Date: 31 Oct 2011 7:42 PM Title: Club Hype
I really enjoyed this first chapter!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2011 1:17 PM Title: The Other Shoe
I don't mindthe sexual build, and enjoyed the cattiness of Tanya and Bella, but Iwill be imptiently waiting for the next update
Date: 26 Oct 2011 10:45 AM Title: The Other Shoe
Great job!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2011 2:36 PM Title: Las Vegas
seemed a little short but maybe because I read the others all at once. Guess things will get stickier
Author's Response:
No it actually was very short. This chapter is basically a set up chapter to the next few but I was way far behind updating on all of my other sites and this chapter was only about half as long as originally planed, but I wanted to get something out before my readers decided to roast me on a spit. You guys didn't have to wait for this chapter though :-) The next chapter should be up soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing :-)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2011 12:40 AM Title: Las Vegas
Really good chapter but way to short.
Author's Response:
I know. I'm sorry but this chapter was written when I was behind in posting on other sites and it was only half as long as I planed. There's more coming very soon I promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 4:00 PM Title: Pillow Talk
Love ia a dance and this a beautiful story. I hope to read more soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing the next chapter is coming tonight. I hope you enjoy day one of their Las Vegas weekend. :-) See you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 7:45 PM Title: Pillow Talk
so what did he force himself on her, get her knocked up, abandoned her and she ran away with a tail between her legs?
Author's Response:
There's a little more to it than that. You have to remember that she was a young woman, who had just lost her father, and then lost her only way of supporting herself. Many ballerinas (as least in my experience) don't come back from having a child. After having some "woe is me" time Bella realized the best way to stick it to those jerks in NY was to bounce back. I've really enjoyed reading your reviews as you've been reading through the story. The new chapter is going up tonight I hope you enjoy Day one of Vegas.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 7:01 PM Title: Party Like it's 1950
great job and I am almost caught up to you
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 6:30 PM Title: Amazing Grace
gotta love a man good with babies or animals
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 6:19 PM Title: First Dates and Second Chances
awesome hope they kick Newsome's butt he is such a jerk
you deserve more reviews!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 6:01 PM Title: Running Up That Hill
Thus a really enjoyable read
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chances
he will make a great daddy and not bad on the eyes either
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 5:47 PM Title: It takes Two to Tango
guess that is her passion she s holding
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 3:37 PM Title: Helping Hands
who is Maggie?
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:52 PM Title: Rain Checks
they will help each other I am sure
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:45 PM Title: The Way She Moved
you should not have to beg for reviews
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:36 PM Title: Talking to the Dancing Gods
yay
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:32 PM Title: Opening Up
I like a plot too
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:25 PM Title: Thinking
never bet against Alice
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:14 PM Title: Breakthrough
Alice to the rescue
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:08 PM Title: Friendly Surprises
Team Edward and I like dance details
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:02 PM Title: Small Worlds
I am sure they will get past it
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 12:57 PM Title: Pillow Talk
Great story!
Author's Response:
Aww I'm glad you are liking it. Thank you for reading and reviewing the next chapter is coming tonight. I hope you enjoy day one of their Las Vegas weekend. :-) I hope to see you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 12:43 PM Title: Club Hype
great start
Date: 21 Oct 2011 8:50 AM Title: It takes Two to Tango
I suspected something like that, It would be the only thing that could hurt her deeply (it`s from that guy, Jonathan, right?).
I just couldn`t put it it in the time frame you gave us in story , so I just abandoned the idea. Glad I was right, and that there is nothing worse than that.
Date: 21 Oct 2011 6:35 AM Title: The Way She Moved
I`m glad that french terms for classical ballet movement has not been replaced by common english, since my ballet lessions 35 years ago. It would be so prosy. I find them elegant, delicat and so ....fluid. I had never override not to be able to continue with ballet...unfortunatelly feet cramps never let me stay in pointe shoes, sniff...
It took me time to copie-past all those terms in Google pictures, but it was worth...
And where did you dig up that amazing clip with Seminova dancing on Demo. Pure ecstasy. Thank you,thank you, thank you...
I wander how many readers truely comprehend Bellas name - beautiful swon. You did.. And you transfuze it in wonderfull story.
Date: 21 Oct 2011 3:58 AM Title: Opening Up
I think you are doing just fine. Actions and lemons are fine, but these stories ARE about emotions. Emotions are need to be exposed. It` just like someone`s watching some erotyca film without plot. Is`s god in first 5 - 10 minutes. After that it`s just boring. You can get that action all over the internet. But action finely and subtletly incorporated with adequate plot - I think that`s what we all seek out onthese pages.
Date: 21 Oct 2011 2:34 AM Title: Friendly Surprises
Team EDWARD , of course. Allways had, allways will. But I also think Jacob is necessary in every Twilight story as counterbalance, as dear friend, you said it, as her sun. Glad you find it apropos to put him on the other plate of scales.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2011 8:46 PM Title: Pillow Talk
I have to say that I am sure that Bella will get though this with the help of the Cullens and Edward in particular.
Cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
Maybe....*looks around innocently* Thank you for reading and reviewing the next chapter is coming tonight. I hope you enjoy day one of their Las Vegas weekend. :-) I hope to see you next chapter.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 5:37 PM Title: Small Worlds
You know, with just a few words you spiced the story more then those who need to brag half of chapter o his "boner" or something like that. Althought I wouldn`t complain a little longer chapters
Date: 20 Oct 2011 5:19 PM Title: Bronze
Well , James was certainly surprise, but I`m looking forward thinking he`s gonna spice the story.
And, you know that ballet dancers have beautifull bodies. I`ve never seen any sport that can so complitelly develop man`s body like dance (maybe athletic). They are just beautiful. Just look at that fine piece in the ending scene of the film Billy Eliot performing main role in The Swan lake. I coud just hang him on the wall to look at him forever.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2011 4:17 PM Title: Club Hype
I`ve allways tought that good dance is forplay to something else, I mean sex is just natural sequel to hot dance. I`ve never knew, you know when you look those clips from dance contest, how those dancers DON`T jump on each other. If I could move like them I certainly would.
You certainly got my attention.
I`ve have this story in my favourite box for ages to read , and just don`t know what took me so long to start reading.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 3:46 PM Title: Club Hype
I really enjoy this story. I really enjoy that the characters are different from the originals and that you gave them a new identity and I love all the suspense! I'm eager to see how each coming chapter unfolds. Keep writing! I'm eagerly waiting for your next update!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2011 4:42 AM Title: A Family Affair
Wonderful chapter, never enough as always. Loved it, loved it, loved it.
I have a crystal ball and lets see what it says is going to happen in Vegas... hmmm, it is telling me a bit of dancing on and off the floor, in and out of sheets and a whole lot of fun!
I shall have to wait and see if the ball is correct!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 6:57 AM Title: Party Like it's 1950
OMG I have to say, it has been a while since a story like this has drawn me in to the point of staying up till 2am to finish it.
I really so hope that Bella goes to Vegas and I hope a compromise can be met. Even if Esme and Carlisle go with them.
I was wondering when Jasper will make an appearance??? It seems that Alice is the only one with out anyone at the moment.
Keep up the wonderful work and I can not wait to read more... also I am pimping you ass out with all the stories I edit for.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
aww Thank you! The next chapter will probably be up soon. I'm aiming for mid week. I'm actually a chapter behind my FF page so i'm playing catch up over here. Surprisingly you're the only one to ask about Jasper and Alice's suspisious single status. I have plans for Mr. Jasper that have been in the works since chapter one, you'll see what I mean soon and hopefully it won't disapoint. And by all means pimp away! any and all is greatly appriciated. Glad you're liking it.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2011 6:17 AM Title: First Dates and Second Chances
oh this was such a good chapter really leaves you drooling like Bella at the end of the date... so now we know who his dance partner was... yep got to see our couple burn it up on the dance floor till next chapter Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
sorry it's taken me so long to respond. Thanks for the review. I hope you're still enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2011 8:43 PM Title: First Dates and Second Chances
omg you are a great writer i loe your story i await the next chapter i am so glad where they are heading i love this couple i feel for them both they were both hurt and great together
Author's Response:
I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to respond and thank you so much for your kind words. I hope you're still enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2011 2:35 PM Title: Running Up That Hill
I love the story! Is Edward blind? Johathan is the dad. Right? :)
Author's Response:
Sorry it's taken me forever to respond between real life and computer issues it's been hard. I hope you are still likeing the story and as for John...you'll just have to wait and see *smiles innocently*
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chances
omg thank god i am so happy that he came and that she will talk to him she needs hima dn he needs her they will be good for each other you are a great writer keep it coming i await the next chapter
Date: 11 Jun 2011 12:39 AM Title: It takes Two to Tango
Oh wow, a baby! What the hell?!?! I hope in the next chapters you give us some background story cause me to have more questions. I hope to see some answers soon! Thank you for posting!
Author's Response:
yes, do not fear the next few chapters reveal pretty much everything. Bella still holds back a little but for the most part she opens up and I'll be able to talk more about the timeline after that. I hope to post either tomorrow or Sunday. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2011 2:57 AM Title: It takes Two to Tango
WOW!
Author's Response:
good wow or a bad wow? Thanks for the review.
Date: 07 Jun 2011 11:46 PM Title: It takes Two to Tango
Not what I was expecting but her being away from dance for about a year now makes some sense, maybe. You haven't said it was hers yet ;)
Author's Response:
I'll be able to talk more about the timeline after the next chapter. but thanks for the review hopefully i can explain it all in the A/N.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2011 8:17 PM Title: It takes Two to Tango
omg please tell me that they will talk and that she will give edward a chance and explain he situation and that the baby is a friend of hers she is sitting or if it is hers that that guy raped her and disgraced to the others i await the other chapter
Author's Response:
All will be shown in the next chapter. Don't worry it should be posted either tomorrow or Sunday I don't want to keep you waiting for too long :-)
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2011 7:37 PM Title: It takes Two to Tango
I knew it even though it didn't say that but the way she acted I knew she had been pregnant and either had a miscarriage or she had the baby when she asked how she was doing. I can't wait for next chapter and find out more of what happened.
Author's Response:
Okay i'm totally giving you a shout out the next chapter because you are totally the ONLY one that caught that! I'm impressed. I tried to drop subtle hints about it and I'm glad someone got it! Thanks for the review. I'm glad your likeing the story!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2011 11:10 PM Title: Helping Hands
omg i am so waiting for them to get it started and she needs to open up to him soon and then they can start with little lovin movin on you are a great writer i await the next chapter
Date: 06 Jun 2011 3:48 AM Title: Helping Hands
Love the story so far! Can't wait to see where you go with it.
Date: 03 Jun 2011 10:10 AM Title: Rain Checks
Love the update! E's pov is my favorite!
Author's Response:
I love EPOV as well unfortunately Eddie and I have a love hate relationship. It seems that I've done something to piss him off because he's no longer on speaking terms with me. That's not a good thing since there needs to be another chapter from his POV...anyway...thanks for the review!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 10:01 AM Title: The Way She Moved
Great story!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2011 3:56 AM Title: Rain Checks
Love the story!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:41 AM Title: Rain Checks
omg edward is finally getting somewhere and what did that asshole in new york do to her i want him destroyed completely i await the next chapter you are a great writer
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. The next chapter is posted now :-)
Date: 02 Jun 2011 9:30 PM Title: Rain Checks
Well I am glad he got the answer he wanted that she was having dinner with a girl and not some guy.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: 02 Jun 2011 9:08 PM Title: Talking to the Dancing Gods
He's so sweet bringing her lunch and remembering how she likes her hamburger. ahhhh.
Date: 26 May 2011 8:59 AM Title: Thinking
Love the story!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2011 2:19 AM Title: Thinking
omg she needs to let himin she is mean he needs to understand and she needs to give him a chance i await the next chapter
Date: 24 May 2011 5:07 PM Title: Thinking
Well at least they are getting a little bit closer. And the only thing Edward could really do was sit with her. She will tell him if she wants too. I just hope she finds her strength to tell Jacob that she doesn't have feelings for him. I was just thinking about you and wondering if you were still writing. I am so glad that you are.
Date: 03 May 2011 4:32 AM Title: Breakthrough
i love this story and cant wait for the update
Date: 29 Apr 2011 8:54 PM Title: Breakthrough
hey
great story...
Bella thinks, Edward hates her... I don't really think so..
but maybe she'll get the point sometimes...
bye
Lil
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 4:30 PM Title: Breakthrough
well seems they are both living in smoke and mirrors. maybe if they don't shy away they can find some happiness. i guess i will have to keep reading to see
Date: 26 Apr 2011 3:44 PM Title: Breakthrough
Well its about time that Edward realize he needed to do something. I dont know anything about this thread that authors keep talking about and I know I am missing a lot of teaser but I tried to figure it out but I just couldn't. So I hope I get at least one teaser.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 3:32 PM Title: Friendly Surprises
Well I am a team Edward all the way. No Jacob at all. I mean its ok for him to be a FRIEND ONLY but thats it. I guess I was probably one that mentioned the short chapters. Sorry about that, but I like to really get into a story and sometimes it gets frustrating to have to keep stoping and waiting for another chapter. lol. But I understand it. I think Bella did the only thing she could have done and left the diner I mean I would have too. I wonder how he will be able to make it up to her.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2011 8:09 PM Title: Friendly Surprises
omg i can not stand jacob i really wanted her with edward please tell me this gets better i so am not liking this so far now and it was stupid of edward to act that way with her i hope this gets better i await the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 8:16 PM Title: Friendly Surprises
I love the story and brilliantly written. I just wish the chapters were longer. :)
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:15 AM Title: First Day
well I am hoping it is Edward. I must say the chapters are very short.
Date: 14 Apr 2011 4:30 PM Title: Bronze
uh-oh i think poos bella is about to have an heart failure
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:06 AM Title: First Day
Is it Mike? LOL I'm hoping for Edward. Great Chapter!
P.S. I never had a doubt whether this story was worth the time. It's definitely worth the time! ♥
Date: 08 Apr 2011 8:09 PM Title: First Day
Gowd fast update...hihi i think i'm in love(A) i can't wait for the next one, haha can't think of anything new after my last revieuw so:P
Date: 08 Apr 2011 6:43 PM Title: Club Hype
:) you just put my most favorite things together..and i for one can't wait to see what happends
Author's Response:
well I'm glad i could bring a smile to your face. I love dance and the stories you can tell by a series of movments astounds me. I'm going to update as soon as I finish reading through the chapter once more. Thank you for the review and i hope to hear from you again.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2011 1:30 PM Title: Club Hype
I liked this very much! I would love to see where you take it from here. There are not many stories that have Edward and Bella as dancers of any form. It also seems difficult to find one that is worth reading. I am thinking that yours is worth reading. :) I hope there is an update soon...
♥♥♥
Author's Response:
Well I hope that you find my story was worth your time. I'm updating sometime this afternoon hopefully I just need to read through it once more. Thank you for your review.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2011 11:02 PM Title: Club Hype
Very good start! Please update as soon as you can! I can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
why thank you very much I'm updating as soon as I finish writing back to my wonderful reviewers such as yourself ;-)