Date: 31 Mar 2015 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
Momma Bear Esme. I force to be reckon with. Now Edward is going to fallow her to Charlie and Sue's house to get her stuff and he will have to deal with a very piss off Charlie and Jacob. I wonder what else could be broken, maybe a arm or leg. God knows he deserves it but it takes 2 to let a marriage fail, I suspect Bella isn't as blameless as Edward wants her to think. Should be interesting when they start therapy.
Date: 31 Mar 2015 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow oh wow! Man do I love Alice!! Broke his nose twice! He sounds like a wimp!!! Can not even imagine what Emmett, Rose, Jake, Charlie and Esme are going to do if the pixi broke his nose. Do not think we have seen the last of that whore Tanya. I wonder how Jane and Alex fit in to this story?
Date: 04 Aug 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh, man!! Now I have to wait for updates!! I really like the twists and turns you are putting in this story. Perhaps I should read them with a seatbelt on haha :)
Date: 03 Aug 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
That was an excellent description of the fetal heartbeat on the sonogram! It made it very easy to hear in my head!
Well, at least she did not try to pretend she was pregnant or anything...I about had to come through the screen and slap a ho...
I know Edward is not blameless either...
Date: 03 Aug 2011 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
Haha, I lvoe the way you clarified that she ahd already flushed the toilet :)
Sorry I haven't reviewed before now, I got so into the story that I immediately wanted to know what happened next. I am very curious as to what will happen. Like it a lot so far!
Interesting. I really hope they can make it. It does happen, but it is also tougher than anything to do and hurts like everything for a really long time.
Date: 28 Jul 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 28
okay bella does not need this stress. poor jane she has gone through so much in her short life. i want her to be loved and grow up and be in a healthy family. bella and edward loved jane and with the baby coming it was turning out to be a hell of a little family. i hoe bella sticks to her guns and they look for jane before anyone else has a chance to take anything else from that poor girl
Date: 19 Jul 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 28
Poor Bella and poor Jane. i am hoping she is still alive and it was a mix up on the corner's part. I hope she isn't gone. All she ever wanted were people to love her and she finally found them. Fingers crossed Jane isn't gone.
Great chapter. I loved the ? POV. So much detail. Can't wiat to see what comes next.
Date: 18 Jun 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 27
OMG! First of al, i just found your story yesterday and I have been reading it. I think you might have written my favorite version of Bella. She's smart, sassy, emotional, forgiving and honest. I really like how you have written her.
Now, OMG! No, Jane. I was so excited for her to get a family that loved her and wanted what was best for her. This is so sad. I wonder how this will play into Bella. The poor woman has been through so much.
I hope you update soon.
Date: 15 Jun 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 1-Poem-
I read the latest chapter before I went to bed last night and cried myself to sleep. Hopefully Jane's "body" was found in time and she's still alive. If not, it will take everything Edward and Bella have in them to get through this, especially with a baby on the way.
We have to assume that the reason Bella couldn't reach that hateful case worker is because whoever took Jane injured or killed the case worker.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 14 Jun 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 27
OMG i am devasted. OMG i can't believe Jane is gone. that is what i am guessing of the way you put they found her body. i am so sad that she was finally going to be happy and found people who love her and she would be safe and it was taken from her in a flash. dam i ma not sure bella will be able to handle this blow. man oh man also when their lives are coming together they are thrown this shit. i am looking forward to as where we go from here. thank you for writing
Date: 14 Jun 2011 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 27
Sunny Beaches! What the hell was that? Found her Body?????? Shit Bella and Edward will never get beyond this is Jane is dead.... Shit!
Please pretty please with sugar on top... another chapter soon.... pretty pretty please...
TTFN Kathy xoxoxo
Date: 07 Jun 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 26 -Lemon Alert-
I think you did very well trying to write the citrus stuff. I have to admit I was re-reading the last few paragraphs to see where you left off and when you'd be updating again.
I really have learned to love this story. I'm really looking forward to seeing Edward & Bella back together and communicating better. I'm also looking foward to how well Jane will fit into the family.
Date: 18 Apr 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow!! I think that Carlie may have a big sister when she gets here. I am glad that Edward is feeling broke up about this because he has a real chance at doing something good here and I hope that he doesn't just walk away from it!
Date: 16 Apr 2011 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 26 -Lemon Alert-
Okay I will admit it, I honestly thought they were ACTUALLY making up some special time alone... Had no clue that it was a dream, poor Edward!!! Yes I do know he caused this and needs to be patient... rebuilding trust in a marriage can be a daunting task and he is right thought they to need to reconnect, which can be on several levels.
Date: 15 Apr 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 26 -Lemon Alert-
I agree sex needs sometime. They start talking and working together on small things. Put that together with planning out how they want the future. She just has to stay on board with living each new day with that newness and put the past to bed. When you go to the Dr talk there. At home work on now and the future using the new skills you are gaining.
Date: 15 Apr 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 25
Like I said before, if she wants her marriage then she has to quit bringing up his infidelity. She has to put it behind her. If she want to keep hitting him with it. It will never work. She just needs to say f..it and divorce. There is no other way. Constant fighting and hateful words will bring about more of the same.
She does it then he does it.
Date: 14 Apr 2011 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
Sometimes it takes another huge emotional upheaval in life to reset the eprspective on the first one. I am not sure if those feelings get dealt with properly though, but I am sure Siobhan would not let them sweep it under the rug.
Date: 14 Apr 2011 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
Holy Heck! Mother of 3 with ages ranging from 7 and under, you my dear do have a full plate. I do love this story though I must add, I had a hard time with the first few chapters and Edwards infidelity; BUT, with that being said, you are dealing with this in great way, I do appreciate you showing that marital vows say for better or worse and most of the time people forget that those vows don't say, "or until it gets to hard" sometimes learning to forgive (notice I did not say forget) is the greatest of all in loving someone, a truly repentant heart is worthy of forgiveness~
Great story! On to the next chapter
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 14 Apr 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 18
I dont really get Bella she is holding a grudge on her mom for not coming around but her husband cheats on her for 4 months and after a couple of weeks she moves back in with him, and now she just acts like nothing really happend with her and Edward. In one of the chapters she says that Edward just had lack of poor judgment but you dont cheat on your spouse for 4 months and say its poor judgment he knew what he was doing hell he even said he was never going to tell her and was sorry he got caught
Date: 14 Apr 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 24
I think Bella is Bella is beinga selfish bitch. She is willing to bring a kid into a house where she is on the outs with her husband, and that she wants to work things out with him. I understand that she wants to help everyone, but Edward is right, she can't help everyone. He does have a point they have to work on themselves before even thinking about if they want to adopt Jane. So I don't think taking in Jane is the right thing for them. They have a lot of things to work out between their marriage and with the baby on the way.
Date: 14 Apr 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
I have nEVER and I mean NEVER been so touched by a story as I have this one. This is a story about real life people. A GREAT story. It has Smiles, laughyes, tears, tragedy,anger and hope. I personally will tell everyone I know to read this. I know edward and Bella will fix this problem I really think the main problem is Bella insecurities, but wouldn't all women feel that way??? I hope Jane becomes part of the family and Carlie is born healthy and Bella and Edward fall back in love not just love eachother. I can't wait for more. Thank you for updating so quick, I have been on cloud 9 today!!!
Date: 13 Apr 2011 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thats messed up, I know now why Tanya was so hell bent on sleeping with Edward but he didnt have to take the bait, he is a loser. I cant wait to see how he feels knowing he slept with a women that was with a guy that caused the car accident that killed his baby
Date: 13 Apr 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well, they have started to heal. Problem... Charlie. He can not get involved and Bella should have never gone there with the information. Now she is healing and Charlie is still mad. I have been there. Step daughter her husband abused her. She has left him multilple times and gone back. Last time her father said if you go back this time don't call me. That was 4 years ago and she has never called him again. My step daughters huband was...........much, much,much worse. Cheating was a small part very small.
So, Ms Author ball is in your court.
Date: 13 Apr 2011 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 11
That really had to hurt having it throen in her face that she just can't have a normal happy pregnancy because she has to deal with his BS cheating. And who wouldn't think that he would do it again? I wouldn't trust him as far as I could throw him.
Date: 13 Apr 2011 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
She is a lovely person and I think her character strength is amazing to be able to work on forgiveness so quickly. That said, I am waiting for the anger. It's in there, it has to be andthere is no way she can just ignore it forever, The loss of their first child is heartbreaking. They went through a lot together already at such a young age. He obviously did not care as much about their relationship as she did though.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
I like the story so far I think Bella forgave Edward to soon. hell he didnt even know if ending it with tanya was a right choice at first He is an ass. I know this a Bella and Edward story but I wouldnt take his ass back, look at the way he looking at Siobhan all his exuses for cheating were lame and he knows it. I really do wish Bella had a backbone
Date: 12 Apr 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
Yes well This is all fine and good. I am with his mother, if he cheated once he will again. It is a line in your head you draw and don't cross. Your vows have to mean more to you than even your spouse. It is all about you. Is your word good? Do you mean what you say? Can you be trusted?
Edward, not so much. He comes first in his mind. He needs to acknowledge that. He did not want to deal with Bella. He said earlier he was bored.. another bad thing to say.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 10:44 PM Title: OUTTAKE - LEMON ALERT!
I am not trusting Edward. I think you have sent us some foreshadowing clues that he is not going to be able to do this without a second thought to never straying again. He watched her(Tanya) leave, he wondered if he would have gone back if Bella wasn't pregnant, and he impulsively broke it off with Tanya. It was not a well thought out decision to end the affair since he had been thinking of banging the skeeze on the way home to have dinner with his wife. He ended it as impulsively as he had started it. The sincereity of his love and remorse are in question! I cetainly hope that if he ever does this to her again that she would leave. I am so very curious to see where you take them.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1-Poem-
Charlie is still the Chief of Police and the law was broken in front of his house. If he cannot do his job, he needs to be replaced.
Its a story lol Edward feels he deserved it, so he isnt pressing charges.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
They beat him up so badly that he ended up in the hospital yet no assault charges were made!?
It is disturbing how stories in fanfiction are lacking in the accountability department.
Remember, Jake is like a son to Charlie, Charlie is the chief of police, Edward was uncontious and the man who cheated on his daughter and broke her heart... And there is more still to the story. :)