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Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2016 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 17

Okay, I'm sorry but I have to say, "way to unreal". I'm sorry, but really, if she was rapped the idea of any guy touching her in any sexual way would freak her out. I have read most of your stories but this one part is just way off. I'm sorry and don't mean to be rude but that would NEVER happen in a thousand years. She would be repulsed and to freaked out to do anything for months, if not years; sometimes counseling as well. 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 42

really cool little story thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: sweet2you Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 16

I think this story started out good, but really floored me.

I think that you should stated in the outline/summary that their is a rape scene in the story. This give the reader a choice to read or not. I myself do not, will not read a story that has rape in it because it is my choice not to read them. This story doesn't even state that their is hurt, angst or drama in the chapters, so to my surprise I was floored and pissed.

As a writer you are free to write as you see and feel. As a reader I depend on the summary to let me know if the story/book will be enjoyable for me. This story I will not finish althoughbn I would like to know what happens at the end.

Thank you for taking the time to write and posting your stories.



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I am very sorry that it wasn't put in the summary about the violence that happened in the story. When we started posting the story it was as a weekly work in progress and once it completed, we didn't think to update the summary. I'm very sorry thta you will not be completing the story.  I hope that you will skim through the chapters and possibly read to the end. But if not thank you for reading and your review.

 

sher

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 42

I loved it so much. Thank you for the closure.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 42

Great ending to a great story thank you very much

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 41

How sweet!  So sad it is almost over.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 40

finely :)

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 41

aww that was sweet now that all have the same last name...

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 40

Glad you are back. I think that baby is going to be here quicker than expected. Why did they wait so long to get married?

Reviewer: smiley2204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 40

Hey,

 

great that you wrote more! Finally they're married, I'm really happy but I don't think that the baby will wait so much longer :D

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 39

so happy he told her what was going on

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 39

i am glad edward came through and told bella  the truth. like he said they will be married soon and they should not have any secrets

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 39

Why do I get the feeling something is about to happen.  By Edwards last few sentences, things seem to be going to good!!  I hope Im wrong.  Great update!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 39

yay!!!!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 38

Edward knew she would sell her child. It is so sad, but I am glad she is a crappy parent. Anthony is going to have a wonderful life now.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 38

well i was scared there for a minute that something was going wrong

I am glad things with Irina seem to go well. even though she is signing her rights for money i am thrilled that she is doing so.

ahhhhh anthony calling bella mom, ahhhh

 

Reviewer: notthemoats Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2011 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 38

I'm really enjoying your story, overall - lots of drama keeping me interested, not too much angst, etc. but I'm finding it jarring that Bella calls Edward "McScruff" ALL the time, and rarely calls him Edward. Over the course of several updates, I've found myself jolted out of the story from it, though I think it's been the most jarring with the lovemaking scenes. (I think it jolts me because I have to remember who McScruff is, since she rarely calls him by name when speaking to him.) I try not to write nit-picky reviews, and I hope this doesn't seem like one, but I thought if I was a writer, I would want to know that it was happening.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 38

okay... awesome loved the way she got 15 yrs and James got 20 not enough but very good....and rhen Anthony asking Bella is he could call her Mom was just perfect....  I really hope Irina takes the money!!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 37

Poor Anthony has grown up too fast. Hopefully, the longer he stays with Bella and Edward the kid will come back out in  Anthony. He does not need to be so stressed. I hope Tanya will sign her rights away so Bella can adopt him as well.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 37

What a loving family I hope they get to keep it with out having to deal with the bitch.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 37

ahhhh anthony is blessed to be placed in their family. he deserves to be happy and loved. he will be a great big brother

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 37

I really hope that it is smooth sailing from here on out!  They deserve to be drama free.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 37

awhh what a heart warming chapter  I'm really lving liitle Anthony!!! He's gonna make a wonderful Big Brother!!!

Reviewer: Lovestwilite Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 26

What an ass hole Edward is

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 36

I am so happy for Edward, Bella and Anthony. They are a wonderful little family with a new one on the way. They have some legal paperwork to do, but it should all work out.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 36

I was so excited for both babys Anthonys life will be a much better life now.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 35

She has to be pregers????

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 36

About damn time!  Now everything else needs to fall in place........... NO more Irina and def no more James!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 34

Yeah, Bella for standing up to Irina. I hope they lock her up and throw away the key.

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 16

Ok Why is Bella so calm she jujst got rape hellooooo

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 34

Good the wicked witch is going to jail that is a good place for her

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 33

Bella is over sensitive in this story. If Edward says anything that she doesn't agree with she is ready to run away from the relationship. She must not love him very much. This is a very emotional time for both of them. They might not always agree, but running away is not the answer. In this case, that is exactly what Irina wants to happen. She wants to break them up. Bella needs to be sweeter to Edward.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 33

Great story, I haven't decided if Im wanting Anthony to be Edwards or if I hope he is not and they adopt him. I think with what's happened if Anthony is Edward's Bella will feel even more insecure since she lost the baby.  They have had so many obstacles, it's time for happiness.



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 33

man edward you just keep getting yourself in the dog house. noone to blame but your stupid mouth.

man i am shocked you don't think first

i am surprised by all the chances bella gives you



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 33

She needed to kick him in his junk.



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Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 33

wow Holy Hell Edward control that mouth son, and Bella he did tell you about Irina...  mercy at least they calmed down and stayed....... poor lttle Anthony has been through so much...He needs the stability that Bella can provide for him...still on the fence with Edward and his personality... Love the story though and am very much  E x B pairing fan....  this girl has truly been through the ringer...



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 32

They need to get the custody of Anthony settle ASAP. Irina needs to go to jail for hit and run.  Edward and Bella need to get married as soon as she is healed and start working on another baby. They need to have some happiness. Irina needs out the their lives forever.



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Reviewer: dannysmitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 32

It's soo sad!! I'm kinda mad Edward was about to go apeshit about the not knowing about the baby. I wonder if she actually knew if would go crazy while shes in the hospital.

Poor Anthony! Irina needs to die..quite soon por favor



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 32

So sad lost the baby before they even knew about it Irinia must die.



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 32

wow so they lost a baby, how sad. it will hit her and i hope they hold irina responsible. she is the one that could have taken three lives and doesn't care. they need to go to court and take away her rights as anthony's mother. she is no mother and doesn't deserve that privilege

bella deserves that privilege. their will be other babies for edward and bella. in the future when they are through the grieving process and settled with anthony



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Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 32

well shit.... that is crazy



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 31

They need a restraining order against Irina and James. It will hopefully keep the 3 of them safe. I hope it is not too late.



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 31

Oh shit



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 31

oh my irina what have you done now. man he doesn't want you. you are delusional and need help. get over it. anthony needs a better home and really you do not want a kid. give him up and go live your life somewhere else.



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Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 31

I wonder if Irina has done something to Bella and taken Anthony......sure hope not.



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Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 31

holy hell does Bella ever get a damn break here...  poor little Anthony....



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 30

Poor kid he is in a good place now.  So I have to ask is Bella pregers??????

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 29

They need to pick up that boy and give him a gentle hug. Then they need to put a rush on the dna test, so they can make the living conditions permenant if he is Edward's child.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 29

Poor kid but his life will get better I hope even if he is not Edward's I hope they keep him.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 29

that poor child I'm not sure this is Edward's child but Bella has a huge heart and would protect any child...  So sad for Anthony!!!!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 29

man whether he was my kid or not i'd be taking him  home and keeping him. nobody deserves to be hit. pay them off and keep the kid. man those two should not even be allowed to have a kid or even be able to have sex to produce a kid. man oh man

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 28

When are they getting the blood test. If the child is his, I hope he asks for full custody. The child does not need to be with some one who doesn't want him.



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Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 28

man alive this poor girl can't catch a break even on her birthday... what a witch Ms Irina is  James certainly has a mouth on him



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 28

So Irina put James up to this????



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2011 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 27

Bella needs to realize that some people and Edward seems to be one of these people who need to be by themselves for awhile when they are upset. They have to think things through, calm down, and then they can talk. Bella needs to learn to respect this about him. She needs to stop getting upset about it. They just handle stress and anger differently. If she pushes it he might say things that he will regret because he is not in the right frame of mind. Does this child look anything like Edward?  There should be signs.



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 27

Edward need to go through anger managment to learn how to coup.  Irina doesnt deserve that child even if he is not Edwards.



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Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 27

goodness... so many scary creatures... James the psycho pseudo-rapist and Irina the Witch from Hell!!!  Poor Anthony, at this point I don.t care if the little dude is Edward's or not, I just want them to raise him in a fearfree environment!!! Bless his heart, he wanted to know what he did wromg...



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 26

i think bella forgives to easliy. edward is an ass and jumped to a conclusion. man she should have made him suffer. she has done nothing wrong and time and time again edward is the one screwing up or  it is his problems that are causing a rift. he is the one bringing the problems in their relationship. edward get your shit together



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 26

what a set up she is there with the pics before Bella even got home.  Edward needs to open his eyes wider.  The boys is James???



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 25

Irina must need money for something. Why would she wait so long? Maybe she doesn't want the child any longer and she knows Edward will take his child.

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 25

Good to know that now one likes Irina she is slimmy I feel sorry for her kid.



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 24

I hoped Bella locked the doors. Edward needs to do a background check on James. He will find out all he needs to know on James. Edward better get home soon. Bella knows that Edward is good. She needs to stop listening to creeps on the phone. What is wrong with her?

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 24

Irina has mental issues.  So is James married to Irina???



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 23

I am so glad that they worked through their rough patch. I think Bella would have recognized Edward's traits in Anthony if he really was Edward's. Edward has very distintive traits and why would she wait almost 6 years to tell him. I hope he is not Edward's child, just so he won't have to put up with the mother for years to come. Edward and Bella would love the child. He would be innocent.



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 23

Im so happy they reconected.  What is the bitch from hell going to do to Bella???  Is the boy really Edwards I dont think so???



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 23

well seems they are working things out

him irina or tanya it seems you are here to reck havoic. look out bella



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 23

looking foward to the next chapter 



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 22

wow edward seems different. he seems as if he has some deomns he needs to deal with or an anger issue. i hope bella knows what she is doing by staying with him



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 22

Im thinking he still needs his ass kick I love him but that is not right.



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 22

well i hope someone dose punch him



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Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 4

ohhh harmless flirting eyyy Edward????!!!!   such a good story



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Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 3

love it when fate and destiny take over

 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 5:35 AM Title: Prologue

thisnstory looks pretty good

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 21

Edward over reacted to the call and should not have hurt Bella, but Bella caused part of the anger by packing and trying to run away. She should have given him some space. He was wrong to be over agressive sexually. I hope they can work this out.



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Reviewer: alc1002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 21

Good chapter



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 21

Shit is still going to hit the fan when Alice sees the brusis.  I hope the baby is not his



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 20

Bella should not have packed and tried to packed. She should have just given him space. Running is never the way to go. You hold on to love.



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 20

What the hell was that his ex on the phone????  I still think Bella should go spend the night somewhere else to let him think about what he is doing.



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 20

man they have alot of talking. he was cruel. i would almost go to say he raped her. but he didn't force himself on her he took what he wanted brutally and got off without a care to her. but yet she still said she loved him. man messed up. she needs to be a little more honest in the relationship or it is not going to work. i do not know what dream land she is in. what the fuck edward where did all your anger come from and why take it out on bella. man you have some explaining to do.



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 13

I hope Bella will stop running now.  I had a feeling that picture was of Rose and Emmett.  Great job....thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 12

Wow...there is not going to be anything slow about these two.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 11

Well it is a start.  I am glad they are going to go slow and see what happens.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

I am glad Alice could help Bella understand Edward.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 9

I hope they talk soon.  I am sure this is a shock, but they have to talk.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 19

yah no std.  who is calling trying to cause trouble.



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 7

Of course she is right.  Is she surprised her plan is working???  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

I love them together.  The saying fits them perfectly.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 5

I can't believe he didn't catch up to her and she spent the whole curise hiding from him.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 4

Well I guess it was fliring, but I wouldn't call it harmless.  Edward is going to have to do some fast talking.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 3

Alice cracks me up.  She is so excited.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

It is sad that Charlie is gone.  These two are going to have a blast on this cruise.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 6:17 PM Title: Prologue

Alice is always behind things like this.  I can't wait to get caught up.  Thanks!



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 18

Bella is just so unsure of herself poor thing.



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 18

poor bella. he loves her but it is hard for her to believe he could want her. i hope she comes around. she just needs a little self esteem



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 17

I hope they send the creep away for along time. I am happy Bella decided to move in with Edward. They need each other especially right now.



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 17

cute chapter excited for them living together 



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 17

He is doing all he can do to prove that he loves her so much.



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

i am blown away. iwas expecting some sort of retaliation but wow was not expecting what happen to edward and bella. i am sorry for bella for what happened to her and i am hoping she presses charges and her and edward move on. i feel so bad. now it seems there may be a little problem in their relationship as to what happens and i hope not. wow just when i thought they where heading off to a happy relationship a big wrench was thrown into it. good luck guys. looking forward to how things work out from here



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 15

well go bella go. that was hawt

i am glad these guys are still together and trying to move on and see where they go

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 16

it would only happen to the 2 of them ! excited for the next chatper 



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