Date: 02 May 2020 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Small World
The first half of the chapter was pretty personal to me. I'm Indian so I enjoyed the Indian dinner with Butter chicken and nice touch that they both wore sarees. I feel one takes their own culture for granted I guess. It's only when you go out and meet people you realise how others perceive cultures. I don't know if I'm making sense or not. One year my family and I were in Kansas; I was really young but my mother tells me they would all share their recipes and it was always butter chicken that was in demand from my mom. And seriously a good buttery naan is our all time guilty pleasure.
I even enjoyed the mango lassi part because seriously I didn't know it was such a big hype. We were traveling in Japan few months back and hosted a dinner at the Indian Restaurant and the locals went crazy over mango lassi. It's tasty no doubt.
I'm really enjoying the story. Love the details. I can't believe it took my this long to come across such a treasure of your story. Enough said I'm gonna continue reading and looking forward to see how you make Edward squirm!!
Date: 21 May 2016 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Recipes
Thank you for your story.
Date: 17 May 2015 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Recipes
AWESOME!!!! story ;) thanks so much for sharing this on here with us ;D
Date: 23 Apr 2015 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Recipes
Hi Peppah, AWESOME story, please tell me when you are going to start posting 'Brother Edward '.....can't wait, please hurry....LOL
Ruby,
Date: 23 Apr 2015 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 43 - Epilogue
Hi ya Peppah, this was one awesome story and I hated for it to end....could you please tell me when will you start posting 'Brother Edward '? I can't wait, please hurry...LOL
Ruby Ratcliff
Date: 27 Feb 2015 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here
Love this story so much cant count how many times ive read it this story helped pull me thru some dark times Thank you so much I hope someday you will write another
Date: 25 Feb 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Recipes
TY for writing and sharing with us all
Date: 25 Feb 2015 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 49 - Outtake 3: Halloween
ooh wow yummy naughty public play.
Date: 25 Feb 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 48 - Outtake 2: Shopping for Bella's Birthday Gift
I was going to say this was a repeat chapter, but I see you've added to it.
Date: 25 Feb 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 47 - Wild Outtake 1: Emmett Meets Rosalie
Sadly the drunk drivers get off way to easy in my opinion. So glad Em got there in time
Date: 25 Feb 2015 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 46 - Futuretake Two
Woo Hoo BABY TIME!!! LOL for her scaring him with the cravings. Learn fast Edward. Pregos are crazy. hee hee. ROFL for Alice's exuberance. a whole bottle of scotch? really boys? hee hee for the pool sharks.
EEk Twins. awww for Rose's baby. aww again for 2 girls and 2 boys.
What a nice surprise from the 'rents. Gotta love Alice and her predictions.
The Reckoning huh? Love it. Ugh Chelsea and Mike. Thought Mike got a "visit" and gave up. Huh guess not. Glad they gave Leah a chance. Good on her for her new start. hee hee for Bella putting the fear of god into Hayley. Gotta love pop tarts.
aww for all the kids going off to school together. aww for Ant protecting lily. Wow Tanya has really grown up.
Ant and Lily huh? Wonder how the law would feel about that. Meh what do I know. LOL for Jazz and his GS trackers.
Date: 25 Feb 2015 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 45 - Futuretake One
lol for Alice embarrasing her with sex day. Kinda reminds me of Love Days from Lolashoes Light series.
Aww for E wanting a little Cullen Army.
Cool newspaper reviews. ROFL for the oatmeal.
Sweet valentine's surprises. Love that they are taking care of Garrett that way. LOL for them teasing each other at dinner and before dinner. ROFL for edward grinding his teeth at the old couple. Yummy end!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2015 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 44 - Outtakes and Futuretake Teasers
Glad Em got to her. Stupid teen boys.
lol for Alice having to rein in Edward for Xmas presents.
oooh Naughty HI time.
LOL yea sometimes hard to pee when you really need too.
Date: 25 Feb 2015 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 43 - Epilogue
Sweet of E to make sure A is taken care of. Jasper is so wonderful with her. The vancouver zoo sounds nice. Dress sounds lovely. Wonderful surprise the men did coming to NY. Alice is a force of nature.
I was thinking that is what you were going to do to Alistair. Glad Jess told Mike to F off.
Wedding sounds wonderful. Glad all their friends were around to witness it. Sweet gesture for the wedding gifts.
Wow cool opportunity for the kids.
Date: 24 Feb 2015 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 42 - To the Plate, and Garnish With Lemon
Kinda glad they don't have to worry about Renee getting off or out. Wonder why Phil would want the ashes??? hmm maybe he could dump them in the ocean or something? Wonder what Alistair's story will be?
I'd want to get rid of the ring now too. ewww. ROFL for Alice "roughing it". aww poor billy. wow no fingerprints either.....Jasper is a ghost himself.
Think Edward is going to be nutso with B out of his sight for awhile.
Aww poor Billy. At least she and B's kids can say goodbye. Glad that Jessica is doing better.
Date: 24 Feb 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Glad Sue thought of clothes for B. LOL for Jasper's call to Godfrey. Just call her Gretel for leaving a trail of clothing for them to find. Think they need to stop with the horns though...advertising thier positions. Love Jasper's toys. Glad they got Quil so far. Renee is an idiot. Evil trying to end it there. ugh Stupid cops. Go Bad Ass Alice. oooh I wanna know what badge that is!!!! ROFL you crushed renee?!?!?! Probably the best thing since she would have used an insanity defense.
Date: 24 Feb 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
Wow Renee has kinda thought it out huh? glad for those stupid doves!!! Renee and quil need to live so they can rot in jail!!! They should call the forks cops or at least get Leah and/or Jessica to do it for them. They should be able to get to the cabin fast. I'm sooooo loving Jasper. ugh no Edward...you are gonna get yourself hurt!!!
Wow B is so smart leaving a trail. Glad Jared and Laurant are there to help. Hope they embarras those lame cops in seattle.
wow they killed the birds?!?! jeez.
Glad B is working on Quil. Sigh he is quite delusional. Glad Jared's friends came through
Date: 24 Feb 2015 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
hmmm I'm now thinking that Renee dumped Billy in the road which is why Bella "crossed the river" to get to him to help. wow the coroner is dragging his feet too? jeez louise. Ah alistair and renee. Sigh. Than goodness the Olympia police force are helping.
My goodness. the twists and turns you are doing are making me dizzy. hmm if not renee, Leah maybe???
hmm Maybe Renee paid off the cops? Well at least the girl isn't Leah.
Date: 24 Feb 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
oh no Bella's been taken!!! mike working with Renee maybe???? ACK!!! Wow those cops are real pieces of sludge. wow they won't even look for her?!?! Glad Jasper has contacts. maybe Alistair surprised whoever was taking bella? oh wow Billy is hurt? wowsers you are killing me!!!
Date: 24 Feb 2015 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Blanched
yey she said yes!! hmm Aro is a smooth operator alright. What a wanker. Glad they overheard A and T and set them straight as well as Chelsea and Mike.
ROFL for Carlisle and Esme.
Wow these dreams are getting scary. You've got me mucho worried. Glad phil is alive. wonder why Phil didn't call to warn B if he thought she was unstable though.
Ugh the River. Who the hell....its a him?? Mike??
Date: 24 Feb 2015 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
Don't blame B for being upset at A not telling her. What if someone did a Psycho and stab her in the shower. aww for the men's reactions.
Ugh Skankya has arrived. Parasite--Haahaa.
Skankya is pathetic and Aro need to be knocked off his pedestal and soon. What a jerk.
Aww what a sweet proposal
Date: 24 Feb 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener
Wow sure hope it was the alcohol talking and not a mental breakdown.
Yummy bath and massage time. Garrett seems like a nice guy. Sweet that they offered the cabin to him and Katrina. Glad the brothers were happy with the menu.
hmm thought Leah got over her hate with what Billy told her. Ah well. While I love some good erotia, ewww for tentacle erotica. ugh for Quil and Mike. Jasper is scary efficient.
Sounds like B and Renata make a great team. Glad Jared was just drunk dialing. aww for Alice's interference. hmmm I wonder if Jessica is on the up and up....Quil is just gonna be trouble I bet.
hmmm who is Aro's date....Not Renee I hope. hmmm a decoy dress huh? wonder what that is about. wow someone left her alone to shower? soooo not good.
Date: 23 Feb 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Decisions and Surprises
lol for them both looking for jewelry at same time. Glad B loved it.
Sneaky making us think he was only getting the dress jewelry. awww for moving in together.
Wow B has been doing a great job with the party planning.
ooh they broke in the truck!!! Love seeing her little green monster coming out too.
Holy Crap Jared?!?!
Date: 21 Feb 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Rolling Boil
Em is such a trip. Silly Alice trying to talk to her with J in the room too. Glad Jasper is gonna put out feelers. Waiting for the other shoe to drop with Renee. Ugh Aro is getting almost as creepy as Renee.
LOL Felix is funny. yummy office time. hmm Alice's is beginning to scare me. hmmm too many possibilities. Def unnerving.
Renata seems wonderful. LOL about Chelsea being in the cheapo seats. hmm What is Aro hiding indeed?
Date: 21 Feb 2015 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Hot Sex, Cold Sex, Chair Sex, Car Sex
Glad Billy finally set Leah straight. Quil is a real arse. Glad Leah dumped him. our two kids are insatiable huh? Great night at the cabin with J&L. oooh the car fantasy. Yummy.
Date: 20 Feb 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Let's Get Physical
Rofl for quil and leah. Yummy times all over, in and out of the Cabin.
Date: 20 Feb 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Forks
Yummy way to wake up. I think I still would have called the cops too. ah well. Wow Aro really needs to get a clue.....or a frying pan upside the head. Loved what she did at the cafe with the phone numbers. hmm wonder who left the red roses. ah Renee. Where is Phil I wonder? Glad E is there to support her.
grrr stupid renee trashing the house. Glad Mark was efficient in getting Renee flagged. hmmm no Phil? wonder if Renee killed him off or something. Ugh stupid Oregon police.
First full on lemony time gets you a dance:Date: 19 Feb 2015 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie
yey Go Bella. canx the skanks funds!!! yea her leaving satidfied....she found B's box, I just know it. wow Biatch stole clothes too? I'd be calling the cops on her skanky arse. AND I'm surprised that she didn't destroy what clothes she left. hmmm Bella should call Phil. hee hee
Great BBQ to get her mind off stuff. yummy elevator ride.
ROFl for the funny stories at the end
Date: 19 Feb 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
Holy crap.....Renee is one greedy, skanky biatch. 200K? jeez. hmm why do I think that Phil doesn't know what Renee is up to??? or maybe he's left her skanky arse?
noooo B. Don't give her anything!!!! ugh.
Wonder what Alice is up to? ooooh I love the set up that she's doing. So glad Bella threw her out. But i still think she's gonna steal Bella's little box.
Date: 19 Feb 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
Wow Renee is a real piece of work. Jeez. After that last comment, her arse should have been directed to the door with a helpful shove on her back.
oh My for the Esme revalation. Uh oh... renee in the club??? that isn't going to go well. Well I guess for free food and drinks, she was tolerable. Wonder who she's gonna try crap with at the pool party though?
Wow she actually admitted all that to Alice? wow she has no shame does she? Oh no.... I just thought of something. Renee is going to find that cash she has stored in her drawer isn't she? oh my.
Date: 19 Feb 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Approaching the Boiling Point
Glad She and bella got to talk things out. aww sweet of E to take care of her that way. Glad Bella is still volunteering even with Rose being there too. hmmm Aro is getting really annoying already. Perfume huh? her stalker? Renee? Leah? Jessica? You're driving me nuts here.
Love that he is so protective.
Ah Renee..... this can't be good
Date: 18 Feb 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Antidote
Wow Skankya is a real piece of work. Glad B went back and talked it out with E. awww for the yummy orgasms and the 's
Date: 18 Feb 2015 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 24 - A Little Poison in the Pot
Hmmm wondering about the breakin at the restaurant and her loft. Wondering now if those two are involved...but how would they get keys since there was no damage done for the breakin.
Glad they are still making time with Alice. glow in the dark condoms huh? lol. Wonder if Bella is on the pill or anything esp for regulating her period. LOL I thought the same thing about the eagles, or at least they could have flown Frodo there. aww for them not quite ready for the ILYs yet. Glad they had
"the talk", but I would think it awkward for her to see carlisle like that. But thats just me. LOVE that Jim Croce song.
hmm wonder who was in the alley....you've got my head spinning with guesses.
Ugh Skankya..... noooo she's gonna run?!?!?!?! oooh she's gonna follow her....interesting.
Glad Alice read him the riot act
Date: 18 Feb 2015 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Building a Flavour Base
Glad she's finally feeling better about herself.
Ugh hate women like Chelsea. Makes us all look like skanks. They handled it well though. Yummy couch time though. LOL for Princess Bride references. Glad he told her about Skankya.
Date: 18 Feb 2015 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Provocative Poach
lol loving all their dreams. ewww Nasty Victoria. hee hee for Esme knowing about outback. LOVE esme putting the Trakkers in their place. Ugh Chelsea is pathetic and so unprofessional.
Smart advice from Jasper. lol for Cartoon Edward appearing. ack they are both going to explode. LOL
Date: 18 Feb 2015 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Slow Simmer
Glad E was cool with Alistair. woo hoo for successfull service.
hmm having that much cash is soooo not a good idea. aww he is so sweet with her on the roof. And the next morning too. LOL for E going Gaga over her truck. hmm lessons indeed.
Date: 18 Feb 2015 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Kiss Me, Baby
Glad E is going to do the event. Glad Jasper came by to walk her home. Nice that Carlisle gives back and Rose and now B too. ewww for Victoria.
Glad Aro took the news well and still wants him to do the charity event. awww for Jared and Laurent.
Glad she has a fully operational restored beast and not the POC that she had in the books. hmm the river dream...wonder what that means.
hmmm renee huh? wonder what her deal is? Anticipaiton indeed. LOL for him asking what the date is over and over.
Ugh for Aro and his staring. aww for nervous little virgin B.
Just the thought of seafood....ewwww. Skipping past the eating. hmm why do I get a bad feeling about this critic?
oooh thier first fight and first kiss...YEY!!!
Date: 18 Feb 2015 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Swingers, Sweet Potato Pie and PMS
Ugh Glad e gets b to stay with him. Sleezy James. So glad Alice has Jasper to help. Hmmm so not James? wonder who? Tyler? Leah? I'm leaning towards Tyler at moment because of the restaurant stuff.....but how would he get a key to her loft? hmmm. ROFL for kiss blocked by the locksmith. I was wondering why B wasn't helping with the kitchen situation, but I think she could help with prep though.
Sigh...she needs to work on her self esteem. LOL for PMS. Glad E reassured her.
Date: 18 Feb 2015 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 18 - A Swan Can Break a Man's Arm, You Know
Go Bella. LOVED seeing her take out Slimy James. Glad Alice told Jasper. Aww for Jared and Laurent. Ugh for James and his snooping. Creepo
Date: 18 Feb 2015 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Sunflower of My Life
So glad Rose was there to help Bella. Aww for poet E. What a wonderful date.
Date: 18 Feb 2015 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Confessions
Dear Lord. Quil, Mike and Tyler are all delusional if they think they have a shot. Hmmm Who was in the restaurant, because I know there was. Probably James.
Yey for Date. ROFL for her kiss blocking him
Date: 18 Feb 2015 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Anticipation
Those two are going to explode with all these sex dreams. LOL. ooo I wanna know how long Billy has known too.
Date: 18 Feb 2015 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Celebrations and Epiphanies
Great meal. Glad they invited her. LOL for everyone cockblockin thier first kiss. Ugh Renee is a nasty piece of work. Surprised she even bothered to call her at all. hmm the thing with her door and edward hearing a noise doesnt bode well. Wow Jess is a piece of work too. aww for E's flowers and note. ROFL for the cherry. Wonderful presents. Jasper is hilarious
Date: 17 Feb 2015 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Moving Forward
Of course it had to be Mike cockblocking her. She did tell him she wasn't interested in a relationship with him. Stupid puppy.
ewww James makes my skin crawl.
PS I love ST and LOTR too.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Smooth Moves
lol for Alice cockblocking her dreams. Looks like E was finally going to claim B. ACK Who cock blocked them this time.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Catharsis
At least Alice got him to admit stuff there at the end. The mike thing is going to backfire on B I'm afraid
Date: 13 Feb 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Slumber and Awakening
B needs to be careful how she handles things. Too much and he'll pull away way to much/fast.
LOL for Bella's special sauce. ROFL for blow job advice. Naughty E with eavesdropping. You know what they say about eavesdropping E?
Date: 13 Feb 2015 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Small World
Yummy sounding dream. Sneaky women with the stocking trick. lol. Alice is def a master manipulator. Bella is def turning into a great cook. Glad Bella turned it back around onto him on the roof.
I've never care much for IN and Out. I prefer Smashburger.
ooof for E taking her for a drive. She def knows her cooking and her ideas are really cool. awww sounds like the little green monster is coming out of E.
Date: 13 Feb 2015 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Things You Learn at Brunch
Ugh James huh? hate sleezy men like that who feel entitiled to do what they want. Esp sucks that he is all of their landlord. LOL Em is truly Em. Go little chef Bella (channelling ratatouille ). Glad Em was there for Rosie. Cute Alice/Jasper story.
Date: 13 Feb 2015 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Why He Is the Way He Is
Wow E really is messsed up. Wonder what Skankya and Whoren did to him. Oh wow those two skanks give us normal women a bad name. Alice needs to be careful with how much she pushes.
hee hee E has it bad.
Gawd I wish I made that much in my real life job. LOL.
Date: 13 Feb 2015 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Reveal
LOL I used Redtube for inspiration for my solo nights quite often (and Literotica too).
lol For Bella knocking E off her feet. Go assertive Bella with the Snotty E. Go Bella for her great first night!!!!
oooh E's got it bad.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Makeover
I'd agree with Alice about the rules, except for her dad's flannels. Glad B brought that up. Dayum wish I had the money to spend on clothes and such like that. Hey now, nothing wrong with peasant skirts. Insane $$ spent, but I guess if you have it.......
Ugh Alice having that blowout with E is soooo not good. Wow so much for a hair cut? I whine at paying $100. LOL Love when your card holder actually cares to call about odd purchases. :-)
Ugh Hate snotty sales people. aww slumber party. E is being snotty too. hmm bet Leah knew.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations
Serving in stilletos?! think B would have a broken ankle on day 1. LOL. Glad B is going to think about it at least.
I KNEW IT. Why the F does he feel the need to share that?!?!?! I'd be pissed at him too though. Even with Jake coming clean, don't think I could forgive either guy.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Failed Marriage
Glad Alice is there for her. Wow if I was Emily's family, I'd be suing the tribe for that wimpy "jurisdiction". Yea....the more I read I think Jake and Jared were lovers. awww Eddie likes her muffins. Fashionista Alice is going to overhaul our girl....YEY
Date: 12 Feb 2015 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Do You Remember Me?
Grungy Mary Poppins??? LOL Glad Alice remembered her. Really glad she never changed her name. aww poor klutzy Bella. Glad she still went to Alice's
Date: 12 Feb 2015 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here
Prologue - Holy crap you are starting off with a bang.
Chapter 1: Love my King size bed too. Kitchen sounds won derful except for the pink. Wow Renee is a real piece of work. Makes me wonder if Jake was actually gay and she (bella) was his beard. Hmmm can't wait to see what Edwards backstory is.
PS I tend to yell/talk to the characters as I'm writing the reviews as I'm reading. At no time am I yelling at you, the author. I appreciate you taking the time to write and share with us all.
Date: 17 May 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 50 - Recipes
Thank you for an amazing story... Can't wait to try some of your recipes.
Date: 16 May 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 46 - Futuretake Two
Amazing.
Date: 15 May 2014 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Caught
Way to go Charlie!
Date: 15 May 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Taken
I am guessing Leah's.... But hoping Renee. Didn't billy meet Renee when she was married to Charlie? Loved it
Date: 14 May 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Decisions and Surprises
I was wondering about Jared. God I love your story
Date: 01 Apr 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here
I started re-reading this amazing story with a bunch of my fb friends! I love this characters so much. And E and A bantter is always fun to watch!
Hope RL is smilling at you...
Kisses.R.
Date: 15 Mar 2014 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 46 - Futuretake Two
I actually found this on fanfic....but the damn site kept on havin loading errors n whatnot....so I remembered glancing it on here. I am damn glad I was able to finish this! Great story, I absolutely love it! Can definitely see why it won so many awards. If you have any recommended reads let me know.
Date: 24 Nov 2013 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Recipes
This is probably the best story i have read in a long time. I especially love how you've made the characters come alive, this was an amazing story! Thank you for sharing this.
(Though I still think Ant and Lily together is weird, they're cousins in all the ways that matter, have been raised as such. They even share the same last name. It's just weird...)
Date: 15 Sep 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 50 - Recipes
Wow I can't believe I've finished it! I've put off all other ff's that I'm reading just to finish this one. Loved it :)
Date: 18 Jun 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 50 - Recipes
Loved this story! Thanks for writing it. This was one of the best Edwards that I've ever read about. Bella was awesome too. Thanks for the future takes; they complete the story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed my story :)
Date: 22 Dec 2012 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Catharsis
OMG. What can I say,
other than I am just loving this story. You have a wounderfull mind.
Date: 21 Dec 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here
Loving this story so far! Can't wait to get into it more.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Moving Forward
im looking for the fanfic u mentioned in this chapter please let me know...Remi
Date: 11 Jul 2012 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 45 - Futuretake One
Amazing story - I loved it!
Date: 11 Mar 2012 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here
OK so this story has been in my Favorites for a while... Im finally readinging it.
One od my favorite twilight charaters is Charlie both in the books and the movie I HATE when he dies i cried. a sure sign that your story is worth reading.
I understand that it's important for character development.
but so far so good! on to the next chaper
Date: 04 Feb 2012 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 42 - To the Plate, and Garnish With Lemon
LOVED this story ... any chance you might do a sequel?
Author's Response:
Not a sequel to this one - I covered pretty much everything in the epilogue and futuretakes. I may write another story... I have some ideas floating around :)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing Wild!
Peps
Date: 21 Jan 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 46 - Futuretake Two
hey
that really is the perfect end!
I love it...
bye
Lil
Date: 21 Jan 2012 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 43 - Epilogue
OMG.
hey
great story...
I don't tink I told you... but I actually love it!
Reneé is so a bitch!... sorry WAS such a bitch!
but Edward and Bella just belong together...
Alice is so right!
bye
Lil
Date: 20 Dec 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Recipes
Loved this story. we need an outtake of when bella and Alice went into labor. Did they indeed have them on the same day?
Date: 19 Dec 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Recipes
What? Nothing with lemons? LOL! Thanks for the yummy recipes!
xoSus
Author's Response:
LOL!!! What about the lemon basmati rice? :-)
Date: 19 Dec 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Recipes
merci, merci
Date: 19 Dec 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 40 - The Chase
I love this Jasper!
Date: 17 Dec 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
I'm surprised Alice didn't have Jasper check into Renee.
Date: 15 Dec 2011 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Slumber and Awakening
Come on Edward.... get your head out of your ass because Bella needs you! loving this so far.
Date: 15 Dec 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Reveal
edward got his release, now wheare is Bellas?
Date: 14 Dec 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here
Poor Bella. Was Jacob secretly with Jared?
Date: 05 Dec 2011 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 49 - Outtake 3: Halloween
I love this couple.
Date: 05 Dec 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Sunflower of My Life
How cute are they?
Date: 05 Dec 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Moving Forward
Too cute ... You have an excellent way of drawing your reader into the emotion of the moment.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Catharsis
Awesome speech Alice weaves! Hope Edward sees the light.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Slumber and Awakening
Okay you have a gift for lemons even if they are just daydreams. Can't wait for the real thing.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Small World
Normally I don't like mike, but your mike is delightful especially since he is rocking Edwards world. Loving your story and the way the girls are playing Edward.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Why He Is the Way He Is
LOL love the mutual sex dreams. They've got it bad.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Reveal
Ooo la la ... Hot daydreamin'.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Makeover
Well Alice is still a whirlwind ... Refreshing actually. Quite the contrast to Edward.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Revelations
Wow sees! What a revelation!
Date: 04 Dec 2011 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Do You Remember Me?
Just finding your story ...sounds intriguing. Your Alice seems a bit more mature than how many portray her. I think I'm going to like that.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 49 - Outtake 3: Halloween
Magnifique!
Date: 04 Dec 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 48 - Outtake 2: Shopping for Bella's Birthday Gift
J'adore!
Date: 04 Dec 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 47 - Wild Outtake 1: Emmett Meets Rosalie
wow!
Date: 03 Dec 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 49 - Outtake 3: Halloween
Wow! Zorro is NAUGHTY. Yum. How lovely.
Date: 03 Dec 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 48 - Outtake 2: Shopping for Bella's Birthday Gift
How wonderful to be spoiled by such a man (and his family!).
Date: 03 Dec 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 47 - Wild Outtake 1: Emmett Meets Rosalie
Despite the violent assault, thank heavens Emmett appeared before they had time to violate her further.
Date: 03 Dec 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Do You Remember Me?