the heartbeat that was great
mike man he needs to be put ten feet under already
they need to move on
Date: 16 Jun 2013 10:46 AM Title: The Brunch
Fill all you want to! This was fun for the Sunday brunch and wedding plans, Jake suggesting a double date and Sherrie Cope urging Bella to apply for her job! Great that they have set a date to get married in Cancun!
Date: 16 Jun 2013 10:24 AM Title: The Accident
I am amazed that the police haven't caught Mike Newton yet! He's a one-man wrecking crew and still running around. He made a vegetable out of his pregnant girlfrien and probably murdered that Charlotte girl, too! At least there's the happiness of Edward and Bella's engagement. Charlie seems okay with it and I guess they aren't telling Renee.
Date: 16 Jun 2013 9:56 AM Title: The Conferences and Concerts
I realize this is your story, but I must say that you are awfully mean to Bella! Can't the poor woman get a break? The awful things that have happened to her just seem so unfair!
Date: 16 Jun 2013 9:33 AM Title: The Halloween Party
Remind me never to invite a drunken Jasper Whitlock to my house, he's gross! Some people should not drink! Poor Rose is sure having an awful time with her burned legs. Hope that gets lots better! As for who is following Edward and Bella home, no doubt it's Mike, or maybe Aro?
Date: 16 Jun 2013 8:50 AM Title: The Breakdown
That slimy little bastard, Aro! I can't believe he forced himself on Bella and reinjured her poor wrist! The woman has the worst luck I ever heard of ! Poor Rose is going to have such a long road to recovery. Good thing that Emmett will be there every step of the way. Babies on the horizon, maybe! Great chapter!
Date: 16 Jun 2013 8:17 AM Title: The Fire
This has been so upsetting , for Emmett, for Bella , Rose's parents, you name it! If Mike started that fire he's insane! He could have killed innocent people in his quest to get revenge on his ex-wife! Trixie and Tracy are in deep trouble after getting up in Bella's face. Provided weasely Aro does the right thing, of course.
Date: 16 Jun 2013 7:43 AM Title: The Birthday
The wonderful birthday Edward provided for Bella had to erase all those bad old memories. After the hot sex in the back seat, it was a dash of cold reality to hear her old condo was on fire! Hope Rose is all right!
Date: 16 Jun 2013 7:04 AM Title: The Morning After
Edward really was sweating having lasik surgery, just in case he had a bad outcome! Pretty natural to worry about someone zapping your eyes with a laser, I guess! Bella sweetly took care of him and that must have helped him.
Date: 16 Jun 2013 5:40 AM Title: The 32 Year Old Born Again Virgin
I'll bet they both went to sleep with a big smile on their face, singing, "At Last" ! That was well worth waiting for!
Date: 16 Jun 2013 3:08 AM Title: The Wedding
Really loved Alice and Jasper's wedding, even if she made them wear pink! The vows they said to each other were beautiful and meaningful. Can't wait for Edward and Bella to do the same!
Date: 16 Jun 2013 12:39 AM Title: The Reality
Finally she takes a chance and does the right thing for both of them! I would be just like Edward, worried that Mike would try to harm Bella, maybe even kill her! As long as she is with him she's safe because he would lay down his life for his Bella!
Date: 16 Jun 2013 12:18 AM Title: The Talk
Definite possibility that Mike killed Charlotte, since he tried the same thing with Bella. Now that she's pressed charges, he's just covering his ass with the story about being drunk and not knowing what he was doing! Edward better watch Bella like a hawk to make sure Mike doesn't try to finish the job! Getting Bella to a therapist/counselor is a great idea too!
Date: 15 Jun 2013 11:56 PM Title: The Recovery
Bella really needs to start seeing the enormous difference between Edward and Mike! There's actually no comparison, Edward's a prince and Mike is a prick!
Date: 15 Jun 2013 11:14 PM Title: The Funeral
It figures that Mike, being crazy enough to attack Bella and beat her up, would do anything! I hope someone beats him to a bloody pulp! Edward is taking such good care of Bella and going to the funeral was so supportive of him.
Date: 15 Jun 2013 10:09 AM Title: The News
Good thing that assault never happened to you! That was awful, and I hope Mike is jailed and the key thrown away! Thank God Edward got there to pull Mike off Bella before he beat her senseless! Hope she doesn't have a concussion! All the drama of Taylor's death and the funeral are just adding to the turmoil! And just when Edward and Bella are really getting close to each other, in every way!
Date: 15 Jun 2013 8:43 AM Title: The ER
Rosalie, what a friend, and what a sad, sad story she had to tell! No wonder she has been putting off sharing that nightmare with Bella! I'm glad she has Emmett in her life now, she deserves to be happy. Edward and Bella deserve each other, too, they're so good together!
Date: 15 Jun 2013 4:14 AM Title: The Realization
Lucky Bella, lucky Edward! They have both said the magic words, and mean them. Now if only Bella would believe that he's nothing like her asshole ex-husband!
Date: 15 Jun 2013 1:52 AM Title: The Confessions
Re: Author's notes at the end of this chapter, saying you need a life. Since you wrote this two years ago, I sincerely hope you got one and are a happy woman because of it! Now, about the story, this was a great chapter. Jake's is a pretty sad story and I don't blame him for wanting to kill Quil, that was a despicable thing to do to Jacob, deliberately giving him HIV that way! The way progress is happening between Edward and Bella, on the other hand is wonderful!
Date: 15 Jun 2013 1:24 AM Title: The Courtdate
Did I mention that I'm loving the way their relationship is growing, because I do! He is so sweet and supportive and she's soaking it all up like a plant too long without water! Just perfect!
Date: 15 Jun 2013 1:01 AM Title: The Parties...Still
Makes me happy for Bella and Edward, and mildly amused for Emmett and Rosalie! It was pretty funny when Alice and Jasper , Bella and Edward all were gagging over Rose and Em carrying on in the guest room ! What did they expect? The spying on Bella thing is seriously wrong, who the hell does Mike think he is ? He's the one with the pregnant girl friend, Bella is really taking her time getting together with another guy, she's not being promiscuous, by any means! Mike's just being an ass!
Date: 15 Jun 2013 12:27 AM Title: The Parties
Too bad about the sprain, but it seemed to bring the reward of closeness, so maybe not too bad after all! The parties were just the impetus they both needed, especially Bella!
Date: 14 Jun 2013 6:46 AM Title: The Plans
I really get a kick out of the banter between Bella and Edward. There's just enough truth in it to make me hopeful they will get together and it will be great!
Date: 14 Jun 2013 12:37 AM Title: The Holiday
I'm going to cross my fingers and hope for the best for both of them!
Date: 13 Jun 2013 11:43 PM Title: The Flashback
Sadly, the sentence for vehicular homicide isn't anywhere near that long, but it sure should be even longer! Edward's tough to have survived all the grief and pain he's experienced in his life. I sure hope better things are ahead for him, preferably with Bella!
Date: 13 Jun 2013 11:16 PM Title: The Lunch
That's enough to bring a tear to my eye! Poor Edward, loses his parents and his wife to drunk drivers! I'm amazed he can stand to work the emergency room, with that background! Bella has to have sympathy after hearing that sad tale! He's had it rougher than she , by far!
Date: 13 Jun 2013 10:53 PM Title: The Storm
Glad that Bella is officially free of Mike the Cheater. I hope he's happy with his pregnant girlfriend and some debt from their house. Glad too, that Bella is going to see Edward again. He was sweet to come rescue her and Alice from the bar.
Date: 13 Jun 2013 10:24 PM Title: The Calm
Though never one to pick on Bella, it sounds as if she's let herself go somewhat. She should diet and exercise her way to happiness. It would give her something to do besides feel sorry for herself. If Edward wanted to be my friend, I'd be there in a New York minute! You never know how things will go!
Date: 13 Jun 2013 8:46 PM Title: The End
My first thought was what a waste of five years! Sadly not every marriage works or lasts. Some of us are fortinate and some have no luck at all! I hope life gets happier for Bella, and she gets a chance to tell Jessica what a slut she is, along with Mike, of course!
Date: 05 Jun 2013 6:09 PM Title: The Emerald City
I'm hooked! Great story!
Date: 04 Jun 2013 10:37 PM Title: The Morning After
No hat, just love! Great story!
Date: 07 May 2013 12:32 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved this chapter. LOVED all the children. Sounds like everyone has had a really good four years. I hate that little Marie has problems. Can't wait to go read the sequel. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Date: 07 May 2013 12:30 AM Title: The New Beginning
LOVED it!!!!!!! I know Edward about died when Bella started to hemorrhaging. Bless their hearts. Glad that she came through ok.
Date: 06 May 2013 11:09 PM Title: The Bean
TRIPLETS!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!! What in the world made you write that they were having 3!!!!!!!! Glad that she got her job. What in the world is she going to do about it with triplets on the way.
Date: 06 May 2013 9:46 PM Title: The House
Poor Bella. I am so glad that Edward is healing. Now Bella needs to start healing. Time for a GREAT future.
Date: 06 May 2013 9:44 PM Title: The Announcement
I am so glad that they found a house and it is close to Carlisle and Esme. Charlie is over the moon. lol. Happy chapter.
Date: 06 May 2013 9:44 PM Title: The Interview
I think Bella handled this break in better than the brick coming through the window. Loved the she called the other two men out during the interview. lol.
Date: 06 May 2013 6:20 PM Title: The Honeymoon
They are going to have a BABY!!!!!!!!!!! I am so happy for them. Another GREAT chapter. I noticed that Edward referred to the baby as a girl!!!!!!! I am just worried about what Mike is going to do when he finds out that Bella is pregnant with Edward's baby. But he never wanted kids.
Date: 06 May 2013 6:19 PM Title: The Dream Wedding of Bella and Edward
That was PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!! LOVED LOVED LOVED this chapter.
Date: 06 May 2013 6:18 PM Title: The Destination Rehearsal
Perfect!!!!!!! Loved everything about this chapter. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!
Date: 06 May 2013 6:17 PM Title: The Dress and Weddng Preparations
I am thinking that Bella is pregnant. She is sick in the mornings and her smell is senitive, since she made Edward shower again.
Date: 06 May 2013 6:16 PM Title: The Fight
I feel really sorry for both of them. Mike is such an ass. Hope they catch him soon and he gets everything he deserves.
Date: 06 May 2013 6:15 PM Title: The Baby
I am glad that Alice and the baby are ok. I can not believe that Mike threw a brick through their window. Plus damaged the paino.
Date: 06 May 2013 6:14 PM Title: The Surprise
That was some HOT HOT HOT Valentine sex!!!!!! LOVED it!!!!! Glad to see that Rose is getting better. OMGosh, I just wonder how Alice is going to be with labor pains. lol
Date: 06 May 2013 6:13 PM Title: The Emerald City
Glad that Edward saw some of the people from his past. Loved the HOT hotel sex. So, they like each other being domineering...wonder if they might try some Dom/sub kinkiness!!!!!!!! :)
Date: 06 May 2013 6:12 PM Title: The Meeting with Dad
I am glad that Sue and Bella get along. Wow, Edward and Bella are going to look into fostering little Todd. :)
Date: 06 May 2013 6:11 PM Title: The Hospital at Christmas
LOVED LOVED LOVED this chapter. What is wrong with little Todd?? I did not understand what was going on with him.
Date: 05 May 2013 2:19 AM Title: The Eve
I am so glad that they all enjoyed Christmas Eve together. Loved the idea of them going to the hospital and giving to the children. That is sooooo sweet.
Date: 05 May 2013 2:17 AM Title: The Christmas Ball
They can just not catch a brake. Everytime they turn around something is happening to them. Poor things. I am just glad that Edward got there in time. Aro is a piece of work.
Date: 05 May 2013 2:16 AM Title: The Brunch
Edward and Bella definitely need some happiness.
Date: 05 May 2013 2:14 AM Title: The Conferences and Concerts
Everytime Bella has left the school or any other place in this chapter I have been waiting for something to happen to her. What a cliffy!!!! I am so glad that I do not have to wait for an update. I get to go to the next chapter!!! YES!!!!!
Date: 05 May 2013 2:13 AM Title: The Halloween Party
Glad that Rose got to come to the party. I hate that she has an infection and fever. Hope she gets better soon. Loved that Edward could not keep is hands off Bella and took her up against the wall. LOVED Jasper!!!!!! lol Who is following them.....Mike or Aro?????
Date: 05 May 2013 2:12 AM Title: The Breakdown
Poor Edward. He really had a bad reaction to Alice and Jasper's annoucement. I know he is happy for them. Poor Rose. I am so glad that she has Emmett. I can not believe that Aro was that forward with Bella. That was very bold. Can't wait to see what happenes with him.
Date: 05 May 2013 2:10 AM Title: The Fire
Bella's birthday was perfect till the phone call. I hate that. I can not believe that you let Rose get hurt. I can not believe that the fire started in Bella's bed, basically. I hope they catch Mike. I really feel sorry for the whole gang.
Date: 05 May 2013 2:07 AM Title: The Birthday
Loved this whole chapter. Loved the presents!!!!!! Loved the HOT Aston Martin Vanquish sex!!!!!! GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!
Date: 05 May 2013 2:04 AM Title: The Morning After
Glad Tanya approves. Love a loppy Dr. McFuckMe!!!!!!! lol
Date: 03 May 2013 3:48 PM Title: The 32 Year Old Born Again Virgin
LOVED IT!!!!!!! Finally!!!!!! Great job!!!!! I thought that Jake was their photographier??? It did not seem like it during the reception. Just wondering. Loved this chapter.
Date: 03 May 2013 3:47 PM Title: The Wedding
Loved the wedding. Loved the speeches. Finally it is about time. I know that you are going to make it extra special. Can't wait to read it.
Date: 03 May 2013 3:46 PM Title: The Reality
WOW!!!!! Edward has alot of money. I am glad that she decided to move in with Edwad. Something tells me that she is not going to be moving out at all.
Date: 03 May 2013 3:45 PM Title: The Talk
I am glad that Edward got Bella to go back to his house. She does not need to be there by herself. Is Edward really on to something with this Charlotte person? What is the deal with Bella looking like her? Can't wait to find out more about this.
Date: 03 May 2013 3:44 PM Title: The Recovery
Poor Bella flipped out!!!!! Bless her heart. She really had it bad. I am glad that Edward was there for her. Glad that she is going back to school. I am really enjoying this story.
Date: 03 May 2013 3:43 PM Title: The Funeral
Poor Bella. Poor Edward. He is really upset with what happened to Bella. I am glad that Bella is starting to remember what happened with Mike. I hope he gets what is coming to him.
Date: 03 May 2013 3:42 PM Title: The News
I am glad that this never happened to you, thank goodness. I can not believe that Micheal would just come in like that. He is such a asswipe. I hope he goes to jail. Glad that Edward showed up when he did.
Date: 03 May 2013 3:41 PM Title: The ER
Thanks for finally giving us Rose's story. Glad that she took Bella shopping. Love the ER visit. Loved that Edward gave Bella the key to his house. Great job with this chapter.
Date: 03 May 2013 3:40 PM Title: The Realization
I am sooooo glad that they both said "I love You". Loved the lemon. Glad that Alice texted Bella. To me it should be harder for Edward to love than Bella. But I do understand that he has had 3 years and Bella has only had about 6 months. Things are going to get better.
Date: 03 May 2013 3:39 PM Title: The Confessions
OMGosh!!!!! I feel so sorry for Jake. I can not believe that Quail knew he had HIV and he infected Jake. I hope Edward gets Quail fired from his hospital job. That could be a danger to the patients. Love how hot and horny Edward and Bella both are. lol.
Date: 02 May 2013 3:16 PM Title: The Courtdate
Loved that Edward was there for Bella at court. I want to know the real reason that Mike is having her followed. He did not have time for her when they were married...why now??
Date: 02 May 2013 3:15 PM Title: The Parties...Still
I can not believe that Mike is having her followed. What is his deal??? I am so glad that Edward and Bella are finally together. LOVED the Emmett and Rose part of this chapter. Great job.
Date: 02 May 2013 3:14 PM Title: The Parties
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!! They kiss!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 May 2013 3:13 PM Title: The Plans
Glad that Edward is being persistence. Is Jacob going to want to be a love interest????
Date: 02 May 2013 3:12 PM Title: The Holiday
Loved that Bella told Edward what was bothering her. Love that Edward is so understanding. Bella should realize that with all that Edward has been through with losing Tanya that he is really being serious about their relationship.
Date: 02 May 2013 3:09 PM Title: The Flashback
Thanks for sharing Edward's background. He has truly been through some awful times. Bless his heart. I hope that Bella will come around and they both can start healing.
Date: 02 May 2013 2:53 PM Title: The Lunch
Wow, Edward has really been through a lot. He has over come a lot too. I am thinking that Edward wants to be more than friends, with him wanting to come to her door and get her. That sounds more like a date. lol.
Date: 02 May 2013 2:52 PM Title: The Storm
Dr. McFuckMe to the rescue!!!!!!!!! I am thinking that Alice planned the whole night. lol
Date: 02 May 2013 2:50 PM Title: The Calm
I can not believe that Mike is having her followed, really. How dare him. Edward and Bella did get off on the wrong foot. Loved the little battering that Edward had going with her.
Date: 02 May 2013 2:43 PM Title: The End
Well, she wanted a divorce, it looks like she is going to get her wish. I hate that he cheated on her. Can't wait to read the rest of this story.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2013 3:49 AM Title: The 32 Year Old Born Again Virgin
they are great together
bella meet her sould mate and edward will give her the world
love it
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2013 6:07 AM Title: The Talk
well very enlightening chapter
poor bella---so heartbreaking what she is going through
i hope the counseling helps her and i am glad she is going back with edward
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2013 5:13 AM Title: The Recovery
rough chapter
alot going on
opps first fight i believe, made through unscathed
and they got to rock each others worlds
love it
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2013 12:27 AM Title: The Funeral
man mike you are an ass
i am glad bella pressed charges
loving how sweet and attentive edward is
beautiful funeral so sad such a young kid had to is life
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2013 5:34 AM Title: The ER
love it
i am thrilled for both of them
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2013 4:37 AM Title: The Realization
love the way it ended
they got alot out in the open
scary nightmare i hope that is all it is
thank you
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2013 4:27 PM Title: The Flashback
wow hell of a story
love edward even more
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2013 3:53 PM Title: The Lunch
wow edward was dealt a roughhand but wow he has defentiely made lemonade
impressed
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2013 3:40 PM Title: The Storm
oh edward the hero
he seems like a good guy
i hope bella gives him a shot. not everyone is a snake
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2013 3:04 AM Title: The End
good riddance is right
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2013 3:31 AM Title: The Realization
How sweet!!! I want a man like that
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 4:14 AM Title: The Parties
Finally i hope they will have HEA