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Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

ok, hold the phone.  Esme's son leaves his 7 year old daughter with Bella for a few days, and "forgets" to tell Bella?!?  Does she think the the 7 year old may begin feeling that her Daddy abandoned her?  True, he hasn't been emotionally aound, but he did put her to bed each evening.



Author's Response:

Soon all will be revealed.  Edward is in a really bad place right now, but I think he may be seeing the light sooner than we think.  Thanks for reading and reiviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

wonderful chapter!  Of course Edward will come back and hopefully he will wake up and get some help dealing with his grief!



Author's Response:

Oh believe me, he´ll be back!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: twinsplus2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

Im glad that you are posting again.  I really like this story and cant wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reiviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

WOW, what gives with Edward?



Author's Response:

I believe it´s called `rock bottom´!  Thanks for reading and reiviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

How cute was that meeting?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

this is really good  but i love your writings



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 2:20 PM Title: Prologue

holy hell woman this is going to be an extremely wild ride I fear!!!! going on to more of the story and I really hope you feel inspired to add to it soon..thanks for sharing this story with us all...  Kathy



Author's Response:

It´s going to get a bit rough at times, but the end will be well worth it!  Welcome aboard!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Bigma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

Nice story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reiviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

Well, well it seems that little miss McKynzie is a troublemaker!! I bet that Edward just has his work all cut out for him with her!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: twilightmom96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

i like this story I think your writing is very good. its just hard to get in to as u dont post very often and the chapters are very short.



Author's Response:

Won´t promise you super long chapters, but I will do my best to get you a chapter a week!  :)  Thanks for reading and reiviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

Can't sit for the next update



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reiviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: keola Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

nice to have you back...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reiviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

I can only hope that Edward and Bella and Mac will found true happiness, because they need it.Your story is captivating.



Author's Response:

it´s going to be a bumpy ride, but we will eventually get out HEA!  Thanks for reading and reiviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

Cant wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reiviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

looking forward to the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reiviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: sapho99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

Krazi,

I love the story and looking forward to the next chappie.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reiviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

For goodness sake post tomorrow - and to hell with the no. of reviews!! :-P



Author's Response:

Okay, you win... I´ll post it!  Thanks for reading and reiviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: mara7c Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

So glad to see this story back! Cant wait for the prologue!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I´m happy to be back, and more so to see that you guys are still hanging in with me!  Thanks for reading and reiviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

 

 

Reviewer: Elinana Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

Great story! I've been waiting what feels like forever for an update, good job!



Author's Response:

Sorry, it just seemed like only a few people were interested in the story, but I´m going to do my best to keep it updated regularly from now on! Glad you´re still hanging in there with me!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

She has done alot in her life. It is really sad that everyone around her has been taken away from her so that she is now alone.



Author's Response:

Don´t worry, she´ll have an adopted family that hellbound on protecting her, even if it is from one of their own!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 6:13 PM Title: Prologue

Wow! Edward is a real ass!!



Author's Response:

For now, but I think he´s about to realize what´s at stake! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  I am sad that the prologue is coming soon though.  Cannot wait to see how everything works out though :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, we´re right upon it! Next chapter will have a tissue warning! Glad you´re still here! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 6:04 PM Title: Prologue

Oh I want to be able to read the next chapter for sure! Edward needs some serious help.



Author's Response:

It´ll be up soon!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

so edward just disappeared. i truly hope he is able to deal with the dispear. his daughter and bella and family deserve more. he deserves to be living not drowning. he needs help and i hope he lets someone help him



Author's Response:

I believe that Dr. Cullen will have to lose everything, before he can learn to appreciate anything!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

Merci à vos bêtas, elles me permettent de lire facilement avec Google Translate.  J'espère que vous écrirez la suite de cette histoire.



Author's Response:

Merci pour la lecture. Je suis heureux que vous aimez mon histoire

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

wow!



Author's Response:

Merci pour la lecture. Je suis heureux que vous aimez mon histoire

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

J'aime ce que vous écrivez... et vous faites de la recherche pour vos photos, elle ajoutent beaucoup aux histoires.



Author's Response:

Merci pour la lecture. Je suis heureux que vous aimez mon histoire

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

Superbe!



Author's Response:

Merci pour la lecture. Je suis heureux que vous aimez mon histoire

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:20 AM Title: Prologue

Départ canon!



Author's Response:

Merci pour la lecture. Je suis heureux que vous aimez mon histoire

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2011 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

So I see this is going to be one of those stories where I wish I had waited till it was closer to complete to start to read... I am going to hate waiting for updates here.. I just need to know what is going to happen with this 'family'.. I know already that Bella and Edward are going to heal each other. And the terror that is 'Ken'.. Love her!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry!:(  Hope you´re still with me, and I´m going to keep the updates regular now! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: sapho99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

looking forward to the next chapter. great story

Thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

I feel so sorry for Edward. He has really closed himself off to everything. Edward blames himself for Claire's death. Why??? She had cancer, he could not have stopped that. You wrote something in this chapter that makes me think that Claire was pregnant when she died. Is that right??? Now I have to wait like everyone else for you update. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE hurry with the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

OMG!!!! I love little Mac. You did a GREAT job writing this. I am soooo loving it. I really like reading story were Bella and/or Edward have children and there is interaction with the kids.  Thanks for more background on Bella. Renee just pisses me off. That is so wrong for a mother to do a child like that.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

Edward has gone through alot just like Bella. I feel sorry for him but in a way I am also mad at him for the way he has distanced himself from Mac. On one hand he seems distance but then on the other hand his seems fairly close to her. I can see in your writing that he does truly love her. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

This story sounds soooo good. Thanks for Bella's background. She has had a rough life. Can't wait to read more. Off to the next chapter. I am sooo loving that I don't have to wait for an update. I know that soon I will but for now I am excited that I can go on to the next chapter. lol.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 6:51 PM Title: Prologue

My heart is braking for Bella and Mac. What is with Edward??? How far along in her pregnancy is Bella? I worry about her blacken out. I hope Edward will at least stop and check on her. He is a Dr. for goodness sakes.  I can not wait to read the rest of this story. I am so off to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Bella is 7 1/2 months pregnant when this happens. I can assure you that he will not leave her and the baby to die.  It´s going to be tough at times, but stick with me and it will all come together! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxox

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

It seems to me, that Edward has not really someone  to give him advice how to deal with this situation with Bella and his emotions. But I guess that is due to the fact, that he closed himself off of everybody and didn't let anybody near him.

I just hope he gives himself the chance to heal or more than one person will be in pain.



Author's Response:

Me too!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

I loved how Edward tries not to want Bella and them as a family and inloved seeing the little tid bits of Bella and mac!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

my heart breaks for him. he is so closed off tot he world and himself and his family. man oh man does he need help. someone wants to be there for him but he doesn't know what to do or even how to accept love from his family let alone someone new. edward needs to let claire go and get on with his life. looking forward to more and seeing what happens



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

Excellent chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

Put him out of his misery, please!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

wow great story Thanks :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

god hes such a drama king! im excited to see what happens next but upset that i know that hes goignto break bella and his daughters heart but im excited to see the outcome in what happens next he cant get away from her because of how intertiwned she is with his family already! 



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

Wow, that was amazing!  Poor Edward...I know it is hard, but I really have faith and hope that he will come back.  Cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

I like this story, very good!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: MoniMD Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

oh my god! mac is just so bloody adorable!!

can't believe she just went for a swim in bella's tub! hahahaha!

gosh, i love her!

you know, one of the reasons i'd rather not get pregnant alone is the hormones.. that certainly something i'd like to share with someone less plastic! hahaha!



Author's Response:

Yeah, little Mac is definitely a handful! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: MoniMD Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

well it is hard not to hate edward as much as he hates himself. i think he was spot on, as far as the way he is treating his daughter goes.

while i was reading i thought, well he is clearly depressed, really depressed, not the meaninless use people use everytime to this very serious illness -- so maybe this all makes sense. he needs help.

but then he said "After what happened, I couldn´t bring myself to open my heart up to my baby girl for fear of having it broken again",

Seriously? Open my heart to your own daughter?? you shouldnt need to. she should already have a captive place, huge place, in your heart you jackass!

 

he talks about her as if he never really had a connection with her, like the only thing that connect them was Claire and that is so messed up i have no words..

and if he is not in a good place to rase his daughter let someone else do that until he can pull his shit together! that is all i am saying...

yes, he is a failure not only as a father but as a man. 

 

ok, now i am done hahaa!

i just love kids and get very protective of them, eve the fictional ones hahaha!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: MoniMD Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

this chapter was very descriptive... you know, the whole i have this I have that.. it gives the character a pretentious and sometimes even obnoxious air, even when the character is supposed to be neither.

i suppose it is somewhat necesary to be descriptive to set the background but i always find it better when the author shares this sort of info with us throughout the first chapters. 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: MoniMD Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 6:27 PM Title: Prologue

wow! what happened to edward for him to be such a dick?

let's find out!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

This story seems to be really promising and very interesting. Also the little images in between are great.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 7:07 PM Title: Prologue

Definitely diffrent than FtloD but a nice start. It seems also pretty sad and heartbreaking.

Let's see how the rest goes.

Great writing by the way.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

OH HOLY MACKEREL!! :-P I guess shit does happen in Forks, huh?!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

I do love MAC, she is a pistol.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

Love it



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 6:32 PM Title: Prologue

Wow!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

OMG this story is awesome Thanks please keep updating thanks:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Biancarose123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

i hate you i so want more soon i love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

wow i so love mac. i would keep her and not give her back. i can see why bella wants to help her. i think they will both heal and be good for each other. how funny mac taking a bath. man she is full of piss and vinegar. you just have to love her and then feel for her. rough road she has and she just wants her daddy. just wants to be happy and loved. oh i love it



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Ra-She-She Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

i loved it!!!!!!!!! please email me when you wrire more at edward_heart204@yahoo.com , can't wait!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

Loved mac and poor Bella I was scares for her when she was little and i felt so bad for mac because Edward doesn't spend time with her!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Mandi79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

Love and the visuals helped so much ..ty



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

well mac is hella funny! im excited to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

LOVE :) More? Poor Mac...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

Wow, that was amazing :)  Poor Mac ;)  But, so glad they cleared things up :)  Gah, Bella had a really rough life with Renee, so glad she moved away from her!  Cannot wait for your next update (of both stories) ;)  I already voted for For the Love of Domination :)  I miss it :(



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

I'm trying to understand Edward but it's hard! I love kynzie!! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Sorry my response is to late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

I'm really liking this!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: sapho99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

Love it!, cannot wait to read more. OMG Edward is such a prick. Love Mac too.

btw could you please hurry up!  :)



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is to late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: Mandi79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

very much enjoying this story:)



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is to late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

im excited for the next hcapter 



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is to late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: sweetmama75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

love how you put pictures with the story:) i also love the rock he is so hot lol...

 good chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: sweetmama75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 5:32 PM Title: Prologue

oooh so heart wrenching thagt would kill me :( hmmm what would make edward act that way?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

I love this little girl already!!!!!  Update soon.



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is to late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  Well worth the wait :) I cannot wait for more!  



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is to late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: joice84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

is too hard don´t be mad with Edward!!! poor Mac, and jacob lol... anxious for the next and Bella with Mac!!! ;D

xoxo



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is to late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

Wonderful story so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: sonyabrady1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

LOVE THE UPDATE!!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is to late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

well, that's what i am waiting for...Bella's appearance! please don't keep us waiting for long...



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is to late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: tiff_0001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

I'm hooked on this already and you've only posted the prologue and Chapter 1! Can't wait to find out what leads us to the prologue and how exactly our little Bella runs into the apparently very angry Edward. :)

Thanks for the shout out on Lonely Doctor!! You're amazing! xxoo ~Tiff



Author's Response:

You´re quite welcome!  I was happy for the recent updates!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: joice84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

wow it good I´m so anxious to know what the hell is in the dreams of Bella!! and the photos is so cool hope you can keep updating 

xoxo 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2011 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

i just wanted to let you know i have read quite a few of the fics you are sending out for more love and they are great. love clazarus and amoredjenaue and vampiremama. great writers

well loving the story so far. my heart goes out to bella at what she has overcome. she was dealt a bad hand by her  mom but she never let it get her down. she still went to school and also in her life now it did not deter her from having her own kids. so bella is a great trooper. she deserves love and happiness in her life. looking forward to more of the story. thanx for writing



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2011 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

I am fully enthralled by this story already.  I cannot wait to see what happens next. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

im excited to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

Wow, that was amazing!  Poor Bella!  I know that had to be a rough life but she is managing well :)  Question not related to this...when are we going to see the teaser for the next For the Love of Domination chapter?  I miss it :(



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review my friend! And answer, not related to this... your teaser has been uploaded, complete with your own shout out! Lol! Enjoy and thanks again for giving the new story a chance and leaving me some love!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 4:17 PM Title: Prologue

Wow, I just want to reach through this computer screen and slap Edward. 



Author's Response:

Haha! I can only imagine! Maybe he´ll get a slap or two along the way! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

It looks really good!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: bluecast Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

Love it so far can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: AylaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

A great beginning to the story. Keep up with the great work. Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

well done sweetie! now we have a complete background on Bella's life. when are we gonna see Edward? are we gonna know who the sperm donor is?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 4:53 PM Title: Prologue

Wow, that was so INTENSE!! Please tell me it gets much better soon!

Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks for reading, reviewing and giving my latest little venture a chance.  I assure you that though there will be many bumps in the road, there will be an HEA!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: searching4myedward Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 1:41 AM Title: Prologue

 this is just the prolouge and i was in tears.  I love it, Please continue the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you´ll hang in there with me and complete the journey!  


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Larafield Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:47 PM Title: Prologue

I am totally reading this fanfiction....

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you´ll hang in there with me and complete the journey!  


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 9:45 PM Title: Prologue

Wow, that was some first chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you´ll hang in there with me and complete the journey!  


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: jacoblucas Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 3:41 AM Title: Prologue

i loved it and am totally intrigued~~~although its hard for me to picture edward as that horrific and evil, I obviously have no idea what happened to him and Mac. Love the name by the way.

I would read anything you write happily!!  i have read fanfic for a long time now and you are one of my most fav authors!!!



Author's Response:

Wow.. I´m totally blown away!  Thanks so much.  Yes, it´s hard to picture him being that way, but all will be revealed in due time! He and Bella both have a lot of emotional baggage that  they´re carrying.  Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you´ll hang in there with me and complete the journey!  


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Nik2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 12:36 AM Title: Prologue

My heart aches for Mac and Bella.  Edward will forever be haunted by what he has done.  Let us hope that he pulls his head out of his ass.  To be a parent means to be selfless for the most part.  Time to be an adult or leave the job to someone that will do it right.

Anxiously awaiting an update.  Great writing too BTW!

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you´ll hang in there with me and complete the journey!  


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: joice84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 5:48 PM Title: Prologue

Oh dear it is so cool!! and now, the next chapter can´t be fast enough!!! please keep going!!! 

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you´ll hang in there with me and complete the journey!  


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 4:46 PM Title: Prologue

i think this is goign to be an intresting story! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you´ll hang in there with me and complete the journey!  


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: luvrofink Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 1:51 PM Title: Prologue

That's just the prologue? IDK if I can read all that heart hurt! Update soon!



Author's Response:

Lol! It was a bit intense, but I hope you´ll stick with me!  lol! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

BTW... I´m totally missing My Greatest Masterpiece! ;)

 

 

Reviewer: LadyChery Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 1:19 PM Title: Prologue

Looking forward to more

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you´ll hang in there with me and complete the journey!  


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: ENAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 11:34 AM Title: Prologue

Loved it - more please! C x



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you´ll hang in there with me and complete the journey!  


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 10:24 AM Title: Prologue

well, i love it! i wanto read some more before making a review.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you´ll hang in there with me and complete the journey!  


Krazi

xoxo

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