Date: 18 Mar 2016 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 28 EPILOGUE-MOVING FORWARD
Oh Edward, be so very careful what you wish for! Keep in mind, also, the straw that broke the camel's back! The three stories in Edward's POV I've read so far have been so good, I look forward to Awakenings!
Glad you like them. Hope the last book doesn't disappoint.
Date: 18 Mar 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 18-LESSONS
Grudging, but at least they will work as a team, to vanquish the enemy. I wish Edward felt he could tell Bella what Jake was thinking. I'ts not fair that he can torment at will and Edward just takes it, feeling he owes the dog!
Date: 17 Mar 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1-Refusal
I understand how much he wants to save her and keep her safe, but I could just scream when he decides to do so without taking her wishes into consideration. How he can be so smart and so stupid at the same time, blows my mind!
Date: 20 Dec 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 19-ULTIMATUM
Missed this a lot. I really need to reread the series. Merry Christmas.
I know it's been forever, but I have finally posted the last chapters of this novel. I've also posted the first chapter of 'Awakening', my version of Breaking Dawn. If you're still around I hope you enjoy.
Date: 10 Feb 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 17-ALLIES
Will you be finishing this story?
I know it's been forever, but yes the final chapters to this story are posted and I've also posted chapter 1 of my last story called 'Awakening', which is my version of Breaking Dawn. Hope you're still around and will enjoy.
Date: 04 Jul 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 6-Anger
Excellent chapter. Liked the interaction between his brothers and Carlisle during the hunting trip. Edward is still angsty but it will be a revelation to him when it is jealousy that he is feeling and needs to deal with it. Writing really makes the difference because it makes it so easy to read. Thanks for posting as often as you do which is another bonus for the story.
I glad you are enjoying the book. I look writing about the Cullens. I find them fascinating. I post as often as I can, but I'm posting here and over a twilighted, that is why sometimes it gets delayed. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 22 May 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 3-Agenda's
Wonderful chapter as well as the previous one. I know Edward is bent on protection of Bella, but doesn't he realize that skipping a class when the principal just witnessed his little altercation with Jacob could mean trouble or atleast warrant a call to one of his parents just to relate a "dangerous situation" (hint, hint). You know schools can't be too careful when the safety of our favorite vampire children are concerned.
The writing is so terrific and makes for a great companion piece to the book. You capture Edward's thinking so well and the rendition of the safety thing with the crashing plane was funny all over again. I got the mental picture of Bella rolling her eyes at him and just shaking her head at how stupid he sounds. Maybe it was always a good thing he couldn't read her mind.
The anticipation grows as I can't wait for more Cullen interaction because I am sure Carlisle's patience and understanding for Edward's feelings, jealousies and so forth will really be stretched. No matter what happens next, I know it will be great. Thanks for posting such awesome chapters!
Thank you for such wonderful words. It's always nice to know that someone is enjoying the story. I love Edward and he is so easy to write which is odd really becasue he is so complex, but I suppose that's what makes him fun. Continue to enjoy we still have a long way to go and he will suffer many twist and turns in this book.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 1-Refusal
Seeing this from Edward's POV is going to be thrilling. There is so much potential to this story and you are off to a great start. This is my favorite book so to have a chance to read it from this perspective is an opportunity not to be missed. After the other two renditions, I believe you are knowing how Edward thinks, how he acts, how he lets his over protectiveness and later on jealousy interfere with his relationships not only with Bella but with his family. I really believe you will do an awesome job 'cause you were meant to tell his side of the story. Your writing is most excellent! I'm hopeful that you will bring out more of the family dynamics, relationships, etc as things progress in future chapters. Thank you for all the continued hard work in bringing a new dimension to the rest of the story. I for one can't wait for more!
Thank you for reading and thank you for your kind wonderful words. When I began this book I was surprised how much of it was not from Eclipse. You'll be happy to know that alot of it deals with the Cullen's. There was sooo much going on that Bella had no idea of. I'm glad you are enjoying it. Thanks again for your continued support.