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Reviewer: story addict Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2013 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Gay or neuter?

That's an interesting and intriguing sight into what might have gone on in Edwards mind all that time…



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! I am glad you like d it. Canon but not exactly in canon.

In the meanwhile I am posting a new story, AU. For the moment it is on fanfiction net "The Fleeting Moment" I am Camilla 10 there. It will come here in due time.

Reviewer: LCCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Gay or neuter?

I'm so sorry you're not getting reviews for this story. I enjoyed it- for the most part. The only thing I didn't enjoy was the Tanya part, mostly because he let her touch him. You'd think that seeing her fantasies in her mind would have the same effect on him as the gay vampire. Otherwise I enjoyed the story very much. Poor Edward not knowing for 80+ years if he was normal. "Neuter, my ass"! loved that line :)



Author's Response:

I think that Edward was so desperate about his sexual identity that he must have gritted his teeth and let Tanya try ... obviouysly hearing her thoughts must have determined his non reaction ...

Heartbroken did a little better on ff net and twilighted as reviews go - TWCS readers do not review much - so I am particularly grateful to you.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Gay or neuter?

This story of yours has been very enjoyable to read and think about. Thanks so much for writing it. It sure explores things I hadn't thought of before, but that make a lot of sense. Good stuff!



Author's Response:

I was compelled to write it, sort of. I was writing a multichaptered story at the time but some mails exchanged with Maniac Motherland set my imagination on fire. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 1 Secrets

Bella is really getting a window into Edward's mind this time, as he would love to have into hers. It does make a certain kind of sense and is quite thought-provoking. Great honeymoon sex, by the way.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Glad that you liked it. The  relationship Edward/Carlisle in the early years is surely intriguing. A few authors have easily decided for a homosexual relationship between them. I decided it was not the case, but it was something that had to be considered.

Reviewer: FangMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Gay or neuter?

This is a very interesting twist on filling in all the gaps that SM left out in the Twilight series.  Thanks for sharing your imaginative view with us.

As far as a cruel site... I don't think it is; there's just a lot of ghost readers out there.  But I hear ya; I love it when people read AND review my story but I look at both the read count AND the reviews and rejoice in both.

Hang in there, kid... Don't give up!

XoXo ~ Fangs



Author's Response:

Not giving up at all, I was only wondering if continuing to post here. My relative success (or my restrained lemons - but the first one more probably) kept me off the radar of  those who make their business to report rating infringements), so I can continue just on Twilighted (I adore the validation process), and on ff net. BTW, is it likely that I can find readers here for my best story ever: "The Parachutist". Here I could post a version with illustrations, but with now 50,000 hits on the two other sites, how likely it is that somebody will want to read it on TWCS? But, in any case, thank you so much for the review and your encouraging words.

Reviewer: happytwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 Secrets

i believe i remember it being on twilighted.net i was kind of confused from that one still kinka of am if it is the same one is there another story i need to read to hfelp me understand this one ... i liked it was good enjoy little look into what could have been said on honeymoon

 



Author's Response:

It is the same story. In fact I post on twilighted net first, then on other sites. Not being a native English speaker, I find the validation process a necessary challenge. Thank you very much for sending me a review, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 Secrets

This is a very interesting view of why Edward left Carlisle in the early years.



Author's Response:

Yes, Seventeen is a difficult age even in the most normal circumstances. Poor Edward, so confused. I'll post next chapter early next week. Thank you so much for R&R.

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