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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter, I was so happy you updated!!!  I love that Edward is trying to speak more and the tent collapsing made me giggle.  Can't wait for the next chapter!  : )



Author's Response:

I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!

Here is your teaser

The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river.  Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.

 

Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop.  He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too.  Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: wild_child Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 13

that ending was perfect! I've been waiting for that for a long time :) now I'm dying to know what happens in the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!

Here is your teaser

The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river.  Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.

 

Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop.  He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too.  Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

SO HOT!!!



Author's Response:

I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!

Here is your teaser

The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river.  Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.

 

Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop.  He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too.  Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

Somehow I knew he'd come back. ;-)  Hope Bella's on birth control cuz ya know, having a baby in the wild would be a whole 'nother ball of wax.



Author's Response:

She is

 

I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!

Here is your teaser

The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river.  Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.

 

Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop.  He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too.  Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow that was unexpected but good.  I cant wait til Edward has more of a vocabulary.  I like that she named the wolves and it was really funny about the mattress. lol. 



Author's Response:

I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!

Here is your teaser

The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river.  Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.

 

Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop.  He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too.  Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 12

wow poor edward and wow alice it was unexpected that shed be a bitch in thos story great chappy



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 12

Awww.... poor Savageward, we finally find out who he is and al his family is dead.  That's sad.  I really wanted to pimp slap Alice, she was being such a itch with a b!  Lol!  Well can't wait to see what a day of camping brings!  Great chapter!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

LOL.

 

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 12

Hooray!  Is it weird of me to hope they go back to the woods and live there?  Edward has no family.  Bella is unhappy with her life.  I say go live in the woods like the kid from "My Side of the Mountain", f**k like rabbits, and be happy.  Ha!



Author's Response:

LOL

 

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Rion Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 12

Bella stood up to alice...wow and
she going to his world... hey maybe she will love his world

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

Looking forward to them going camping!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 12

So sad! I can't believe he survived that long with no other human contact. Absolutely love this story!

Author's Response:

He had his wolves. : )

 

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 12

I was really happy to see the update.

Wow.. Bella did some Googling and boy it didn't disappoint.

She finally found the news we have been all wondering about. Poor Edward not only did his mother die from the bear attack but they think he was killed to. Then it gets worse his father is dead as well.

I am not certain about anyone else but I cried while reading that part of the story. So now what's going to happen with not only Edward but Bella??

Oh... of course then after all this bad news Alice makes her appearance. I was so happy to see Bella stand up to Alice and basically tell to mind her own business. I am not certain but I wonder if Alice will retaliate and do something stupid??

Um I am not certain what to make of Bella getting her camping gear to take Edward back to the woods. Is it to go camping for a few days to try and figure out what to do about their situation? Or is she going to leave him there?? ) =

I am sitting on pins and needles on what is going to happen next. I do look forward to it but I am scared to.

 

Thanks for the update.

 

c - =

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 12

That is so sad.  His mother and father are dead.  Hopefully he will have some siblings.  I cant believe Alice.  She is acting like a bitch. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: nikon342 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 12

Aww! What the hell is Alice's problem? She usually has an open mind... :) Now as for Edward, I feel so bad for him. He has gone through so much and he doesn't even realize it.

Author's Response:

Not my Alice, she doesn't.

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)



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Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 12

good chapter. I hope she doesn't try and leave him there.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: wild_child Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 12

Alice is kinda a bitch...but that's fine I never liked her lol. Poor Edward feeling homesick Bella has some tough decisions up ahead of her. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

LOL, yes she is a bitch.

 

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 11

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Rion Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 11

I just love this story.
Edward always seems so happy and content
unless Bella gets mad at him.
I hope Bella will always be able to protect him. I know she loves him

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 11

When i first saw this story i wasnt sure about it, but I love it I read to your last chapter 11. It's a sweet and great story cant wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 11

Enjoyed this chapter. I will go check out the forum. Sounds like fun..

 

Look forward to more.

Not sure if I want Bella to Google Edward to see what she can find out about him.

Kind of a Catch-22...Damned if she does and damned if she doesn't.

I to wish Charlie wasn't gone. I bet he would help in a heartbeat.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 11

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wonderful chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 11

Thanks for the update! I loved the 'touch Bella' isn't he so sweet...lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 11

Love it!  Can't wait to see where her next stop is.  : )



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 11

I crack up every time Edward runs on all fours.  Well, at least Bella got him some decent clothes.  Wonder where she's heading next?



Author's Response:

Yes, she got him clothes, now lets hope he doesn't have to wear them. LOL

 

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 11

I love that they are at least giving each other release.  They are getting closer and closer everyday.  Bella has a lot of curage to be able to show him what to do.  I was lol when the part about the tree came.  That was too funny.



Author's Response:

Yes I know that Edward's release is very important to my readers. LOL

 

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 11

Love the shower!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

I just found this story and I truly love it.  It puts you in the mind of jungle book, but better.  Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading, sorry I seem to have missed responding to this one.

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

WOW!!  I am floored!  This is a wonderfully intriguing story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all your reviews.

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

WOW, again!!  Sorry I haven't reviewed in a couple of chapters.  I've been reading on my phone a little and it won't let me type a review.

Greatness!!

I hate to think of what type of shape his teeth are in.  YUK!!  He'd probably have to have all of them pulled.  Poor guy!!

Let's see what happens, next.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. The ladies were talking on the forum about this and if he doesn't have a whole lot of refined sugar in his diet, which he wouldn't his teeth wouldn't be as bad as say someone in societ who hadn't brushed their teeth. LOL

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

WOW!!  I've read soo many stories they all seem to run together sometimes, BUT THIS is awesome!!  Very intriguing.  Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I try and find different ideas.

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 10

awwwe edward is so sweet loved the chappy



Author's Response:

I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 10

Another Great chapter.  I hope she can find his family.



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your reviews.I appreciate you taking time to review each chapter,

 

I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 9

I am so glad that bella was able to help him with his problem. lol



Author's Response:

Yes, she is very helpful. LOL

 

thanks for reading

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 8

omg I wonder if Edward is related to Alice.  That would be awesome.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 7

I wondered how long it would talk her to give him a shave. lol.  I am so happy that he is with her again.  It seems he will have to learn everything.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

Ah poor Edward got caught.  I hope all will turn out ok.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

Ah how sad.  They love her. 

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ahhh how sad she left him. :(   Poor Edward.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

How amazing that Edward's stomach can not handle cooked meat but it can handle raw meat.  He is like Tarzan. lol  I love it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review.

Here is your teaser

Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.

 

Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get.  Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

OMg I am really loving this story.  I notice almost all of your stories are o/s or very short.  I truly hope that this story will be VERY long.  I see great potential here.  Amazing chapter.

Reviewer: iamsonotdoingthis Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 10

Another excellent chapter :)

I really like this Edward and (I think I said this before...:) I can't wait to see what happens! 

 



Author's Response:

I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Rion Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

loved the playing in the bed and kisses Bella is helping herself. Edward really smart and I think he is learning a lot more than Bella thinks

Author's Response:

I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)



Author's Response:

I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: caroled Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 10

Looking forward to your next update.



Author's Response:

I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 10

More! I hope good things happen with them..



Author's Response:

I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 10

great chapter.



Author's Response:

I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: fanreader2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)  LOVE!!!

 



Author's Response:

I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter! She needs to put him in front of the tv again. He picked up rather quickly when he was watching that soap opera : )

Author's Response:

LOL, maybe she should show him some porn.

 

I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

So happy to have found this wonderful story. I read all 10 chapters today and I must say this Edward is one of a kind. Your Bella is to be amired as well she is very compassinate and caring. Her sort of friends and ex--let's just say they nothing special. I hope they will not cause Bella problems in the futre??

 

So what to do about Edward or Nakedward..LOL To me it's beyond weird that no one has looked for him? I am sure tha twill be expalined in future chapters.

 

Happy they were able to find the bracelet. That seems to be a part of the mystery surrounding Edward. I hope Bella will take the time to do some research. Interesting to say the least about what will happen next and whom they will run into?

Can't wait for more.

 

c - =



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for trying my story. Yes, more about Edward's past will be explained. But until then, enjoy a teaser.

 

 

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 10

Great stuff!



Author's Response:

I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 9

Hmm... Interesting! More soon!? :)



Author's Response:

Updates are every Thursday

 

 

I feel like a broken record, but you’ve all been so amazing, thank you!

 

Here is your teaser.

Bella nearly turned around but Edward’s anxiety seemed to drop a little once they reached the open grassy area.  They’d kept their hands locked together the entire walk, but once the open space was in front of him, he let go of it and took off running. A couple people took notice of him, not because it was that odd to see a man running through the opening, but because he had dropped down onto his hands to do it, galloping like a wild horse. Or in this case, a wolf.

Bella took off after him, not shouting out as to not draw any more attention to the odd situation.  She found it surprising that she couldn’t catch up to Edward on her feet, just assuming there was no way he could run faster than her that way.  He turned abruptly and Bella skidded to a stop as he approached her.

“You’re very fast,” she said, huffing.

Edward made a noise Bella could only classify as laughing, and she scowled at him. “Oh you think it’s funny to make me chase after you?”

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

Reviewer: iamsonotdoingthis Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

I just started reading this last week and I fell deeply in love!  I love the concept of this story and really can't wait to see how it turns out :)

I'll have to search out your facebook page! 

Do you update on a regular schedule or just when the mood stikes? 

I look forward to the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Updates ae every Thursday, and please do come find me on facebook or twitter.

 

 

I feel like a broken record, but you’ve all been so amazing, thank you!

 

Here is your teaser.

Bella nearly turned around but Edward’s anxiety seemed to drop a little once they reached the open grassy area.  They’d kept their hands locked together the entire walk, but once the open space was in front of him, he let go of it and took off running. A couple people took notice of him, not because it was that odd to see a man running through the opening, but because he had dropped down onto his hands to do it, galloping like a wild horse. Or in this case, a wolf.

Bella took off after him, not shouting out as to not draw any more attention to the odd situation.  She found it surprising that she couldn’t catch up to Edward on her feet, just assuming there was no way he could run faster than her that way.  He turned abruptly and Bella skidded to a stop as he approached her.

“You’re very fast,” she said, huffing.

Edward made a noise Bella could only classify as laughing, and she scowled at him. “Oh you think it’s funny to make me chase after you?”

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 9

I love how he seems so free and natural with her.  The trust is a beautiful thing!



Author's Response:

 

I feel like a broken record, but you’ve all been so amazing, thank you!

 

Here is your teaser.

Bella nearly turned around but Edward’s anxiety seemed to drop a little once they reached the open grassy area.  They’d kept their hands locked together the entire walk, but once the open space was in front of him, he let go of it and took off running. A couple people took notice of him, not because it was that odd to see a man running through the opening, but because he had dropped down onto his hands to do it, galloping like a wild horse. Or in this case, a wolf.

Bella took off after him, not shouting out as to not draw any more attention to the odd situation.  She found it surprising that she couldn’t catch up to Edward on her feet, just assuming there was no way he could run faster than her that way.  He turned abruptly and Bella skidded to a stop as he approached her.

“You’re very fast,” she said, huffing.

Edward made a noise Bella could only classify as laughing, and she scowled at him. “Oh you think it’s funny to make me chase after you?”

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 9

I want Savagedward :(......I love your story, keep up the kick ass work!



Author's Response:

 

I feel like a broken record, but you’ve all been so amazing, thank you!

 

Here is your teaser.

Bella nearly turned around but Edward’s anxiety seemed to drop a little once they reached the open grassy area.  They’d kept their hands locked together the entire walk, but once the open space was in front of him, he let go of it and took off running. A couple people took notice of him, not because it was that odd to see a man running through the opening, but because he had dropped down onto his hands to do it, galloping like a wild horse. Or in this case, a wolf.

Bella took off after him, not shouting out as to not draw any more attention to the odd situation.  She found it surprising that she couldn’t catch up to Edward on her feet, just assuming there was no way he could run faster than her that way.  He turned abruptly and Bella skidded to a stop as he approached her.

“You’re very fast,” she said, huffing.

Edward made a noise Bella could only classify as laughing, and she scowled at him. “Oh you think it’s funny to make me chase after you?”

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!



Author's Response:

 

I feel like a broken record, but you’ve all been so amazing, thank you!

 

Here is your teaser.

Bella nearly turned around but Edward’s anxiety seemed to drop a little once they reached the open grassy area.  They’d kept their hands locked together the entire walk, but once the open space was in front of him, he let go of it and took off running. A couple people took notice of him, not because it was that odd to see a man running through the opening, but because he had dropped down onto his hands to do it, galloping like a wild horse. Or in this case, a wolf.

Bella took off after him, not shouting out as to not draw any more attention to the odd situation.  She found it surprising that she couldn’t catch up to Edward on her feet, just assuming there was no way he could run faster than her that way.  He turned abruptly and Bella skidded to a stop as he approached her.

“You’re very fast,” she said, huffing.

Edward made a noise Bella could only classify as laughing, and she scowled at him. “Oh you think it’s funny to make me chase after you?”

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

Reviewer: Rion Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

great chapter, I just love this story. somehow Edward life with the wolves seemed really nice and comforting.

Author's Response:

It does sound nice, doesn't it.

 

 

I feel like a broken record, but you’ve all been so amazing, thank you!

 

Here is your teaser.

Bella nearly turned around but Edward’s anxiety seemed to drop a little once they reached the open grassy area.  They’d kept their hands locked together the entire walk, but once the open space was in front of him, he let go of it and took off running. A couple people took notice of him, not because it was that odd to see a man running through the opening, but because he had dropped down onto his hands to do it, galloping like a wild horse. Or in this case, a wolf.

Bella took off after him, not shouting out as to not draw any more attention to the odd situation.  She found it surprising that she couldn’t catch up to Edward on her feet, just assuming there was no way he could run faster than her that way.  He turned abruptly and Bella skidded to a stop as he approached her.

“You’re very fast,” she said, huffing.

Edward made a noise Bella could only classify as laughing, and she scowled at him. “Oh you think it’s funny to make me chase after you?”

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 9

If Alice is a good friend, then she will keep her big mouth shut.  It's none of her business to blab about.  I find Alice to be very annoying.  When Bella was jerking Edward off I thought that was hot.  I thought it was really cute when Bella was teaching Edward new words.  I can't wait to read what's going to happen next.  Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Are you reviewing on both sites? Thank you!

 

 

Here is your teaser.

Bella nearly turned around but Edward’s anxiety seemed to drop a little once they reached the open grassy area.  They’d kept their hands locked together the entire walk, but once the open space was in front of him, he let go of it and took off running. A couple people took notice of him, not because it was that odd to see a man running through the opening, but because he had dropped down onto his hands to do it, galloping like a wild horse. Or in this case, a wolf.

Bella took off after him, not shouting out as to not draw any more attention to the odd situation.  She found it surprising that she couldn’t catch up to Edward on her feet, just assuming there was no way he could run faster than her that way.  He turned abruptly and Bella skidded to a stop as he approached her.

“You’re very fast,” she said, huffing.

Edward made a noise Bella could only classify as laughing, and she scowled at him. “Oh you think it’s funny to make me chase after you?”

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Eh, what the hell, I'll try it.  lol

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter. Love this story, it is refreshingly unique

Author's Response:

Thank you

 

 

 

Here is your teaser.

Bella nearly turned around but Edward’s anxiety seemed to drop a little once they reached the open grassy area.  They’d kept their hands locked together the entire walk, but once the open space was in front of him, he let go of it and took off running. A couple people took notice of him, not because it was that odd to see a man running through the opening, but because he had dropped down onto his hands to do it, galloping like a wild horse. Or in this case, a wolf.

Bella took off after him, not shouting out as to not draw any more attention to the odd situation.  She found it surprising that she couldn’t catch up to Edward on her feet, just assuming there was no way he could run faster than her that way.  He turned abruptly and Bella skidded to a stop as he approached her.

“You’re very fast,” she said, huffing.

Edward made a noise Bella could only classify as laughing, and she scowled at him. “Oh you think it’s funny to make me chase after you?”

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 9

great chapter.



Author's Response:

 

I feel like a broken record, but you’ve all been so amazing, thank you!

 

Here is your teaser.

Bella nearly turned around but Edward’s anxiety seemed to drop a little once they reached the open grassy area.  They’d kept their hands locked together the entire walk, but once the open space was in front of him, he let go of it and took off running. A couple people took notice of him, not because it was that odd to see a man running through the opening, but because he had dropped down onto his hands to do it, galloping like a wild horse. Or in this case, a wolf.

Bella took off after him, not shouting out as to not draw any more attention to the odd situation.  She found it surprising that she couldn’t catch up to Edward on her feet, just assuming there was no way he could run faster than her that way.  He turned abruptly and Bella skidded to a stop as he approached her.

“You’re very fast,” she said, huffing.

Edward made a noise Bella could only classify as laughing, and she scowled at him. “Oh you think it’s funny to make me chase after you?”

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 9

:)



Author's Response:

 

 

Here is your teaser.

Bella nearly turned around but Edward’s anxiety seemed to drop a little once they reached the open grassy area.  They’d kept their hands locked together the entire walk, but once the open space was in front of him, he let go of it and took off running. A couple people took notice of him, not because it was that odd to see a man running through the opening, but because he had dropped down onto his hands to do it, galloping like a wild horse. Or in this case, a wolf.

Bella took off after him, not shouting out as to not draw any more attention to the odd situation.  She found it surprising that she couldn’t catch up to Edward on her feet, just assuming there was no way he could run faster than her that way.  He turned abruptly and Bella skidded to a stop as he approached her.

“You’re very fast,” she said, huffing.

Edward made a noise Bella could only classify as laughing, and she scowled at him. “Oh you think it’s funny to make me chase after you?”

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

awwe i like savagward

 



Author's Response:

 

I feel like a broken record, but you’ve all been so amazing, thank you!

 

Here is your teaser.

Bella nearly turned around but Edward’s anxiety seemed to drop a little once they reached the open grassy area.  They’d kept their hands locked together the entire walk, but once the open space was in front of him, he let go of it and took off running. A couple people took notice of him, not because it was that odd to see a man running through the opening, but because he had dropped down onto his hands to do it, galloping like a wild horse. Or in this case, a wolf.

Bella took off after him, not shouting out as to not draw any more attention to the odd situation.  She found it surprising that she couldn’t catch up to Edward on her feet, just assuming there was no way he could run faster than her that way.  He turned abruptly and Bella skidded to a stop as he approached her.

“You’re very fast,” she said, huffing.

Edward made a noise Bella could only classify as laughing, and she scowled at him. “Oh you think it’s funny to make me chase after you?”

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

Reviewer: caroled Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 8

I really like your story and I am very curious about what happens next.  Of course I want them to be together whether in civilization or in the wilderness.  One idea, buy or rent a house near those woods and the wolves and they can have the best of both worlds. I hope you will be updating.



Author's Response:

Updates are every Thursday

 

The support you all are giving me is amazing. Thank you all so much.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: cjainrun Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2011 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 8

Can. Not. Wait.



Author's Response:

:)

 

The support you all are giving me is amazing. Thank you all so much.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: Carly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2011 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 8

Awesome chapter

Author's Response:

The support you all are giving me is amazing. Thank you all so much.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2011 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 8

I love how motivated he is to please her.  I am anxious to see where they end up.  I bet it is somewhere in the middle.



Author's Response:

Gotta love a man who knows how to please.

 

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 8

Your story is just plain AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!! At first I thought Bella should have just went and lived in the woods with Edward, but it'll be interesting to see how the test week goes. Can't wait for the next update :)



Author's Response:

I love that you are The Savage, reviewing Savageward. It's the simple things that amuse me.

 

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 8

More! You are cruel with a capital C! :) I need more, this is one of my drugs... I am addicted to your story, and Savageward! :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, I;m a horrible tease

 

LOL

 

The support you all are giving me is amazing. Thank you all so much.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: fanreader2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love.  :)



Author's Response:

The support you all are giving me is amazing. Thank you all so much.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 8

:)



Author's Response:

The support you all are giving me is amazing. Thank you all so much.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 8

OMG... Alice has the worst timing!  I am so in love with this story and have been recing it in all of my updates.  Can't wait to see what the trail week will bring.  Great update!  

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks! I appreciate that!

 

 

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh no! I agree, Edward stay! Amazing chapter!

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The support you all are giving me is amazing. Thank you all so much.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 8

great chapter.



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The support you all are giving me is amazing. Thank you all so much.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 8

good story thanks :)



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The support you all are giving me is amazing. Thank you all so much.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: fanreader2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Tomorrow is Thursday!!!   Woo Hoo!!!

 



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LOL, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: smexy-bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

OMG im gonna die lol i soo cant wait hahahahha

By the way my name is Sarah!! just had to let you know hahahahah :P



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Nice to have you reading Sarah!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 7

:)



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:)

 

Thank you for your review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Bella didn’t know what to expect when she opened the door to her apartment, but when everything seemed to be still intact, she let out the breath she had been holding.  Edward was still on the couch but he had managed to get out of his clothes again, clearly preferring them gone. Now he was perched on the edge of the cushion, staring intently at the television.

When Bella came around to see what was on, she nearly choked laughing. Edward was watching All My Children. The couple on screen was locked in a melodramatic embrace as he told her how much he loved her.

Edward stood up and came behind Bella while she chuckled at the screen. He grabbed her and spun her around, wrapping his arms around her like he had just seen.

“Yooou arrre ev-ery-thing tooo meee,” Edward repeated the same words the protagonist had recited, but this time, it didn’t sound so dumb to Bella. In fact her breath caught and she suddenly found herself very warm. Common sense told her he had no idea what he was saying, but it still sounded wonderful coming out of his mouth.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

Love it!!!!!



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Thank you for your review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Bella didn’t know what to expect when she opened the door to her apartment, but when everything seemed to be still intact, she let out the breath she had been holding.  Edward was still on the couch but he had managed to get out of his clothes again, clearly preferring them gone. Now he was perched on the edge of the cushion, staring intently at the television.

When Bella came around to see what was on, she nearly choked laughing. Edward was watching All My Children. The couple on screen was locked in a melodramatic embrace as he told her how much he loved her.

Edward stood up and came behind Bella while she chuckled at the screen. He grabbed her and spun her around, wrapping his arms around her like he had just seen.

“Yooou arrre ev-ery-thing tooo meee,” Edward repeated the same words the protagonist had recited, but this time, it didn’t sound so dumb to Bella. In fact her breath caught and she suddenly found herself very warm. Common sense told her he had no idea what he was saying, but it still sounded wonderful coming out of his mouth.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: fanreader2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 7

You are making Thursday my favorite day.  :)

 



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You guys are making Thursdays my favorite day too. : )

 

Thank you for your review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Bella didn’t know what to expect when she opened the door to her apartment, but when everything seemed to be still intact, she let out the breath she had been holding.  Edward was still on the couch but he had managed to get out of his clothes again, clearly preferring them gone. Now he was perched on the edge of the cushion, staring intently at the television.

When Bella came around to see what was on, she nearly choked laughing. Edward was watching All My Children. The couple on screen was locked in a melodramatic embrace as he told her how much he loved her.

Edward stood up and came behind Bella while she chuckled at the screen. He grabbed her and spun her around, wrapping his arms around her like he had just seen.

“Yooou arrre ev-ery-thing tooo meee,” Edward repeated the same words the protagonist had recited, but this time, it didn’t sound so dumb to Bella. In fact her breath caught and she suddenly found herself very warm. Common sense told her he had no idea what he was saying, but it still sounded wonderful coming out of his mouth.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: smexy-bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2011 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 7

:) im addicted to this story



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Thanks!

 

Thank you for your review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Bella didn’t know what to expect when she opened the door to her apartment, but when everything seemed to be still intact, she let out the breath she had been holding.  Edward was still on the couch but he had managed to get out of his clothes again, clearly preferring them gone. Now he was perched on the edge of the cushion, staring intently at the television.

When Bella came around to see what was on, she nearly choked laughing. Edward was watching All My Children. The couple on screen was locked in a melodramatic embrace as he told her how much he loved her.

Edward stood up and came behind Bella while she chuckled at the screen. He grabbed her and spun her around, wrapping his arms around her like he had just seen.

“Yooou arrre ev-ery-thing tooo meee,” Edward repeated the same words the protagonist had recited, but this time, it didn’t sound so dumb to Bella. In fact her breath caught and she suddenly found herself very warm. Common sense told her he had no idea what he was saying, but it still sounded wonderful coming out of his mouth.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: purplehaze21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

What I keep wondering is why she hasn't thought to look for his family. The fact that he has something with his name on it should at least tip her off that he belonged somewhere. For all she knows his family has been looking for him and she's just willing to take him back the woods? I don't know.... great story so far.

Author's Response:

Right now she is not sure what she should do. That will cross her mind though and soon. She is torn right now, trying to think of what he would want, she doesn't want him pulled out of the woods if he is going to hate it.

 

Thank you for your review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Bella didn’t know what to expect when she opened the door to her apartment, but when everything seemed to be still intact, she let out the breath she had been holding.  Edward was still on the couch but he had managed to get out of his clothes again, clearly preferring them gone. Now he was perched on the edge of the cushion, staring intently at the television.

When Bella came around to see what was on, she nearly choked laughing. Edward was watching All My Children. The couple on screen was locked in a melodramatic embrace as he told her how much he loved her.

Edward stood up and came behind Bella while she chuckled at the screen. He grabbed her and spun her around, wrapping his arms around her like he had just seen.

“Yooou arrre ev-ery-thing tooo meee,” Edward repeated the same words the protagonist had recited, but this time, it didn’t sound so dumb to Bella. In fact her breath caught and she suddenly found herself very warm. Common sense told her he had no idea what he was saying, but it still sounded wonderful coming out of his mouth.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

Amazing chapter! I say she keeps him! : )

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Bella didn’t know what to expect when she opened the door to her apartment, but when everything seemed to be still intact, she let out the breath she had been holding.  Edward was still on the couch but he had managed to get out of his clothes again, clearly preferring them gone. Now he was perched on the edge of the cushion, staring intently at the television.

When Bella came around to see what was on, she nearly choked laughing. Edward was watching All My Children. The couple on screen was locked in a melodramatic embrace as he told her how much he loved her.

Edward stood up and came behind Bella while she chuckled at the screen. He grabbed her and spun her around, wrapping his arms around her like he had just seen.

“Yooou arrre ev-ery-thing tooo meee,” Edward repeated the same words the protagonist had recited, but this time, it didn’t sound so dumb to Bella. In fact her breath caught and she suddenly found herself very warm. Common sense told her he had no idea what he was saying, but it still sounded wonderful coming out of his mouth.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 7

Awwwww I really really like thi story thanks :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Bella didn’t know what to expect when she opened the door to her apartment, but when everything seemed to be still intact, she let out the breath she had been holding.  Edward was still on the couch but he had managed to get out of his clothes again, clearly preferring them gone. Now he was perched on the edge of the cushion, staring intently at the television.

When Bella came around to see what was on, she nearly choked laughing. Edward was watching All My Children. The couple on screen was locked in a melodramatic embrace as he told her how much he loved her.

Edward stood up and came behind Bella while she chuckled at the screen. He grabbed her and spun her around, wrapping his arms around her like he had just seen.

“Yooou arrre ev-ery-thing tooo meee,” Edward repeated the same words the protagonist had recited, but this time, it didn’t sound so dumb to Bella. In fact her breath caught and she suddenly found herself very warm. Common sense told her he had no idea what he was saying, but it still sounded wonderful coming out of his mouth.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 7

:)



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Thank you for your review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Bella didn’t know what to expect when she opened the door to her apartment, but when everything seemed to be still intact, she let out the breath she had been holding.  Edward was still on the couch but he had managed to get out of his clothes again, clearly preferring them gone. Now he was perched on the edge of the cushion, staring intently at the television.

When Bella came around to see what was on, she nearly choked laughing. Edward was watching All My Children. The couple on screen was locked in a melodramatic embrace as he told her how much he loved her.

Edward stood up and came behind Bella while she chuckled at the screen. He grabbed her and spun her around, wrapping his arms around her like he had just seen.

“Yooou arrre ev-ery-thing tooo meee,” Edward repeated the same words the protagonist had recited, but this time, it didn’t sound so dumb to Bella. In fact her breath caught and she suddenly found herself very warm. Common sense told her he had no idea what he was saying, but it still sounded wonderful coming out of his mouth.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: Rion Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it. Edward snuck into her bed sweet

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Bella didn’t know what to expect when she opened the door to her apartment, but when everything seemed to be still intact, she let out the breath she had been holding.  Edward was still on the couch but he had managed to get out of his clothes again, clearly preferring them gone. Now he was perched on the edge of the cushion, staring intently at the television.

When Bella came around to see what was on, she nearly choked laughing. Edward was watching All My Children. The couple on screen was locked in a melodramatic embrace as he told her how much he loved her.

Edward stood up and came behind Bella while she chuckled at the screen. He grabbed her and spun her around, wrapping his arms around her like he had just seen.

“Yooou arrre ev-ery-thing tooo meee,” Edward repeated the same words the protagonist had recited, but this time, it didn’t sound so dumb to Bella. In fact her breath caught and she suddenly found herself very warm. Common sense told her he had no idea what he was saying, but it still sounded wonderful coming out of his mouth.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 6

This story is just amazing! I definitely cannot wait for the next update :)



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I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Here is a teaser.

Bella sat in a tiny room with what she assumed was a two way mirror on one wall, and a coffee machine on the other. The table was wide enough that when the police officers sat down on the other side one wouldn’t be able to reach them unless they stood up and leaned over.

She hadn’t seen Edward since they had carted him away. He had shouted and struggled, and if there hadn’t have been three cops there to hold him down, he would have easily made his way over to the panicked girl.  Bella held the Styrofoam cup of water in her hands, making indents on it with her fingernails.

“We need you to fill out some paperwork,” Detective Banner said.

“Uh, what kind of paperwork?” she asked.

 

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Reviewer: heimk Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

omg please update soon i love these stories.



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I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Here is a teaser.

Bella sat in a tiny room with what she assumed was a two way mirror on one wall, and a coffee machine on the other. The table was wide enough that when the police officers sat down on the other side one wouldn’t be able to reach them unless they stood up and leaned over.

She hadn’t seen Edward since they had carted him away. He had shouted and struggled, and if there hadn’t have been three cops there to hold him down, he would have easily made his way over to the panicked girl.  Bella held the Styrofoam cup of water in her hands, making indents on it with her fingernails.

“We need you to fill out some paperwork,” Detective Banner said.

“Uh, what kind of paperwork?” she asked.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: fanreader2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 6

Next Thursday can't come soon enough.   :)

 



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I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Here is a teaser.

Bella sat in a tiny room with what she assumed was a two way mirror on one wall, and a coffee machine on the other. The table was wide enough that when the police officers sat down on the other side one wouldn’t be able to reach them unless they stood up and leaned over.

She hadn’t seen Edward since they had carted him away. He had shouted and struggled, and if there hadn’t have been three cops there to hold him down, he would have easily made his way over to the panicked girl.  Bella held the Styrofoam cup of water in her hands, making indents on it with her fingernails.

“We need you to fill out some paperwork,” Detective Banner said.

“Uh, what kind of paperwork?” she asked.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 6

:)



Author's Response:

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Here is a teaser.

Bella sat in a tiny room with what she assumed was a two way mirror on one wall, and a coffee machine on the other. The table was wide enough that when the police officers sat down on the other side one wouldn’t be able to reach them unless they stood up and leaned over.

She hadn’t seen Edward since they had carted him away. He had shouted and struggled, and if there hadn’t have been three cops there to hold him down, he would have easily made his way over to the panicked girl.  Bella held the Styrofoam cup of water in her hands, making indents on it with her fingernails.

“We need you to fill out some paperwork,” Detective Banner said.

“Uh, what kind of paperwork?” she asked.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 6

Poor Edward! Can't wait for them to be reunited!

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I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Here is a teaser.

Bella sat in a tiny room with what she assumed was a two way mirror on one wall, and a coffee machine on the other. The table was wide enough that when the police officers sat down on the other side one wouldn’t be able to reach them unless they stood up and leaned over.

She hadn’t seen Edward since they had carted him away. He had shouted and struggled, and if there hadn’t have been three cops there to hold him down, he would have easily made his way over to the panicked girl.  Bella held the Styrofoam cup of water in her hands, making indents on it with her fingernails.

“We need you to fill out some paperwork,” Detective Banner said.

“Uh, what kind of paperwork?” she asked.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 6

*huffs* Not cool. The cliffie. Michael... (No words for him 'cept Jerkward)

But they find each other again! Yay. Now all Bella needs is to go buy cabin in the woods and they'll all live happily ever after! (hope its not that simple)

Happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

LOL, sorry about the cliffie, I can't help myself sometimes.

 

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Here is a teaser.

Bella sat in a tiny room with what she assumed was a two way mirror on one wall, and a coffee machine on the other. The table was wide enough that when the police officers sat down on the other side one wouldn’t be able to reach them unless they stood up and leaned over.

She hadn’t seen Edward since they had carted him away. He had shouted and struggled, and if there hadn’t have been three cops there to hold him down, he would have easily made his way over to the panicked girl.  Bella held the Styrofoam cup of water in her hands, making indents on it with her fingernails.

“We need you to fill out some paperwork,” Detective Banner said.

“Uh, what kind of paperwork?” she asked.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 6

:)



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I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Here is a teaser.

Bella sat in a tiny room with what she assumed was a two way mirror on one wall, and a coffee machine on the other. The table was wide enough that when the police officers sat down on the other side one wouldn’t be able to reach them unless they stood up and leaned over.

She hadn’t seen Edward since they had carted him away. He had shouted and struggled, and if there hadn’t have been three cops there to hold him down, he would have easily made his way over to the panicked girl.  Bella held the Styrofoam cup of water in her hands, making indents on it with her fingernails.

“We need you to fill out some paperwork,” Detective Banner said.

“Uh, what kind of paperwork?” she asked.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 6

I cannot wait for your next update to see what will happen!



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I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Here is a teaser.

Bella sat in a tiny room with what she assumed was a two way mirror on one wall, and a coffee machine on the other. The table was wide enough that when the police officers sat down on the other side one wouldn’t be able to reach them unless they stood up and leaned over.

She hadn’t seen Edward since they had carted him away. He had shouted and struggled, and if there hadn’t have been three cops there to hold him down, he would have easily made his way over to the panicked girl.  Bella held the Styrofoam cup of water in her hands, making indents on it with her fingernails.

“We need you to fill out some paperwork,” Detective Banner said.

“Uh, what kind of paperwork?” she asked.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

I adore this story!  Your Edward and Bella are amazing.  I can´t wait for more! I almost cried at the end of the last chapter!  Love it... love it.. love it!  Great story, great chapter!  I will definitely be rec´ing your story to others!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you are enjoying and I hope you'll continue to do so,

 

 

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

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Reviewer: fanreader2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

Love, Love, Love, Love.  Did I mention that I love this story?

 



Author's Response:

LOL. I'm glad!

 

Thanks for your review. I hope you had a super awesome Easter!

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: cjainrun Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

I'm hooked.  Can't wait for more.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much

 

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2011 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)



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Thanks for your review. I hope you had/are having a super awesome Easter!

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2011 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 4

hope she goes back soon.



Author's Response:

Soon-ish.

Thanks for reading

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