Date: 06 Dec 2011 2:29 PM Title: Bridge Over Troubled Waters
I am soooo glad you wrote "chapter 2". That was such a long time between 1 & 2 and I just happened on it accidentally. I love Carlisle/Bella stories. Also Jasper/Bella. Will you do another chapter or is this it? They are such nice, long chapters, too. Gee, I feel better now. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 23 May 2011 12:49 PM Title: Bridging the Gap
THis was a great story. It was more of a short story than a one shot. It gave so much more info and spanned over more time than most O/S. Also there was a lot more story than just bits and pieces of events. I liked the interaction between the characters. There is certainly potential to become a multichapter story, but if it never turns into that it is still a wonderful short.
Date: 03 Apr 2011 8:41 PM Title: Bridging the Gap
I love how they let things happen for them. They are such a great pair and I never though I would be saying that. I am such an Edward/Bella girl, but this Edward did not deserve Bella. Great story....thanks so much!!!
You're not the only person to tell me i made them love B with someone other than Edward...I'm glad you liked it becasue I enjoyed going outside of my normal comfort zone with this fic.
Date: 03 Apr 2011 1:01 PM Title: Bridging the Gap
Great story. This could be the foundation of something much longer. IMO
maybe at some point...most of my one-shots get that reaction, so we'll see if I can expand this, don't know when it would be, though. Thanks for the review and for taking the time to read my story.