You write such a great writer. I hope someday you finish this story

You write such a great writer. I hope someday you finish this story

Is this story finished?

Love it

I like your story very much. Keep on writing.

Holy fuck like WTF???

Ok so the little girl is Edwards, Bella is pregnant with a boy, Is Bella's son Edward's? Edward and his daughter are leaving, Bella has passed the fuck out which I'm guessing is due to elevated blood pressure from the undue stress.....This is some shit huh?

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Love this story!

yeh ! finally, I can't wait to hear more about the trials and tribs of this family getting together!!!

Lovin this story!

I love that they are going to give a relationship and their little family a fighting chance! I can't wait for the next chapters to see where their relationship will lead.

I love this story. I felt so many different emotions while reading at one point I almost stopped because my heart hurt so much for all of them. You are a fantastic writer. Please update soon.

Holy hell, I can't believe he had the gall to put his name on the birth certificate. I would have torn it up and demanded a new one on the spot. He is unbelievable!

Thanks good chapel

Cute...

Good chapter!!!!!

loved the chatper 

So happy that this family is coming back together!

Oh, he groveled a lot and rightfully so but he finally made it and I'm glad for the kids as well as for Bella's sake.  Pleade don't mess this up E.

Really enjoyed the story so far!!!...keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!!

loved it!

loved it!

loved it!

poor edward! loved it!

loved it!

I am so glad that Bella finally showed some kindness toward Edward. He has been blaming himself for everything. Bella should be ashamed of herself. Did Edward not blame himself for enough stuff that was not his doing? Claire made all these sef-sacrificing decisions without talking to Edward and when she and their baby died he blamed himself. It was all Claires choice. She wanted the baby so bad. She thought it was worth her life. She did not expect the baby to die as well. Edward did not get a voice in the matter. Claire would not have listened even if he did voice his concern. She was determined to get pregnant. Now Bella is letting Edward walk around thinking he is the keeping is family apart because he can't be forgiven. That is so selfish of Bella. She should of told Edward or at least Esme that he is forgiven, but she has some demons to deal with before they can be a healthy family. That is what you do when you love someone.

I love it! Pls continue!

I'm still here...and it was worth the wait...yet I prefer not to wait that long..lol

Still here.

that was so sad about Claire and his second son dying like that. I love this story very much.

That it was...move it along very, very nicely...like Mac's POV.

Still here and enjoying the ride.
Bella's history has helped fill in the behavioral/emotional problems she is struggling to keep under control. I always wondered why the artificial insemination method was chosen.
Mac is a beautiful, cunning little girl. Glad aunt Alice is will to keep her secret.
Chuckled at Bella bold approach to answering the door, but remember the discomfort when time had lapsed between feedings. She was just ready for relief. Not quite the greeting Edward was expecting. That would be a nice side note........his thoughts on a lusciously full boob be served up at the door. Haha.

God yes, I'm still with you!! So excited to see the update. Wow, that chapter had me laughing and crying and just so happy that they are starting to move forward. Can't wait for th next update. 

oh it was worth the wait

i am thrilled the mac wants her family so bad and she did something

bella is making a compromise and it seems to be working

these guys just need a chance

oh love it

I'm still here and I'm am soooo glad those two finally decided to get their crap together. It's about time!  

great chapter, they have come a long way hope they cont. to get better together

yes put on your big girl panties and forgive him, he is trying so hard..

wow that was a strong chapter, what happened to make edward act that way and the words he used were hurt full

EEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPPP LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! SUPER HAPPY THAT YOU'RE FINALLY BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Poor Bella...glad she seeking help.

SO amazing :)  I really loved it!  I cannot wait to see what happens next! 

I am so glad they are finally talking. Great job...thanks!!!

LOVE THIS CHAPTER! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!

Very sad for Edward. Bella should forgive him soon, right? Love the story.

Poor Eddiekins!! :-( More please!! :-)

Damn, I have so many thoughts running around in my head it's crazy!! I mean to go from that almost catatonic state to actually being able to open up to what made you like that and to finally be able to show your daughter that you do truely love her and be able to start over with your daughter and son and hopefully Bella sometime soon it's just crazy. Btw is Parker really Edward's biological son or is he not??? Love the story!!!!!!

Everything that could go wrong, did go wrong for Edward. Not only with his love for Claire, but also now with Bella. I don't say, that I excuse his behaviour, because, he has eaten all his guilt inside, without really talking about his feelings. But afterwards everybody is wiser, but at least he is getting help now and tries to get better for himself and for his family.

That he has a long way to go is clear, but perhaps Bella will somehow really need him, so that they can reconcile a little faster.

I love this story and I thinik that Bella will come around.  hopefully she can understand someof what Edward was going through but at least she is letting him spend time with the kids and I believe she will let him back into her life soon.  She has got to know that he loves them with all his heart..

A great chapter as always. Just one thing that irked me about Bella's emotions on what is occurring with Edward and that is her getting upset with Edward and putting his name on Parker's birth certificate. If Bella could, she would have done the same thing herself without Edward's go ahead. In a way, she has assumed the role of mother without Edward's permission as well. So she has kind of contradicted herself.

Hopefully she can make amends with Edward soon so they came a big family together.

It's easier to understand Edward's mental state related to Claire's death and his feelings for Bella.  Granted he should have sought help long ago but it's good that he finally is and making great progress. Think it would be a great idea for them to go together but Bella has her own issues and needs to see Siobhan or someone.  Wonder what the odds are that Parker's going to be a real Cullen, that would be a great twist we didn't see coming. 

Marvelous!  Sorry for the delay in reviewing, but My family and I were away.  Then RL rears its head.  Now that I'm caught up, I think Edward is absolutely doing the right thing for Mac by letting her stay with Bella!  They have a bond - one Mac needed desperatley, and the healthiest thing for her now is to let her be with her "mom" and baby brother.  Also, having Mac around and the baby will give Bella the impetus to thrive again.  Loved it!